[Mf Great Power]

Originally Posted by eXquisite Inception

Nice...But flash bhut taiz hoo raha haay...so thora mushkil haay perhna...Thora sa crowded laag raha haay...design and writing bhut kaam space main haay...Overall achii khoshish haay...Well done

Ok Dobara Karti Ho Mojhe behi smajh nahi a rahi Thanks

 

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[Mf Great Power]

Originally Posted by SHAYAN

eSKO pARHNE k Lie Konci Machine Chaye Hugi Wese lol

Eyes Machine Chahye Jo ho Fast Eyes Machine JAsi meri hy

 

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[Mf Great Power]

Originally Posted by AYAZ

Kyon ke yeh ap ki first try hai tou main acha kahonga. ais main mistakes hie wo batata ho. Aap nie frames ki timing sahi nahi rakho buhat fast hie. Ais ko slow karna next time takey read kar sakey fonts dosri yeh ke text color sahi nahi hai aap text tutorial dekhein aus sei kafi help miley gi aap ko. Over all Good try Keep it up

Thanks
Best regards

Thanx text ki mojhe behi samjh nahi a rahi the Ok next time Achy text Or colors use karo gi

 

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[Mf Great Power]

Originally Posted by ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™

very nice work bahna ..
jo mistake rah gayee ayaz bhai ney bata di hey
i hope next work mazeed bahter ho ga ..
rukna nahi ok .. juldi sey aik or design share kero ..

Thnxs ....

 

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[Awara Badal]

hmmmmm pehli line samaj ayi great agay nazar not sahi aying

first try

try try try pepeep the race

 

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I wIsh I hAd n0t FaLl3n in l0vE wItH u

FoR th3 MiSeRy of loV3 is mOre

then the plEasUre of It

the PaIn ,,, the Pain

aLwaYs Pain ThaT's L0v3

[SHAYAN]

Aise Hai Jese Bijli Chamak Rhi Hai Pic Pr lol lol

 

[Mf Great Power]

Originally Posted by SHAYAN

Aise Hai Jese Bijli Chamak Rhi Hai Pic Pr lol lol

Bijli Chamak Rahi hy Or Sath Mein barish ho rahi hy ap ke sigi pe
jb bijili Chamak gi na To Ap jaldi Sey Parh leyna kia Lihka Hy

 

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[Mf Great Power]

Originally Posted by *** ROMANTIC TALIBAN ***

hmmmmm pehli line samaj ayi great agay nazar not sahi aying

first try

try try try pepeep the race

Jaha Pheli Line Samj mein ayi hy waha Dosri Line behi a jae gi

 

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[Awara Badal]

Originally Posted by Mf Great Power

Jaha Pheli Line Samj mein ayi hy waha Dosri Line behi a jae gi

okay....

 

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I wIsh I hAd n0t FaLl3n in l0vE wItH u

FoR th3 MiSeRy of loV3 is mOre

then the plEasUre of It

the PaIn ,,, the Pain

aLwaYs Pain ThaT's L0v3

[Mf Great Power]

Originally Posted by *** ROMANTIC TALIBAN ***

okay....

Try Again wali Polici Apnao

Try Again Read

 

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