Rate the Previous '' Shair ''

[Shaam]

8/10


Humari khwaahish ek ghar ki thi use sara zamaana chahiye tha
Meri aankhein kaha nam hui thi samundar ko bahana chahiye tha

[M A H i]

wah wah
8/10

Naam ki kya baat karte ho Log chehre tak bhool jate hain
Tum samander ki baat karte ho Log aankhon main doob jate hain.

[Owi]

7/10

Hum ko to roz-o-shab ka koi hosh hi na tha
Tu hi bata k hum teri aankhon mein kab rahay

[Shaam]

9/10


wo bara rahim o karim hai mujhey yah sift bhi ata karei
tujhey bhool ne ki dua karoo aur meri dua me asar na ho

[M A H i]

6/10

Bhulaanaa chaaha to bhulaane ki intehaa kar di
Woh shaKhs ab mere wahm-o-gumaan se bhi gayaa

[Shaam]

8/10

jab bhi tre khayal ka mausam huwa ek dost
hum dunya ki dhoop chaon sei agei nikal gaye

[M A H i]

8/10

Taaj-o-Takht gunwa diye yahan
Ishq ne kaisey khail hain khelay

[Shaam]

7/10

kuch na hota aur tera ishq hota tou bari baat hai
mei ne har pal ko jiya aur pal pal tera naam jiya

[DiE]

7/10

Khamoosh aey DIL bhari mehfil mai chillana nahi acha
adab pehla qareena hai mohabbat kai qareeno mai

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

8/10

aap ko aataa raha maire sataanay ka khiyaal
sulaaah se achee rahee mujh ko laraee aap kee

[M A H i]

6/10

Sukhan gulaab ko Kaanto'n mein tolne waale
Khudaa saleeqa-e-arz-e-hunar tujhe bhi de

[Shaam]

10/10
hum ne mana ke taghaful na karo ge lekin
khaak hojain ge tum ko khabar hone tak...

[ROSE]

8/10
Ye Saaniha Bhi Muhabbat Main Baar'ha Guzara
Ke Uss Ne Haal Bhi Poocha To Aankh Bhar Aaii

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

5

Ek bar agar tum rooth agye, hum tum ko mana hi lein gae magar
Ek bar agar hum rooth gaye, tum hum ko manana kya jano

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

7/10

zid mai duniyaa ke bahar haal millaa kartay thay
warnaa hum dono mai issi koee ulfaat bhi na thee

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

4/10

Hai Aur B Duniya Mein Sukhanwar Bahut Ache

Kehte Hai K Ghalib Ka Hai Andaaz -E- Bayan Aur

[M A H i]

Welcome here Faryal
8/10



Khush bhii ho lete haiN tere beqaraar
gham hii gham ho ishq mein, aisaa nahi

[Shaam]

7
han wo nahi khuda parast jao wo be wafa sahi
jis ko ho deen o dil aziz us ki gali me jaaye kio

[M A H i]

6/10

Sab ki nazron main ho saaqi ye zaroori he meger
Sab pe saaqi i nazer ho ye zaroori tu nahe

[Zafina]

8/10


تجھ سے تو کچھ کلام نہیں، لیکن اے ندیم!
میرا سلام کہیو اگر نامہ بر ملے

[M A H i]

Welcome here Zafina
nice shair

[Shaam]

7

isey kudh ka junoon kahoao ya tere dil ka chore
tujhey meri khamoshi me bhi apna koi fasana nazar aaye

[Owi]

6/10

Khuwaab ho ker reh gaya apnay liye
Jag uthnay ki saza moujood hai

Aasmaani ghantiyon k shour mein
Is badan ki her sada moujood hai

[life]

nice sharing

[Shaam]

10/10 : )

mujhey zameen ke musafir kia shikast detey
mera zameer bulandio me asmaan tak hai

[M A H i]

6/10

Apnay Apnay Zarf Apni Nazar ki baat hai
Kissi ko ZA'RRA Kissi ko AFTAAB lagay....

[Owi]

8/10

Raah-e-wafa mein ye andaaza ker liya hai ShihaaB
Gumaan na ho to yaqeen raasta banaata hai

[Shaam]

9/10

bohat khoob

yarab na wo samjhein hain na samjhein ge meri baat
dei unko dil dei ya mujh ko zabaan aur

[Miss Habib]

7/10 ....
Taqseem-e-Mohabbat mein bhi Kuch Ghum hi milay,
Phir bhi Shikayat hai ke Silay hi milay,
Ae Zindagi ! baat bata Zara HUMKO,
Kya Dil Dukane k liye tujhe HUM hi mile..??

[M A H i]

7/10

bhulaanaa chaah to bhulaane kii intehaa kar di
vo shaKhs ab mere vahm-o-gumaan se bhii gayaa

[Miss Habib]

8/10

Har mor per Mili Ghum ki Parchaiyaa,
Zindagi se Samjhota krne ki Adat hogaye,
Jantey the ke nhi ho sakte kabhi App Hamarey,
Phir bhi Khuda se Apko Mangney ki Adat hogaye...!!

[M A H i]

nice
8/10

Kuchh din to 'Naseer' aa-o chalo ghar meiN raha jaayey
LoagoN ko ye shikwa hai ke ghar par nahiN milta

[Owi]

9/10

Main teri khouj mein mabhoot phira kerta hoon
Main teray paas say guzroon to sada day dayna

[M A H i]

7/10

Zindagi tum yaheen kakeen rehna
Main zamana badal k aata hoon

[Owi]

8/10

Raah mein bheer bhi perti hai abhi say sun lo
Haath say haath mila hai to milaaye rakhna

[Miss Habib]

7/10

Waqt Aaj Ye Kis MuqaaM Par Le Aaya Hai,
Mujhe Apno Ne Hi Kyon Begana Banaya Hai,

[Shaam]

nice miss

8

rah e wafa kathin hai tumhi ne kaha thai
phir tum ko bicharne ka bahana bhi milgaya

[Miss Habib]

8/10

Bichra Woh Tu Phir Kuch Khoo Na Sakay Kuch Paa Na Sakay
Haal-E-Dil Hum Bata To Dete Raaz-E-Dil Hum Suna Tu Dete Magar

[Shaam]

7

aur sab kah kar sun kar yah sab ho tou ?

