mere gird meri tanhaio ka ek hujoom kardei

[Shaam]

yarab mujhey meri riyazato ka samar deidei
us ek naam ko mere naam sei mausum kardei

me us ko na mila taqdeer ka likha maan gaye
ab youn kar usey meri zaat me kahein gum karde

wo jo jagmagain tou mehek jaye dil ka asmaan
meere dil me usey youn mahfil e anjum kardei

mei tang o bezaar hoo ab in weeran mehfilo sei
merei gird meri tanhaaio ka ek hujum kardei

[LAMS]

bro tumhari maharbani hogi tum kisi aur poet ki poetry likh dia karo bhai

[Shaam]

lolz
thanks lams
tu sahi kahta hai waisey
per pata hai kia
kohna e mashq hi samjh
jaisey jazbey hain waisy poetry : )
wo bhi be wuqat yah bhi
is lia gham nahi
jo bhi mahsoos karta jaoonga
likhta jaoonga
baqol ghalib

dei un ko dil me ya mujh ko zuban aur : )

[!«╬Ĵamil Malik╬«!]

Zabrdast Jani

[Shaam]

shukria malik
lams edit na karwapis purane walei comments chiye mujhey.

[Shaam]

shukria malik
lams edit na karwapis purane walei comments chiye mujhey.

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[life]

bohat umdah!

[Shaam]

shukria

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