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[mosinriaz]

2

Mere Haathon Ki Lakeeron Maen Yeh Aib Chupa Hai Mohsin,
Maen Jis Shakhs Ko Choo Loon, Woh Mera Nahin Rehta


:0039:

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

SiixX


Ab Maayos Q Ho Us Ki Bewafai Pe Faraz?
Tm Khud Hi To Kehty Thy K Wo Sab Se Juda Hai

[mosinriaz]

5

Na Jaanay Woh Mujh Say Khafa Sa Kion Rehta Hai,
Mera Ho K Bhi, Mujh Say Juda Sa Kion Rehta Hai.

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

Siixx


Usne Mujh Chor Dia To Kia Hua Faraz
Maine Bhi To Chora Tha Sara Jahan Us K Liye

[mosinriaz]

7


Woh Jiss K Intezaar Maen Dil Beqaraar Rehta Hai,
Aaj Kal Woh Shakhs Mujh Say Kuch Bezaar Rehta Hai

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

Fourr ...

Ab Nend Se Kaho Hum Se Sulah Kar Le Faraz,
Wo Dour Chala Gaya Hai Jis K Lie Hum Jaga Karty Thy

[Miss Habib]

6 ......

Dard ke alfaaz badal gaye hai maayne nahi badle
Pehle dard mein tum the ab tum hi dard ban gaye

[mosinriaz]

9

Laazmi Nahi Her Baat Ka Lafzon Maen Izhaar Karna,
Kuch Isharay Bhi Bayaan Kar Jatay Haen Raaz-e-Dil Aksar

[AFghani_Laila]

8
MuhaBBat Kar Khuda Se Insaan Se NAhi ..
Insaan Bewafa Hai Khuda TU BEwafa Nahi .!!

[mosinriaz]

10


Khuda Say Muhabbat Nahi, Us Say To Ishq Hota Hai
Woh Jis Ko Mill Jaye, Bay Had Woh Khush Naseeb Hota Hai

[M A H i]

10


Khuda Say Muhabbat Nahi, Us Say To Ishq Hota Hai
Woh Jis Ko Mill Jaye, Bay Had Woh Khush Naseeb Hota Hai


Thanks Mosinriaz for joining shairy, welcome here
8/10

'' Bandagi hum ne chor di hai FARAZ,
Kia karien loog jab Khuda ho jayain ''

[Miss Habib]

8..............

Log kehte hai ke zindagi imtihaan leti hai
Dosto
Par yaha toh imtihaano ne hi zindagi le li

[Shaam]

7

Kisi lamhy main humain likh kar kahin mehfuz kar lo tum...
Tumhari yaad se daikho nikalte ja rahy hai hum....

[DiE]

9

Na mila dil ka qadar daan is zamaney mai
ye sheesha toot gaya dekhne or dikhane mai

jee mai aata hai ek rooz shama se pochon
maza kis mai hai, jalne mai ya jalaney mai ?

[M A H i]

WB Shaam

8/10
nyc one DiE

'' Zindagi ki raunaq ko yuun sajaanaa parhtaa hai
Dard sahanaa parhtaa hai Gham chupanaa parhataa hai ''

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

7
Shaur Kun Daalti HO Mahi BB .. :P No B Mil Jaen Gay .. ;)
Mausam-e-Ishq Jo Aaya , To Qayamt Laaya
Phir Wo Mausam To Gaya , Par Wo Qayamat Na Gai .. !

[mosinriaz]

7

Kion Jurta Is Jahan Say Tu, Ik DIn Yeh Guzar He Jaye Ga
Kitna Bhi Samait Lay Yahan, Muthi Say Phissal He Jaye Ga

[Miss Habib]

7 ......

Yoon saleeqay se yaad ate ho Qateel,
Jaise
Barish ho waqfay waqfay se

[M A H i]

7
Shaur Kun Daalti HO Mahi BB .. :P No B Mil Jaen Gay .. ;)
Mausam-e-Ishq Jo Aaya , To Qayamt Laaya
Phir Wo Mausam To Gaya , Par Wo Qayamat Na Gai .. !

:gimmefive:
Many Thanks.


7 ......

Yoon saleeqay se yaad ate ho Qateel,
Jaise
Barish ho waqfay waqfay se


8/10

'' Humse poochein mizaaj barish ka,
Hum jo kacchey makaan wale haiN ''

[Miss Habib]

7........

Na sawal-e-wasal
Na arz-e-ghum
Na hikaytein
Na shikaytein
Tere ehad mein dil-e-zaar k sabhi ikhtiyar chale gai

[iqra]

8...
kab mehakti hai bhala,Raat ki Raani din mai...
shehar soya,to Teri Yaad ki khushboo jagi...

[M A H i]

9/10

'' Ye saare dilruba manzar, tilismi chaandni raatein
Sunehri dhoop ke mausam hun ya halke sukh ki barsaatein
Sabhi aik zid mein rehte hain, mujhe paigham ye kehte hain
Mohabbat yuun nahi achi, mohabbat yun nahi achi ''

[SAjan]

Tu vo zalim hai jo dil me rah kar bhi mera na ho saka....
Or dil vo majboor hai jo mujh me rah kar bhi tera ho gaya... :'(

[M A H i]

Tu vo zalim hai jo dil me rah kar bhi mera na ho saka....
Or dil vo majboor hai jo mujh me rah kar bhi tera ho gaya... :'(

SAjan :welcomeswing: here

But Meherbani ferma k Thread Section mein ane se phle thora sa ghour ferma lia karein aur aane k baad thread tittle per :)

[Stolen Live]

Mera Hay Wasta "Mohsin" Muhabat K Yazeedon Sy
Yahan Hm Apni Aankhon Main Bhi Pani Rakh Nahi Sakty..

[M A H i]

:bangin:

[Miss Habib]

Mahi shair kidher hai
any way

Tumhare saath chalet hain hazaron chahne wale
Mere hone na hone se tumhein kia faraq parta hai

[mosinriaz]

10....... such a nice sher.... luved it

Phir Shayad Us Say Ab Mulaaqaat Na Ho, Shayad kabhi Youn Baat Na Ho,
Woh Muhabbat He kia Karay Ga Mohsin, Jis K Dil Maen Koi Jazbaat Na Hon

[Razii]

7/10

Yun bi karta hai koi chahnay walon pe sitam
Na ishara, na kinara, na inayat, na salam....

