MeraForum Community.No 1 Pakistani Forum Community

Page 1 of 2

Show 40 post(s) from this thread on one page

MeraForum Community.No 1 Pakistani Forum Community (http://www.MeraForum.Com/index.php)

- Your Own Poetry (http://www.MeraForum.Com/forumdisplay.php?f=44)

- - my fist own poetry.. (http://www.MeraForum.Com/showthread.php?t=6730)

momal ali

01-29-2009 11:31 PM

my fist own poetry..

Aslamualaikum frndz i tried a small effert to say some words dis is first time in my life dat i wish 2 write some poetry n i really want 2 share wid my all frndz if u like then do appricate me ill b very thankful .....

PeYaR....

tera peyaar hamy yun muatabar ker gaya...
saans lety jisam ko jesay koi rooh bakhsh gaya...
chahat ney teri achanak yun jeena sikha deyaa..
zinda lemhon k moteyon ko jesay perona sikha deya..
faqat teri raah takty guzer jaey ge zindagi yun..
khush hun phir bhe tera intezaar he jo pa leya...

ShArArTi MuNdA

01-30-2009 10:44 AM

nice one mahum jeeee...
goood one and keeep workin on it :)
nice one

momal ali

01-30-2009 10:57 AM

thnx boss

~*Gillanii

01-30-2009 02:39 PM

Bohat Achi Poetry Maham
Bass Pehla Shair Theek Say Nahi Samjh Paya ..

-|A|-

01-30-2009 05:00 PM

wow yaaar ..
n ur sigi also good.!!

A L i

01-31-2009 12:37 AM

very Nice

thora sa balance aur acha karien

shairi bahut hi achi hai (y)

Ali jee

01-31-2009 12:01 PM

achi kawish hi ............

momal ali

01-31-2009 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by !~*SOoLi (Post 142197)

Bohat Achi Poetry Maham
Bass Pehla Shair Theek Say Nahi Samjh Paya ..

thanks sooli jee bus zra start mey tu esa he kuch hota hey it will take some time anyways thanks a lot once again sooli

MeOw*

01-31-2009 08:17 PM

ohhhh Zabardast (y) :cheer:

majaku :pp:

momal ali

01-31-2009 08:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by stranger (Post 142302)

wow yaaar ..
n ur sigi also good.!!

thanks asad jee

All times are GMT +5. The time now is 08:20 AM.

Page 1 of 2

Show 40 post(s) from this thread on one page