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Default موسم - >>   Show Printable Version  Show Printable Version   Email this Page  Email this Page   09-26-2014, 04:56 PM

تجھ سے پہلے
اور تیرے بعد کے موسم
جیسے بہار اور پھر خزاں
یا خزاں اور پھر بہار
درمیاں میں گرم اور سرد مزاج کا عالم
جیسے صبح اور رات مہں مابہن
سہہ پہر مہں کڑی دھوپ اور گھنی چھاءو
تیری اور میری محبت ایسی جیسے
سوکھے پتوں کی ہوا سے محبت
راستے سے بھٹکا دے ہا منزل تک پہنچادے
تجھ سے پہلے
اور تیرے بعد کے موسم
جیسےصحرا کا سمندراوربہتا دریا
اداس فضا مہں گونجتا چہچہاتا قہقہ
پیلی زرد ہتھیلیوں پر رچی حنا
کوری کتاب پر درج نام محبت
قحط زدہ بستی مہں بارش کی نوید
بارش سے پہلے سوکھے پتے اور پھر ان پر تازہ بوندہں
اون کے سفید گولوں پر قوس و قزاح کا آنچل
تجھ سے پہلے
اور تیرے بعد کے موسم

 




~“She said, Never forget me
as if the coast
could forget the ocean
or the lung
could forget the breath
or the earth
could forget the sun,”~
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Default Re: موسم - >>   Show Printable Version  Show Printable Version   Email this Page  Email this Page   09-26-2014, 06:51 PM

Buht khoub jii buht achii kawish Nazm ki soorat
wo lamhaat jab lafz
zehn ke khali dareechouN maiN
khoud hi utarne lagte haiN
jin per ikhtiaar nahii hota
ke jab lafz utraiN ge tu kia
shakl bane gii, ye bataiN sochne ki nahii hoteeN
kuch na kuch zaroor hota he her tehreer ke peeche
aur her kisi ki samjh maiN shairi aa nahii saktii
ye bhii kisi kisi pe aser hota he shairi kaa
tu likhti rahaiN ye buht zaroori he,,,practice lazim he
khoush rahaiN dua go waheed ahmed.

 


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Buht khoub jii buht achii kawish Nazm ki soorat
wo lamhaat jab lafz
zehn ke khali dareechouN maiN
khoud hi utarne lagte haiN
jin per ikhtiaar nahii hota
ke jab lafz utraiN ge tu kia
shakl bane gii, ye bataiN sochne ki nahii hoteeN
kuch na kuch zaroor hota he her tehreer ke peeche
aur her kisi ki samjh maiN shairi aa nahii saktii
ye bhii kisi kisi pe aser hota he shairi kaa
tu likhti rahaiN ye buht zaroori he,,,practice lazim he
khoush rahaiN dua go waheed ahmed.
thnx for suggestion and appreciation

 




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could forget the ocean
or the lung
could forget the breath
or the earth
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Wah bhi buhaat umda

 







ALLAH FARMATA HAI :
AEY BANDEY JO HUA
WO ACHA HUA .
JO HORAHA HAI ACHA HO RAHA HAI.
JO HOGA WO BHI ACHA HOGA.
TERA KIYA GAIYA JO TU ROTA HAI
TU KIA LAYA JO TU NE KHO DIYA.
JO LIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) SEI LIYA
JO DIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) PE DIYA
JO AAJ TERA HAI PEHLAY KISI AUR KA THA
AUR KAL KISI AUR KA HOGA.
TABDEELI KAINAAT KA MAMOOL HAI
BAS TU WO JAMA KAR JO TU SATH LEI KAR JANEY WALA HAI
YANI NAIK AMAAL.


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Wah bhi buhaat umda
thnx for appreciation

 




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very nice...

 

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very nice...
thnx sis

 




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very nice
thnx urwa sis

 




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thnx urwa sis
its my pleasure Sis

 



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