Rate the Previous '' Shair ''

[M A H i]

:rules:
The rules are simple...

You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate the shair from 1 to 10 out of 10.
And also write your shair.

NOTE: SHARE ONLY SHAIR
:thanks:

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''Zyada Gor Bhi Acha Nahin Hai Aisi Baaton Par
Kisi Ka Naam Likh Likh Kar Mitaana Uss Ki Aadat HaI''

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[Shaam]

atey hi itni khatarnaak piost : )

kia baat hai
nice sharing Mahi.

mujhey aap ka intikhaab acha lagta hai
is lia mei rate nahi karooga aap ko
let the others reply on it.

[M A H i]

well Thanks per sirf daad se kaam nahi chalyga post ki hai tu game khelna tu parega Shaam aur dosron ko b moqa digiye k wo apke shair ko rate karein : )

[Shaam]

acha is ko 10 doonga because thread starter hai : )

is tarha pehron tujhey sochta rahta hoo mei
meri her saans tere naam likhi ho jauisey : )

[M A H i]

8/10

'' Hum aise azziyyat pasand hain k hamein
dukhon k daur mein rahat azaab lgti haI... ''

[Shaam]

bohat bura shair hai phir bhi 8

: )

mei baras jaaon ya guzar jaaoon isi shash o panj me hoo
tu muhabbat ki hawa ki tarha koi tou sulook kar...

[Zafina]

Ajeeb Shair ta :D lol chalo 5/10..Kio k samjh nahi aya ..5 number type kerny k de rahi hu :wiIInk:

Kam Fehem hu Reshto ki pechan nahi hay
Har Lehza tumhy aik dard naya behj rahi hu

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

7

iss ke batain bhi dil awaaiz hain soraat ke tarhaan
maire soochain bhi perishaan maire baloun jaisee

[M A H i]

Thanks Zafina & RoOZ SoOChTa HouNfor joining shairy ,
welcome here : )

7/10

'' Mein jis ko ik umr sambhaley phira kiya,
mitti bata rahi, wo paikar mera na thA ''

[Shaam]

shair acha hai per negetivity ke 3 minus lolz

7



merei haatho ki lakkero me yah aib chupa hai mohsin
mei jisey chooloo wo mera nahi rehta

[M A H i]

9/10

'' Us sy milna he nahi dil mein tahiya ker lien
woh khud aaye tu bhout sard rawiya kerlieN ''

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8

keench leen khoodh hee lakeerain hum nai apney haaht par
kis ko fursaat thee kai hataoun ka muqaddaar dekhtay

[M A H i]

7/10


'' Mustabad havaloon say, motabar khayaloon say
Jis ko main nay Likha tha, woh bhi jhoot nikla haI ''

[Shaam]

9


kuch riiwayat nai daali hain muhababt ke falsafon mei
us sei muhababt sachi ki jis ne kabhi sach na kaha....

[M A H i]

0/10

'' Nai RUtoo'n Ki Hamayet Na Kar Sakaa Haasil
Ajeeb Shakhs Hai Guzrey Dino'n Ko Rota HaI ''

[Zafina]

wah wah Mahi zabardast...
9/10

Next Shair
Ghamgeen nazar any sai Koi Kia meer taqi Ban jata hay
Yun Dard ka roop nahi huta, Yeh Hijar Kay sog nahi Lagty

[M A H i]

9/10
THNX Zafina

'' Dard k, ranj k, afsos k, aalaam k phool
Hijar ki tehni pay khilnay lagay anjaam k phooL ''

[Shaam]

8

hum ne chup reh kar rakh li ahl e wafa ki laaj
hum bhi ro detey ger ishq me jhootey hotey

[ROSE]

9/10,,,,,,,,,,,

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Meny To Abhi Kuch Kha Bhi Nhi Vo Chula GIya
Me Soog Phir Kyu Manati Ho Tery bhurny ka
so nice mahi

[M A H i]

ROSE apko shair b likhna hai plz edit

[Shaam]

aur GT aap ko mahi ko khiraj e tahseen ke baad number bhi deinei hain lolz
plz edit

[M A H i]

Meny To Abhi Kuch Kha Bhi Nhi Vo Chula GIya
Me Soog Phir Kyu Manati Ho Tery bhurny ka

shair samjh nahi aya G.T anyways welcome here

'' Us nay mujhe sonpi hai yadoo ki saltanat
Loog kehtay hain wo tujhe Berbaad ker gayA ''

[Owi]

8/10

Husun Baano k sawaal ab bhi hein tashna jawaab
Ishq k sodaai nay hai lay liya ban-baas tak

[M A H i]

Thanks Owi for joining shairy Welcome here...

9/10

Ankhein bhi wohi hain dareecha bhi wohi hai...
Aur soch ke aangan mein utarta bhi wohi hai...
Jis ne mere jazbo'n ki sadaqat ko na jaana...
Ab meri rafaqat ko tarasta bhi wohi hai...

[Shaam]

7


gaye dino me muhabbat mizaaj us ka tha
magr kuch aur hi andaaz aaj us ka tha
mei kia bataoon kio us ne bewafai ki
magr yahi ke kuch aisa mizaaj us ka tha

[M A H i]

8/10

'' Mein fanaa ho gayaa afsoos woh badla b nahi
Meri chaahat se b sachi rahi nafrat us kI ''

[Shaam]

zabardsat 9/10



hum apni dhalti umr ki ek sepeher me hain
jo milna hai humse tou mil, chiragh e shaam sei pehlei

[ROSE]

10/8

Is mein mousam ka qasoor hay ya logon ka Ahsan
Log mousam ki tarha pal bhar mein badaltay kyon hain

[Zafina]

ow nice 9/10

Yeh Soch Kar Khamosh Rahe K Qismat Mein Tum Nahi
Warna Har Cheez Ka Muqabla Karte Hum Tumhare Liye.