: )

hudd hai khair merei pass shair khatam.............

[M A H i]

:protest:

Bazm-e-hasti ! apni aarayish pe too naazaan na ho
tu to ik tasweer hai mehfil ki aur mehfil hun main

[Owi]

10/10

Uth k mehfil say matt chalay jaana
Tum say roshan ye kona kona hai

[Shaam]

10

guroor us pe bohat sajta hai magr kahdo
is me usi ka bhala hai guroor ko kam kardei
kisi ne choom ke ankho ko ya dua di
khuda zameen ter motio sei nam kardei

[~DiYa~]

8/10

Na jane Kis Tarah Ka Rishta hai Mera Tumhari Zaat Se.....
Tum Zara Sa Khamosh ho to Sansain Teher Si Jati Hain...!!

[Owi]

8/10

Kitna dil-kash hai teri yaad ka paala hua ashk
Seena-e-khaak pay mehtaab gira ho jaisay

[M A H i]

Welcome here
Diya

[Shaam]

8

sar e mahfil tamasha laga hua hai
ishq ke lia achi jagha mili sab ko........

[~DiYa~]

Thanks Mahi... :)

7

Kash Meri Zindagi Sy koi Is Tarah Bi Waqif Ho...
Mai Barish Mai Bi Rah'un Tho Wo Mere Ansu Pehchan Ly..!!

[M A H i]

7/10

Yeh Muhabbat bhi aik Naiki Hay

Ao Derya Main Daal Aatay Hain

[Shaam]

bohat khoob


acha zoq e intikhab hai Diya

[Shaam]

9


kaha tha sath nahi choro ge muhabbat rahey na rahey
muhabbat tou patey gaye tum sath chornei me jaldi ki

[Owi]

8/10

Tumhein khayaal nahi kis terhan bataayein tumhein
K saans chalti hai laykin udaas chalti hai

[~DiYa~]

Shukriya Shaam....
8

Teri Ibtitada bi Ansu, Teri Inteha bi Aahain....
Tu Hi bata Muhabat.... Tujhy Kis Bina Pe Chahain...??

[M A H i]

8

rukhsat k din bhigi ankhon us ka wo kahna ha "Qateel"
tum ko laut hi jana tha to is nagri kyun aye the

[Owi]

8/10

Tu apnay derd-e-mohabbat ki day misaal mujhay
Tu meray derd-e-mohabbat ko bay0misaal na ker

[M A H i]

9/10

Ranj-o-gham, zulm-o-sitam, dil-shikani, dil-sozi..
Apne ehsan bhala mujhko jtata kya hai

[Owi]

Dil mein roshan hein abhi tak teray waadon k chiraagh
Toot'ti raat k taaray hon farozaan jaisay

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

Owi Rate Kahaan hai ????? Chalo mai aap ko dai daita houn

8/10

Raaz-mohabbat kehny waley log tu lakhon miltey haien
Raaz-mohabbat rakhney wala hum sa dekhu hu tu kaho

[Miss Habib]

6/10

Hazaar Chehro Mein Hai
Teri Shabahatein Mili Mujh ko

Par Dil Ki Marzi Hai Agar Tu
Nahin Toh Tujh Sa Bhi Nahin

[Owi]

10/10

Guzer gaye hein bohat din rafaaqat-e-shab mein
Ik umer ho gai chehra wo chaand sa dekhay

Teray siwa bhi kai rung khush nazer thay mager
Jo tujh ko dekh chuka ho wo or kya dekhay.

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

9

Hum kO Acha Nahi Lagta kOI Hum Naam Tera ..
kOi Tujh Sa hO , To Naam B Tujh Sa Rakhe .. !

[Owi]

8/10

Ziker us ka hi sahi bazm mein bethay raho FaraZ
derd kaisa bhi utthay haath na dil per rakhna

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

10

Dard hO DIL Men To Dawa Kejiye ..
DIL He jUb Dard hO To Kia Kejiy ?

hUM Ko Faryad Karni Ati hAi ..
Aap Sunte Nahi To Kia Kejiye .. ?

[Owi]

9/10

Ramooz-e-ishq-o-mohabbat say main nahi waaqif
Rahi hai us ki zaroorat mujhay hawa ki terhan

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

Jaan Tum Pe Nisaar karta hOn ..
Men Nahi Janta Wafa Kia hAi . :)

[Owi]

10/10

Zara aagay chalo to izaafa-e-ilm hoga
Mohabbat pehlay pehlay bay-zarar maaloom hoti hai

[Miss Habib]

7/10

Chalta hoo’n to parhte hain qadam merey hawa par
Darta hoo’n hawa chalney sey inkaar na kar dey

[M A H i]

7/10

Woh ek mulaaqaat mein hairaan kar gayaa
Woh bazm se gayaa aur veeiraan kar gayaa

[Owi]

9/10

Wo mujh ko burf k toofaan mein kaisay chor gaya
Hawaa-e-serd mein bhi jab meri hifaazat ki

[M A H i]

8/10

Main Ne Koi Bayaan-e-Safayi Nahi Diya
Bas Chhup Raha Tu Khud Hi Wazahat Si Ho Gai

[Owi]

8/10

Mernay waalay to khair bay-bass hein
Jeenay waalay kamaal kertay hein

[M A H i]

10/10


Zindagi bhar juda nahi hoty
Dard bhi ba'asool hoty hain

[Owi]

Zindagi teri khaatir teray derd mandon nay
Ik jahaan ki tohmat apnay sir uthaai hai

[Shaam]

7/10

hum ne maana ke taghaful na karo ge lekin
khaak hojain ge tum ko khabar honei tak...

[Owi]

10/10

Hum ko aapas mein mohabbat nahi kernay daytay
Aik yehi aib hai is sheher k danaaon mein

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

7

Muj Ko Meri He Udaasi Se Nikaale kOi ..
Men Muhabbat Hon , Muhabbat kO Bacha Le kOi ..!