[M A H i]

NYC

8/10

'' Gila shikwa he kr dalo k kuch waqt kat jaaye,
Labon pe ap k ye khamoshi achi nahi lagti ''

[jamal khan]

nice sharing

[Miss Habib]

NYC

8/10

'' Gila shikwa he kr dalo k kuch waqt kat jaaye,
Labon pe ap k ye khamoshi achi nahi lagti ''

9.........

Usne kaha Mafhoom-e-ghalat fehmi kia hai
Maine kaha tum se umeed-e-wafa karna

[M A H i]

10/10

'' Bichharne ka irada ho tou mujh se mashwara krna
Mohabbat main koi bhi faisala zaati nhi hota ''

[Shaam]

10 : )

Rakh Mere Haath Per Apne Haath Ka Bharosa
Ke Abb Ke Bichrein To Mout Aa Jaaye...........

[Miss Habib]

9.......

Awaz de k chup gai har baar zindagi
Hum aise sada dil the k har baar aa gai

[Shaam]

8

Ik tarz-e-taGhaful hai so wo unko mubaarak
Ik arz-e-tamanna hai so hum karte rahengey

[M A H i]

7/10

Khabhi jazb'on Khabhi Khuwab'on ki tijarat ker k
Dil ne Dukh Dard kaamaaye hain Mohabbat ker k

[Shaam]

8

Barey mukhtalif sey lagtey hain iraday..
jab main usse paaney ka souchta hun.......

[Zafina]

8

Barey mukhtalif sey lagtey hain iraday..
jab main usse paaney ka souchta hun.......

4.98 ;)
yeh kholoos koi khuloos hay kay dilo'n mein rabt i baham nahi
tumhy aiteraaf i sitaam nahu mujhy etibar i karam nahi

:horse-fight:Ab 0 Rate ker kay dekain :D

[Shaam]

nahi meri yah majaal
waisey hi dar lagta hai tum sei


10/10 : )


Ye Na Puch Ki Shikayatein Kitni Hain

Tu Ye Bata Tera Aur Koi Sitam Baqi To Nahi

[Razii]

6/10

Tum hanso to din niklay, chup raho to raatain hain
Kis ka ghum kahan ka ghum, sub fazul batain hain

[Owi]

7/10

Mohabbat masla hai do dilon ka
Khirad ko mashwaray ka haq na dayna

Kisi din is terhan khaamosh milna
Mujhay bhi bolnay ka haq na dayna.

[Razii]

6/10

Kya ghazab hai k hijr k din bhi
Zindagi main shumaar hote hain

[M A H i]

nice^
9/10

'' Ek Umar Beet Chali Hai Tujhe Chahtey Howy
Tu Aaj Bhi Be-Khabar Hai Kal Ki Tarha. . . ''

[Zafina]

10/10 :) (Y)

Marhala tujh se judai ka bhi aa pohncha magr
Main abhi pehli mulaqat se bahir na gaya

[DeV!L]

10/10 :) (Y)

Marhala tujh se judai ka bhi aa pohncha magr
Main abhi pehli mulaqat se bahir na gaya

Realli Awesome i dont know how to give the rate sorry haan,, let me try

Rah-e-muhabbat main ajab sa howa hai haal apna,
Na zakhm nazar ata hai na dard saha jata hai…


thanks ,,

[Zafina]

Realli Awesome i dont know how to give the rate sorry haan,, let me try

Rah-e-muhabbat main ajab sa howa hai haal apna,
Na zakhm nazar ata hai na dard saha jata hai…


thanks ,,

zabardast 8/10

Woh ek hi chehraa to nahi saare jahaaN meiN
Jo door hai woh dil se utar kyuN nahi jaataa

[DeV!L]

zabardast 8/10

Woh ek hi chehraa to nahi saare jahaaN meiN
Jo door hai woh dil se utar kyuN nahi jaataa

aray wah Dil ki baat Kehdi amazing Cheers !

Talash kesy karen khusboon ke maskan ko
hawa bhi chup hy badan hy nidhaal apna bhi

[AFghani_Laila]

zabardast 8/10

Woh ek hi chehraa to nahi saare jahaaN meiN
Jo door hai woh dil se utar kyuN nahi jaataa

10/10
MuhaBBat Kar Khuda S eINSAAN Se Nahi..
INSAAN Bewafa Hai Khuda TU BEwafa Nahi ...

[DeV!L]

100% Agree

ada hai shart, bnaawat bhi ltf daiti hai
wo hud bhi rooth gaya hain mujhe hafa kar ke

[Miss Habib]

Roshini meri wafa ki bohat door talak jaye gi
Shart ye hai saleeqay se jalana mujhko

[M A H i]

well played Zafina & Devil :good:
8/10
(where is rating Miss?)

Dukh fasaanaa nahi ke tujh se kahein
Dil bhi maanaa nahi ke tujh se kahein
Aaj tak apani bekali kaa sabab
Khud bhi jaanaa nahi ke tujh se kahein

[Shaam]

8

DiL--E--TaBaH Koo ZaKHmoon ki kucH KaMi To naHii....

MaGr Hai AaRZooo K Tum Bhii eK WaaR kaRo.

[Razii]

6/10

Yeh aaj kis ki mohabbat mien bhar lia daman?
Tera to surkh gulaabon pe aitqaad na tha!

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

7

Men nA Kehta Tha , Waqt Zaalim hAi
Dekh LO .. Khwab HO Gay Tum Bhi ..!

[Razii]

8 Nice

Ab mere ziker pe maozu' he badal daita hai
Wo jo har baat pe daita tha hawale mere...

[DreamGirl]

9.5


Mery chahry py kisi or ka chehra to nahi
Jany wo kis ki reayat sy mujhy dekhta hy

[Miss Habib]

9........

Taluq jis qadar mazboot tha utna hi nazuk tha.
Zara si beniyazi ne wafa na-motbar kar di.

[mosinriaz]

10


Zindagi maen meri bhi, khushion k rung hotay
Maen tanha na hota, Gar Jo tum sung Hotay

[Miss Habib]

8.........

Nafrat kee aag kitne gahro'n ko jalaaey gee
Ik bheerh see laggee hai kafan ki dukaan par

[DeV!L]

8.........

Nafrat kee aag kitne gahro'n ko jalaaey gee
Ik bheerh see laggee hai kafan ki dukaan par

Yeh inayaten ghazab ki, yeh bala ki maharbani,
Meri khairiyat bhi poochhi, kisi or ki zubani.!!!

