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ShArArTi MuNdA 02-24-2009 08:55 AM

Jal gaya Nasheman.....(
 
Jal gaya nashe_man mera, na mera nam raha baki
Ek tere diye dard ke siwa, kuch bhi na raha baki

Path_thar hain ab yeh, inhe aakh kaise keh du
Na koi khwab dekhti hain, na koi aasoo raha baki

Tanhaiee ki hain mehfil, nahi koi sunne_wala
Ghazal kabse hain mukammal, sunana tujhe hain baki

Q mujhko chedti hain, q chain se marne bhi nahi deti
Waqt-e-kaza bhi zalim, teri yaad rahi baki

Abhi na padao kalma, na karao humse tauba
Thodi jaan reh gayee, paimano me sharaab hain baki

Mere marne pe gamzada huye woh, aur aakh se aasoo bhi na tapka
Guroor toota unka yakinan, bas ada reh gayee bakee

Mera wajood mit gaya hain, who yeh soch kar khush the
Zikr cheedh gaya jab dard ka, nam ***** ka raha baki

Jhuki Palkein 02-24-2009 11:33 AM

Wah Wah,.

Bohat Khoob,.

Bohat Khoobsurti Se Ehsaas Pesh Kiye Gaye Hain,.

Keep Sharing´!

Nida-H 02-24-2009 01:48 PM

Nice one..

ShahTaJ 02-24-2009 06:26 PM

very nice

ShArArTi MuNdA 02-25-2009 03:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jhuki Palkein (Post 198165)
Wah Wah,.

Bohat Khoob,.

Bohat Khoobsurti Se Ehsaas Pesh Kiye Gaye Hain,.

Keep Sharing´!


thanks 4 lykin it

ShArArTi MuNdA 02-25-2009 03:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruby` (Post 198355)
Nice one..

Thanks

ShArArTi MuNdA 02-25-2009 03:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShahTaJ (Post 199373)
very nice

Thanks

!«╬Ĵamil Malik╬«! 02-25-2009 06:55 PM

nice one brthr

ShArArTi MuNdA 02-27-2009 04:05 AM

Thanks Malik jee

~Pr!nCe$s UrOoJ~ 02-27-2009 04:07 AM

wow nice


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