[!~*SOoLi]

لگ گئی ہیں رونقیں اور محو رقص گلستاں
جان سے پیارا ھے مجھ کو ماضی کا یے کارواں

ہے پسند میری تو آخر، رہتا ھمیشہ باحجاب
آتا ہے میرے پاس تو جب سوجاتا ہے یے جہاں

ہے گماں تیرا ھی تیرا ان اندھیروں میں مجھ کو اب
دیکھتا فردوس تیرے پیار کی ھوں جانے جاں

ہے تیرا کیا واسطہ اندھیروں سے اے میرے چاند
کے ضیاء بھی کرگئی تاریک میرا دوستاں

زخم دے کر کہہ دیا کہ خوش رھو تم تاحیات
زہر دے جو پیار سے، ہے تو ایسا مہرباں

تنہا ھوتا ھوں بظاھر پر غم خواری کے لیے
روز سنتی رات ھے اک مُدا بیکساں

 

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Chal Fiqr Noo Goli Maar Yaar Hain Din Jindri Day Chaar!

[!~*SOoLi]

Unkay Liye Jo Urdu Font Nahi Parh Saktay..

Lag Gai Hain Ronakain Aur Mehv-e-Raqs Gulsitaa'n
Jaan Say Pyara Hay Mujh Ko Mazi Ka Ye Karwaa'n

Hay Pasand Meri Tu Akhir, Rehta Hamesha Baahijab
Ata Hay Mere Pass Tu Jab Sojata Hay Ye Jahaa'n

Hay Gumaan Tera Hi Tera In Andhero'n Mein Mujh Ko Ab
Daikhta Firdous Tere Pyar Ki Hun Jan-e-Jaa'n

Hay Tera Kya Wasta Andhro'n Say Ay Mere Chand
Kay Zia Bhi Kar Gai Tareek Mera Dostaa'n

Zakhm Day Kar Kehdiya Kay Khush Raho Ta-Hayat
Zaher Day Jo Pyar Say, Hay Tu Aisa Maherbaa'n

Tanha Hota Hoon Bazahir Par Ghumkhuwari K Liye
Roz Sunti Raat Hay Ik Mudda-e-Baykasa'n

 

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Chal Fiqr Noo Goli Maar Yaar Hain Din Jindri Day Chaar!

[fog]

ye shaer nice hay

Zakhm Day Kar Kehdiya Kay Khush Raho Ta-Hayat
Zaher Day Jo Pyar Say, Hay Tu Aisa Maherbaa'n



itna clear nhi ho rha k aap kia kehna chah rhe hain is nazm may
well nice try
KEEP IT UP
MAY ALLAH BLESS U AAMEEN

 

[!~*SOoLi]

My bad, .. Surely there is Something missing thats why you didn't get it ..
Chalo, atleast Honest Comments To Kiye, Warna Zyada Tar Cases V Nice Kehdaitay Hain.. Samjh Aye Ya Na..


Samjhanay Ki Koshish Karta Hoon, .. " The Though when I Wrote.. "

Lag Gai Hain Ronakain Aur Mehv-e-Raqs Gulsitaa'n
Jaan Say Pyara Hay Mujh Ko Mazi Ka Ye Karwaa'n

Tareek Raat Mein Jab Mazi Ki Chokhat Par Qadam Rakha, .. Uski Manzar Kashi Ki Aur Mere Liye Uski Ehmiyat..

Hay Pasand Meri Tu Akhir, Rehta Hamesha Baahijab
Ata Hay Mere Pass Tu Jab Sojata Hay Ye Jahaa'n

Bahijab Sift Bayan Kartay Howay Us Ka Link Raat Say Daydiya.. K Jab Sab Sojatay Hain Jab As Pass Mere Koi Nahi Hota Tab Wo Ata Hay..

Hay Gumaan Tera Hi Tera In Andhero'n Mein Mujh Ko Ab
Daikhta Firdous Tere Pyar Ki Hun Jan-e-Jaa'n

Unka Hi Guman Hay Ab, Yani Yaad Is Qadar Solid Hay .. Aur Khud Ko Usi Jannat Mein Pata Hoon, Jis Mein Raha Karta Tha.. Judai Say Pehlay

Hay Tera Kya Wasta Andhro'n Say Ay Mere Chand
Kay Zia Bhi Kar Gai Tareek Mera Dostaa'n

Usay Chand Say Tashbeeh Daitay Howay Sawal Karta Hoon K Kya Wasta Hay Andhero'n Say Tera.. K Teri Hazri Andhero'n Mein Hoti Hay, Tareekiyo'n Mein Hoti Hay.. Doosray Misray Mein Kehta Hoon K Din Ki Roshni Main Ab Koi Lagao Nahi Raha..