[Owi]

8/10

Mohabbat bhi kya cheez hai dekhna
Idher baat ki, chashm-e-terr ho gai

[ROSE]

8/10



'Faiz' dilon k bhag main hai ghar basana bhi lut jana bhi
tum us husn k lutf-o-karam par kitne din itraoge

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

Hmm .. 9

Faiz Ka He Shair hAi ..

DonOn Jahan Teri Muhabbat Men Haar K ..
Wo Jaa Rha hAI Koi , Shabb-e-Gham Guzaar K .. !

[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

zabardast yara

9/10

Hujoom - e - Ghum mairee haalat badal nahee sakta
Mai kiya karoon, mujhey aadat hai muskuraney kee

[M A H i]

7/10

Tere Hijjar Mein Ye Pata Chala ''Wasi''

K Meri Umar Kitni Daraz Hai...!!

[P A L]

8/10


jab us ne mujh sei jaan mangi me kaisey na deta
chonk uthey they farishtey bhi us ka andaz e dua dekh kar

[M A H i]

PAL
WELCOME HERE
do I know u ?

8/10
Aarzoo Hai Kisi Bachay Ke Khilonay Ki Terah,
Dil Ussi Kaanch Ki Gurdia Se Behlta Daikhoun

[P A L]

Thanks Miss Mahi
new on this forum but not new on forums
and what else u want to know.

9/10
bachey gurya baad me tor detey hain


Us Adoo-e-Jaan Ko Amjad Kese Mein Bura Kahoon
Jab Bhi Aaya Saamne, Wo Bewafa Acha Laga

[M A H i]

very nice PAL
very very nice

10/10

Wo Murawat Se Mila Hai To Jhuka Don Gardan
Mere Dushman Ka Koi Waar Na Khali Jaye

[P A L]

thanks for liking it Miss Mahi.
9/10
han hota hai

related to ur shair

hum tou aisey murawwat ke maarei they
us ne zindagi mangi aur hum se inkar na hua

[Owi]

5/10

Wo bhi kya log hein jo baat ko tabdeel karein
Jhooti izzat k liye zaat ko tabdeel karein

[ROSE]

8/10

maidan-e-wafa darbar nahion yan nam-o-nasab k puch kahan
ashiq to kisi ka nam nahin kuch ishq kisi ki zat nahin


gar bazi ishq ki bazi hai jo chaho laga do dar kaisa
gar jit gae to kya kahna hare bhi to bazi mat nahin

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

6 ..

@ Ik MOhabbat Ka Mashghala Le Kar
Zindagi Khoob Ki Taba Hum Ne

[M A H i]

6 ..

@ Ik MOhabbat Ka Mashghala Le Kar
Zindagi Khoob Ki Taba Hum Ne



10/10

Na Wasta tha kisi Shair say
Na Shayarri say thi main Ashna
Teri Yaad nay, Tere Dard nay
Mujhay Shair kehna Sikha dia> !

[Shaam]

ishq mujh ko nahi wehshat hi sahi
meri wehshat teri shohrat hi sahi

[Ghuncha]

WooOow ...

[pensive]

In Barish Ki Boondun Mein Na Jane Kis Ke Ansoo Hein
Sadioon Pehly Shaid Koi Sadiyon Beth K Roya Tha !!!

[M A H i]

where is Rating?

5/10

Kia Ghazab Hain k Hijar K Din Bhi,
Zindagi Mein Shumaar Hotey Hain ..!!

[Miss Habib]

10/10

Ye arzoo thi k hum uss k saath saath chalain
Magar wo shakhs to raasta badlta jata hai

[M A H i]

10/10

chaltii raahon mein yuun hii aaNkh lagii hai 'Saahib'
bheer logon kii hataa do ki main zindaa huun abhi : S

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

Qafs-e-Hijar Men SasnOn Ka Amal Jari To hAi Lekin ..
Zindgee hAi Kahan , Dhund Raha hOn .. !

[ROSE]

9

tujhe chand ban k mila tha jo tere sahilon pe khila tha jo
vo tha ek dariya visal ka so utar gaya use bhul ja

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

Wahh bohat Khoob .. :)

Chand Ka Kardaar Apnaya hAi Hum Ne DostOo ..
Dagh Apne Pass Rakhe , Roshni Banta Kiye .. :)

[ROSE]

THANKS

8/10

zulm ye hai ke hai yaqta teri beganaravi
lutf ye hai ke main ab tak tujhe apna samjhun

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

Duniya Ne Teri Yaad Se Begana Kar Dia
Tujh Se B Dilfareb Hen Gham Roz Gaar K ..!

[ROSE]

9/10

ye rakh-rakhao muhabbat sikha gai us ko
wo ruth kar bhi mujhe muskura k milta hai

[Owi]

Mohabbat aik samander hai wo bhi itna baseet
K is mein koi tasaw'wurr nahi kinaaray ka

[M A H i]

Where is Rating?

7/10

''Dasht main ye khabar hai Garam
Loog darya se aaye hain jall kay''

[Owi]

10/10
Zaberdast Mahi


Kuch is terhan say aatish-e-haalaat mein jalay
Jaisay koi deriya bhari bersaat mein jalay

[M A H i]

10/10
Owi

Aaj Se Seekh Liya Hai Ye Qareena Hum Ne..
Bujh Bhi Jana To Barri Deir Sulagtey Rehna!

[Owi]

10/10
Zaberdast Mahi

Bohat udaas ho deewar-o-derr k jalnay say
Mujhay bhi theek say dekho jala to main bhi hoon

[M A H i]

9/10

''Dil Jo HaI '' AAg Laga doon is Ko
Or Phr Khud He hawa Doon Is KO...!!!

