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Stollen Heart 06-02-2012 02:19 AM

Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
Dil bahut udaas hai
Ghubar guzre waqt ka
Nazar k aas paas hai


Wohi hawa Wohi faza
Jo tu nahin to kya maza
Khile to hain chaman magar
Nah rang hai nah baat hai


Kahan aasman kahan zameen
Milenge hum yakeen nahin
Yeh pyaar ki intehaa
Keh phir bhi teri aas hai

beyond_vision 06-02-2012 02:52 AM

Re: Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
Wah Bohat Khoob!
I particularly liked the first stanza
Great sharing! :)

Stollen Heart 06-03-2012 10:22 PM

Re: Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by beyond_vision (Post 1483721)
Wah Bohat Khoob!
I particularly liked the first stanza
Great sharing! :)

Aaho, Kabhi kabhi aisi feelings ho jaati hen,

beyond_vision 06-04-2012 02:06 AM

Re: Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Stollen Heart (Post 1484955)
Aaho, Kabhi kabhi aisi feelings ho jaati hen,

Jee Baja Farmaya Aapnay! :)

mcitp-it 06-04-2012 06:23 PM

Re: Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
nice............

M A H i 06-10-2012 12:06 PM

Re: Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
Quote:

Dil bahut udaas hai
Ghubar guzre waqt ka
Nazar k aas paas hai
SO nice sharing!

Mf Great Power 07-19-2012 04:10 PM

Re: Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
gr8 sharing jin jeee

Stollen Heart 07-20-2012 01:05 PM

Re: Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Mf Great Power (Post 1549004)
gr8 sharing jin jeee

U ko poetry bhi aati he

SHAYAN 07-20-2012 02:24 PM

Re: Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
wow....

Adeela 07-20-2012 03:20 PM

Re: Dil Bohat Udas Hai
 
yeaph kabi kabhi bohat udasi honye lagtihai kioun yeh be pata nahi chalta


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