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Originally Posted by Mahnoor malik View Post
Siso aap nh theek tara se para nhi galtiya or be the..well i correct it again..thankz for tha remaning..
hehe mene jo likha woh apne nhi para mene kaha tha ke first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he

uske bad mene kaha

imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

matlab baqi poetry mien bhi ghaltiyan hein likhne mien inpage mein ghaltiyan ki apne