[Owi]

10/10
Nice One

Apnay ander hi mujhay ab nazer aa jaati hai
Ronaq-e-dasht bhi weeraani-e-aabaadi bhi

[M A H i]

7/10

Koi taweez ho radd'e'bala ka
Mery pichhy Mohabat parr gai hai

[Owi]

9/10

Murshidi bas mujhay taweez-e-tasalli deejiye
Itna kahiye k wo is baar palat aaye ga

[M A H i]

8/10

Koi dawa na de sake, Mashwara Dua diya
Charagaron ne aur bhi Dil ka Dard barha diya

[Shaam]

7/10

Beqarari Meri dekh li hai tou ab Zabt bhi dekhna,
Itna khamosh Rahunga Main k cheekh Utheyga Tu...

[M A H i]

kia baat hai

10/10


Aankho'n me aagyi'n thi'n bala ki Samaa'ate'n
Khamosh tha wo shakhs magar Sun raha tha main!!

[Shaam]

9/10

hain bare ajeeb se wastey keh gurez pa sabhi rastey
wo teri nigah ke fasley yah meri nazar ki musafatein

[Miss Habib]

8/10

Khushhal say tum bhi lagtay ho, yon afsurda to ham bhi nahi
Per jan'nay walay jantay hain , khush ham bhi nahin khush tum bhi nahi

[Shaam]

8/10

yeh baazi ishq ki baazi hai jo chaho lagado dar kaisa
jo jeet gaye tou kia kehna, haar bhi gaye tou maat nahi.

[Zafina]

5/10

Mujhay us nay kaha aao nai dunya basatay hain

Usay soojhi shararat thi, yeh dil kuch aur samjha tha

[Shaam]

5/10

Mujhay us nay kaha aao nai dunya basatay hain

Usay soojhi shararat thi, yeh dil kuch aur samjha tha

sharam tou aati nahi :@


aur tum ne meri pasandeda tareen ghazalo me sei shair share kia

10/10

muhabbat ki rutein tou sada rahti hain
yah aur baat hai ke loge hain mausamo ki tarha

[Zafina]

sharam tou aati nahi :@


aur tum ne meri pasandeda tareen ghazalo me sei shair share kia

10/10

muhabbat ki rutein tou sada rahti hain
yah aur baat hai ke loge hain mausamo ki tarha

kekekeke Mujhy kio sharam aye ge :D
Khair is shair k liye :D Zero de du ? :P lol

Ok 8/10

Hamesha us ki aankhon main Dhanak kay rang hotay thay
Yeh us ki aam aadat thi, yeh dil kuch aur samjha tha

Hahahaha ab phir sai full mark dein :D :D

[Owi]

8/10

Kitnay saadah hein k hum piyaar bohat maangtay hein
Or ye silsilay esaar bohat maangtay hein

Bachchon jaisi hein zidein meri tamannaaon ki
Meray dukh apnay azaa-daar bohat maangtay hein

[M A H i]

8/10

Ruka hai jab se negahon mein hijr ka mosam
Ye maah-o-saal mere be khabar se guzre hain
Jinhen sanwaar gai teri qurbaton ki mehek
Woh chand lamhe bare mukhtasir se guzre hain

[Miss Habib]

8/10

Apna Be Dard MujhKo Mere Razdar De..
Kuch Apni Zindagi Pe Mujhe Ikhtiar De..
Esa Na Ho Ke Kal Tu Mera Sath Chor De..
Jitna Nibha Ske Mujhe Utna Hi Pyar De..

[Owi]

7/10

Naghma-e-derd say ho jaata hai aalam maamoor
Is terhan chairta hai taar-e-rug-e-jaan koi

[Zafina]

5/10
Hum Nay Ik Hasrat - E - Tabasum Ko

Kitnay Aansoo Pilaa K Paala Hain.

[Miss Habib]

6/10

Tujhe khawabon main aksar log mujh se cheen lete hain
Suna hai sare Khawabon ki ulat Taaber hoti hai

[M A H i]

right
8/10

Huwi ju shaam tu aankho'n main bas gaya tuu
kahan gaya mere shehr ke musafir tuu

[Shaam]

8/10

us ko pana tha magr paya nahi
yah hua kudh ko khona agaya.......

[M A H i]

6/10
(is say acha hai mere zehen mein)

Tere ird gird hain ghoomty meri zindagi k maamley
tujhe dhondne k shooq mein mene apna aap ganwa dia

[Shaam]

6/10
(is say acha hai mere zehen mein)

Tere ird gird hain ghoomty meri zindagi k maamley
tujhe dhondne k shooq mein mene apna aap ganwa dia

bohat khoob ... hamesha ki tarha


10/10

yah baazi muhabbat jo chaho lagado dar kaisa
jo jeet gaye tou kia kehna jo haar bhi gaye tou maat nahi

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

Yeh Baazi Ishq Ki Baazi hAi , jO Chahe Lga Do Darr Kesa
Gar Jeet Gay To Kia Kehna , Haare B To Baazi Maat Nahi .. :)

[Shaam]

Yeh Baazi Ishq Ki Baazi hAi , jO Chahe Lga Do Darr Kesa
Gar Jeet Gay To Kia Kehna , Haare B To Baazi Maat Nahi .. :)

acha bhai : )

[M A H i]

9/10
Thnx Sim


Kaun Kahata Hai Ki Mohabbat Ki Koi Umra Nahi hoti,
Humne To Ishq Ko Lamha-Lamha Dam Todte dekha Hai...!!

[Shaam]

9

barei shauq sei sun raha tha zamana
humhi sogaye dastaan kehtey kehtey

[M A H i]

7/10

Ghum Ko Chupa liya hai Libas-e-nasht main
Dunia samjh rahi hai main bohut Shad mai hoon

[Shaam]

8

kabhi fursatain jo naseeb hon to chaley aana mere paas tum
hen adhoorey kitny muamley, meri zaat sy teri zaat tak..!

[M A H i]

10/10

Ab kay ajeeb Karb mein tujh se juda howay
rasmi mukaalmay bhi na hum se ada howay

[Shaam]

10


Aks dar aks koe kerta hai
aainey ki braberi mujh main............

[Haadi]

10

I never knew there would be a better tomorrow
But you've come into my life and taken away all my sorrow

My days of sadness are a thing of the past
Because I have found true love at last

My days of emptiness are gone for good
Because you fill a void in my heart that you should

You've opened a window
You've shown me the light
And my love for you will continue to burn bright.

