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07-19-2009, 10:19 AM
Invented themes neat and nifty.
Shone as a star from five to fifty.

Enigma rolled in a twisted quiz.
Doubtless pinnacle of his buiz.

Here and now built never land.
And in realms was blown to sand.

Invented he an ethereal walk.
As if was doing a moon stalk.

Was so concerned for the bays.
Danced in a blur like laser rays.

To history inscribed a mega note,
and wished his-story to be afloat.

Clutching crotch, world he thrust.
And lived a life of best and bust.

At his finest in the milling melee.
World he buzzed at Mach three.

Months he spent with a chimp.
Dangled kid from a balcony, limp.

Existed weird; in a fantasy fuzz.
Appeared oblivious to the buzz.

Loathed focus on bizarre tussles.
Hated taunted autograph rustles.

Smooched and patted robo-stuff.
Did every doctor’s knife and snuff.

Built he castles, whatever it took.
Alone in a room, he oddly shook.

Across the race strange forays.
switch to roles in foreplays.

Got in trouble with the law.
and also with the kids a flaw.

In hall of fame a foot print burned.
A page of history has been turned.



saadat tahir

SHAYAN
07-19-2009, 01:57 PM
:go_out2: Nyx

A L i
07-19-2009, 07:48 PM
V nice

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07-21-2009, 03:48 PM
ty shayan no i dont wanna go thanks

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07-21-2009, 03:48 PM
ty ALI

Dashing Ahsan
07-21-2009, 09:41 PM
nice

(¯*♥¤»ƙɧՄՏɧՅԾԾ«¤♥*¯)
07-21-2009, 09:50 PM
ty

FAJAAN
07-22-2009, 02:11 PM
nyce sharing

MeOw*
07-22-2009, 04:47 PM
nice sharing

saadat
07-23-2009, 01:21 AM
Invented themes neat and nifty.
Shone as a star from five to fifty.

Enigma rolled in a twisted quiz.
Doubtless pinnacle of his buiz.

Here and now built never land.
And in realms was blown to sand.

Invented he an ethereal walk.
As if was doing a moon stalk.

Was so concerned for the bays.
Danced in a blur like laser rays.

To history inscribed a mega note,
and wished his-story to be afloat.

Clutching crotch, world he thrust.
And lived a life of best and bust.

At his finest in the milling melee.
World he buzzed at Mach three.

Months he spent with a chimp.
Dangled kid from a balcony, limp.

Existed weird; in a fantasy fuzz.
Appeared oblivious to the buzz.

Loathed focus on bizarre tussles.
Hated taunted autograph rustles.

Smooched and patted robo-stuff.
Did every doctor’s knife and snuff.

Built he castles, whatever it took.
Alone in a room, he oddly shook.

Across the race strange forays.
switch to roles in foreplays.

Got in trouble with the law.
and also with the kids a flaw.

In hall of fame a foot print burned.
A page of history has been turned.

Ms khushboo...at least put my name on the poem
if the moderator asks i can post the relevant links...thats my poem and its in bad taste to put it down wiith your name
pl ammend it and repost

saadat tahir

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07-23-2009, 08:22 AM
oh hello mahni apna naam nahi lagaya is ke sath... i didnt said i wrote it.... ok so chill n cool

saadat
07-26-2009, 02:06 PM
oh hello mahni apna naam nahi lagaya is ke sath... i didnt said i wrote it.... ok so chill n cool

thanx for posting my poem
pl edit and put my name under it so i can thank u more...

peace
saadat tahir....copyrighted poems

(¯*♥¤»ƙɧՄՏɧՅԾԾ«¤♥*¯)
07-26-2009, 02:30 PM
thanx for posting my poem
pl edit and put my name under it so i can thank u more...

peace
saadat tahir....copyrighted poems



Ok now i edited it n putted ur name there so now ....:no-thinking:

~ Dashing Dude
07-26-2009, 02:31 PM
Good One !!

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07-26-2009, 02:32 PM
:gaz:

FAJAAN
07-28-2009, 04:54 PM
nyce

FAJAAN
07-28-2009, 04:58 PM
nyc

FAJAAN
07-28-2009, 04:58 PM
ny

K@IN@@T
07-28-2009, 08:40 PM
V nice

A L i
07-28-2009, 08:41 PM
beautifull

saadat
07-28-2009, 08:45 PM
Ok now i edited it n putted ur name there so now ....:no-thinking:

thanx... i am honoured
i respect your gnerosity and will for truth
peace

i remain a friend in poetry
Allah bless u and keep you outa harm alwayz
cheers

Nida-H
07-28-2009, 08:46 PM
very nice poetry..keep it up Saadat !!!

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