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[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

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ye title hey meri kahani ka
mein ney isey likhna to shuroo ker diya hey
per ajj mein beech mein hi phuns giya hoon
agey kiya likhoon sumjh mein hi nahi araha
is kahani sey kalam hata loon ye mumkin nahi
or mukamal keroon .... to kesey keroon sumjh sey bahir hey
mein is kahani ka happy end chahta hoon .... per kesey keroon
mind stuck ho jata hey jab sochta hoon to ...

ye aik love story hey ... or is mein sirf do kirdaar hein
ik tashi hey or ik ladki hey anjani si ... jo janey kab mili
jaan pahchan bani fir dosti hoi or kab wo dosti piyar mein badal gayee
dono ko pata hi nahi chala ....
wese in dono mein kuch bhi ik sa nahi hey ...
ye dono bilkul bhi aik jesey nahi hein
na un key shoq miltey hein na mizaaj milta hey
ik ko itna ghussa ata hey key haad nahi or second
jesey ghussa koi cheez hoti hi nahi .... bilkul bhi ego nahi hey us mein
ik sumander ka deewana hey to second ko khushk sahra pasand hein ...
ik ko mashriq pasand hey or second ko maghrib ...
ik mustakbil ki batein kerta hey to second mazi sey bahir hi nahi ana chahta
ik umeedo per jee leta hey to second ko kuch umeed hi nahi ..
in last dono key aqeedey bhi same nahi hein ...
in dono mein ager ik cheez same hey to wo hey piyar
dono mein beinteha piyar hey ... jo nazer ata hey
apna ahsaas khud dilata hey wo piyar ....

is kahani mein sub kuch ho chuka hey ... fun bhi tragedy bhi
ladayee bhi doori bhi or door ho ker fir mil jaana bhi ...
abb mein is kahani ka happy end likhna chahta hoon
lakin in dono mein kuch ik jesa hey hi nahi
to mein in dono ka piyar kamiyab kesey likhoon
ager koi bhi aik apney aqeedey ki qurbani daita hey to
wo happy feel nahi kerey ga ...
nd mein is story ka end happy chahta hoon ....

so u all .... help me ... nd meri is adhoori story ko
complete kerney mein meri help kerein ...
app sub apni apni raey mein is story ka end likhein ...
jo bhi app ko lugey ... jo bhi app ki sumjh mein aey
abb ye hi rasta nazer ata hey mujhey apni story ko complete kerney ka ..

Thanks u all ... in advance ...
coz im sure u all meri help kerein gey ...


Disclaimer : ye ik farzi story hey or kisi sey compare nahi ... or na hi koi is ko kisi sey compare kerey ThanX

[Charlie]

pyar mazhab aqeeday se pak hota hai pyar to bus pyar hota hai is main hadain nahin daikhi jateen ager aap ya wo apnay aqayed ko lay ker upset hain to sorry to say k aap ka pyar sacha nahin hai .... pyar na puchay zaat paat

[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

pyar mazhab aqeeday se pak hota hai pyar to bus pyar hota hai is main hadain nahin daikhi jateen ager aap ya wo apnay aqayed ko lay ker upset hain to sorry to say k aap ka pyar sacha nahin hai .... pyar na puchay zaat paat

ThanX Charlie for ur beautiful comment ... but brother its not me .. hahaha
its just a story brother ...
Thanks again ..

[Charlie]

heheheh i din comment abt u bro :) i commented abt story u r writer so tellin ya points what u might use to solve da prob cheers bro :)

[DiE]

abey Tashi k bachey lolzzz itna dimagh na lagwaoo maira pehli baar pori story read ki mai nai funter ho tum lolzzz

mai end mai apney comments donga ;)

[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

abey Tashi k bachey lolzzz itna dimagh na lagwaoo maira pehli baar pori story read ki mai nai funter ho tum lolzzz

mai end mai apney comments donga ;)

oh wow ... so its owner for me ...key app ney meri full story ko read kiya ... hahaha
ok thanks die bhai ... app key comments ka intezaar rahey ga ...

[PRINCE SHAAN]

Mohabbat ki koi serhad nahi na koi rang hai na nasal hai mager mazhab zaroor hai dekhna yeh hai k kon kitna sacha piyar karta hai kon apne mazhab ki qurbani deta hai ager dono ek mazhab k maannay walay hain to hoslay se kaam lain aur waldain ko razi karain sachi mohabbat zaroor kaamyaab hogi.