[Shaam]

nice one Haadi and welcome here...

Love : )

Allah tum sab logo ki dil ki dunya ... ankhon ki qandeel ki tarha roshan rakhey ameen : )

for ur selection 10


Main chahta hi na tha use Lajawab karna.....
Warna jawab mere paas us k har sawal ka tha.....

Uski jeet se hoti thi khushi mujhko.....
Yhi jawab mere pas apni haar ka tha...!!!

[M A H i]

10/10

Aks paani ka ager qaid kiya ja sakta
Aain mumkin tha main us shakhs ko apna sakta

[Haadi]

10

Saari Duniya ki Muskaan Tare pass hai,
Ye Zameen or Asman Tere Paas Hai,
Gham na karna k tujhe yaad nahin krtey
Aye dost mari to JAAN bhi tere pass hai

thanks shaam bhai for wonderful wishes

[Shaam]

8


bohot ajeeb hain yeh bandishen muhabbat ki.....
na usne qaid main rakha na hum faraar hue........... : )

[Haadi]

9

jab mayassar ho saaGar-o-miinaa
barq_paaron ko phuul kahataa hun

[M A H i]

7


kya kahen jab se maseeha koi aya hai idhar….
Shahr ka shahr hi beemar nazar aata hai….

[Owi]

8/10

Urnay K Waastay Kisi Jhonkay K Muntazir
Bethay Huway Hein Khaak Ki Maanind Raah Mein

[M A H i]

7/10

Roohan'iat Sy Pata Hai Insan Bar'tari,
Kuch Ko YaQeen ROOH Hai Kuch Ka Gumaan ROOH..!!

[Shaam]

8

mana ke bohat qeemti hai waqt tumhara
anmol tou hum bhi hain yah tum ne hi kaha tha

[M A H i]

7/10

Is Raah-e-Wafa Ki Tum Baat Na Pocho Tou Acha Hai
Anmol Jo Hoty Hain Bemol Bik Jaate Hain Aksar . . .

[Shaam]

9

jab tak bika na tha tab tak pata na tha
tune khareed ke mujhey anmol kardia...

[M A H i]

ahaan
10/10

Izhaar-E-Dil Kise Se Koi Kar Nahi Sakta
Ishq Ban Gaya Khilona ,Subha-O-Shaam Bikta Hai

[Shaam]

9

usuf na they magr sar e bazaar agaye
khusfehmi yah ke khareedaar agaye
awaz deke chup gai har baar zindagi
hum itne sada dil ke harbaar agaye

[M A H i]

6

Wafa hoti agar khoon k rishton mein
Yousuf na bikta Miser k bazaron mein

[iqra]

7.
Usy hairat hai k us k pas kiun kuch nhi rehta
Wo apni zaat sy jb b mujhy tafreeq krta hai!!

[Miss Habib]

9....

Zaalim thaa wo aur zulm ki aadat bhi bahut thi
Majbur the ham us se muhabbat bhi bahut thi

[M A H i]

nice...^
10/7

" Fursat MiLey Joo, Taj kii Taameer se ..
Nanha saa, Pursakoon sa ek, Ghar Taraashna ''

[Shaam]

hmmm

9


Chlo rakhty hen" wafa" unwan-e-guftagu..........
phr dekhty hen mehfil mein rehta ha kon kon!!

[M A H i]

nice...
10/10

Wafa hai shart chahat ki per zara mujhko bataana
ke is dor-e-khudgarzi mein wafa ab kaun karta hai?

[Miss Habib]

..9

aaj dil ki bat zaban tak lana kitna mushkil hai.
haal e dil aoroon ko sunana kitna mushkil hai.
aik humain hai teri chahat,aik dunya ki majbori.
bech samandar diya jalana kitna mushkil hai.
tum dunya kay shedai ho,main sapnoon ka bashinda.
saath humain yun tera nibhana kitna mushkil hai.

[M A H i]

7

''Tera Khayal Bohat Dair Tak Nahi Rahta
Koi Mallal Bohat Dair Tak Nahi Rahta
Uddas Karti Hai Akser Thumari Yaad Mujhay
Mager Ye Haal Bohat Dair Tak Nahi Rahta ''

[Miss Habib]

8.........

Ik aag ghum-e-tanhai ki jo sare badan mein phail gai
Jab jism hi sara jalta ho phir daman-e-dil ko bachaye kia

[M A H i]

very nice Miss :handshake:
10/10

Haayey wo yaad k jis yaad ko ho kar majboor
Dil-e-maayoos ne muddat se bhula rakkha hai

[Miss Habib]

8......

Yehi Sochte Sochte Hum Ek Dosre Ko Kho Dengay Ek Din
DOST

Wo Mujhe Yad Nahi Karta To Men Usey Kyun Yad Karon

[M A H i]

8/10

Aye raat k andheraay mein jagay howay lamho'n
Dhoondhoo ossay wo khawaab-e Preshaan ki tarah tha

[Miss Habib]

7...

phele bhi loog aye kitne hi zindagi main
woh har tarah se lakin orron se tha juda sa
tever thay be-rookhi kay, andaaz doosti ka
woh ajnabhi tha lakin lagta tha aashna sa.

[M A H i]

7/10

Meri dharakanon mein hai chaap si,
Ye judaai bhi hai milaap si,
Mujhe kya pata, mere dil bata,
Mere saath kya koi aur hai ?

[Owi]

7/10

Meri Aankhon Mein Ratt-jagaY Dekho
Doston Meray Hoslay Dekho

Door Reh Ker Bhi Meray Paas Hai Wo
Yaani Ulfat K Mu'ajzay Dekho.

[M A H i]

:good:
9/10


Woh Acha hai to acha hai, Bura hai toh bhi acha hai...
Mizaaj-e-Ishq main Aaib-o-Hunar dekhey nahi jaatey!

[Owi]

8/10

Muskuraatay Raho Saamnay Beth Ker
Mujh Say Baatein Karo Saamnay Beth Ker

Meri Chouti Si Khuwaahish Hai Poori Karo
Tum Kabhi Na Uttho Saamnay Beth Ker !

