Khamoshi say suno by Mahnoor Mf design poetry

[Rumisha]

He!!o Mera Forum Friends
My !st Mf Des!gN PoeTry

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[!!!sweety!!!]

very nice
first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

[!~*AdOrAbLe*~!]

beautifull work

[Zafina]

Zabardast....Oye thats means k ab may bhi maidan may uthar hi awo...soon u will see my designed poetries :)..Keep it up sis

[shani]

nice work mahnoor keep it up friend :)

[SHAYAN]

Nice Poetry N Work

[AYAZ]

acha work hie ahista ahista aur bhi acha hojaey ga INSHALLAH first try good one (y) keep it up

[Rumisha]

very nice
first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

Siso aap nh theek tara se para nhi galtiya or be the..well i correct it again..thankz for tha remaning..:)

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Siso aap nh theek tara se para nhi galtiya or be the..well i correct it again..thankz for tha remaning..:)

hehe mene jo likha woh apne nhi para mene kaha tha ke first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he

uske bad mene kaha

imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

matlab baqi poetry mien bhi ghaltiyan hein likhne mien inpage mein ghaltiyan ki apne :bshy:

[Rumisha]

sis phele line main be galti the..jo aap nh pari nahi suno word be galt ta( jis main seen-noon-wow) ata hai main nh (seen-wow-noon-wow) likka ta--well poetry theek hai ab--ab aap ko koi shekayat to nhi ho ge i hope so--sis
galti to first time hr koi krta hai--aap se be howi ho gee--galtiyoo se insan seekh ta hai--any way--thankz for da comment--:)

[~wish munda~]

nice job

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sis phele line main be galti the..jo aap nh pari nahi suno word be galt ta( jis main seen-noon-wow) ata hai main nh (seen-wow-noon-wow) likka ta--well poetry theek hai ab--ab aap ko koi shekayat to nhi ho ge i hope so--sis
galti to first time hr koi krta hai--aap se be howi ho gee--galtiyoo se insan seekh ta hai--any way--thankz for da comment--:)

ary mind kar gayi? so sorry yar mein bas bata rahi thi ke gahlti kiya he take aap best ban sako mera aur koi irada nhi tha mujhey jitna pata tah mene batya soryy again if mene hurt kiya he apko to

bilcul sabse ghalti hoti he mujh se bhi hui thien aik bar nhi kai bar hui thi aisi koi bat nhi
lekin mera irada ghalat nhi tha bas yehi tha ke ap ghalti thik kar leti :flowers:

[Rumisha]

ary mind kar gayi? so sorry yar mein bas bata rahi thi ke gahlti kiya he take aap best ban sako mera aur koi irada nhi tha mujhey jitna pata tah mene batya soryy again if mene hurt kiya he apko to

bilcul sabse ghalti hoti he mujh se bhi hui thien aik bar nhi kai bar hui thi aisi koi bat nhi
lekin mera irada ghalat nhi tha bas yehi tha ke ap ghalti thik kar leti :flowers:

sis i dont mind yara :) u my sis i like u nh meri mistake nikalee :) any way hug- u dont hurt me sis :) Mujhe khushi howi aap nh meri galti bataye>its ok sis-:)

[AYAZ]

haan yeh tou achi cheez hie ke mistake batai takey wo sahi kiya ja sakey i hope mahnoor will do much better than this

[Rumisha]

Thankz admin...

[ShahTaJ]

nice work keep it up

[!«╬Ĵamil Malik╬«!]

Very Nice MALIK

[LAMS]

nice
thx for shairing

[~~KING~~]

very nice............................:bu:

[Morash]

Very Beautiful Designing Rumisha ..

[Muntazir Nigahain]

NiCe effOrT sis !!