[Miss Habib]

wah zabardst devil
lekin rating kahan hai

9.....

Mujhay lakh ho bharosa mairay dil ka kya thikana
kabhi bay naqaab ho kar mairay samnay na aa na

[DeV!L]

wah zabardst devil
lekin rating kahan hai

9.....

Mujhay lakh ho bharosa mairay dil ka kya thikana
kabhi bay naqaab ho kar mairay samnay na aa na

Sorry for that let me give ya 10 because i dont have any idea to give any rate anyhow, 10 for ya its realli touchy

Jaa TuJhe Tere Haal Pe Chora,
IS Se BehTer Teri Saza Bhi Kya Hai !!!

[Miss Habib]

8.........

Thaa Jinhein Za'um Vo Derya Bhi Mujhi Mein Doobey
Mein KAy Sehra Nazar Aata Thaa Samander Nikla

[M A H i]

WOW
very nice Dev!l

7/10 (Miss)

Zindagi jis k damm se hai Dost,
Yaad us ki azaab-e-jaan bhi hai…!!!

[Miss Habib]

8...........

May bad-dua to nahi day rahi hoon us ko magar
Dua yahi hay usay muj sa ab koi na millay

[Owi]

8/10

Aankh khultay hi yaad aatay ho
Kya tumhein or koi kaam nahi.

[Miss Habib]

7............

hansney ki aarzoo main dabaya jo dard ko
aansu hamari aankh main pather kay ho gaey

[M A H i]

nyc^
8/10

'' MOHABAT hath mai pheni
Chori ke manind hai
Sanwarti hai,
Khanakti Hai,
Khanak kar Toot jati Hai ''

[Owi]

8/10

Meri jaanib ager teri nazer ho
To meri raat ki aakhir sahar ho

[M A H i]

8/10

'' Kuch Tumhari Nigaah Kaafir Thi
Kuch Mujhe Bhi Kharab Hona Tha ''

[Miss Habib]

8.........

Daikh aa kar kabhi ujray hooway dill ki ronaq
kaisi basti teri yaadon ki basa li hum nay

[PRINCE SHAAN]

9

Wo Jo Kanton Ko B Narmi Say Choowa Karta Tha
Hum Nay Pholon Ko Masaltey Howey Dikha Usko

[DeV!L]

To ny bichard ke apny sir ilzam ly liya

warna Sheikh ka to rona sada ka tha

[Miss Habib]

To ny bichard ke apny sir ilzam ly liya

warna Sheikh ka to rona sada ka tha

wah apni poetry hai kiaa

9..............

Najanay badaloon ke darmiyan kiya sazish hoi
us ka ghar mitti ka tha ussi ke ghar barish hoi

[DeV!L]

wah apni poetry hai kiaa

9..............

Najanay badaloon ke darmiyan kiya sazish hoi
us ka ghar mitti ka tha ussi ke ghar barish hoi



Loll comone Ise Koi baat nahi Juz ajj suba se Poetry ka mood ho raha hai dont know kess ka asar howa hai loll anyways 10 For you ;)

Pata hai dost hi botey hay rah may kantay

gali may un ke chala ho barhana paon bohat

[Miss Habib]

Loll comone Ise Koi baat nahi Juz ajj suba se Poetry ka mood ho raha hai dont know kess ka asar howa hai loll anyways 10 For you ;)

Pata hai dost hi botey hay rah may kantay

gali may un ke chala ho barhana paon bohat

oh acha kisi ka asar hai phir theek hai

8.........

ik umr huii main to hansi bhool chuka huun
tum ab bhi mere dil ko dukhanaa nahin bhooley

[DeV!L]

oh acha kisi ka asar hai phir theek hai

8.........

ik umr huii main to hansi bhool chuka huun
tum ab bhi mere dil ko dukhanaa nahin bhooley


hai koi jo bayan nahi hota :p
anyways 10 for you old lady :P



Kaise Bhula Doon Usko Main,
Maut Insanon Ko Aati Hai,Yadon Ko Nahi..

[Miss Habib]

hai koi jo bayan nahi hota :p
anyways 10 for you old lady :P



Kaise Bhula Doon Usko Main,
Maut Insanon Ko Aati Hai,Yadon Ko Nahi..

hahahahaha acha g

8..........

sakoon kahee'n bhee mayassar nahee'n hai insan ko
janazey waley bhee kaandha badaltey rahate hain

[DeV!L]

hahahahaha acha g

8..........

sakoon kahee'n bhee mayassar nahee'n hai insan ko
janazey waley bhee kaandha badaltey rahate hain


omG im impressed really its amazing, you are wonderfull old lady really im not expecting this from your side, its 10/10 Cheers !
Yahi bahot hai k to ne palat k daikh lia,
Ye lutaf bhi meri umeed se ziada hai.

[Miss Habib]

omG im impressed really its amazing, you are wonderfull old lady really im not expecting this from your side, its 10/10 Cheers !
Yahi bahot hai k to ne palat k daikh lia,
Ye lutaf bhi meri umeed se ziada hai.

aho me old lady :0013:

8..................

woh jo bura tha kabhi ab ho gaya achcha kaise
waqt ke saath maiN is taizi sey badla kaise

[DeV!L]

aho me old lady :0013:

8..................

woh jo bura tha kabhi ab ho gaya achcha kaise
waqt ke saath maiN is taizi sey badla kaise

AY umar rafta mai tujhe ponchata nay
AB muje ko bhol ja ke bohat bewafa ho may

[Miss Habib]

AY umar rafta mai tujhe ponchata nay
AB muje ko bhol ja ke bohat bewafa ho may

rating kahan hai janab :;scare:

8.......

kal Dhoop kay Mailey say khareedey thay khiloney
Aik mom ka putla tha jo Ghur tak nahin pohancha

[DeV!L]

rating kahan hai janab :;scare:

8.......

kal Dhoop kay Mailey say khareedey thay khiloney
Aik mom ka putla tha jo Ghur tak nahin pohancha

yeh lo sorry ahhh 10 ;)

Ye Shehar Chorna Hay Magar is Say Peshtar
Os Bewafa Ko Aik Nazar Dekhna Bhi Hay ………..!