[Miss Habib]

7 .......

Masroofiat se wabasta hai ye zindagi meri
Khuda gawah hai k phir bhi tujhe bohat yaad karte hain

[M A H i]

7/10

Kabhi Tora, Kabhi Jora, Kabhi Phir Toor Ke Jora
Isi Paiwand-Kaari Ne Shikasta Kar Dia Dil Ko…..!!!

[Owi]

8/10

Roz Khuwaahish Badan Ko Cheerti Hai
Roz Ummeed Toot'tii Hai Koi ... !

[M A H i]

10/10

'' Qabil-e-daad ye ankhain hain k in ankho'n sy
Khud hi paamaal huey khud hi tmasha daikhA ''

[Owi]

9/10

A Kaash Tu Bhi Sunta Kabhi Aahaton Ki Goonj
Tu Bhi Meri Terhan Say Kabhi Dhoondta Mujhay

[M A H i]

7/10

'' Hum bewafa hain to ae jaan-e-wafa yun hi sahi
Dhoond lena jo koi hum sa wafadaar mileY . . . ''

[Owi]

7/10

Mujh Ko Nazer-andaaZ Na Ker Jaan Ker Bay-jaaN
Perh Mujh Ko Her Ik Lafz Asar-daaR Hai Mera

[Razii]

:rules:
The rules are simple...

You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate the shair from 1 to 10 out of 10.
And also write your shair.


NOTE: SHARE ONLY SHAIR
:thanks:

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''Zyada Gor Bhi Acha Nahin Hai Aisi Baaton Par
Kisi Ka Naam Likh Likh Kar Mitaana Uss Ki Aadat HaI''

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Nice thread Mahi :)

[Razii]

Itne masroof ho gaey ho tum
Dil dukhaane bhi ab nahin aate

[Miss Habib]

7/10

Rabtay had se jab barh jayein to gham miltay hain
Hum isi waste har shakhs se kam miltay hain

[Alia]

6/10


Khakasri ke liye gar ceh banaya tha mujhe ,
Kash Khak dar jana nah banaya hota ......!

[M A H i]

Thanks Razii & Alia for joining us,
welcome here : )

9/10 ^

Us Ne Kahaa ''.....'' Meraa Haath Thaamna ..
Chaaron Taraf Se Haath Namuudaar Ho Gaye..!!

[Razii]

Thanks Mahi :)

Actually mein is liye nhen aa raha tha kiu k mujhe shair mushkil se pasand ata hai, to kam marks daine pe kisi ki dil aazari na ho. .ap ne tag kiya to majbooran ana parra :)

[PRINCE SHAAN]

8
..............................

کتنی مختلف تھی وہ
سب سے منفرد تھی وہ
اپنی ایک لغزش سے
میں نے کھو دیا اسکو
اب بھی ہر دسمبر میں
اسکی یاد آتی ہے

[Miss Habib]

7/10

Roz-o-shab k mailay mein
Ghaflaton k maaray hum
Shayad ye samjhte hain
Hum ne jisko dafnaya
Bus ussi ko marna tha

[DiE]

7

Dukh day kar sawaal kartey ho
Tum bhi GHAALiB ! kamal kartey ho

Marnaa chaahain tou mar nahe saktey
tum bhi jeenaa muhaal kartey ho

ab kis kis ki misaal doon tum ko
her sitam be-misaal kartey ho

[M A H i]

Thanks Mahi :)

Actually mein is liye nhen aa raha tha kiu k mujhe shair mushkil se pasand ata hai, to kam marks daine pe kisi ki dil aazari na ho. .ap ne tag kiya to majbooran ana parra :)



Its a Shayri Game section , mera nahi khayaal k yahan kissi ko itna sochnay ka time hai k kia rating mili,
anyways thanks for ur reply TC

[M A H i]

7

Dukh day kar sawaal kartey ho
Tum bhi GHAALiB ! kamal kartey ho

Marnaa chaahain tou mar nahe saktey
tum bhi jeenaa muhaal kartey ho

ab kis kis ki misaal doon tum ko
her sitam be-misaal kartey ho



10/10
WB DiE

Is Zindagi ko jeene ke liye ek Bahana darkaaar tha
Aap gham dete gaye aur hamari basar hoti gayi . . .

[DiE]

8
thx M A H i :)

na deed hai na sukhan ab na harf hai na payam
koi bhi hila e taskeen nahi or aas bht hai
ummeed e yaar nazar ka mizaj dard ka rang
tum aaj kuch bhi na pocho k dil udas bht hai

[Razii]

Its a Shayri Game section , mera nahi khayaal k yahan kissi ko itna sochnay ka time hai k kia rating mili,
anyways thanks for ur reply TC



I think ap ko thora sa bura laga shaid :)

[M A H i]

Razii mujhe Acha ya Bura bhout kam lagta hai don't worry
Stay on Topic
Thanks!

8
thx M A H i :)

na deed hai na sukhan ab na harf hai na payam
koi bhi hila e taskeen nahi or aas bht hai
ummeed e yaar nazar ka mizaj dard ka rang
tum aaj kuch bhi na pocho k dil udas bht hai

9/10

'' Buht Dinon Se Koi Wardaat Bhi Na Hui
Udaas Log Hain Aur Shehr Main Hai Sanata ''

[DiE]

9
nyc

un ka jo kaam hai wo ehl e siyasat janey
mera paigham mohbbat hai jaha tak phonche

[Razii]

Very nice one from Jigar Murad Abadi 9/10

Utha kar choom li hain chand murjhayi huwi kaliyaan
Na tum aey to yun jashn-e-baharaan kar liya mein ne

(Saghir Siddiqui)

[DiE]

Very nice one from Jigar Murad Abadi 9/10

Utha kar choom li hain chand murjhayi huwi kaliyaan
Na tum aey to yun jashn-e-baharaan kar liya mein ne

(Saghir Siddiqui)



Nyc 1 Raziii

9

wo mai saaf ku na keh dun johai farq tujh mai mujh mai
tera dard dard e tanha mera gham gham e zamana

(jigar muradabadi)

[Miss Habib]

7/10

Mere dard ka, Mre zabt ka, Meri be-bsi, Mer sabr ka,
Jo yaqeen na aye to daikh le, tu hawa ma phool uchhal kr.

