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M A H i 09-16-2012 08:50 PM
Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
Shab ki tanhai mein aksar khayal ata hai
Apney dukh kisko sunatey ho kahan jatey ho ?



Mausm-e-gul mein nasha hijr ka barh jata hai
Merey sab hosh churatey ho kahan jatey ho ?



Sard raton mein tumhein kaisey bhula sakta hon
Aag si dil mein lagatey ho kahan jatey ho ?



Tum to khushiyon ki rafakat key liye bichrey they
Ab agar ashk bahatey ho to kahan jatey ho ?



Sheher key log bhi yehi khayal rakhtey hain
Ab boht kam nazar atey ho kahan jatey ho ?

)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*( 09-16-2012 09:11 PM
Re: Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
Shab ki tanhai mein aksar khayal ata hai
Apney dukh kisko sunatey ho kahan jatey ho ?

best line and nice share///

)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*( 09-16-2012 09:11 PM
Re: Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
Shab ki tanhai mein aksar khayal ata hai
Apney dukh kisko sunatey ho kahan jatey ho ?

best line and nice share///

M A H i 09-16-2012 09:25 PM
Re: Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
Thanks G.T

Owi 09-21-2012 02:39 PM
Re: Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
Bohat khoob Mahi (Y)
Mager mujhay lagta hai k ye ghazal poori nahi or shaayad durust bhi nahi :(
Ager main ghalat na hoon to ye ghazal Saeed Waasiq ki hai or ye ghazal sahi is terhan say hai .....



Hijr mein khoon rulaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?
Lout ker kiun nahi aatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

jab bhi milta hai koi shakhs bahaaron jaisa
Mujh ko tum kaisay bhulaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Yaad aati hein akaylay mein tumhaari neendein
Kis terhan khud ko sulaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Mujh say bichray ho to mehboob-e-nazar ho kis k
Aaj kal kis ko manaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Shab ki tunhaai mein akser ye khayaal aata hai
Apnay dukh kis ko sunaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Mosam-e-gull mein nasha hijr ka berh jaata hai
Meray sab hosh churaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Serd raaton mein tumhein kaisay bhula sakta hoon
Aag si dil mein lagaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Tum to khushiyon ki rafaaqat k liye bichray thay
Ab ager ashk bahaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Sheher k log bhi WaasiQ yehi kertay hein sawaal
Ab bohat kam nazar aatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

M A H i 09-22-2012 08:19 PM
Re: Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Owi (Post 1625429)
Bohat khoob Mahi (Y)
Mager mujhay lagta hai k ye ghazal poori nahi or shaayad durust bhi nahi :(
Ager main ghalat na hoon to ye ghazal Saeed Waasiq ki hai or ye ghazal sahi is terhan say hai .....



Hijr mein khoon rulaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?
Lout ker kiun nahi aatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

jab bhi milta hai koi shakhs bahaaron jaisa
Mujh ko tum kaisay bhulaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Yaad aati hein akaylay mein tumhaari neendein
Kis terhan khud ko sulaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Mujh say bichray ho to mehboob-e-nazar ho kis k
Aaj kal kis ko manaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Shab ki tunhaai mein akser ye khayaal aata hai
Apnay dukh kis ko sunaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Mosam-e-gull mein nasha hijr ka berh jaata hai
Meray sab hosh churaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Serd raaton mein tumhein kaisay bhula sakta hoon
Aag si dil mein lagaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Tum to khushiyon ki rafaaqat k liye bichray thay
Ab ager ashk bahaatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?

Sheher k log bhi WaasiQ yehi kertay hein sawaal
Ab bohat kam nazar aatay ho, kahaan hotay ho ?
:sorry:
Anyway Thank You for Completing the Poetry Wonderfully : )

Owi 09-22-2012 08:27 PM
Re: Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
Don't be Sorry Mahi :no-no:
And You Welcome Anytime

NaDaN hAsEEnA 09-22-2012 09:36 PM
Re: Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
Haha. . .
V.nice. .

Noor ul huda 09-23-2012 12:11 AM
Re: Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
Zabardast sharing by both of you

iqra 09-23-2012 10:11 AM
Re: Apne dukh Kisko sunatey ho? Kahan jatey ho?
 
hmmm...very nyc


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