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M A H i 01-22-2012 12:00 PM

'' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
:salam:
'' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar


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Jagaa-e-Fan mein barhay sakht Muqaam aate hain
Mar ke rah jaataa hai Fanakaar Amar hone tak
Kitany '' Ghaalib '' thy jo paidaa huye aur mar bhi gaye
Qadradaan ko Takhallus ki Khabar hone tak
Kitany '' Iqabaal ''Raah-e-Fiker mein uthe lekin
Raastaa bhuul gaye Khatm-e-Safar hone tak
Kitane Shabbiir hasan khan na bane '' Josh '' kabhi
Mar gaye kitany Sikander bhi '' Jigar '' hone tak
'' Faiz '' rang bhi Ashaar mein aa sakataa thaa
Ungaliyaan saath to dein Khoon mein tar hone tak
Chand zarron hi ko milati hai Ziyaa-e-Khurshiid
Chand taare hi chamakate hain Sahar hone tak
Dil-e-Shaayar pe kuchh aisi he guzarati hai '' Figaar ''
Jo kisi Qatare pe guzare hai Gouhar hone tak ! ! !


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Iss Thread mein Srif Shora ke TaKhallus par mabni Ashaar pesh kiye jaein
(Yaani Shaayir ne jis shair mein apna Adbi Naam istemaal kiya ho Pesh keegiye )




M A H i 01-22-2012 12:11 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
'' Dar-e-qafas pe andhere ki muhar lagti hai
Tou "Faiz" dil mein sitaare utarne lagte haiN ''

M A H i 01-22-2012 12:13 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
'' Urdu hai jis ka naam hum he jaante hain ''Daagh''
Saare jahaan mein dhum hamaari zubaan ki haI ''

M A H i 01-22-2012 12:17 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
'' Chup chaap apni aag mein jalte raho ''Faraz''
Duniya to arz-e-haal pe be-aabroo karaY ''

M A H i 01-22-2012 12:20 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
'' Iss basti ki ek kooche mein ek INSHA naam tha deewaanae
Ek naar pe jaan ko haar gaya mash'hoor hai us ka afsaanA
''

M A H i 01-22-2012 12:26 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
'' Mere ash'aar ae '' Iqbal '' kiu piyaare na hoon mujh ko
Mere Tootay hue dil ke ye dard angeiz naale haiN ''

Haadi 01-22-2012 12:37 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
wonderful thread Mahi

A L i 01-22-2012 01:34 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
tum taqaluf ko bhi iKhalas samajhate ho'Faraz'
dost hota nahi har hath milane wala

A L i 01-22-2012 01:37 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Aakhire-shab ke humsafer*FAIZ*na jane kya hoi
Rah gayi jis jageh saba, subah kidher nikal gayi

A L i 01-22-2012 01:38 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
maqam 'Faiz' koi rah main jacha hi nahin
jo ku-e-yar se nikle to su-e-dar chale

AFghani_Laila 01-22-2012 02:11 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
AHaan Bohut KhubSOorat THread Hai Mahi ..!!

Zafina 01-22-2012 03:21 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 

اے عدم احتیاط لوگوں سے
لوگ منکر نکیر ہوتے ہیں

---- عبدالحمید عدم

- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм - 01-22-2012 04:56 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Jo B Tere Qareeb Hote Hen , Aadmi Be Nazeer Hote Hen ..
Aey Adam Ahtyat Logon Se , Log Munkar Nakeer HOte Hen .. V.Nice Zafina ..:)
Matam Sarra B Hote Hen Kia Khudd Gharaz Qateel ..
Apne He DukhOn Par Rote Hen , Lekar Kisi Ka Naam ..!

AYAZ 01-22-2012 05:36 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
raikhta ke tum hi ustaad nahi ho galib
kehtay hei ke agley zamaney mei koiye meer bhi tha

A L i 01-22-2012 07:25 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
is chaman mein hoNge paida bulbul-e-sheraaz bhi,
sainkRon*SAAHIR* bhi hoNge saahib-e-eijaaz bhi

A L i 01-22-2012 07:27 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Ye Muhabbat Bhi Hai Kya Rog 'Faraz'
Jiss Ko Bhooley Woh Sada Yaad Aaya !

