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Zindagi 06-17-2009 01:01 PM

When i saw u for the first time
 
When i saw u for the first time
feelings were nothing but sublime
felt like some one sowed a seed
wanted to know what did it need

First time u gave that look
i was pushed to a nook
guessed it was just a crush
but thoughts just seemed to rush

And the times u took my name
it did'nt sound all the same
While u first held my hand
my pulse sunk like quick sand

This special feelin was overwhelming
those days of our lifes were reigning
U used to give me that smile
made me a prisoner of u r jail

U laughed at my jokes
i blushed at ur pokes
The thoughts we shared
and the colors we reared
said that we wud be there
till the end of world stared....

dellawer shah 06-19-2009 10:53 AM

great

SHAYAN 06-20-2009 06:12 PM

Amazin :)

Hussain 06-21-2009 01:55 AM

gud

SHAYAN 06-28-2010 02:20 PM

Re: When i saw u for the first time
 
Nice....

!«╬Ĵamil Malik╬«! 06-28-2010 02:59 PM

Re: When i saw u for the first time
 
Nice Thnx For Sharing

~~KING~~ 07-01-2010 09:49 PM

Re: When i saw u for the first time
 
very nice................:bu:

DiE 09-16-2010 09:15 PM

Re: When i saw u for the first time
 
v nice


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