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RoOZ SoOChTa HouN 11-14-2010 05:56 PM

Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
wo larki bhi aik ajeeb paheli thi
piyasay hount thay aankh jesay sumander thi

suraj is ko dekh k peela parta tha
wo sarma ki dhoop mein dhul kar nikli thi

us ko apne saaye se bhi dar lagta tha
suraj k sehraa mein wo thanha hirni thi

aate jaate mosam is ko daste tahay
hanste hanste palkoun se ro parti thi

door se ujray mander jesa ghar us ka
wo apne ghar mein akloti devi thi

tyez hawa ko rook k apne anchal per
souke phool ikthay karti phirti thi

sab par zaaher kar deti thi bhed apna
sab se ik tasveer chupaye rakhti thi

kal sham chakna chuur hua tha dil us ka
ya phir pehli baar wo khoul k rooyi thi

RoOZ =kia jane kioun dhoop se beparwa
wo apne ghar ki dehleez pe bethi thi !

SHAYAN 11-14-2010 05:59 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Nice...

M A H i 11-14-2010 09:00 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Really nice...
tfs

DiE 11-14-2010 11:41 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
buhat khoob

Shomaila 11-15-2010 08:44 AM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Poetry is so impressive . i like your poem really like the ture and
real.

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN 11-15-2010 12:21 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Aap Sab Ka Bahat SHukiriyaa Mai Re Hosla Afzaee K liya

maliksaim 11-15-2010 01:20 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
really a nice sharing

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN 11-16-2010 05:07 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Thanks Dear

life2 11-18-2010 08:44 AM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
good...

Ghuncha 11-19-2010 11:09 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
v Nice ....

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN 11-19-2010 11:47 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Shukriyaa aap loghoun ka :)

Shomaila 11-20-2010 11:11 AM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
poetry k liay thanks

life2 11-20-2010 07:52 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
nyc...

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN 11-28-2010 12:11 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Shukiyaaa ....

Owi 11-28-2010 05:14 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
such a beautiful poem (y)

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN 12-13-2010 08:09 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Shukriyaa .. warna kadim is qabil kahan

A L i 12-13-2010 11:50 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
bahut khoob

!~*AdOrAbLe*~! 02-12-2011 08:27 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
bohut umdha hai but ager aap iska size zara large kardein plz :)
keptup

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN 02-13-2011 02:43 AM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by A L i (Post 882061)
bahut khoob

shukriya yara

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN 02-13-2011 02:46 AM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by !~*AdOrAbLe*~! (Post 939045)
bohut umdha hai but ager aap iska size zara large kardein plz :)
keptup

shukriyaa aDDoo .. mai nai kya par nahi ho pa raha hai :(

~~KING~~ 02-16-2011 03:51 PM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
very nice thanx for sharing.......:bu:

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN 08-10-2011 01:13 AM

Re: Wo Larki Bhi Ek Ajeeb ....
 
shukriyaa


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