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life2
12-03-2010, 10:54 PM
daldal thi zindagi so main dhansta chala gaya.
main apni bebasi pe youn hansta chala gaya.

pehlay dikha rahi thi mujhhay manzilon k khwaab
phir mery samnay se woh rasta chala gaya.

main ro para tha jjis ki judai ko soch kar wasi,
wo shaks mere haal pe hansta chala gaya.

main khud lipat gaya tha jisay yaar jan kar
woh saanp ki tarha mujhay dasta chalagya.

nadia88
12-04-2010, 08:55 AM
really an awesome poetry

SHAYAN
12-04-2010, 05:36 PM
Nice...

life2
12-05-2010, 06:58 AM
thanx shayan..?& nadia.

!«╬Ĵamil Malik╬«!
12-10-2010, 10:01 AM
Nice...

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