lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

mei janta hoo sirf mei hi nahi
teri jaan ki be teergi ki waja
kuch dukh tujhey aur bhi hain
kuch loge tere aur bhi hain
magr kia karoo aye jan e wafa
yah dil ke hai kia is ki khata
is ne seekha hai ek simt ka safar
tu nahi manta yah teri adaa
jo kabhi tujhey gumaan ho yah
ke sar zard hooi koi tujh sei khata
lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
hojain gi bohat si khatain rafa
per itna bhi jaan lo merei hum nasheen
farz chootein tou sahoo hotey nahi....

Re: lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

wah bohat khob...

Re: lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

KAMAL ANDAAZ HAI!

kuch lafz aise hote hai...
jo hamein kisi ke liye qeemti hone ka ahsas dilate hain ...
aur kuch lafz nashtar ki tarah dil me chubh jate hain.....
per sara kamaal hai andaaz-e-biyaan....
aur Allah ny apko is fan se khoob nawaza hai....
itna acha likhte hain aur khas ker yeh kalaam....
k daad dene ko lalfaaz nahi mil rahe....
khushnaseeb hain aap k qalam k zariye....
apne chahne walo tak apny dil ki baat pahucha sakte hain!

SUPERB SHAAM! :salute:

Re: lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

: )

jo koi kehna chahey ger wo baat pohanch jaye us shaks tak tou adha maqsad hasil hojata hai
aur ger ger dosra samjh jaaey kahey ya bina kahey
tou poora maqsad hasil hojata hai


bohat shukria ke aap jo ke sirf acha intikhaab parhti hain
yah jo bohat khaam tehreer hai is ko acha kaha.....


dua bhi kijye ga ke likhney ka maqsad poora hojaye.... ek shair kahoo ger ijazat hai : )


lahoo dil ka hota hai tou utartey hain zakhm zakhm se kuch alfaaz
kuch ghazlon ki khaatir us ne Shaam mujhey rulaya bohat....

Re: lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

bahat khoub likhaaa humesha kee tarhaan ... khoosh rahoO

Re: lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

bohat khob...

Re: lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

thanks Rooze and Life...

Re: lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

very nice

Re: lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

ke sar zard hooi koi tujh sei khata
lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
hojain gi bohat si khatain rafa
per itna bhi jaan lo merei hum nasheen
farz chootein tou sahoo hotey nahi....




farz chootain to sahoo hotey nhi

MASHAALLAH
awesome poetry
bohat hi zabardast

Re: lazim hoga tujh pei sajda e sahoo
 

thanks : )