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Rumisha

02-17-2010 06:27 PM

Khamoshi say suno by Mahnoor Mf design poetry

He!!o Mera Forum Friends
My !st Mf Des!gN PoeTry

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/4559/fffffinal.jpg

!!!sweety!!!

02-17-2010 06:57 PM

Re: Khamoshi say suno by Mahnoor Mf design poetry

very nice
first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

!~*AdOrAbLe*~!

02-17-2010 06:59 PM

Re: Khamoshi say suno by Mahnoor Mf design poetry

beautifull work

Zafina

02-17-2010 07:10 PM

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Zabardast....Oye thats means k ab may bhi maidan may uthar hi awo...soon u will see my designed poetries :)..Keep it up sis

shani

02-17-2010 07:37 PM

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nice work mahnoor keep it up friend :)

SHAYAN

02-17-2010 08:31 PM

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Nice Poetry N Work

AYAZ	02-17-2010 10:48 PM

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acha work hie ahista ahista aur bhi acha hojaey ga INSHALLAH first try good one (y) keep it up

Rumisha

02-17-2010 11:40 PM

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Originally Posted by !!!sweety!!! (Post 669650)

very nice
first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

Siso aap nh theek tara se para nhi galtiya or be the..well i correct it again..thankz for tha remaning..:)

!!!sweety!!!

02-17-2010 11:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Mahnoor malik (Post 669953)

Siso aap nh theek tara se para nhi galtiya or be the..well i correct it again..thankz for tha remaning..:)

hehe mene jo likha woh apne nhi para mene kaha tha ke first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he

uske bad mene kaha

imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

matlab baqi poetry mien bhi ghaltiyan hein likhne mien inpage mein ghaltiyan ki apne :bshy:

Rumisha

02-18-2010 12:09 AM

Re: Khamoshi say suno by Mahnoor Mf design poetry

sis phele line main be galti the..jo aap nh pari nahi suno word be galt ta( jis main seen-noon-wow) ata hai main nh (seen-wow-noon-wow) likka ta--well poetry theek hai ab--ab aap ko koi shekayat to nhi ho ge i hope so--sis
galti to first time hr koi krta hai--aap se be howi ho gee--galtiyoo se insan seekh ta hai--any way--thankz for da comment--:)

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