[ROSE]

9/10


Mujhay Aarzo -e- Sehar Rahi Yon Hi Raat Bhar Bari Dair Tak
Na Bikhar Sakay Na Simat Sakay Yon Hi Raat Bhar Bari Dair Tak

[M A H i]

8/10

Mo'uft ehsaan na laina yaro'n
Dil abhi or b sastay hongay...

[Shaam]

9/10

usuf na they magr sar e bazaar agaye
khushfehmi yah thi ke khareedar agaye

[Noor ul huda]

Aw cute! 20/10 lol

[Noor ul huda]

دیکھ تو دل کے جاں سے اٹھتا ھے،
یہ دھواں سا کہاں سے اٹھتا ھے،
بیٹھنے کون دے ھے پھر اُس کو،
جو تیرے آستاں سے اٹھتا ھے،
یوں اٹھے آہ اُس گلی سے ھم،
جیسے کوئی جہاں سے اٹھتا ھے،
عشق اک میر بھاری پتھر ھے،
بوجھ کب ناتواں سے اٹھتا ھ

[Shaam]

9/10 zabardast hai bhi ...

ki mere qatal ke baad us ne jafa sei tauba
haye us zood e pashemaan ka pashemaan hona

[M A H i]

8/10


''ye our baat, adaalat hai bay-khabar, warna
Tmaam shaher mein charcha mere baya'n ka haI''

[Shaam]

9/10

tere baarei me jab socha nahi tha
me tanha tha magr itna nahi tha

[ROSE]

8/10


ham tujh se kis hawas ki falak justaju karen
dil hi nahin raha hai jo kuch arazu karen


mit jayen ek an main kasrat namayan
ham aine k samne a kar jo hu karen

[Sami]

5/10

Jab Tak Bikey Na The K0e P0chta Na Tha ..

Tumne Khareed K Anm0l Kardia .. !!

Lol .. 0r K0e Yad Nae Arae .. !!

[Noor ul huda]

8/10

تم نے کہا تھا کہ ہمیں آنکھہ بھر کہ دیکھہ لیا کرو

اب آنکھہ تو بھر آتی ہے لیکن تم نظر نہیں آتے

[DiE]

7/10

yeh ehl e shahr e wafa hain ajab ba'har parast
sarooo kay phool faseelo’n pai dhertay jatay hain

[ROSE]

9/10


Wo rootha rootha sa lgta hai
koi tarkeeb btao pass aane ki “Mohsin”
Main zindgi girvi rkh skta hoom
tum qeemat btao usey manane ki. .

[DiE]

8/10

sambhle hoey logon kai girne ki Fikar choro
Jo gir rahe hain unko Sambhala karo Wasi

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

7/10

sajaataa rehtaa houn kaaghaaz kai phool pairroun par
mai titleyoun ko perishaan karta rehta houn

[DiE]

8/10

baagh mai jaane ke aadaab howa karte hain
kisii titli ko na phuulon se uraayaa jaaye

ghar se masjid hai bahut dur chalo yun kar len
kisii rotey huey bachche ko hansaayaa jaaye

[ROSE]

9/10

wo samane hai magar tishnagi nahin jaati
ye kyaa sitam hai ke dariyaa saraab jaisa hai

[M A H i]

8/10

Thanks DiE & Sami for joining us,,, Welcome here...

Banawat guftugu mein, guftugu bhi ukhri ukhri si
Taaluq rasmi rasmi sa, ada Tark-e-Ta'aluq ki
humain woh sabr k us moor tak laney ka khuwaahismand
tang aa jaye, mangain dua Tark-e-Ta'aluq kI

[Shaam]

9/10
10 hi hotey per pefection : )


Wo jis kay shaanay pe haath rukh ker safar kia tu nay manzilon ka
Teri gali say najaanay kyun, aaj sur jhukaaye guzar gaya wo

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

zindaghee koo bhi tairay dar sai bhikaaree kee tarhaan
ek paal kai liyaa ruknaa hai, ghuzaar janaa hai

[M A H i]

7/10

'' Ham na hote, to kisii aur ke charche hote
Khalqat-e-shahar to kahne ko fasaane maagE ''

[Owi]

8/10

Meri zindagi ka ye daairaa
Teray ird gird ka hai silsilaa

Teray naam say meri ibtaydaa
Teri zaat hi meri intayhaa ..... !

[M A H i]

7/10

'' Hadd-e-Nigah se bahut aage nikal kar sochna
ek qatre kii talab ho to samaNdar sochna
kya guzarti hai bhari duniya meN tanha shaKhs par
ek lamhe ko khud se bichhaRh kar sochnA ''

[Owi]

8/10

Tu mehwar hai main tera daairaa hoon
Teray aaghaaz ki main intayhaa hoon

Iraadon ko bikhernay hi na doon ga
Teri himmat hoon tera hosla hoon

Sun a khushboo gulaab-e-jaan-faza sun
Safer jis mein karay tu wo hawa hoon.

[DiE]

8/10

Ankhon mai nami ka raaz rakhti hon
mai tanhaiyon se dosti ka jawaz rakhti hon

wo agar chaley mere sath do qadam
phir dekho mai kesi perwaz rakhti hon

khuwahishon pai daal rakhi hai kamand sabr ki
dabaa kai dil mai jazboon ki awaaz rakhti hon

[Sami]

10/10 .. !!