[DiE]

8

http://i41.tinypic.com/c496s.jpg

[Miss Habib]

7.....

Mitana chaho to bhi mita na payo gai uss ka naam dil say
Mitaye wo jate hai jo ghalti say likhe jayen

[M A H i]

7/10

'' Buhot Mushkil Hai Duniya Ka Sanwarna
Teri Zulfon Ka Pech-O-Kham Nahin Hai ''

[DiE]

8 lol

kahin tham na jaen ye barishen, kahin chat na jaey ye ABR bhi
meri chashm e tar k hafeez ab mery ansuon ka hisab kar

[Razii]

7

Tash'khees baja hai k mujhay ishq huwa hai
Nus'khay main likho un se mulaqat musalsal!

[M A H i]

Lovely
10/10


'' Milne se Gurezaa'n hain Na-milne pe Khafa bhi

Dam tordti Chahat hai Kis andaz ka Rishta? ''

[Zafina]

8/10
قیس جنگل میں اکیلا ہے مجھے جانے دو
خوب گذرے گی جو مل بیٹھیں گے دیوانے دو

[M A H i]

9/10
Very Nice Zafina
nyc to c u : )

''Maayusiyo'n ki goud main dam tordataa hai Ishq
Aab bhi koi banaa lay to bigari nahi hai baat''

[DeV!L]

unfortunate i dont know about anything poetry so i just came here to say its nice one even cant give yeah rate cuz i dont know meaning of this such a beautifull words but keep it up, cheers

[M A H i]

unfortunate i dont know about anything poetry so i just came here to say its nice one even cant give yeah rate cuz i dont know meaning of this such a beautifull words but keep it up, cheers

hmm...
Welcome to my Thread DeV!l And many thanks for such a sweet Compliments
Keep Visiting and Shairing your Comments

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

Muhabbat Aam Sa Ek Waqeya Tha
Hamare Sath Paish Aane Se Pehle ..!

[DiE]

9

Dawar e hashr ! mujhe teri qasam
umer bhar mai nai ebadat ki hai
tu mera nama e aamaal to dekh
mai nai insan se Mohabbat ki hai

[Miss Habib]

7.....

Ana ka masla darpaish hai warna haqeeqat mein
Usse meri, mujhe uski kami mehsoos hoti hai

[M A H i]

9/10

'' Zamaane se Adaavat kaa sabab thi Dosti jin ki,
Ab un ko Dushmani hai ham se, Dunya iss ko kehte haiN ''

[Miss Habib]

9.....

tere jaisa koi milta nahi hai
tere jaisa magar dhoonda bohot hai

chalo ab mout ka samaan kar lain
keh jeena to yahan mehenga bohot hai

[M A H i]

WAH...
10/10
:good:

'' Hans k Runj-o-Musibat Ko Saha Hai Hum Ne

Is Umeed Per k Kal Aaj Se Behter Hoga ''

[Miss Habib]

9......

Mery Dard_e_Dil Ko Kuraid Mat Meri Hasraton Ko Na Hawa De

Teri Shokhion Say Ne Chal Pary Kahin Phir Purana Silsila

[M A H i]

kia baat hai
:bu:
10/10

'' Dil k toot jane par ab Malal kia karna?

Pathron ki basti mein Aaiene to Tootain ge ''

[DiE]

8

Zabat e gham ab to pathar kar dia warna faraz
Daikhta koi k dil k zakham jab ankhon mai they

[Miss Habib]

7------

Be Wajah Usne Jane Kyu Duri Kar di,

Bichhad Ke Mohabbat Hi Adhuri Kar di.
Meri Qismat Me Gham Aye To Kya???

Khuda Ne Uski Khwahish To Puri Kar di!!!

[M A H i]

8/10


'' Zamana Jab Teri Raftar Ki Tareef Karta Hai
Mujhe Apni Tabiyat Ki Rawani Yaad Ati Hai ''

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

Yun Na JhankOo Gareeb K DIL Men ..
Hasraten Be Naqab Rehti Hen .. !

[M A H i]

Yun Na JhankOo Gareeb K DIL Men ..
Hasraten Be Naqab Rehti Hen .. !

Ghaliban bari jaldi mein thay k RATE kerna he bhool gaye aap^

7/10

''Ajab hai dar Muhabat ka jo marzi per nahi khulta
Nahi chalta yahan sim sim , kisi ko Dosh kia dain hum ''?

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

oOoPS :D

Hayeee ...

Tere Hijar Men Yeh Pata Chala Hai ..
Meri Umar Kitni Daraaz Hai .. :)

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

BB Yeh Rate Humen Nh Aate .. Naap Toll Khudi Kar Lo .. :) Agr LafzOn Ka Naap Toll Kr Skti HO To .. :)

[Miss Habib]

7..........

Is as par har aaine ko jor rahi hoon

Shayad koi reza mere chehre ka pata de

[M A H i]

BB Yeh Rate Humen Nh Aate .. Naap Toll Khudi Kar Lo .. :) Agr LafzOn Ka Naap Toll Kr Skti HO To .. :)

tu kia zarorat hai post kerne ki bhi
:Allah-hafiz:

[M A H i]

7..........

Is as par har aaine ko jor rahi hoon

Shayad koi reza mere chehre ka pata de



7/10


Jaan-o-Dil,Hosh-o-Khirad,Sabr-o-Qarar to le Chukay
Aur Bhi Kuch hai Ussay Darkaar , K Bas ...... ?

[Miss Habib]

8----------

Kaash tu bhi sunta kabhi aahato ki gunj

Meri hi tarah tu bhi kabhi dhundhta mujhe

[M A H i]

:bu:
10/10


'' Taa Ke Duniya Kii Dil-Kashii Na Ghate
Nit Naye Pairahan Main Aayaa Karo ''

[Miss Habib]

Chaha kar bhi maut ko galey nahi laga saki

Ke aakhir raagon mein jaan toh uski hai

[- ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм -]

Hmm .. Nice Miss Habib

Yeh Muhabbat B Aik Naiki hAi
Aao Darya Men Daal Den

[Razii]

8/10..............I think it's like,

Ye muhabbat bhi ek naiki hai
Is ko darya main daal atay hain.............