[M A H i]

9/10

'' Raat ko sapny tumhare,din ko ye duniya k rang
Foqiyat kaisy main dy doon din ko apni raat per
Wo jo tanha kr gya to main hoon tanha aj tak
Inteha maine bhi kr di EK ZARA C BAAT PER ''

[DeV!L]

9/10

'' Raat ko sapny tumhare,din ko ye duniya k rang
Foqiyat kaisy main dy doon din ko apni raat per
Wo jo tanha kr gya to main hoon tanha aj tak
Inteha maine bhi kr di EK ZARA C BAAT PER ''

10 for ya,

Mein tujh ko bhool chuka, Lekin aik umar ke baad,
Tera khayaal kiya tha ke chot ubhar aayi..

[M A H i]

8/10

'' Jaien kis umer mein jaiygi ye aadat Uski
Roothna khud sy to auroon sy ulhajhty rehna ''

[DeV!L]

True 10 for ya,

Wafa shoar kai hain koi haseen bhi to ho,
Chalo phir ajj usi be wafai ki bat karain.

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

7

Doobte Dekha Apna Suraj Jis Dum To MalOom hUA ..
Shaam Sam'ay Ki Aahen YaArO .. Shaam Dhale He Aati Hen ..!

[DiE]

8

manga karenge ab se dua hijr e yaar ki
akhir ko dushmani hai asar ko dua k sath

[M A H i]

ahhh my fav one^
10/10

'' Lo Dekh Lo , Ye Ishq Hai,Ye Wasl Hai,Ye Hijr
Ab Lot Chalain Aao Bohat Kaam Paray HaiN ''

[Miss Habib]

8...........

Tera Sathi Tere DushMan Ki Tarah Ho Jayega,
Is Bhare Mele Mein Tu Be-asra Reh Jayega,

[Razii]

6/10

Dil main hota to kisi tor nikal bhi jata
Ab to wo shakhs bohat dur talak hai mujhe main

[Miss Habib]

7......

Baat sajdon ki nahi khuloos-e-dil ki hoti hai
Aey Dost
Har makhane mein sharabi or har Masjid mein namazi nahi hota

[M A H i]

7/10


'' Aao ek sajda karen aalam-e-mad'hoshi mein
loog kehte hain ke 'Sagar' ko Khuda yaad nahi ''

[Owi]

9/10

Jahaan Kuch Dair TU Thehray Wahaan Aalam Mu'attaR Ho
Jahaan Tu Khol Day Zulfein Waheen Pay Shaam Ker Daalay.

[Miss Habib]

8...........

Ik ye khuwahish k koi zakham na dekhe dil kay
Ik ye hasrat k koi dekhne wala hota

[Owi]

7/10

Ajeeb Log Hein Bethay Hein Dhar K Haath Pay Haath
Khizaan Nay Khud Hi Pukaara Hai Ab Bahaaron Ko.

[Khwahish]

9/10 Zaberdast shair

Ajab Ye Marhala Aya Hai Hijr-o-Qarb Yaksaan Hain..
Mujhe Ab Kuch Nahi Hota Jafa Karlo Wafa Karlo . .!

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

Hard ToO UNd3rsStaNd SoO 4/10 !!

Kohkan Ho K Qais Ho K Faraz

Sab Mein Ik Shakhs Hi Mila Hai Mujhay

[M A H i]

WOW!
very nyc shair

Khwahish
+
Faryal

9/10

میں بھی بہت عجیب ہوں ، اتنا عجیب ہوں کہ بس

خود کو تباہ کر لیا،اورملال بھی نہیں

[Khwahish]

"
alaaaaaaaaa
10/10

Koi pathar sa dil la do...
K insaanon mein jeena hey"

[PRINCE SHAAN]

8/10

Woh Kitna Mehrbaan Tha Ke Hazaaron Ghum De Gayaa Mohsin
Hum Kitne Khud Gharz Nikle Kuch Na De Sake mohabbat K Siva

[Owi]

7/10

Shart Itni Hai K Baarish Ki Terhan Aana Tum
Dekhna Kaisay Main Shaakhon Say Nikal Aaoon Ga.

[Razii]

6/10

Mujhe sataa k wo meri duaayen laita hai
Usay khabar hai mujhe bad-dua nhen ati.......

[Miss Habib]

7...........

Ye lafzon ki shararat hai sambhal kar kuch bhi kehna tum
Mohabbat lafz hai lekin ye aksar ho bhi jati hai

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

8

Gosht Nakhun Se Alag Kar K Dikhaya Mene ..
Us Ne Pooche Thae Judaai k MaA'eni Mujh Se .. !

[Miss Habib]

8.........

Kisi k zarf se barh kar na kar mehr-o-wafa hargiz
K iss bejan sharafat mein bara nuqsan hota hai

[M A H i]

8/10
Rating mein bhout kanjosi kerty hain loog (JANE KIU ?)


Musafer To Bichartey Hein,
Rafaqat Kab Badalti Hai
Mohabbat Zinda Rehti Hai,
Mohabbat Kab Badalti Hai

[Miss Habib]

9....

apni maati par chalny ka saleka seekho......
sangemarmar par chalo gay tu phisal jao gay.

[M A H i]

wah...
10/10

Had Say Pyaar Ghuzar Jaye Tu
Aksar Doori Ho Jaati Hai

[DiE]

8

phir muqaddar ki lakeeron mai likh diya intizar Mohsin
phir wohi raat ka aalaam or mai tanha

[Miss Habib]

9.....

Raz keh dete hen nazuk se ishare aksar.
Itni hasas muhabbat ki zaban hoti he.

[Razii]

Nice 8/10

Baton kay har jawab main bus mukhtasir si haan
Lagta hai meri zaat se uktaa gaya hai wo ...... !

[Miss Habib]

9.....

Us zakham ko bharne mein kuch dair to lagti hai
Jis zakham mein shamil ho apno ki inayat

[M A H i]

9/10

''Such ko maine such kaha jab kah dia to kah dia,
Ab zamane ki nazar me ye himakat hai to hai ''

[DeV!L]

Realli Great Words 10 For ya shonay
Tu bhi oron ki trah muj se kinara kar lay
Sari dunia se bura hun tery kis kaam ka hun

[Miss Habib]

8....