W0 Chahti Thi K Ham Hamesha R0shan Rahen .. !!
Uski Khushi Ki Khatir Hamne Khud K0 Jala Lia .. !!

[DiE]

7/10


Afsano ki dunya mai sb jhot nhi hota
dil or bhi uljhega na parhye kitabon ko

[M A H i]

10/10



'' Is shahar-e-Kharbi main Ghum-e-ishq ke mare
Zinda hain yahi bat bari bat hai pyarE ''

[Owi]

8/10

Roshni teergi ka haasil hai
Teergi, roshni mein madfun hai

Mout aaye gi faatiha perhnay
Zindagi, zindagi mein madfun hai ..... !

[DiE]

8/10

ye teergi musalsal mai ek waqfa noor
ye zindagi ka tilsam ajeeb kya kehna

jo tum ho barq nasheman to mai nasheman barq
ulajh parey hain hamarey naseeb kya kehna

[DreamGirl]

8/10
Ab mulaaqaat mein wo garmi-e-jazbaat kahan
ab to rakhny wo mohabbat ka bharam aaty hein:sad1:

[Owi]

7/10

Teray khayaal k saaye mein kitni taaqat hai
K taiz dhoop mein bhi sust-ravi ki aadat hai

[ROSE]

8/10


us k zakhm chupa kar rakhiye khud us shakhs ki nazron se
us se kaisa shikawa kije wo to abhi nadan hua

[Owi]

7/10

Mujhay jaa-ba-jaa teri justujoo, tujhay dhoondta hoon main koo-ba-koo
Kahaan khul saka teray roo-ba-roo mera is qader tujhay dhoondna

[ROSE]

9/10

Phir baandh lee kisi say umed e wafa Qateel

Phir ek mehal hawaon mein tameer ho gaya

[M A H i]

10/10


Dil tere gham ki baar'gah main hai
Jaisay qaidi huzoor-e-shah main hai
Hum kisi teesray ki manzil hain
Dil kisi doosray ki rah main haI

[ROSE]

9/10

kisi kali ne bhi dekha na ankh bhar k mujhe
guzar gai jars-e-gul udas kar k mujhe

[M A H i]

7/10
Koi lamha b kabhi laut kar nahee aya
Woh shaks aisa gaya phir nazar nahee ayA''

[Owi]

7/10

Waqt apna jo kisi dhab say sanwarta bhi nahi
Ghum ka lamha to akaylay mein guzerta bhi nahi

Kitni muddat say mera dil hai faqat waqf-e-junoon
Yaad-e-yaaraan ka nasha hai jo uterta bhi nahi.

[M A H i]

10/10

Soye to shab k qaflay aankhon main chal paray
Jaagay to jaisay khwaab ka mousam thehr gaya
Usne kaha k aankh main gehra ghubaar kion
main nay kaha azaab ka mousam thehr gayA

[Shaam]

9

tu mere pass na tha phir bhi sahar honey tak
tera har sans meri rooh ko choo kar guzra
qatra qatra tere deedar ki shabnam lapki
lamha lamha tere teri khusboo sei moattar guzra

[Charlie]

humain to achi shairy sunnay ko mili :Brilliant:

[Mf Great Power]

Nice Sharing.......

[DiE]

7/10

tum se mumkin ho to phir rok do saansen meri
dil jo dharkay ga to phir yaad to tum aao gai

[Sami]

Nyc .. !!

Fanx Fa Sharing .. !!

[ROSE]

8/10

dil main ab yun tere bhule huye gam ate hain
jaise bichre huye kabe main sanam ate hain

ik ik kar k huye jate hain tare raushan
meri manzil k taraf tere qadam ate hain

[M A H i]

7/10

...Tuney daekha hai kabhi sehra main jhulasta hua darakht..
Is tarhan jeety hain wafaon ko nibhany waleY

[Owi]

9/10

Teri yaadon ka saath daynay ko
Ashq palkon k paas rehtay hein

Tujh ko afsurdah dekh ker jaana
Meray jazbay udaas rehtay hein.

[M A H i]

8/10

...Teri justajo mien khak ho chalay hain
Chale aoo k sub khuwaab raa'kh ho chale haiN

[DiE]

8/10

Tareekh Hazaroon saal se bus itni si badli hai
wo dour tha Pathar ka ab Loog hain Pathar kai

[Sami]

8/10 .. !!

[M A H i]

8/10 .. !!

Acha hota aap rules perh ker rate kerte,Anyway!

:bu:
10/10 DiE


'' Ek Zamana Hai Muj se Khaif Sa
Baat Ko'i To Infiradi haI ''

[Owi]

8/10

Main Maanta Hoon Main Munfarid Nahi Mager
Koi to Baat Hai .... Jo Log Maantay Hein

[CaReLeSs]

8
Kon Ujra hoga duniya main humari tarha
''wasi''
Tu b na milaa humko or hum khudko ganwa baithay.:go_out2:

[DiE]

8/10

tum jis raastey se chaho aa jana
mairey charoo taraf mohbbat hai :)

[ROSE]

8/10

rat yon chand ko dekha hai nadi mein raksan
jaise jhumar tere mathe pe hila karta hai


kaun kafir tujhe ilzam-e-tagaful dega
jo bhi karta hai muhabbat ka gila karta hai

[iqra]

8/10

Ager wo poch lain hum sy tumy kis baat ka ghum hai
To phir kis baat ka ghum ho ager wo poch lain hum sy!

