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*~FaLaK~*
08-15-2010, 02:27 AM
Jab dil kai dard barh jatain hain,,,,
Ansoo bahar anai ko betab ho jatain hain,,,,
Dunya sai chopa nai kai liay,,,,
Isay mein be eikhteyar dil dua karta hain
Ya rab teez barish ho jayee,,,
takai in ansoo ko chupa nai kai liay
Eik sahara mil jayee
!«╬Ĵamil Malik╬«!
08-15-2010, 10:07 AM
Thanks For Sharing
SHAYAN
08-16-2010, 11:14 AM
Nice...
*~FaLaK~*
08-17-2010, 02:42 AM
shukryaaa
Noor ul huda
08-17-2010, 10:21 AM
Acha Hay.................. :11ap3sj:
Adi_pk
08-17-2010, 04:47 PM
Simple and Touchy. Nice hai ji
sheeza ayub
08-20-2010, 12:32 PM
Very Nice
Morash
06-04-2011, 04:10 PM
XceLLenT = PP
RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
06-08-2011, 12:41 AM
bahat khoub kahaa .. khoosh rahoO
M A H i
06-08-2011, 02:26 PM
wah wah...
kia baat hai Falak, Khuda khair kare : )
hmm very nice thought falak sis
the only thing i wanna say if u dont mind
ur thoughts are very touchy n brilliant but lines are not balanced
may be it's simple typing mistake aap thora sa daikhain:)
bohat hi zabardast hay
aapki wo lines bhi bohat achi hain "RAAT" may
sw33ty
06-27-2011, 05:08 PM
very nice
pensive
07-03-2011, 05:47 PM
nyc......
Morash
08-21-2012, 11:20 PM
Mind Blowing Lines Falak!
ExceLLent ..
Abewsha
08-28-2012, 02:27 AM
nice...............
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