Kantey meri Aana k mujhe roktey rehey
Main ous ki galii se ban k diwana guzar gaya

Main woh shakhass tha jo haqarat ki aankh se
Dariay ko dekhta huwa Piyasa guzar gayai

[M A H i]

10/10

'' Yeh soch kar ke terii jabien par na bal pare,
Bas duuuuur hii se dekh liya, aur chal pare "

[ONEMAN]

8/10

Be chain umangon ko behla k chale jana
Hum tum ko na roken ge bas aa k chale jana
Milne jo na aaye tum thee kon c majboori
Jhoota koi afsana dohra k chale jana
.

[M A H i]

9/10

Chup Chup k aa geye hain Woh ko-e-yaar main

Murr Murr k daikhte hain koi daikhta na ho . . .

[Miss Habib]

wah 10/10

Ye kon phir se unhi raston mein chor gaya
Abhi abhi mein azab-e-safar se nikla tha

[M A H i]

Thanks,
8/10

Kab Tak Jaltey Raho Gay Gham -e-Tanhai Main?
Ab Faza Shehar-E-Tamanna Ki Nikhar Jany Do...

[DeV!L]

Ahaan 10 Shonay ;)

Saleeqa Ho Agar Bheegi Palkoon Ko Parhne Ka,
To Behte Hue Ansoon Aksar Baat Kerte Hain..

[mosinriaz]

8 :)

Tummhary Jaisi Aankhon Walay Jab Bhi Saahil Pe Jatay Haen
To Lehrain Yeh Shor Machati Hain, Lo Aaj Samundar Doob Chala

[Shaam]

mmhmmm 7

Yun tu hum apne zaat main ghum thy
such tu yeh hai..Yahan bhe tum thy.............

[mosinriaz]

how to delete a post?

[mosinriaz]

6 :)


Na khud Ki Khabar Hai Mujhay, Nah Iss Koocha e Faani ka Pata,
Mujhay To Bus Justuju Hai Yehi, K Koi To Batlaaye Mere RAB ka Pata

[DiE]

7

Chiraag jalana to purani rasmein hain Ghalib
Ab to tere sheher k log insan jala dete hain

[Miss Habib]

8.........

Mat kholna mere “Mazi” ki kitabon ko “Dost”
Hum se har us shakhs ne bewafai ki
Jis pe hum naaz kia karte the

[mosinriaz]

9

Suno, Youn Daastaan e Ishq Bayaan Nahi Kartay,
Raaz e Zindagi Aisay, Her Kisi Per Ayaan Nahi Kartay

[Miss Habib]

Safar-e-Zeesat mein tere sath ki khatir
Un manzilon ko bhi chora hai
Jo mera muqaddar thein

[Aadii~]

8
achi hai ratjago ki chandani jin ki jabinon mein
'Qateel' ek umr guzri hai hamari un hasinon mein

wo jin k anchalon se zindagi takhlik hoti hai
dharakta hai hamara dil abhi tak un hasinon mein

[M A H i]

Nyc^
9/10

kamal e zabt yehi hay kay khon kay ghoont pee'o
usool e ishq nahin naa'laa o fughan, faryaad.....

[Owi]

8/10

samander si gehri hazaaron theen baatein
labon k simat'tay kinaaron mein dekha

[M A H i]

9/10



تیری آنکھوں کی طرح گہرا تھا


زخم بھرنے میں بہت دیر لگی

[Owi]

9/10

Thook ker khoon rung mein rehna
Main huner-mund hoon aziyat ka

[Zafina]

8/10
Ye to Suraj ne mehrbani ki,

Din bhala mujse kb guzrta tha.

[mosinriaz]

8

Khuda Ke Ashiq To Hain Hazaro Bano Mein Phirtey Hain Marey Marey
Main Uska Banda Banonga Jisko, Khuda Ke Bandon Se Pyar Hoga..!!

[Zafina]

10/10

Koi falsafa nahi ishq ka, jahan dil jhuka, wahin sar jhuka
Wahin haath jor k beth ja, na sawal ker, na jawab lay..

[mosinriaz]

8

Woh Ishq He kia, Jo KHuda Say Na HO,
Ishq E Khudawandi He Deta Hai Fikar e Khalq

[M A H i]

8/10

Sitm sikhlayay ga rasm-e-wafa, aisay nahe hota
Sanam dhiklayay gay rah-e-khuda aisay nahe hota

[Owi]

8/10

Sitam to ye hai k lagtay hi bhar gaya wo zakham
Jo ehal-e-dil nay kaha tha bohat hi kaari hai !

[Miss Habib]

9.....


Suljha hoa sa fard samajhte hen mujh ko log.
Koi janta nhi k uljha hoa sa mujh min koi dusra bhi he.

[M A H i]

7/10

Aahd-e-rafaaqat theek hai lekin, mujh ko aisa lagta hai
Tum to mere saath raho ge, Main tanhaa reh jaaun gi

[Shaam]

کس آنکھ کی مجال کہ چُھو لے وہ عکسِ یار

آئینہ چومتا ہے جسے اپنے ڈھنگ سے

[M A H i]

Acoding 2 thread Rate b ker dete=D?
9/10

Amjad woh aankhain jheel see gehri to hain magar
Un main koi bhi aks meray naam ka nahi....

[Owi]

10/10

Jaber say saber k paymaanon ki labrayzi tak
Aaj girya hai to kal girya-o-zaari hogi !

[Shaam]

Acoding 2 thread Rate b ker dete=D?
9/10

Amjad woh aankhain jheel see gehri to hain magar
Un main koi bhi aks meray naam ka nahi....

ghalti hogai : )

10 11 12 jitna chaheyin rate karlein

[M A H i]

Jaber say saber k paymaanon ki labrayzi tak
Aaj girya hai to kal girya-o-zaari hogi !

9/10

Hazar dard shab-e-arzo ke rah main hay
koi thekana batyao ke qafila utray
qareeb aur bhe aayo ke shooq-e-deed mitay
sharab aur pelayo ke kuch nasha utray



ghalti hogai : )

10 11 12 jitna chaheyin rate karlein

No :thanks:
its okay!

[Shaam]

9

ہم سادہ ہی ایسے تھے، کی یوں ہی پذیرائی
جس بار خزاں آئی، سمجھے کہ بہار آئی

امیدِ تلطف میں* رنجیدہ رہے دونوں
تو اور تری محفل، میں اور مری تنہائی

[mosinriaz]

9

Aazaadi K Khawab Dekhnay Walay Dar Haqeeqat Ghulaam Hua Kartay Haen,
Yeh Muqaddar Banti hai Un Ka, Jo Justuju kartay Haen, Iss ko Paanay Ki Aarzu Kartay Haen

[M A H i]

9

Aazaadi K Khawab Dekhnay Walay Dar Haqeeqat Ghulaam Hua Kartay Haen,
Yeh Muqaddar Banti hai Un Ka, Jo Justuju kartay Haen, Iss ko Paanay Ki Aarzu Kartay Haen

Nice!
10/10

KHAWAB HOTEY HEIN DEKHNAY KAY LIYYE,

INN MEIN JAA KAR MGAR RAHA NAA KARO ...