[pensive]

shair purana hai s lye 6

[pensive]

Zindgi Tujhse Humain Koi Taman’na Kab Thi..!
Hum To Is Aass Pay Jeetay Hain Ke Marna Kab Hai..!

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

7/10

wo aur houn gai jinhein dushmanoun se shikwaa hai
humain tu doost humaray fareeeb daitay hain

[M A H i]

8/10


Koi Bhi Naqsh Bana’oun Us Ki Shakal Baney
Woh Meri Fiker ko kaisa Khyaal daita hai

[DiE]

7/10

bala sai ye rah e shouq meri na ho saki par tumhari khatir
misal e naqsh e qadam bicha hon mujhe dua'on mai yaad rakhye

[M A H i]

8/10

Doosto'n se' aaj mulaa'qaat ki shaam hai...
Yeh saza' kaat k' phiir aapne ghaar ko jaa'enge

[DiE]

9/10

hum un sai miley to kuch keh na sakay Faraz
khushi itni thi k mulaqat ans'u ponchte hi guzar gai

[M A H i]

6/10

Ay jaan-e-Faraaz! itnee bhi taufeeq kisey thi
Ham ko Gham-e-hastee bhi gawaara hai ke tum ho

[DiE]

8/10

mujh ko rasmon ka takalluf bhi gawara laikin
jee mai aey to ye diwar gira bhi daina

sorat e naqsh e qadam dasht mai rehna
apne hone sai na hone ka pata bhi daina

[M A H i]

wah!
10/10


Kahan tak Qissa-e-aalaam-e-Furqat, mukhtasar yeh hai
Yahan woh aa nahi saktay, Wahan main jaa nahi sakti

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

faislaaa mooj - e - hawaa nai likhaa
aandhiyaan maire, baharain us kee

[M A H i]

nyc!
8/10

Hai shaakh shaakh mein shaamil agarchey Khoon mera
Tamaam Khaar hain mairey, gulaab uskey hain

[DiE]

9/10

Zakhm-e-dil ko gulaab kia likhoon
chahatoon kay azaab kia likhoon

tashnagi to na bujh saki
kitney aaye saraab kia likhoon

[Owi]

9/10

Ye kis nay hum say lahoo ka khiraaj phir maanga
Abhi to soye thay maqtal ko surkh-roo ker k

[M A H i]

7/10

Jabeen py sadagi nichi nigahyn baat mein narmi
Mukhatib kon kr sakta hy tujhy lafz qatil sy?

[Owi]

10/10

Ik baazi anaa say jaari thi
Jo her khuwaahish pay bhaari thi

Wo baazi tum per waar gaya
Lo aaj anaa say haar gaya.

[M A H i]

8/10

Ehd-o-peemaan-e-wafa pyaar k nazuk bandhaaan
toorh daitee hai zar-o-seem ki jhankaaar yahan

[Owi]

8/10

Wo gerd-e-safer teri talab mein jo mili thi
Ab rooh pay aa bethi hai poshaak say uth ker

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

7/10

jaab hee tuk aap ka khadim houn teh dil sai
kai apnay sath koee shaart bandaagee na lagheee

[PaGli]

4/10

Heeraan Hoon Mudat e Qaleel Mein Woh Shaks
Meri Soch Se Zada Badal Gaya...

[DiE]

7/10

Bicherny ki aziat ko ager tum janna chaho
to kuch pal ko zara sans apni rok leyna
tumhain mehsoos ye hoga
kai
Bichrna “MOAT” jesa hai

[ROSE]

8/10

tujhe chand ban k mila tha jo tere sahilon pe khila tha jo
vo tha ek dariya visal ka so utar gaya use bhul ja

[DiE]

7/10

Mere dushman bhi yeh keh kar mujhe chor gaye saqi
terey apney hi bohut hain tujhey rulanay kai liye

[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

8/10

Bazm-e-Wafa Mein Humari Ghareebi Na Pooch Ghalib
Ek Dard-e-Dil Hy
Wo Bhi KisiKa Dia Hua . . . ! ! !

[DiE]

9/10

hoi muddat kai Ghalib mar gaya, par yaad aata hai
wo har ek baat pe kehna kai yun hota tu kia hota

[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

8/10

Tammana Tere Wajood Se Hoti Tou Dunya Se Cheen Lete . . .
Ishq Teri Rooh Se Hy, Iss Liye
KHUDA Se Maangty Hyn ...

[DiE]

7/10

Ishq hai apney usooloon pai azal se qayam
imtehan jis ka bhi laita hai re'ayat nahi karta

[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

9/10

Diye hen zakham to marham ka takal’luf na karo,
Kuch to rehne do meri zaat pey ahsaan apna..

[ROSE]

9/10

wo hawaon ki tarah khanabajan phirta hai
ek jhonka hai jo ayega guzar jayega

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

gaardish waqt bhi aagaae mujhay lai ja na sakee
tum jahaan choor ghae thay mai wahin houn ab tuk

[DiE]

7/10

phir kch yun hwa kai rasty yakja nhi rahe
wo bhi ana parast tha mai bhi ana parast

[iqra]

9/10

Mai nay aagosh e Muhabbat sy ye sekha hai sabaq
Jis ko zinda nahi rehna, Wo Muhabbat kr lay

[DiE]

bht khoob iqra

9/10

Yun ghairon se kia pochtey ho kai mohbbt kia hai
mai jaha aa pohnchi hon tum waha tak aa k dekh lo

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

7/10

shair loghoun kai bahat yaad hain auroun kai liyaa
tu millay tu mai tujhay shair sunaoun apney