[Princess N]

ager sath rihna chahte ho likin ye nai pata ki ye faisla sahi hai ya ghalat tu ( salat al istekhara ) parlay , agay kiya karna hai sab samajh ma aa jaiga :s1:

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

is kahani ka end hmmmmm soochna paraein ga ... yara abhi tu mai andhaa parathaa kha raha houn ... par jaald hee post karoun gha is kahani ka end ... khoosh rahoO

[DreamoOo]

LOL Tashi

Compromise bee kisi cheez ka naam hey....
Hey aur waise bee love hoo ya arrange in one way or another , in one form or other , in one mean or other you hafta compromise on some stuff it could be any thing from food to wuteva.

[DreamoOo]

Akhir main Tashi paji Aur Stranger paji

Compromise kii puriya pani main mila ke pee lete hain aur hansee hansee apni duniya main mast hoo jate hain ,

Yehi ajj dee story....
Khush raho u bee aur u kii fartner bee :D

[(¯*♥¤»ƙɧՄՏɧՅԾԾ«¤♥*¯)]

mujhe nahi samaj ah raha ye saab so sorry no comments...:)

[!~*AdOrAbLe*~!]

mujhe aisi kahaniyan kam samj ati hain :(

[Miss Habib]

hhmmm achi story he
end sochna pare gaaaa
waise happy life guzarne k liye dono ka aik jaisa hona zaroori nahi

[Aina]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
well i don't know but let me think and i will tell you at the end :rainbow:

[iqra]

hmm...bhaiya sochna pry ga...
miss habib thek kaha apny
achi life guzarny k liye ak jaisa hona zruri nhi...
blky behtr hai k dono ak jaisy na hn
aur mazhab ki jahan tk bat hy to....sochna pry ga phir

[kool dud€]

kia yar atni complicated story lickte kiu ho :laugh:
nice thankx for sharing
total agreed with dream and miss habib
piyar ke liyee ik jaisa hona zarori nhi aur i think ke piyaar ma to mehbob ki hr bat achi lagti hai

[PaGli]

Storyyy Main Judaiiii Daloooo Bachayyy :D Coz Jab Judaiiii Hogi To To Larka Apni Pasand Bhool Jayega Jo Larki Karti Thi Wohi Krega Uski yad Main Or Same Hi Larki Ke Sath Hoga Phi Pata Lagega Unko Ke Woh Loog Aik Dosre Ke Bagair In Complete Hain kyunki Zindagi Main sab Kuch Hona Chiye Gussa Laraiii Khushiii Apnaiyet Jabke Larke Mein Gussa Nh To WOh In Complete Hai Or Larki Main BarDasht Nh To Woh Incomplete Hai .....

Iska Yehi End Hona Chahiye Mere Hisaab Se Agay Writer Jee Behtar Jante Hain Main Lakhon Stories Parhi Hain Mera Idea To Yehi Hai Jee Khair Mujhe Is Story Ka End Zaroor Batana Plzzzzzz Jo Bhi Ap Likhoo

[~ZAIN~]

lolz Sorry Bro me Ko Bhi You Ki Story bilkul Samjh Nhai Aai :0001:

[♥☆∂яєαмιηg яσѕє♪]

Great Story.........
Mery khayal sy Dono ko mil jana Chahiya....
Happy yehi end hoo ga.
Aur main ap sab k Samny Tashi Rao sy SORRY karta hoon apni aik galti ki....
Galti sab k samny nhi bolo ga kyun k yeh batana kuch logo k liya shayad acha na ho...
Maufi sab k samny is liya mang raha hoon kyun k main us waqt galat tha................
Love u Brother n Soooo Sorry ....
shayad pehchan gae hoo gae waja.

[CaReLeSs]

niceee......

[Zafina]

:) .............

[Noor ul huda]

Hmmm.......very well written!

itna difference acha lagta hay........magar aqeeday ka masla hu tu ahtiyaat buhut zaroori hay cox iss say problems hi create huty hain!

ALLAH karay end acha hu.. Aameen.

Umoomun iss terha ki Muhabbat waqti attraction huti hay jis ko sab kuch samajh liya jata hay magar baad may soch ker hasi hi ati hay..

so for everyone, Be Very Careful while choosing your Partner..

even in a stroy :D ;)

[)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*(]

Tashi Bahi Mery khiyaal Sy Istakha Kerlije Or ME bELieve SY KHETI HO APKI lIFE sUceesness bun jay gi Kyu Ke God Sy Acha Mashwara Koi Nhi Desukta Or Phir To God Jasa Koi Nhi HY Yha Per Apni Raye Ya Views Deny WALA
REALy Try Kerke Dhekhoo Or Mojhe Duwaye Dogay APni Life .........

