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ShArArTi MuNdA 11-01-2008 04:25 PM

aik mudat ki thakaan hai
 
aik mudat ki thakaan hai
aur zindagi ke maathay per shikan hai
nazar mein taweel sehra hai
aur paoon mein kantoon ki chubhan hai
sochta hon to guman lagta hai
aur dil mein barabar lagi lagan hai
neend,kaisay manaon,palkein moond na paon
yeh jo totay khuwabon ki chubhan hai
elahi jo aankho mein thair gai hai woh soorat
mita doon ya jaga don yeh uljhan hai
kyon ulajh raha hoon lehroon se jab ke
jeewan piyaas hai aur piyaas jeewan hai....

safa 11-01-2008 04:29 PM

v good

ShArArTi MuNdA 11-01-2008 05:31 PM

Thanks Safa jeee

ShahTaJ 11-02-2008 12:16 AM

nice

Humaila 11-02-2008 12:21 AM

very nice.. Bro.. :)
keep it up..

abdullah_mehrab 11-02-2008 01:07 AM

wow bohat khoob shararti shair:salute:

ShArArTi MuNdA 11-02-2008 01:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShahTaJ (Post 61712)
nice

Thanks

ShArArTi MuNdA 11-02-2008 01:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Humaila (Post 61725)
very nice.. Bro.. :)
keep it up..

Thanks Humaila Jeee

ShArArTi MuNdA 11-02-2008 01:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by abdullah_mehrab (Post 61754)
wow bohat khoob shararti shair:salute:


Thanks Abdullah

Nida-H 11-02-2008 10:41 AM

Nice..


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