Pechan

[Farah]

Tum nay to humay pechana nahi
hum na to tumhay pechana wahen
jahan tum na wo baat kahi
jo hum ko lagi na sahi
jis sa hum ma judai barhi
or ho gaye hum ek dosray ka liya ajnabi

[ShArArTi MuNdA]

Tum nay to humay pechana nahi
hum na to tumhay pechana wahen
jahan tum na wo baat kahi
jo hum ko lagi na sahi
jis sa hum ma judai barhi
or ho gaye hum ek dosray ka liya ajnabi



waahhh wahhhh janab kia baat hai :)

[Farah]

Gracias, just for you :0011:

[dont depend on others]

bohat achi ha ??????????
:S
ho gi b8 mujay samjh hi nahi aai :S

[Farah]

App ka liya nahi ha is liya app ko samaj nahi ayi

[dont depend on others]

jis kay liya ha us ka name likhna tha na ta kay man read nahi karta

[Farah]

Just kidding, Jis ka liya ha wo idiot yahan nahi ata

[momal ali]

:flower4u: very nice effert siso

[Nida-H]

Nice one..keep it up!!!

[A L i]

Farah

Poetry tu bahut achi hai
magar alfaz ka balance thora :(

nice effort keep it up :)

[Ali jee]

hmmmmm achi kawish hi
koish aye rahey kai nazam me rawani rahey
keep it up

[Farah]

Thank you, i try to write as best as i can in urdu. But its hard to write poetry in urdu since urdu is not my first language. But, Thank you for your comments. You can also see my English poetry, it is a bit better then urdu. i hope you like it,

[Hamzaking]

nice........................

[life]

bohat umdah!