[DiE]

6/10

Abhi Tak Saada Rakha Hai Yeh Kaaghaz Apni Chaahat ka
Munaasib Jab bhi Samjhein Gey koi Paighaam likh dein gey

Koi Paighaam kya Likhna hai Ik chotey se Kaaghaz par
Jisey Ham Chahtey hain Bus Ussi ka Naam Likh dein gey

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

sochta houn kai bhujaa doun mai yeh kamray ka diya
apney saaee ko bhi kiyun sath jaghaoun apney

[ROSE]

8/10

ye rakh-rakhao muhabbat sikha gai us ko
wo ruth kar bhi mujhe muskura k milta hai

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

shayaad huzoor sai koee nisbaat humaiy bhi hoo
ankhoun mai jhaank kar humain pehchaan jaeyaa

[ROSE]

9/10

Dil pe karte hain dimagon pe asar karte hain
ham ajab log hain zehnon main safar karte hain

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

9/10

sehraa kee tarhaan rehtay howay thaak ghaein ankhain
dhuk kehtaa hai ab mai koee deriyaa bhi tu dekhoun

[ROSE]

9/10

rukhsat k din bhigi ankhon us ka wo kahna ha "Qateel"
tum ko laut hi jana tha to is nagri kyun aye the

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

Nigah - e - qahar sai dekha yeheee ghaneemat hai
mujhay to aap sai umeed is qadar bheee naa thee

[M A H i]

8/10

Ebadatoon main bhee tha apni munafiat ka khayaal
Hamaray husn-e-ammal say qabahtain na gaeen ....

[)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*(]

Phool To uhi Chunty H Gazil
Bat To Tub Hy jab koi kisi ki krha ke Kanty chuny
nic e sharing.........

[M A H i]

G.T
:plz:

[M A H i]

G.T welcome here
per apne rules follow nahi kiye : S

Let me rate on your shair
5/10
Sabaa se kaun ye sargoashiyaaN si karta tha?
Wo aap thay ke faraib-e-bahaar ki Khushboo?

[Owi]

9/10

Main Tumhaaray Hi Damm Say Zinda hoon
Merr Hi Jaaoon jo Tum Say Fursat Ho.

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

laboun mai phoot bahaa geet siskiyaaan bun kar
kai lafz lafz mai is kai malaaal aisa tha

[M A H i]

NO RATING....
(samjh nahi aya )

Woh baat kar jise phailaa ke main ghazal keh loon
Sunaa woh shair jo main ne abhii kahaa hi nahi

[Owi]

8/10

Tumhaari Yaad Say Jab Hum Guzernay Lagtay Hein
Jo Koi Kaam Na Ho Bas Wo Kernay Lagtay Hein.

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ... 9/10

larkharatee hain zabanain ser mehfil kya kya
tumhain dekhooo jo, mairee chup ka asaar pharta hai

[M A H i]

7/10

Mustabad havaloon say, motabar khayaloon say
Jis ko main nay Likha tha, woh bhi jhoot nikla hay

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

tujhay fikar hai kai badal diya mujhay gardish - e - shab - 0 - RoOZ nai
khabhi khud sai bhi tu sawaal kar tu woh hee hai ya koee aur hai

[M A H i]

9/10

''Aap ke naam se taabinda hai Unwaan-e-Hayaat
Warna kuch baat nahi thi, meray afsaaney meiN ''

[Shaam]

hmmm 10

zabt ka ahed bhi hai, shauq ka paimaan bhi hai
ahd o paimaan se guzar janey ko jee chahta hai
dard itna hai ke her rag me hai mehshar bapa
sukoon aisa hai ke marjaney ko jee chahta hai

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

wesay tu her shaakhs kai dil mai ek kahani ho tee hai
hijaar ka lavaa, ghum ka saleeqa, dard ka lehjaa ho tu kahoo

[Mf Great Power]

nice sharing..........

[)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*(]

G.T welcome here
per apne rules follow nahi kiye : S

Let me rate on your shair
5/10
Sabaa se kaun ye sargoashiyaaN si karta tha?
Wo aap thay ke faraib-e-bahaar ki Khushboo?

ok meny perha hi nhi shi thura sy but thanks mery nuny mony shair ko 5 no. deny ke

[M A H i]

Phool To uhi Chunty H Gazil
Bat To Tub Hy jab koi kisi ki krha ke Kanty chuny
nic e sharing.........


G.T
apka shair mukamal samjh nahi asaka tha..
n e waz
i''ll be glad if u keep coming here...

[M A H i]

8/10

wesay tu her shaakhs kai dil mai ek kahani ho tee hai
hijaar ka lavaa, ghum ka saleeqa, dard ka lehjaa ho tu kahoo

8/10

Har ek lahajaa yahi aarazu yahi hasarat
Jo aag dil mein hai wo shair mein bhi dhal jaaye

[)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*(]

no mahi i dont mind..........

[DeV!L]

8/10

Har ek lahajaa yahi aarazu yahi hasarat
Jo aag dil mein hai wo shair mein bhi dhal jaaye

Wow Great Hum Kya Points De .. :0013: Phear be 10 -0- 10 je :thumb: ur always supreb

Abb Mujay be lekhna pare ga?

Let me try


Mohabat ki Qasam wo Aisa nahi tha, Wo apna tha magar lagta nahi tha
Najane Q na Aya mujse Milne, Zamane se To wo darta nahi tha
hasane ki bari adat thi usko, Magr mujko dekh ker hasta nahi tha
Aj bhi mere dil mai shamil uski Ulfat, Wo mere jaisa tha faqat mera nahi tha...