[Owi]

10/10

Zindagi haanptay khuwaabon say udher
Aik sehra hai, saraabon say udher

Raat khaimay say kahaan nikli hai ?
Sehmi bethi hai tanaabon say udher !

[Miss Habib]

Wo mujh se bichar kar ab tak nhi roya.
Koi to hamdard he jo use rone nhi deta.

[M A H i]

9/10

Mein chup raha keh zeher yehi mujh ko raas tha
Wo sang-e-lafz phaink kar kitna udaas tha''

[Owi]

10/10

Raat hamein kuch yaad nahi tha
Raat bohat hi yaad aaye ho !

[Miss Habib]

8....

Ye tum se kah dia kis ne k bazi haar bethe hain
Abhi tum pe lutane ko hamari jaan baqi hai

[M A H i]

WoW!
10/10

"Main jis pe Jaan deta hoon, Woh unhii par Jaan dete hain..
Bass isii khaatir mujhe, Pyaar hai apne raQeeboo se...."

[Shaam]

ہم ایسے سادہ دلوں کو وہ دوست ہو کہ خدا
سبھی نے وعدہ فردا پہ ٹال رکھا ہے

[Miss Habib]

Say'yaad ne pehley to rehayii ki khabar dii....!!
Phir daal diye us ne merey par merey aagey..!!

[Shaam]

محبتوں میں تو ملنا ہے یا اجڑ جانا
مزاجِ عشق میں کب اعتدال رکھا ہے

[DiE]

8

thak kar yun hi pal bhar k liye ankh lagi thi
so kar hi na uthenge ye irrada to nahi tha

[M A H i]

7/10

TERI AWAAZ kay Gumshuda silsilay
PHIR say AA kay Jagaanay lage hain HUMIEN…!!!

[Owi]

8/10

Tu nay jab sab ko pukaara tha amaanat k liye
Do jahaan chup thay, teri laaj ko hum utthay hein !

[Miss Habib]

9.....

Tanhaiyan utha na sakin roshni ka bojh.
Saye bhi dafan ho gaye khali makan mein.

[Polar Bear]

7/10.....

[Miss Habib]

7/10.....

qaiser shair bhi to likhna thaaa

[PRINCE SHAAN]

shair to aap ne bhi nahi likha................kyun?


ٹوٹ گیا جب دل کا رشتہ اب کیوں ریزے چنتی ہو
ریزوں سے بھی کبھی کسی نے شیشہ پھر سے بنایا ہے

[Polar Bear]

shair to aap ne bhi nahi likha................kyun?


ٹوٹ گیا جب دل کا رشتہ اب کیوں ریزے چنتی ہو
ریزوں سے بھی کبھی کسی نے شیشہ پھر سے بنایا ہے

9/10

Mujy shair bilkul nhin atey ap logon ki poetry read ker k enjoy kerta hoon

[PRINCE SHAAN]

9/10

Mujy shair bilkul nhin atey ap logon ki poetry read ker k enjoy kerta hoon



Koi baat nahi dost ek din aap bhi achi tarah samajhne aur share karne lagainge.

[Polar Bear]

Koi baat nahi dost ek din aap bhi achi tarah samajhne aur share karne lagainge.

Hmm Hope so bro :)

[Miss Habib]

hahahaha theek hai

Mar kar bhi us ko dekhte rehne k shoq mein.
Ankhen kisi ko apni amanat mein de gaye.

[PRINCE SHAAN]

9/10

سنائی دیتی ہے کس کے بدن کی سرگوشی
یہ کون ہے جو میرے آس پاس رہتا ہے

[Miss Habib]

8....

Zara si baat par ankhen bhigo kar beth jate ho
Tumhen to apne dil ka haal batana bhi mushkil hai

[Owi]

8/10

Jo dam bhar ko teri yaad-e-haseen say bay-khaber ker day
Na aisa dour-e-jaam aaya, na dour-e-aasmaan ab tak !

[M A H i]

8/10

Uske baghair bhi to akhir' kat gayi Hayaat
Uska Khyaal us'se zyaada Jameel thaa

[Owi]

9/10

Daaman na ho tera to hayat-e-berhanah sir
Kis kis say roz-e-hashr rida maangti phiray !

[M A H i]

7/10

Mahshar ka Khair kuch bhi nateejaa ho aye ''Adam''
kuch guftagoo to khul ke karenge Khudaa se ham!!!

[Owi]

10/10

Junoon jaanay, junoon ka kaam jaanay, zindagi jaanay
Karay kiun ishq mein andaysha-e-sood-o-ziyaan koi !

[M A H i]

nice
9/10

Khamosh reh k bhi aankho'n say baat kerta hay...
Woh chaandni k takallum ko maat kerta hay...
Nibhaa rahay hai'n kuch aisay hum us say yaaraana...
Uboor jaisay koi pul-siraat kerta hay...

[iqra]

hmmm..nice
9...
Sab ki SAQI py nazar ho,ye zarori hai magar
Sab py SAQI ki nazar ho ye zarori to nahi

[Owi]

Hijr mein aisay tasawwur sir-e-shaam aatay hein
Dil sambhalta hai na kuch hosh hi kaam aatay hein

Mout ka naam hi duniya mein bura hai werna
Zindagi mein bhi hazaar aisay muqaam aatay hein !

[M A H i]

8/10

Is Dunya Main Kaun

Kisi Se Kare Ga Wafa

is ''DIL'' k do hurf hain

woh bhi juda juda

[Miss Habib]

Wo mile ga to us se puchen ge doston.
Kis kis ko abad kiya he mujhe barbad kar k

[M A H i]

Where is Rting Miss^

7/10

Tujhe kia Khabar teri yaad ne mujhe kaise kaise sata diya
Kabhi Khilwatoon mein hansa diya, kabhi mehfiloon mein rula diya
Kabhi youn howa teri yaad mein, meri har namaaz qazaa hui
Kabhi youn howa teri yaad ne, mujhe mere Rab se mila diya

[Miss Habib]

Sorry

8....