Zakhm Day Kar Kehdiya Kay Khush Raho Ta-Hayat
Zaher Day Jo Pyar Say, Hay Tu Aisa Maherbaa'n

Thora Sa Gila.. Karna Jayez Hay..

Tanha Hota Hoon Bazahir Par Ghumkhuwari K Liye
Roz Sunti Raat Hay Ik Mudda-e-Baykasa'n

Bazahir To Tanha Lagta Hoon, .. Magar Ye Raat Meri Ghamkhuwar Hay.. Meri Kahani Sunti Hay..


Hope So Samjh Agai Hogi..

 

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Chal Fiqr Noo Goli Maar Yaar Hain Din Jindri Day Chaar!

[AFghani_Laila]

AWwwHOooo WAhh Wahhh Zabardasttttt Goooddddddd SOoliiiii BEautifulll Sach Mai

 

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[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

[fog]

Originally Posted by !~*SOoLi

My bad, .. Surely there is Something missing thats why you didn't get it ..
Chalo, atleast Honest Comments To Kiye, Warna Zyada Tar Cases V Nice Kehdaitay Hain.. Samjh Aye Ya Na..


Samjhanay Ki Koshish Karta Hoon, .. " The Though when I Wrote.. "

Lag Gai Hain Ronakain Aur Mehv-e-Raqs Gulsitaa'n
Jaan Say Pyara Hay Mujh Ko Mazi Ka Ye Karwaa'n

Tareek Raat Mein Jab Mazi Ki Chokhat Par Qadam Rakha, .. Uski Manzar Kashi Ki Aur Mere Liye Uski Ehmiyat..

Hay Pasand Meri Tu Akhir, Rehta Hamesha Baahijab
Ata Hay Mere Pass Tu Jab Sojata Hay Ye Jahaa'n

Bahijab Sift Bayan Kartay Howay Us Ka Link Raat Say Daydiya.. K Jab Sab Sojatay Hain Jab As Pass Mere Koi Nahi Hota Tab Wo Ata Hay..

Hay Gumaan Tera Hi Tera In Andhero'n Mein Mujh Ko Ab
Daikhta Firdous Tere Pyar Ki Hun Jan-e-Jaa'n

Unka Hi Guman Hay Ab, Yani Yaad Is Qadar Solid Hay .. Aur Khud Ko Usi Jannat Mein Pata Hoon, Jis Mein Raha Karta Tha.. Judai Say Pehlay

Hay Tera Kya Wasta Andhro'n Say Ay Mere Chand
Kay Zia Bhi Kar Gai Tareek Mera Dostaa'n

Usay Chand Say Tashbeeh Daitay Howay Sawal Karta Hoon K Kya Wasta Hay Andhero'n Say Tera.. K Teri Hazri Andhero'n Mein Hoti Hay, Tareekiyo'n Mein Hoti Hay.. Doosray Misray Mein Kehta Hoon K Din Ki Roshni Main Ab Koi Lagao Nahi Raha..


Zakhm Day Kar Kehdiya Kay Khush Raho Ta-Hayat
Zaher Day Jo Pyar Say, Hay Tu Aisa Maherbaa'n

Thora Sa Gila.. Karna Jayez Hay..

Tanha Hota Hoon Bazahir Par Ghumkhuwari K Liye
Roz Sunti Raat Hay Ik Mudda-e-Baykasa'n

Bazahir To Tanha Lagta Hoon, .. Magar Ye Raat Meri Ghamkhuwar Hay.. Meri Kahani Sunti Hay..


Hope So Samjh Agai Hogi..

hahahaha

hahahaha

yeah i got it
that's really gr8
kia tashbeehat di hain shayer g
very well written

 

[!~*SOoLi]

Originally Posted by AFghani_laila

AWwwHOooo WAhh Wahhh Zabardasttttt Goooddddddd SOoliiiii BEautifulll Sach Mai

Thankyou Afghani.. Apki Kya Hi Baat Hay..

 

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Chal Fiqr Noo Goli Maar Yaar Hain Din Jindri Day Chaar!

[!~*SOoLi]

Originally Posted by fog

hahahaha

hahahaha

yeah i got it
that's really gr8
kia tashbeehat di hain shayer g
very well written

Subho Ka Bhula Sham Ko Ghar Lotay To Usay Bhula Nai Kehtay Dair Aye Darust Aye..

 

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Chal Fiqr Noo Goli Maar Yaar Hain Din Jindri Day Chaar!

[Noor ul huda]

AHaan! Really Good.

 

[!~*SOoLi]

Thankyou.. Khush Rahain

 

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Chal Fiqr Noo Goli Maar Yaar Hain Din Jindri Day Chaar!