Dil Bohat Udas Hai

[Stollen Heart]

Dil bahut udaas hai
Ghubar guzre waqt ka
Nazar k aas paas hai


Wohi hawa Wohi faza
Jo tu nahin to kya maza
Khile to hain chaman magar
Nah rang hai nah baat hai


Kahan aasman kahan zameen
Milenge hum yakeen nahin
Yeh pyaar ki intehaa
Keh phir bhi teri aas hai

[beyond_vision]

Wah Bohat Khoob!
I particularly liked the first stanza
Great sharing! :)

[Stollen Heart]

Wah Bohat Khoob!
I particularly liked the first stanza
Great sharing! :)

Aaho, Kabhi kabhi aisi feelings ho jaati hen,

[beyond_vision]

Aaho, Kabhi kabhi aisi feelings ho jaati hen,

Jee Baja Farmaya Aapnay! :)

[mcitp-it]

nice............

[M A H i]

Dil bahut udaas hai
Ghubar guzre waqt ka
Nazar k aas paas hai

SO nice sharing!

[Mf Great Power]

gr8 sharing jin jeee

[Stollen Heart]

gr8 sharing jin jeee

U ko poetry bhi aati he

[SHAYAN]

wow....

[Adeela]

yeaph kabi kabhi bohat udasi honye lagtihai kioun yeh be pata nahi chalta

[Stollen Heart]

yeaph kabi kabhi bohat udasi honye lagtihai kioun yeh be pata nahi chalta

Haan sahi bola, bina kisi sabab ke udasi ho jaati he,

[Mf Great Power]

U ko poetry bhi aati he

Kuch kuch ...........

[Stollen Heart]

Kuch kuch ...........

Kuch kuch men heroin konsi thi.

[Mf Great Power]

Kuch kuch men heroin konsi thi.

:crying: Yaad nhi or mai ni kaha Kuch kuch poetry karti hooo kuch :what:

[Stollen Heart]

:crying: Yaad nhi or mai ni kaha Kuch kuch poetry karti hooo kuch :what:

Oh great, to ho jay eik sher aane wali eid pe

[Mf Great Power]

Oh great, to ho jay eik sher aane wali eid pe

ho gaye start ho gao:sneaking:

[Stollen Heart]

ho gaye start ho gao:sneaking:

Chalo apne pass se sher bana ke sunao eid wale din pe.

[MASOOM GIRL]

Zabardast...

[Stollen Heart]

Zabardast...

Kitta zabardast?

[MASOOM GIRL]

Buhat Zabardast :p NiCe pOetry

[cute_sehar]

nyc...

[Mf Great Power]

Chalo apne pass se sher bana ke sunao eid wale din pe.

EID EId Karte Ho Eid behi a je gii Solent
Phely Ramzan ke pore Roze rahko
Akal tehkane a jeye gi
:(naqal:

ab u...................

[Stollen Heart]

EID EId Karte Ho Eid behi a je gii Solent
Phely Ramzan ke pore Roze rahko
Akal tehkane a jeye gi
:(naqal:

ab u...................

Wah wah kiya sher bola hey, maza aa giya eik dum

Ub me se bhi suno,

Nigaahain aaj bhi us shakhs ko talash karti hain Stollen,
Jis ne kaha tha bass pehla roza rakh lo agey sub asaan hen..

[Stollen Heart]

nyc...

Kiya Nice hey Baji,

[Stollen Heart]

Buhat Zabardast :p NiCe pOetry

Haan na aisa zor se bola kro na,

[Abewsha]

Dil bahut udaas hai
Ghubar guzre waqt ka
Nazar k aas paas hai


Wohi hawa Wohi faza
Jo tu nahin to kya maza
Khile to hain chaman magar
Nah rang hai nah baat hai


Kahan aasman kahan zameen
Milenge hum yakeen nahin
Yeh pyaar ki intehaa
Keh phir bhi teri aas hai

Zabardast....

[Stollen Heart]

Zabardast....

Is men kiya sub se zeyada zaberdast he? :rollbaby:

[Abewsha]

Is men kiya sub se zeyada zaberdast he? :rollbaby:

wo hai k yea ap ki thread hai tabi zabardast hai lol :pp:

[Stollen Heart]

wo hai k yea ap ki thread hai tabi zabardast hai lol :pp:

Wao u r great, zara phir se kehna,

[Abewsha]

Wao u r great, zara phir se kehna,

ek dafa bola na usi ko bar bar read kar lo lol

[Stollen Heart]

ek dafa bola na usi ko bar bar read kar lo lol

Phir se kehne se jee ur khush ho jaiega na, Keh do na eik baar phir,

[Abewsha]

Phir se kehne se jee ur khush ho jaiega na, Keh do na eik baar phir,

ek baat ko bar bar rehne se us ka maza nahi rehta... lol

[Stollen Heart]

ek baat ko bar bar rehne se us ka maza nahi rehta... lol

Yeh baat to laakh rupees ki boli hey u ne, chalo ub me chup, :headbreak:

[life]

buhat khoob

[Stollen Heart]

buhat khoob

U kuch is se bhi acha bolo na