[Jhuki Palkein]

Wa alaikum salaam!

Sooli Jee! Kamaal Kar Di Aapne!

Superb Creation And Very Creative!

Aap Soch Nahi Sakte Aap Ki Is Nazam Ko Padh Ke Kitni Khushi Mili,.

I´m Really Impressed - Jitna Kahoo'n Kam Hoga,. - Dil Jeet Liya, Sach Mein

Bas Yehi Dua Karoongi Allah swt Se Ke Aap Aisi Hi Likhte Rahein,. Khush Rahein .

Aur Suno! Humein Bhi Kuch Likha Sikha Do

 

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Yeh Maqaam-e-Zindagani ,

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Last edited by Jhuki Palkein; 04-03-2009 at 02:00 PM..

[~*Gillanii]

Originally Posted by Jhuki Palkein

Wa alaikum salaam!

Sooli Jee! Kamaal Kar Di Aapne!

Superb Creation And Very Creative!

Aap Soch Nahi Sakte Aap Ki Is Nazam Ko Padh Ke Kitni Khushi Mili,.

I´m Really Impressed - Jitna Kahoo'n Kam Hoga,. - Dil Jeet Liya, Sach Mein

Bas Yehi Dua Karoongi Allah swt Se Ke Aap Aisi Hi Likhte Rahein,. Khush Rahein .

Aur Suno! Humein Bhi Kuch Likha Sikha Do

Bohat Bohat Shukriya Jp, Chalo Kisi Tarha To Main Nay Kisi Ko Khush Kiya ..
Ameeen!! Aap Ki Duwa Bohat Pyari Hay, Last Time Bhi Di Thi .. To Ye Likh Dali
Problem To Ye Hay Poetry Kisi Kay Sikhanay Say Nahi Atti, Agar Aisa Hota To Main Wasi Shah Ki Shagiridi Main Hota
Bass Jis Cheez Par Likhna Ho, Apni Soch Ko Sirf Us Cheez Kay Gird Ghumaya Karo Acha Likh Sakti Ho

 

[Jhuki Palkein]

Originally Posted by !~*SOoLi

Bohat Bohat Shukriya Jp, Chalo Kisi Tarha To Main Nay Kisi Ko Khush Kiya ..
Ameeen!! Aap Ki Duwa Bohat Pyari Hay, Last Time Bhi Di Thi .. To Ye Likh Dali
Problem To Ye Hay Poetry Kisi Kay Sikhanay Say Nahi Atti, Agar Aisa Hota To Main Wasi Shah Ki Shagiridi Main Hota
Bass Jis Cheez Par Likhna Ho, Apni Soch Ko Sirf Us Cheez Kay Gird Ghumaya Karo Acha Likh Sakti Ho

The Pleasure Is All Mine.

Hmm Sahi Kaha Aapne Bhai.

Maybe I Should Just Try And Try ,.

I Mean, Kabhi Na Kabhi Aa Hi Jayega

 

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Yeh Maqaam-e-Zindagani ,