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umair8005
01-18-2009, 05:07 PM
Bohat udas hy koi shaks
tere jane se
ho sake tu lout aa
kisi bahane se
tu laakh khafa sahi
magar ek baar tu dekh
koi toot sa gya hy
tere roouth jane se...

shahidalikiyani
01-18-2009, 09:46 PM
mind nehin karne ji yeh aapki nehin likhi hoe hai yehe per just ap apni likhi hoe ghazal send kar sakty hain

zaib khan
01-19-2009, 02:06 PM
meray pass aesa he sms aya tha :$
i like it anyway

thnks for sharing

umair8005
01-19-2009, 05:56 PM
mind nehin karne ji yeh aapki nehin likhi hoe hai yehe per just ap apni likhi hoe ghazal send kar sakty hain

np sir...

thx 4 rplying...

i dnt like poetry....bs just pst krta houn...

umair8005
01-19-2009, 05:56 PM
meray pass aesa he sms aya tha :$
i like it anyway

thnks for sharing

thx...

ShArArTi MuNdA
01-20-2009, 08:46 AM
nice one

dont depend on others
01-20-2009, 11:10 AM
umair its own poetry thread
so u should wright thjose one which u wright ur self

:)

umair8005
02-19-2009, 07:58 PM
nice one

thanks...

umair8005
02-19-2009, 07:58 PM
umair its own poetry thread
so u should wright thjose one which u wright ur self

:)

no...thx 4 rplying...

SHAYAN
09-08-2009, 08:07 PM
Nyx....

Hani
10-27-2009, 03:15 AM
nice...

Hamzaking
11-06-2009, 07:39 PM
nice...................

Abewsha
08-27-2011, 07:57 AM
nice 1...

life
08-16-2012, 06:14 PM
buhat khoob..

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