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ROSE apko shair b likhna hai plz edit
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aur GT aap ko mahi ko khiraj e tahseen ke baad number bhi deinei hain lolz
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shair samjh nahi aya G.T anyways welcome here '' Us nay mujhe sonpi hai yadoo ki saltanat Loog kehtay hain wo tujhe Berbaad ker gayA '' |
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8/10 Husun Baano k sawaal ab bhi hein tashna jawaab Ishq k sodaai nay hai lay liya ban-baas tak |
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Thanks Owi for joining shairy Welcome here... 9/10 Ankhein bhi wohi hain dareecha bhi wohi hai... Aur soch ke aangan mein utarta bhi wohi hai... Jis ne mere jazbo'n ki sadaqat ko na jaana... Ab meri rafaqat ko tarasta bhi wohi hai... |
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gaye dino me muhabbat mizaaj us ka tha magr kuch aur hi andaaz aaj us ka tha mei kia bataoon kio us ne bewafai ki magr yahi ke kuch aisa mizaaj us ka tha |
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8/10 '' Mein fanaa ho gayaa afsoos woh badla b nahi Meri chaahat se b sachi rahi nafrat us kI '' |
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zabardsat 9/10
hum apni dhalti umr ki ek sepeher me hain jo milna hai humse tou mil, chiragh e shaam sei pehlei |
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10/8
Is mein mousam ka qasoor hay ya logon ka Ahsan Log mousam ki tarha pal bhar mein badaltay kyon hain |
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ow nice 9/10
Yeh Soch Kar Khamosh Rahe K Qismat Mein Tum Nahi Warna Har Cheez Ka Muqabla Karte Hum Tumhare Liye. |
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