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not a big thing but a good job  keep it up  the 3rd sher is much betta
Hun mein is ada se bhi aashna tujhe itna jis pe gharoor hai
mein jeon ga tere beghair bhi mujhe zindagi ka shaoor hai
Yeh pathron ka shaher hey - yahan to ansoo bhi jum jate hain
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