"Yadon ki shaal orh k awara gardiyaan
Kaati hain yoon bhi hum ne december ki sardiyan"

[M A H i]

tu kia zarorat hai post kerne ki bhi
:Allah-hafiz:

BB Yeh Rate Humen Nh Aate .. Naap Toll Khudi Kar Lo .. :) Agr LafzOn Ka Naap Toll Kr Skti HO To .. :)


ѕΙıΙм .. ѕΙıΙм you can not create your own rules here. . .
So if u willing to post here you're requested to perform the steps which are mentioned in a Thread ,
Thanks : )

[M A H i]

"Yadon ki shaal orh k awara gardiyaan
Kaati hain yoon bhi hum ne december ki sardiyan"





7/10

Sub khety hain bhout Weeraan hota hai December
Koi yeh tou baataye koun c bahaar le k aya hai January?

[Miss Habib]

7.......

Ro pari hai January bhi yaad-e-December pe
Mausam ne, Mausam ka akhir bharam to rakh lia

[PRINCE SHAAN]

9


Zakhmi Huey Jo Hont Tu Mehsoos Yeh Hua
Chooma Tha Mein Ne Phool Ko Deewangi ke Saath

[Miss Habib]

8.........

Wo yaad bhi ab k aya hai or jaag uthi hai khuwahish bhi,
Taza dard, Sard hawa hai or saal ki pehli barish bhi

[M A H i]

9/10
NYC signature MISS

'' Ger zaban khol bhi dain, na raaz na bhaid pao ge,
Ye ishq ka khail hai, Sahib-e-Haal hona parrta hai ''

[Razii]

7/10

Ajeeb tarah se nakaam rahay hum dono
Wo mujhe chah na saka, mein usay bhula na saka

[M A H i]

9/10
nyc 1 Razii

'' Tumhein ab kia bataa'ein us pari ka lams kesaa tha,
Hamaary hont jalty hein agar izhaar karty hain ! ! !''

[Miss Habib]

9.........

Suna hai ek aur zindagi hai zindagi ke baad bhi
Yahan nahi mille toh chalo mar ke dekhte hai

[Miss Habib]

9/10
NYC signature MISS

'' Ger zaban khol bhi dain, na raaz na bhaid pao ge,
Ye ishq ka khail hai, Sahib-e-Haal hona parrta hai ''

thanksss mahi,
chalo g kisi ko to siggy pasand aya :bhug:

[De$!_GuRL]

****************9******************


Ae Humsafar Tujay Kiya Khaber
Teri Rah Guzar Meri Sajda Gah
Teri Ik Nazer Meri Zindagi
Teri Bai Rukhi Meri Mout Hai..........

[Miss Habib]

9.....

Kissi ki jaan jayegi toh jaan jaoge

Ke haasil kuch nahi hota kisi ko aazmaane se

[De$!_GuRL]

9.....

Kissi ki jaan jayegi toh jaan jaoge

Ke haasil kuch nahi hota kisi ko aazmaane se



*******9************


Meray Pukhta Iraday Khud Meri Taqdeer Badlain Gay
Meray Hath Nahi Mohtaj Kismat Ki Lakeeron Kay.:)

[Miss Habib]

sorry desi girl
shair ki correction kar lo

Mere pukhta iraday khud meri taqdeer badlay gain Iqbal
Meri qismat mohtaj nahi hathon ki lakeeron ki

its my most fav

[M A H i]

Meray Pukhta Iraday Khud Meri Taqdeer Badlain Gay
Meray Hath Nahi Mohtaj Kismat Ki Lakeeron Kay.:)

10/10

'' Kabhi Saya hai Kabhi Dhoop Muqaddar mera

Hota rehta hai Yunhi Qarz Barabar mera ''

[DiE]

9

Waqt kai sath anaasar bhi rahe sazish mai
jal gaye pairr kabhi dhoop kabhi barish mai
us ki ankhen bhi meri tarah se girdi kahin or
khawb ka qarz barh jata hai ik khawish mai

[M A H i]

10/10
very nice

'' Chalo phir se sochtay hain
k Mein tujh se na Ashanasa
k tu mujh se Ajnabi hai
Yeh jo Rasm-e-Dosti hai
Yeh rahay to Jaa'n Salaamat
na rahay to phir bhi Jana'n
Tera Gham Sambhalnay ko
Abhi Zindagi pari hai ''

[DiE]

10

Tark e rasm e dosti
hargiz mera maslak na
tha
Ittefaqan doston se
raabtey kam ho
gaey

[De$!_GuRL]

*********************9********************

Ajab Rawish Hai Tere Mizaj-e-Be’Niazi Ki,
Jo Hum Yaad Karein
To Masroof Hai Tu,
Jo Tu Yaad Kary
To Ehsaan Tera..

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

Dunya Mein Mat Dhoond Naam-E- Wafa Faraz
Dilon Se Khelte Hein Log Bana Ke Humsafar Apna

[mosinriaz]

10

Woh Chahta To hai Bohat, Magar Kabhi Izhaar Nahi Karta,
Thora Nadaan Hai, Samajhta Hai, Shayad Koi Us Say Pyaar Nahi Karta

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

Siix

Kis Kis Ko Bataen Ge Judai Ka Sabab Hum
Tu Mujh Se Khafa Hai To Zamany K Liye Aa
Ranjish Hi Sahi Dil Hi Dukhany K Liye Aa

[mosinriaz]

6

Dost Bhi Kia Khoob Wafaon Ka Silla Detay Haen,
Her Naye Morr Per, Zakhm Ik Naya Detay Haen

[(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)]

FOurr

Koun Kisi K Sath Kitna Mukhlis Hai Faraz
Waqt Sab Ki Aukaat Bta Deta Hai