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Shaam
08-28-2011, 05:06 PM
http://i.ytimg.com/vi/L8Ogfo1AhzA/0.jpg


koi kar nahi sakta tamaam muhabbatein kisi ke naam
phir bhi ek shaks hai ke dil kahta hai me mera ho

mei rakhta nhi tumharei pal pal koi bhi haq lekin
kuch waqt tou aisa ho jo sirf aur sirf mera ho.

Mf Great Power
08-28-2011, 05:16 PM
Nice,,,,

CaReLeSs
08-28-2011, 05:38 PM
Shaam bhai Zabardast..

Shaam
08-28-2011, 07:32 PM
thanks Zak and Care.

M A H i
08-29-2011, 12:58 PM
hmmm....
thori kaami hai per khoob likha!

Shaam
08-29-2011, 01:15 PM
thanks Mahi
aur kami bhi batao

M A H i
08-29-2011, 02:02 PM
second and third line thori disbalance hai

Shaam
08-29-2011, 03:13 PM
acha hogai hogi bus kuch zehen me tha likh dia

thanks fore mentoning it : )

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
09-01-2011, 06:14 PM
bahat khooob ... khoosh rahoO

Flower~
09-04-2011, 02:41 PM
shaam bhai aham ahaam
zabardast :zabardast:

Nazuk Ladki
09-05-2011, 09:44 AM
kuch waqt tou aisa ho jo sirf aur sirf mera ho.

Very Cute Small sa Sher.
Good Job. YOu are good
Thank you for sharing shaam. :s1:

Noor ul huda
09-05-2011, 09:54 AM
nice!!!

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