Meri Hassratain Bhi Meri Jesi Hain..
Sochti Hon Aur Toot Jati Hain..!

[M A H i]

10/10
Very Nice Miss^


Yeh Bheegi Aankhien Beh'ta Kajal Aur Toota Howa Wajood
Sub he Gawaah Hain k ''Mohabbat'' Ho Gai Hai Tumhein . . .

[rani123]

7/10

Sun ahai Noush wo ham say bichar janay ka talib hai
usay ye kon samjhay bicharna moat hoti hai

[M A H i]

8/10

Ye juratein baray imtihaan layty hain
Kisi se wasta rakhna tu door ka rakhna
Taluqaat kabhi aik se nahi rehtay
Usay ganwa k bhi jeenay ka hosla rakhna

[Miss Habib]

8....

Bass Ik Zara C Baat Thi Lekin Tamam Umarr,
WOh Mujh ko Jaganay ki Saza Day Kr Soo Gya .. !!

[M A H i]

8/10

Yeh Khayal Sarey Hain Aarzi Yeh Gulaab Sarey Hain Kaghazi
Gul e Arzoo Ki Jou Baas Thay Wohi Laug Hum Se Bichar Gaye

[rani123]

7/10

main tu us waqt se darta hoon k koi poch na le
ye agar zabt ka aanso tha tu tapka kaise…!!

[Miss Habib]

9....

Sikka Bana k Jb Bhi Uchala Gya Mujhay...

May Teri Har Jeet May Taqseem Ho Gya..!!

[M A H i]

9/10

Kabhi Khud Per Jabr Kiya Hum Ne,
Kabhi Khud Ko Yun Bae-Mol Kiya
Hum Subhon K Lautney Wale The,
Eik Shaam Per Aa Kar Haare Hain!

[rani123]

9/10
dar e hashar mujhay teri kasam
umer bhar manay ibadat ki hai
to mera nama e amal to dekh
main nay insan say muhabat ki hai

[M A H i]

9/10

''Qateel'' ab to yehii rah gayaa pataa us ka
bhalii sii shakl thii achha sa naam thaa us ka

[Owi]

8/10

Meri Talaash Mein Paltay Ga Kaarwaan-e-hayaaT
Agerchay Dhaanp Diya Gerd-e-kaarwaaN Nay Mujhay !

[Miss Habib]

7....

main ye kehta hun her rukh se basar ki zindagi
zindagi kehti hai, "her pehlu adhoora reh gaya".

[M A H i]

7/10

Zindagi teri gehraiyo'n main hum
Mehfil main reh k bhi rahe tanhaiyo'n main hum
Deewanagi nahin to or kya kahain..??
Insaan dhoondte rahe parchaiyo'n main hum ...

[AFghani_Laila]

8/10

My ALl Time Fav Shair
MuhaBbat Kar Khuda Se INSAAN se Nahi
INSAAN Bewfaa Hai KhudaTu BEwaafa Nahi ..

[Miss Habib]

8....

Aj os ne dard bhi apne alehdha ker liye.....!
Aj main roya tu mere sath woh roya na tha

[AFghani_Laila]

7/10

Dard se hath na milate to or kya karte,
Gam ke aansoo na bahate to or kya karte.
Usne maangi thi humse roshni ki dua,
Hum khud ko na jalate to or kya karte.

[Owi]

8/10

Ajab Chiraagh Hoon Din Raat Jalta Rehta Hoon
Main Thak Gaya Hoon, Hawa Say Kaho Bujhaaye Mujhay !

[iqra]

8...
Jo aana chaho hazaar Rasty,na aana chaho Uzar hazaar...
Mizaaj barham,Taveel Rasta,Barasti Barish,Kharab Mausam

[M A H i]

10/10

Ab kuch doston se waise muraasim nahi rahe,
Kuch dushmanon se waisi adaavat na rahi...

[Owi]

8/10


Tumhaari baat lambi hai daleelein hein bahaanay hein
Hamaari baat itni hai hamaari aarzoo tum ho !

[Noor ul huda]

9/10.............

[Noor ul huda]

Tum sy Bichar kay zehen huwa aisa muntashir
Logoo sy apnay ghar ka pata poochna para

[Miss Habib]

7....

Us Ki Jeet Se Hoti He Khushi Mujh Ko.
Yehi Jawab Mare Pas Apni Haar Ka Tha…

[iqra]

8....

Samaj jati hn lekin dair sy mai daa o paich usky
Wo bazi jeet jata hai,mery chalaak hony tak....

[M A H i]

9/10

Mohabbat ki baazi wo bazi hai ''.....''
ke khud HAAR janey ko ji chahta hai

[Shaam]

9

mujhey maloom hai mera muqaddar 'Tum' nahin, lekin,
meri Taqdeer se chhup ke, Mujhey ik baar Mil jaao..............

[M A H i]

wah!
kia he baat hai ^
10/10

Us say kaho k lamha bhar hum say aa milay kabhi
Mana k ye hai muhaal per, itna muhaal bhi nahi

[Shaam]

8

یہ مجھے چین کیوں نہی پڑتا
ایک ہی شخص ہے جہاں میں کیا

[iqra]

bohat khob..
9...
Ye Mera hausla hai tery bagair
Saans leta hn baat krta hn

[M A H i]

VERY NICE IQRA^
10/10

Sard Rawiyaya,
Uljha Lehja, Khoi Aankhien,
Thande Hath,
Ba'd Mizaaji, Be Rang Chera,
DEAKHO ''Tum Bin Kiya Hoon Mein''

[DeV!L]

na kaha ker baar baar tujay chur de gai hum, na hum itne amm hai a na tere yeh bass ki baat hai

[M A H i]

8/10

Badi Baaton Ko Khayal Mein Na Lana Uski Aadat Hai,
Zara Si Baat Par Toofan Uthana Uski Aadat Hai,

[Miss Habib]

Toot kay chahna oar phir toot jana
Bat choti hai mgar boht gahree hai

[M A H i]

8/10

Dair Tak Kuch Nazar Nhi Aata
Khuwab Jab Toot K Bikharta Hai

[DeV!L]

Milta wahi hay jo muqaddar mein hota hay
yahan ronay ,wahan ronay say kuch nahi milta

[M A H i]

8/10

Faasle Kam Na Ho Sake Mohsin
Aamna Saamna Raha Barsoon..

