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RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
11-14-2010, 05:56 PM
wo larki bhi aik ajeeb paheli thi
piyasay hount thay aankh jesay sumander thi

suraj is ko dekh k peela parta tha
wo sarma ki dhoop mein dhul kar nikli thi

us ko apne saaye se bhi dar lagta tha
suraj k sehraa mein wo thanha hirni thi

aate jaate mosam is ko daste tahay
hanste hanste palkoun se ro parti thi

door se ujray mander jesa ghar us ka
wo apne ghar mein akloti devi thi

tyez hawa ko rook k apne anchal per
souke phool ikthay karti phirti thi

sab par zaaher kar deti thi bhed apna
sab se ik tasveer chupaye rakhti thi

kal sham chakna chuur hua tha dil us ka
ya phir pehli baar wo khoul k rooyi thi

RoOZ =kia jane kioun dhoop se beparwa
wo apne ghar ki dehleez pe bethi thi !

SHAYAN
11-14-2010, 05:59 PM
Nice...

M A H i
11-14-2010, 09:00 PM
Really nice...
tfs

DiE
11-14-2010, 11:41 PM
buhat khoob

Shomaila
11-15-2010, 08:44 AM
Poetry is so impressive . i like your poem really like the ture and
real.

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
11-15-2010, 12:21 PM
Aap Sab Ka Bahat SHukiriyaa Mai Re Hosla Afzaee K liya

maliksaim
11-15-2010, 01:20 PM
really a nice sharing

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
11-16-2010, 05:07 PM
Thanks Dear

life2
11-18-2010, 08:44 AM
good...

Ghuncha
11-19-2010, 11:09 PM
v Nice ....

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
11-19-2010, 11:47 PM
Shukriyaa aap loghoun ka :)

Shomaila
11-20-2010, 11:11 AM
poetry k liay thanks

life2
11-20-2010, 07:52 PM
nyc...

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
11-28-2010, 12:11 PM
Shukiyaaa ....

Owi
11-28-2010, 05:14 PM
such a beautiful poem (y)

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
12-13-2010, 08:09 PM
Shukriyaa .. warna kadim is qabil kahan

A L i
12-13-2010, 11:50 PM
bahut khoob

!~*AdOrAbLe*~!
02-12-2011, 08:27 PM
bohut umdha hai but ager aap iska size zara large kardein plz :)
keptup

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
02-13-2011, 02:43 AM
bahut khoob

shukriya yara

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
02-13-2011, 02:46 AM
bohut umdha hai but ager aap iska size zara large kardein plz :)
keptup

shukriyaa aDDoo .. mai nai kya par nahi ho pa raha hai :(

~~KING~~
02-16-2011, 03:51 PM
very nice thanx for sharing.......:bu:

RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
08-10-2011, 01:13 AM
shukriyaa

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