In ansu’on ki wazahat main umer bhar na kroon!

[momal ali]

Talab ko ajar na doon, fikar-e-rahguzar na karoon!
Safar main ab ke hawa ko bhi hamsafar na karoon

Ubhartay doobtay sooraj se torr loon rishta
Main sham orh ke so jaon aur sahar na karoon

Ab is se barh ke bhala kya ho ehtiyat-e-wafa
Main tere sheher se guzroon, tujhe khaber na karoon!

Ye meray dard ki daulat, meri maata-e-firaaq
In ansu’on ki wazahat main umer bhar na kroon!

Ujar shab ki khalish ban ke bun main kho jaoon
Main chandni ki terha khud ko derbader na karoon!

Wo aik pal ko dikhai to de kaheen Mohsin
Main jan gunwa ke bhi us pal ko mukhtasir na karoon!

[Zafina]

:bu: .......

[momal ali]

:bu: .......

tentu ladoo rani :bangin:

[NAZIA KHAN]

hi im new here

wow very very nice poetry ....just love it

[momal ali]

hi im new here

wow very very nice poetry ....just love it

tentu nazia khan n weltum in mera forum dear :hug:

[Shaam]

Ubhartay doobtay sooraj se torr loon rishta
Main sham orh ke so jaon aur sahar na karoon.....


itni narazgi

[momal ali]

Ubhartay doobtay sooraj se torr loon rishta
Main sham orh ke so jaon aur sahar na karoon.....


itni narazgi

cham intensity to dono he baton ki hey :10:

samjh nahi tu is sher pr b ghor kerty :10:

Wo aik pal ko dikhai to de kaheen Mohsin
Main jan gunwa ke bhi us pal ko mukhtasir na karoon!

shidat does has its worth in any condition
no matter its nafrat or muhabat :10:

[Shaam]

sahi
shiddat ki ehemyat bahuit hai
per shiddat ki qadar nahi

[momal ali]

sahi
shiddat ki ehemyat bahuit hai
per shiddat ki qadar nahi

YEAH here i agreed :rolleyes:
qadardaNO ki waqi kammi hey :rolleyes:
vus ye sadi he kuch esi hey :rolleyes:
kiya kry koi hmm :rolleyes:

[Shaam]

hmmm bus apni tamaniyat kei lia
shiidato sei chahta rahey
baaqi Rab di marzi : )

[momal ali]

WAHEED MURAD NA BANO :laugh:
khush raha kro :laugh:

[FAJAAN]

v.nyce

[chinamanx]

ahem ahem.... nice one kher to he..............................

lagta hay ye dil bohat udaaaaaaas he ahem ahem

[momal ali]

Thnx china yea dil bht uadas hey :rolleyes:

[Rumisha]

v nice sis keep it up