[M A H i]

10/10

Thanks Juhnny for joining shairy
welcome here..

Sakoon ka aik lamha bhi muyassar nhi mujh ko.
Muhabbat ko sulata hun tu nafrat jaag uthti hai. ...

[Shaam]

9/10

muhabbat sei zamanaey ne kia kuch na paya
kisi ko wafa mili kisi ke haath kuch na aaya
wo bhi hain jin ko ab chain ki hai talash
mujhey aziz hai wasl ki tamanna o hijr ka sarmaya

[M A H i]

8/10

'' Uljhain Gay Kayi Baar Abhi Lafz Se Mafhoom
Saada Hai Buhat Wo Na Mein Asaan Buhat Hoon ''

[Shaam]

9


Ab milain ge to khubb rulayain ge us sangdil ko faraz,

suna hy rote mai usko lipat jane ki aadat hy.....



:P

[M A H i]

0/10
=D

''Hijar ki Raat dhal gai Mohsin.
Ab to dil se kaho sambhal jaye''

[PRINCE SHAAN]

Dard Ko Bhi Ab Dard Honay Laga Hai
Dard Ab Kuhd Mere Zakhm Dhone Laga Hai
Gham-E-Dard Main Kabhi Nahi Roya
Dard Kuhd Mujhe Choo Kar Rone Laga Hai..

[iqra]

9/10
Dil ko har waqt taslli ka gumaa'n hota hai
Dard hota hai magar jany kahan hota hai
Aap kiu pochty ho Dard e Jigar ki lazzat
Ek jagah ho to btaon kay yahan hota hai

[M A H i]

8/10
very well reply Iqra

Zindagi Dard B Hai Dawaa B
KHAMOSHI Sabar B Hai Ataa B

[Sami]

8/10 !!

Jis ke Intizar Me Mene Apni Zindagi Gawan Di
`SaMi`
Usko Intizaar Karwane Ki Adat Boht Thi .. !!

[Pareevash]

7...

Aah kO cHahiyE eK uMr aSr hoNe tK
kOn jEetA hAi teRi zuLf k sAr hOnE tK

[M A H i]

8/10
Welcome here Sami & Pareevash

Zindagi yoon huyi basar Tanha
Qaafila saath aur safar Tanha

[Haadi]

6/10

tum meray pass hotay ho goya
jab koi doosra nahin hota

[M A H i]

9/10
:goodone:

AB Koi FAASLA nahin MERE TUMHARE Darmiya’an
SUB’H-E-FIRAAQ bhi ho TUM, SHAM-E-VISAAL bhi ho TUM…

[Haadi]

8/10
wo chand chup gaya mujay raat sonp kar..,
aankon ko intazar k lamhat sonp kar..,

aik shakhs jo mujh se bicher to gaya lakain
aankon ko meri mosam-e-barast sonp kar..,

[M A H i]

hmmm
8/10

Aey Dil Ye Izetraab Ka Aalam Hai Kis Liye ?
Mosum Yahan Wisaal Sa Aaya Huwa To Hai

[Haadi]

7/10

Us ne jate hoe palt k kaha mjhe yaad to rkho ge na
Mene kaha suno mere mehrm kbhi dil bhi dharkna bhola ha

[M A H i]

7/10

Nahi hai taaqat-e-guftaar aur agar ho bhi
Tou kis umeed pe kahiye ke Aarzu kyaa hai ?

[Haadi]

9/10
main kiran thi jo bikhar gai teri be rukhi k diyar say...
wo kali thi jo khil uthi teray makhmaleen deedar say...

[iqra]

8/10
Mujh ko maloom na thi Hijr ki ye ramz kay Tu
Jab Mery pass na hoga,to har soo hoga...!!

[M A H i]

10/10

Mujay Iesa Lutf Aata Kia

Jo Hijar Hai Na Wasal Hai,

Mery Mosmon K Mizaaj 'Dan

Tujhe Kitna Mera Khayaal Hai

[Shaam]

8/10

mujh ko apna bana ke chor dia
kia aseeri hai kia rihaai hai

[DreamGirl]

nice'8/10
muhabbat kho gai hay jo miley to usse kehna
judaai khubsurat hay magar tum si nahi lagti..!

[Miss Habib]

nice 7/10

Usse kehna palkon pe na tankay khuwab ki jhallar
Sumandar k kinare ghar bana kar kuch nahi milta

[- Professor -]

8/10
Ye Afsaan-e-Muhabbat, Ye Khaaniyaan Wafa Ki
Koi Or Zikr Cherho, Mera Dil Lahuu Lahuu Hay

[DiE]

9/10

Ye to ek zid hai k mohsin main shikayat na karun
Warna shikwey to hain itne mere yaar k bas

[iqra]

9/10
Ager Wo poch lain Hum say Tumay kis baat ka ghum hai
Tou phir kis baat ka ghum hai ager Wo poch lain Hum say!

