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Deewana 09-19-2010 11:22 AM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Truth Reveals (Post 839809)
Sar-e-Raah Wo Tujh Chor Aya To Kya Karogay..
Tazaad-e-Jazbat Mein Nazuk Mor Aya To Kya Karogay..
Na Chal BaysarOSamani Kay Alam Mein Tu Us K Sath
Wo Beech Rastay Teri Umeedain Tor Aya To Kya Karogay..


achi kawish hai



aur janab dia bhi misra tou kalam e iqbal
nahi jaati jaha fikr e insani nahi jati

waha tou maulana roomi they
yaha tou masjid ke molvi ka dast e shafqat bhi nahi
chalein
phir bhi koi tuk bandi karkei dekhtey hain....

Deewana 09-19-2010 11:27 AM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
merei sayyad ! tujhey samjh na aye ga mera wajah e shukr
ho sauq e yaqeen paida tou kut jati hain zanjeerein.....



Deewana 09-19-2010 11:29 AM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
chalein ek aur ustaad ki baat kartey hain

"me janta hoo wo kia likhein ge jawab me"


Truth Reveals 09-19-2010 12:18 PM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
Mein Janta Hoon Wo Kya Likhain Gay Jawab Mein..
Mere Mehboob Ki Paishruft Mujhay Dikh Gai He Khuwab Mein..
Wo Jo Reh gai Adhuri, Bayzaroori, Mita Daygaa Wo Tehreerain..
Kay Ab Kuch Nayi Chahatain, Ibaratain Hain Chup Gai Kitaab Mein..

Truth Reveals 09-19-2010 12:20 PM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
"Kash Mein Tere Haseen Hath Ka Kangan Hota.." :)

Deewana 09-19-2010 12:26 PM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Truth Reveals (Post 840125)
Mein Janta Hoon Wo Kya Likhain Gay Jawab Mein..
Mere Mehboob Ki Paishruft Mujhay Dikh Gai He Khuwab Mein..
Wo Jo Reh gai Adhuri, Bayzaroori, Mita Daygaa Wo Tehreerain..
Kay Ab Kuch Nayi Chahatain, Ibaratain Hain Chup Gai Kitaab Mein..

bohat khoob Chaa gaye boss...

Deewana 09-19-2010 12:27 PM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Truth Reveals (Post 840128)
"Kash Mein Tere Haseen Hath Ka Kangan Hota.." :)

kash me tere haseen hath ka kangan hota
mehekta tere lams se itna nazuk mera angan hota


Deewana 09-19-2010 12:28 PM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
maujizey faraz ke dekhtey hain


her zeher zamanei ka tere naam se utrey...



Truth Reveals 09-20-2010 06:51 AM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
Ap Ka Diya Gya Misra Samjh Nahi Aya

Deewana 09-20-2010 06:57 PM

Re: Next Misra Muqabala
 
aye jan e faraz aye mere her dukh ke masiha
her zeher zamanei ka tere nam sei utrey
aisa tha kuch


chalein next lelein



auro ke qasidey tou faqat award they jaana....


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