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ShArArTi MuNdA

03-20-2009 08:11 AM

Koi Dewar na dar rakhta hun

Koi Dewar na dar rakhta hun
ghar ka ahsas magar rakhta hun

log rakhte hain charagon pe nazr
main hawaon pe nazar rakta hun

kyon na pathrou karen sab mujh par
sakh der sakh samr rakhta hun

ek nai simt janam leti hai
paon main apne jidhar rakhta hun

ye zamin cheez hai kya main Ali
asmano ki khabr rakhta hun

Jhuki Palkein

03-20-2009 12:23 PM

Nice One Dear.

~Pr!nCe$s UrOoJ~

03-20-2009 02:43 PM

v nice munda ji

~*Gillanii

03-20-2009 06:03 PM

Koi Deevar Na Dar Rakhta Hoon ..
Ghar Ka Ehsaas Magar Rakhta Hoon ..

Excellent Dushmano .. Cha Gaye Aap!!

~*Gillanii

03-20-2009 06:04 PM

Shair Ka Takhalus ALI Hay .. Kahi Aap Ki Apni Poetry To Nahi :1smile1:

ShArArTi MuNdA

03-20-2009 07:39 PM

Thanks to all of you

Nida-H

03-20-2009 09:15 PM

very nice..

ShahTaJ

03-21-2009 05:11 AM

very nice

ShArArTi MuNdA

03-21-2009 08:08 AM

Thanks both of you

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