[heer]

Originally Posted by LAMS

kis khata par bhapar gaya pani
apni had se mukar gaya pani

jis ki deewar thi zara kach chi
pehle os kay hi ghar gaya pani

hosh men ao ya nahi ao
ab to sir se guzar gaya pani

hai yeh selab on pe khanda zan
jin ki ankhon ka mar gaya pani

dekhi her aek she joh malya mate
khof se khud bhi dar gaya pani

apni rahon se ho gaya munkir
shahar dar shahar bhar gaya pani

ap demon ka sochte rahiey
kam to apna kar gaya pani

aek bache ko dubte dekha
kitni aknhon men bhar gaya pani

ap kay paun tak nahi aya
mere sir se guzar gaya pani

likh kay barbadiyan muqadar men
ab suna hai otar gaya pani

superb
keep shearing
an thnx 4 reply

 

[LAMS]

thx alot heer

 

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[safa]

Bahut khoob.....?
Kis ne likha hai].....?

 

[LAMS]

yeh acha sawal kara ap ne safa
kis ne likha hai ?
likha huwa parh lia
likhne wale ka name hi nahin parha loll
thx anyway

 

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[safa]

Han aap ka naam dekha pic per........

 

[LAMS]

thx dear
well second thread read nahi kari ap ne ?
inhen phir se jeene ki navid do ?

 

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Last edited by LAMS; 08-31-2010 at 10:53 PM..

[Fatima Javaid]

aslam o alikum
boht acha
v nice keep it up

 

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[LAMS]

thx alot fati

 

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[Zafina]

Excellent Buhat acha likha hay

 

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And Your Lord Never Forget

[LAMS]

thx alot zafina

 

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