A L i 01-22-2012 07:28 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
me bas ik bar lajawab hua FARAZ
kisi apny ny jab kaha kon ho tum?

DiE 01-23-2012 12:26 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
maktab e ishq ka "Momin" hai niraala dastur
us ko chhuti na mili jis ko sabak yaad hua

DiE 01-23-2012 12:26 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
maktab e ishq ka "Momin" hai niraala dastur
us ko chhuti na mili jis ko sabak yaad hua

DiE 01-23-2012 12:30 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
kia maslehat shanas tha wo aadmi " Qateel "
majboriyon ka jis nai wafa naam rakh diya

DiE 01-23-2012 12:41 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
ek dil hai or toufan e havadis aey " Jigar "
ek shisha hai k har pathar se takrata hon mai

DiE 01-23-2012 12:45 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
vehshat ki unvan hamari in mai se jo naar bani
dekhenge to log kahenge " Insha " ji diwane the

- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм - 01-23-2012 03:59 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Bohat KhOob Die Bro .. :)


Qateel .. Aksar Badal Kar Bhais Milta Hai kOI Kaafir ..
Kabhi Hum Jaan Lete Hen , Kabhi Pehchan Lete Hen .. !

Alia 01-23-2012 06:08 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Bhut Hi Umda !!!

M A H i 01-25-2012 12:28 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
'' Hain yehi ''Jaun Eliya'' jo kabhi
Sakht maghroor bhi the bad-khoo bhi ''

M A H i 01-25-2012 12:34 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
'' Hosh urne lage raqeeb'oun ke
DAAGH ko aur bewafa kahiye''

M A H i 01-31-2012 11:54 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
'' Main saahlion mein utar k SHAKEB kia leta
Azal se naam mera paanion mein likha thA ''

Miss Habib 02-01-2012 11:35 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Main chup rahon kabhi bewajah hans paron Mohsin

Uss ko gawan k ajab hosly talash karon

Shaam 02-01-2012 12:26 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
aye Jaan e FARAZ aye mere her dukh ke maseeha
her zeher zamaney ka tere naam sei utrey.........

)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*( 02-01-2012 01:58 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Hum Kia kahe
Kon Sune Ga Hmari Rodaad Yha......

)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*( 02-01-2012 01:58 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
:artist:....................

M A H i 02-04-2012 11:49 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
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''Kaun ''Ayub'' pareshaan nahe taareeki mein?
Chaand falak pe dil seene mein be-kal nikla ''

)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*( 02-04-2012 01:38 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Hunsoo Kis Per Ay Gazil
Mojhe Kud per rona bhot arha hyy.

SAjan 02-04-2012 08:11 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Mujhe Samjhaaya Na Karo Ke Ab Tou Ho Chuki Mujhko,,,
Mohabbat Mashwaraa Hoti tou Tumse Pooch Ker Kerte..

M A H i 02-05-2012 10:43 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by SAjan (Post 1378034)
Mujhe Samjhaaya Na Karo Ke Ab Tou Ho Chuki Mujhko,,,
Mohabbat Mashwaraa Hoti tou Tumse Pooch Ker Kerte..

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M A H i 02-05-2012 10:53 AM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
" Ta'ajjub kya lagi jo aag, aye 'Seemaab', seene mein
Hazaar'on dil mein angaaray bhare thay, lag gayii hogi ''


Quote:

Poet:
~Seemaab Akabaraabaadi~
Pen-name (Takallus):
~Seemaab~

SAjan 02-05-2012 07:51 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
ok mahi itna ghusa :s

M A H i 02-06-2012 12:11 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
" jise, aye 'Qais',tuu samjhaa tha haasil laakh sajd'on ka
Phiraya hai ussi kaafir ne tujh ko kuu-ba-kuu bars'on ''


Quote:

Poet name :
~ Raj Kumar 'Qais ~

Pen-name (Takhallus) :
~ Qais ~

SAjan 02-06-2012 07:10 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
nice good

SAjan 02-06-2012 07:13 PM

Re: '' Takhallus '' per mabnee Aash'aar
 
pehle samj hi nahe aya ta sory :s


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