[DiE]

superb 9/10

gham e firaaq sey pehlay shab e visaal key baad
hai aur kya jisay dekhien teray jamaal key baad

[Miss Habib]

8/10

ek harf tasali ka, ek lafz mohabbat ka
khud apnay liye us ne likha to bohat roya
pehle bhi shikastoon pe khai thi shikast us ne
laikin wo tere hathoon haara to bohat roya

[iqra]

8/10
Naa samjho isay shor e Baharaan
Khizaan patto'n mai chup kay Ro rahi hai
Hamary ghar ki dewaroo'n pay Nasir
Udaasi baal bikhairay soo rahi hai

[ROSE]

8/10

jis ko bhi chaha use shidat se chaha hai 'Faraz'
sil-sila tuta nahin dard ki zanjir ka

[M A H i]

8/10

'' Main nay aagosh e Muhabbat sy ye sekha hai sabaq
Jis ko zinda nahi rehna, Wo Muhabbat kr laY ''

[DiE]

9/10

har zakham ki aaghosh mai hai dard tumhara
har dard mai taskeen ka ehsaas bhi tum ho

[ROSE]

9/10


janta hun ek aise shakhs ko main bhi 'Munir'
gam se pathar ho gaya lekin kabhi roya nahin

[Shaam]

9/10 rose kash aisey hum bhi hotey

: )



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uski chahat ne mujhe rulaya bahut
uski yadoon ne mujhe sataya bahut
mein us ko jaan sei ziada pyar karta hoo
is majburri ko usne azmaya bahut

[ROSE]

8/9



na paya jo gaya is bag se hargiz surag uska
na palti phir saba idhar, na phir ai nazar shabnam

[M A H i]

7/10

'' Dil pe karte hain dimagon pe asar karte hain
ham ajab log hain zehnon main safar karte haiN ''

[Sehra]

nice poetry

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

yeh sun kar acha laghaa kai ussay bhee hamaray dukh ka ehsaas hai
jaab us nay kahaa ghum sai nidhaal rehtay ho u Maar Q nahee jatay

[M A H i]

nice one
10/10

Umeed-e-pursish-e-ghum kis se kijiye ''Mahi''
Jo apney dil pe guzarti he koi kia janY?

[DiE]

9/10

kabhi maazi ka pachtawa kabhi anjan mustaqbil
jo yun jeevan bitata ho usey kab neend ati hai

[M A H i]

True
10/10

'' Umar-e-daraaz maang ke laaye the chaar din
Do aarazu mein kat gaye do intizaar meiN ''

[Owi]

10/10

Yaa-Rab khata maaf, koi zindagi hai ye
Rakha hai jis mein mout ka khatka laga hua

[M A H i]

10/10

'' Basarat kuch nahi krti basirat kam aati hy
Nazar aata nahi lekin Khuda mehsoos hota haI ''

[Owi]

10/10

ab to aata hai yehi jee mein k a jaan-e-wafa
kuch bhi ho jaaye mager teri tamanna hi karein

[M A H i]

6/10

'' Us ko panay ki justujo ker li
RUB ne likha nahin humara jissaY ''

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

9/10

omar kaati hai ghaani chahoun mai zulfoun kee bahat
Aaoo ab ranj ke dehleezz pai sijdaay kuch saal

[M A H i]

8/10

'' Guzar to jaie gi tere baghair b lakin
boht odaas bohut baiqarar guzre gI ''

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

jaab fursaat teray ghum sai miltee hai humain
kuch apney baray mai bhi sooch laitay hain

[M A H i]

8/10

Hona to wohi hy jo muqader mein likha hai
Lekin ye mery khuwaab, mery khuwaab, mery khuwaab

[DiE]

7/10

khuwab bhi shayad kaanch se kamzoor hotey hain
har rooz toot jatey hain faqat ankh k khulne se

[M A H i]

7/10

Neand se Aankh khuli hai abi deakha kiya hai?
Deakh lenaa kuch dair mein k Dunya kiya hai !

[ROSE]

8/10


wo mujh se barh k zabt ka adi tha ji gaya
warna har ek sans qayamat use bhi thi

[DiE]

8/10

ye bekhudi, ye aawargi, ye neend ka bojh
apne shehar me hote to ghar chale jate

[M A H i]

9/10

Ab bhi tuu paas nahi hai lekin
Is qadar duur kahaaN thaa pahelaY ?

[ROSE]

Na janay kon duwon mein yad karta ha
Mein doobta hon Samandar uchal deta ha

[Shaam]

8

yah bhi sach hai usey zinda dilo sei pyar hai
warna kheilne ko bazar me khiloney bohat hain

: )

[M A H i]

ROSE aur RATING????

8/10

'' Zindagi khail hy udaasi ka
Hum yahan, tum wahan, udaas udaaS ''

[ROSE]

8/10


be panah chahat k baad bhi hum use pa na sake"faraz"

kisi kush naseeb ne usey apni berukhi sejet liya.....

[Shaam]

7


tum samjho jao ge ek din ramz e hayat
tum apnei gird ke ainey girao tou sahi

[M A H i]

8/10

Wo teri bhi to pehli mohabbat na thee Qateel
phir kya hua agar koii harjaee ban gaya ?

[DiE]

9/10

Subha hone hi ko hai ay dil-e-betaab tehar
Abhi zanjeer jhanakti hai pas-e-parda saaz

[ROSE]

7/10

Yon lagtaa hai sotey jaagtey ooron ka mohtaaj hon main
Aankhein meri apni hain par Unn mein neend paraai hai

[Shaam]

8

yah dawa hai teri zindagi ki akhri umeed
us mareez sei dawa ki ahamyat poocho
tum se pahlei bhi kuch pasbaan e dil
tum kudh kia ho bus yah mut poocho

[DiE]

9/10

Kabhi kabhi yaad main ubharte hain naqsh-e-maazi mite mite se
Wo aazmaish dil o nazar ki, wo qurbaten si, wo fasle se

[ROSE]

9/10


Yaadon ka aek shor tha raston mein har taraf
hum aek pal bhi dasht mein tanha nahi huwey

[DiE]