[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

Arey yaar app sub is terhan key comment kio ker rahey ho jesey ye kuch real hey ...
arey its da story yaar ... or story ko kiya mein isthakhara ker key likhoon ..
mein ik baar fir sey sub ko clear ker doon key is story ka haqeeqat sey koi taluq nahi ...
ager aesa hota to mein ye thread bana ker kisi sey mashwara nahi leta ... kio key ajj tak ki
mein apni life kisi key mashwarey sey nahi guzari .... thanks

[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

Great Story.........
Mery khayal sy Dono ko mil jana Chahiya....
Happy yehi end hoo ga.
Aur main ap sab k Samny Tashi Rao sy SORRY karta hoon apni aik galti ki....
Galti sab k samny nhi bolo ga kyun k yeh batana kuch logo k liya shayad acha na ho...
Maufi sab k samny is liya mang raha hoon kyun k main us waqt galat tha................
Love u Brother n Soooo Sorry ....
shayad pehchan gae hoo gae waja.

bohet shukriya yaar story like kerney key liey ...
and mein is story ka end happy hi keroon ga ... wat i write i knwo ...
and baat rahi sorry ki to ... nahi yaar mein itna bada nahi key app ko sorry kerna padey
and mujhey ager app jantey ho to app ye bhi jantey ho gey key tashi ko jo bura lugta hey
foren us ka izhaar ker daita hey ... fir chahey kisi ko bura lugey ya acha ...
and mujhey to kkuch aeysa yaad nahi key app ko sorry kahna padey ... coz mere dil mein aesa kuch nahi baki
jo baat hoi waqti thi ... or mein sumjhta hoon key wo ik fact tha ... lakin shaid mein app ki jagah per hota to
aesa nahi kerta ... us time mein dukh huwa tha mushkil hoi thi .. but its ok ... mujhey app sey koi shikhayet nahi
koi gila nahi ... app still mere dost ho mere bhai ho .... thanks
and app ka ye andaz acha luga ... sub key samney is terhan kahna such mein bohet badi baat hey
thanks again ... every thing is fine yara ...

[♥☆∂яєαмιηg яσѕє♪]

ur welcome....
Chalo ab karachi aajao Sath ghoomain gae pheerain gae aish karain gae.

[*MoOmI*]

nice story
i think happy end hona chahye agar sacha pyar hai to baqi kisi cheeze se farq nhi parna chahye thats' it

[(¯`·._.·[FåIтH]·._.·´¯)]

ager sath rihna chahte ho likin ye nai pata ki ye faisla sahi hai ya ghalat tu ( salat al istekhara ) parlay , agay kiya karna hai sab samajh ma aa jaiga :s1:

ryt............

[)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*(]

:AllahHafiz:

[imaan]

wow really nice sharing

[CaReLeSs]

V nice................

[DreamGirl]

interesting story
ab ap poet se writer b ban gay:0037:
i think story ka end happy hi hona chahye sab se important hai love
so baqi sab bhool jao n happy end likh do :trampoline4hl:

[Muntazir Nigahain]

Well Tashi....

STOrY ka end ye hona chahiYe ke mere khayal se waise zaroori nhi k meri soch aap ke soch se match kre...

AqeedaY Pe saari baat aa kr atak gai hai main itna kahoongi k dono main se kisi ek ko qurbani deni hogi....AqeedaY se Bhar
kr kuch nhi PYar bhi nhi pyar tou zindagi mai insan ko mile ga aur milta hai......khair koi nhi hota bewafa insan ke naseeb main majbooriyan bhi hain......
aur sochne wali baat hai ye ke agar relationship ko aaj end na kiya tou problem badastoor wohi honge jo ke hain.....
go ke qurbani dena itna aasaan nhi hota par kahani ko koi khubsoorat mor de kr chhorna achha....
dil ka kiya hai behil jaye ga waqt ke sath sath sabar bhi aa hi jata hai.....

[CaReLeSs]

Gud....

[mehwish]

bohot acha likha hai apnay

akser me b apni kahani me biche me hi atak jati hu
semaj me nahi ata kay kahani ko kaise agay berhaya jaiye