[DeV!L]

Na Janay Koun Sa Ab Zulm Reh Gaya Hay
Dua Woh Mangtay Hain Meri Zindagi K Liye

[Shaam]

wah ji
10

تم بھی کچھ تو کرو مسیحائی!
میں ہی کیوں درد میں کمی کر لوں!

[Shaam]

oh that 10 for mahi
and Dev for u a big hug ; )
10 dude : )

[M A H i]

10/10

Log Bhi Pairr Hua Karte Hain
Sabz Rakho To Dua Dete Hain

[M A H i]

10/10

Log Bhi Pairr Hua Karte Hain
Sabz Rakho To Dua Dete Hain

[Shaam]

9

کس کی دہلیز پہ جھکیں محسن
جتنے انساں تھے سب خدا نکلے

[DeV!L]

oh that 10 for mahi
and Dev for u a big hug ; )
10 dude : )

sham thanks man, for hug not for points cuz im doing juzz copy paste loll anyways here is Rule Juzz shair so Shhhh anyways we didnt chit chat alot, im coming khi next week for 2 days hope see you soon take care giime ur ..... PM me regrads

[M A H i]

10/10


Lout Aati Hai Meri Shabb Ki Ibadat Khaali
Janay Kis Arsh Pay Rehta Hai Khuda Shaam Kay Bad

[Shaam]

sham thanks man, for hug not for points cuz im doing juzz copy paste loll anyways here is Rule Juzz shair so Shhhh anyways we didnt chit chat alot, im coming khi next week for 2 days hope see you soon take care giime ur ..... PM me regrads

sure why not
lekin bhai me poora darhi wala molvi hoo
so na tumhari tarha handsome hoo
aur shashkey tou kab ke bhool gaya
so soch lo
lolz
u can have better choices lol

aur yaha shair kehlo
madam ko bura lagei ga ke unki post per batein karahey hain

[Shaam]

10/10


Lout Aati Hai Meri Shabb Ki Ibadat Khaali
Janay Kis Arsh Pay Rehta Hai Khuda Shaam Kay Bad

wahhhhhhhhhhhh
poorei 10


ﺍﮮ ﺑﺖ ﺗﺮﺍﺵ!!!ﻋﺸﻖ ﮐﻮ ﺣﯿﺮﺕ ﻣﯿﮟ ﮈﺍﻝ ﺩﮮ
ﭘﺘﮭﺮ کی ﺁﻧﮑﮫ ﺳﮯ ﮐﻮﺋﯽ ﺁﻧﺴﻮ ﻧﮑﺎﻝ ﺩﮮ

[M A H i]

bhout khayaal hai ^
DIKH RAHA HAI!!!!

8/10

Patthar ke Khudaa Patthar ke Sanam Patthar ke hii Insaan paaye hain
Tum Shahar-e-Mohabbat kahate ho ham jaan bachchaakar aaye hain

[DeV!L]

sure why not
lekin bhai me poora darhi wala molvi hoo
so na tumhari tarha handsome hoo
aur shashkey tou kab ke bhool gaya
so soch lo
lolz
u can have better choices lol

aur yaha shair kehlo
madam ko bura lagei ga ke unki post per batein karahey hain

Aay sham dhari wale ho tou kya howa yaar? mai raha bahar ho zayda lakin im fully paki man, aur rahi handsome honay ki baat lollll khair chure, mujay yaar haleem khani hai khi ki kabhi nahi khayi ki bass melna be hojayga haleem be kha longa mai loll anyways Ma'am Ko hum pe ghusa nahi ata, kitna arsa hogya ghusaa dekhe howay, anyways let me copy paste somthing lollll paste kernay ki zarorat he nahi mera apna shair hai aik letme write

Na nind atee hai na mout atee hai lakin Zohar bhaii Bara acha Ghatii hai :P

[Shaam]

میں کس کے ہاتھ بھیجوں اُسے آج کی دُعا
قاصد، ہوا،ستارہ کوئی اُس کے گھر نہ جائے

[M A H i]

9/10

Shamaar Us Ki Skhawat Ka Kia Karon K Wo Shakhs
Chiragh Banta'ta Phirta Hai Chheen Ker Aankhein

[Shaam]

:angr0001:


madam aap sei kuch kehrahi hai DEVIL

[Shaam]

8
زندہ ہے دل تو اس میں محبت بھی چاہیے
...آنکھیں جو ہیں تو راہِ وفا دیکھ کر چلو

[Miss Habib]

10....

Na koi gham, na koi shikwa kisi se,
Bus mujhe aadat chup rehne ki hai...!!!

[iqra]

8...
IshQ mujbor o na-muraad sahi
phir b zalim ka bol baala hai

[M A H i]

10/10
(very nice^ iqra)

Kya kahun tum se main
ke kya hai Ishq,
Jaan ka rog hai,
bala hai Ishq!!!

[iqra]

hmmm..thnx
10....
Khuaab lafzon mai dhal nahi sakty
Kashh!kay aankhen parha kary koi

[Noor ul huda]

9/10
Ay Gardish e Falak Hamay Ghafil na janna
Tujh sy baatien hoon gi Agar Zindagi Rahi

[Shaam]

nice one Noor
10

میں جانتا ہوں مگر تو بھی آئینہ لے کر
مجھے بتا کے میرا انتخاب کیسا ہے؟

[iqra]

Ahan...very nyc
10....

Ye tumhara chehra kitaab hai,isy parh raha hn mai warq warq
Zara baat sada likha karo, ye muhawaron ki satoor kia....

[Shaam]

kia baat hai iqra
zabardast
10


حسن کی بات کہیں سے نکلے
سلسلہ یار تک جا ملتا ہے

[iqra]

10....
Todhi jo Usny Hum sy,to jori raqeeb sy
Inshaa!to mery Yaar kay bs jorh todh dekh

[Noor ul huda]

10

Ham nay her dukh ko Muhabbat ki Anayt Samjha

Ham koi tum thay k Zamanay sy Shikayat kerty

(BTW , Iqra beautiful sketching,, aik waqt tha mujhy bhi bara shouq tha and i had many sketch books :( parh dien sab )

[iqra]

Is qehet e Dosti mai koi mujh sy kia mily...
Khud apny aap ko bhi muyassir nahi hn mai


hmmm...thnx noor sis...bt kiu phar diye sketches?