7/10

Zulm k hathon aziyat main hai jis tarah hayaat
Aisa lagta hai k ab hasher hai kuch dair ki baat

[ROSE]

8/10


wo jo rastay thay wafa ke thay' yeh jo manzilain hain saza ki hain
mera hamsafer koi or tha' mera hamnasheen koi or hay

[DiE]

6/10

Doston se 'WASI' agar tumhain muhabbat hai
Doston ko mat dena mashwara muhabbat ka

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

7/10

mai aur ilteejaaeee karaam aap sai karoun
yeh bheeek issaay dee jeeaa jis ka khuda na hoO

[DreamGirl]

7/10
kon kehtaa hai mohabbat kii zubaaN hoti hai
ye haqiiqat to nigaahon se bayaaN hotii hai

[M A H i]

7/10

Dikhaa'on daagh-e-mohabbat jo nagawaar na ho
Sunaa'on qissa-e-furqat agar buraa na lageY ?

[Owi]

8/10

Taizi na thi kalaam mein pehlay to is qadar
Ab jo sukhan hai aap ka talwaar jaisa hai.

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

zindaghee bhaar sath dainay kee qassam khaoo naa
mai nai sayaoun ko bhi dekha hai judaa hotay howay

[M A H i]

10/10
(wah wah)

'' Woh din bhi the ke tum hii hamarii zuban par
Mauzoo'u-e-dastaan the abhii kal kii baat haI ''

[Shaam]

9

ye Lehja ,, ye Adawat ,, ye Tarz-e-Mohabbat Tumhara...

....samaj paon to Bekhar jaon , na samjon to Ulaj jaon..

[M A H i]

10/10

Azam-e-parwaz ki toheen say mayoos na ho
Ek baar aur sahi,aur sahi,aur sahi ......

[Shaam]

9

har roz main yahi sawal khud say pochta hon..
sab ka sath nibhane waly khud kyu tanha reh jaty hain..

[M A H i]

8/10
(gud one Shaam)

Buhat socha buhat samjha buhat hi dair tak parkha
K tanha ghutt ka jee laena Muhabbat se buhat behtar

[Owi]

7/10

Gull shaakh say bichray to kaheen ka nahi rehta
Tum khud ko juda meri zaat say kuch soch k kerna

[DiE]

7/10

ragon mai daurte phirne ke ham nahi qaayal
jab aankh hi se na Tapka to phir lahu kya hai

[M A H i]

10/10

Yeh Kis Ne Hum Se Lahoo Ka Khiraaj Phir Manga Hai
Abhi Tu Soai Thay Maqtil Ko Surkhroo Kar Kay

[DiE]

10

mai nai chaha tha kai andho e wafa se chuton
wo sitamgar maire marne pe bhi raazi na howa

[M A H i]

7/10

Mana k Sitam Dhaaya hoga
Mager Bais-e-Sitam kuch tou raha hoga

[DiE]

8

mohabbat mai nahi hai farq jeene aur marne ka
usi ko dekh kar jeete hain jis kaafir pe dam nikle

[Owi]

7/10

Jism ki ik ik gali ko chaan betha chaara-garr
Derd teri hasraton ki aar mein dubka raha

[M A H i]

7/10

Talab ko Ajar Na Doon, Fikr-e-Rehguzr Na Kron,
Safar Mein Ab k Hwa Ko B Hmsafar Na Kron!

[Owi]

7/10

Tu mujhay dhoond main tujhay dhoondoon
Koi hum mein say reh gaya hai kaheen

[DiE]

8

mai ne itnaa use chaaha hai ki woh jaan e muraad
khud ko zanjir e mohabbat se riha chaahti hai

[iqra]

8/10
Dil main hota to kisi taur nikal bhi jata
Ab to Wo Shakhs bohat dooor Talak hai Muj mai

[Shaam]

8
nice iqra

tashakhuss baja hai mujhey ishq hua hai
nuskhey me likho unsei mulaqat musalsal

[DiE]

9

Hai bas ki her ek un ke ishare mai nishan or
Kerte hain muhabbat to guzarta hai giran or :)

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

Ik ajab Rishta hai meray or un kai Dermiyan
wo hamaray sab kuch hain hum un k kuch bhee nahee

[DreamGirl]

9

yun to rasm-e-wafa yaad nahi
phir bhi ahl-e-wafa kehlaatey ho

[DiE]

7/10

hoti nahi wafa, to jafa hi kiya karo
tum bhi to koi rasm-e-mohaabat ada karo

[M A H i]

7/10

Yeh khizaan ki zard c Shaam mein jo udaas cheez paas hai
Yeh tumhare ghar ki bahaar hai use aansoun se hara kro

[DiE]

8/10

Mai shab ka bhi mujrim hon, sehar ka bhi hon mujrim
yaroo mujhe is shahar kai aadaab sikha do

[M A H i]

7/10

Dogle pan ka hunar seekh liya ho jis ne
Ab usay shahar mein ane ki ijazat di jaye
loll

[DiE]

7/10

koi sawal karey to kia kahon us say
bicharne waley sabab to bata judai ka

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

jatay howay mai nai us kee aankhoun mai bepaanaah muhabbat dekhe
wo mujhe khabi na rulaataa Mohsin aghaar majboor na hotaa

[M A H i]

10/10

Chahat Mein Kiya Duniya Dari ? Ishq Mein Kaisi Majbori ?
Logo Ka Kiya Samjha'ne Do, In Ki Apni Majbori ....

[Owi]

10/10

Ghum-e-hayat ko kuch khush-gawaar ker loon ga
Teri jafa say bhi thora sa piyaar ker loon ga