PDA

View Full Version : A doll of NO Emotions


M A H i
09-18-2011, 09:46 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5160/barbie122.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/88/barbie122.jpg/)


Rejection or not,
This is not because I found you so undivine
But my heart is not here
I have been through so much I fear,
And lost someone so dear.
I am still lost and wary,
A doll of no emotions
Breakable as glass,
How I wish I could share your feelings,
The temptation is just not there,
Or the thought of wanting doesn’t seem real anymore,
I wish I could care,
I am near the edge of sanity,
Placed myself in a vulnerable state,
Conflicting desires.
There never will be a farewell,
Because it will never end.

Shaam
09-18-2011, 10:59 PM
a doll never gets break
be in one hand
with love and care.

Nice one Mahi

~wish munda~
09-18-2011, 11:10 PM
hmm nice ..

Shaam
09-19-2011, 12:47 AM
lemem eexplain ma words too

actually we always care of what we get after loosing it
so be concious wheneve we get a love
this is specially for girls
they usually get many who says they love her
but there must be a guage for truth.

M A H i
09-19-2011, 12:53 AM
No need of over explination

Shaam
09-19-2011, 12:06 PM
Mahi...
emm not over explaning it
its just elaboration of what i tried to say.
may be my words inst perfect to explain what i meant.
anyway

again it is a nice poem showing true emotions.

Take care

saadat
09-21-2011, 06:18 PM
nice lines...:)

well done

sat

M A H i
09-21-2011, 09:27 PM
Thanks.

CaReLeSs
09-21-2011, 09:52 PM
Zabardast...

Owi
03-04-2012, 12:48 PM
Very Nice

life2
03-10-2012, 10:27 PM
nyc./....

life
08-15-2012, 02:46 AM
so nice

Adeela
08-15-2012, 02:47 AM
niceeeeeeee

Copyright ©2008
Powered by vBulletin Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.