muhabtey jubh shumar karna..

[momal ali]

mohabbatain jab shumaar karna to saazishain bhi shumar karna
jo mairay hissay main aai hain wo aziyyatain bhi shumaar karna

jalaey rakhon gi subha tak main tumharay raston main apni aankhain
magar kahin zabt tout jaey to baarishain bhi shumaar karna

jo harf koh-e-wafa pay likhhay huey hain unn ko bhi daikh laina
jo raaigaan ho gain wo saari ebaratain bhi shumaar karna

yeh sardion ka udaas mousam kay dharkanain barf ho gai hain
jab inn ki yakh bas'tagi parakhna tamazatain bhi shumar karna

tum apni majboriyoun kay qissay zaror likhna wazahaton say
jo mairee aankhon main jall bujhi hain wo khwahishain bhi shumaar karna

[Nida-H]

Beautiful Poetry..keep it up !!!

[momal ali]

thnx ruby janu :D

[life2]

hmmmmmm
n!ce

[~ Bikhre Lamhe ~]

buhat umdaaa

[SHAYAN]

V.nyc

[CHEEMO]

nice poetry

[K@IN@@T]

v nice mahum sis:zabardast::0029:

[momal ali]

:OOPs: hmmmmmm
n!ce

tentu invisble ink wali :D

[zaara]

very nice ...

[chinamanx]

i have read this before at halla gulla.com lol

[momal ali]

ye aap ko 1 hazar 1 sites par mil jaey ge same poetr :(
yaha aap bus apni choice chara kerty ho frndz sey :D
meri nahi hey jo mey ney registerd kara li ho :D
ki nat bat daduuuzinazz wali :D

[!«╬Ĵamil Malik╬«!]

nyc
baatoon wali machine yaha b users sy fite kar rahi ho hahahah

[chinamanx]

wesay kisi nay dil pay laay li baaaaaaaat lolllll maynay to sirf bola tha puraanaa hay lollllllllll

[momal ali]

dil par tu aap ney li medan chor k bhag gaey :D
i dun wana grow up more :D
jitni aqal aa gai hey kafi wahi kafi hey :D
werna zada aqal ki soorat mey tum jesi ho jaon gi :D
n i dun wana b daduzianzzzz :D

[chinamanx]

dekhooo mujhay chat pay anaaay ki zaroorat nahi ,..... i mean tum itni akalmand ho samaj jaoo ge ;)

[momal ali]

ye bat tu bilkul samjh nahi aai :(

[!«╬Ĵamil Malik╬«!]

hahaha bas karo mahum kitna larti ho tum

[chinamanx]

achi baat hay samajh nahi aiii -- samajh jaaati to lolzian kher :P chorooooooooooo

[momal ali]

ahm ahm ye choroo wali bat
tu medan aap ney chora :D
keep it in ur mind :D
i dint leave da ground :D
chorroooooo aap ney bola
kaha tha na aap ko pata nahi chalny denay gey
ahm ahm :peace:

[chinamanx]

hahaha dekhoo ek baat kahunnnnnnnnn

chalo rehnaay do.....

[momal ali]

chalo rehny deya :d
MEY BACHY KO ZADA PARESHAN nahi kerna chahati :D
chill :gimmefive:

[chinamanx]

hahaha pareshaan aur may ;) huzooor apnay pareshaaniyaan dekhi nahi .... anyways muqabalaa forum pay thori na hota hay w oh to raaaz ba raaaz hota h e ;) :P rehnaay diyaaa hahahah haath aoungaa to rehnaay do gii na :P

[momal ali]

q tum squral ho keya :OOPs:

[momal ali]

or haan zada ghusa mat keya keron daduzianaazzz :D

[chinamanx]

dekh firaun ke lehjaay may humsay baat na ker ...
hum to deewanaay hay khuda se bhi ulaj partaay hay :P

jo tumhara dil keraay bana looo

bhala tumhay bhi koi rok paaayaa he wesay .... chalo choro

[momal ali]

aaey haaey keya sher phenka hey janab keya baat hey aap ki :laugh:
or han hum kon hoty hey banay waly aap ko
aap tu mshALLAH say baney banaey hey :D
wesay sorry koi bat buri lag gai ho tu....
zabani kalami ki jharap hoti hey mera intentionally kuch kehny ka mqasad nahi hota :D

[chinamanx]

bus ek hi shikayaat hay ,,,,,,,,,,, yay ahem ahem copy kerna choroo ... tum pay suit nahi kertaa....

baaki tum sahi ho bus un may shumaar hoti hoo ..... woh kehtay hayna

ek anaar so beemaar.... aur aisi beermario say ;) may apnay aap ko door rakhta hu ....

sher woh hota hay jo waqt ki nazaqat dekh ker maraa jayaay ;) mere hisaab say kuch khaas nahi tha.... what do u have 2 say

[momal ali]

nahi aap jis terha sey uljhty hey us hisab sey perfact tha :D
baqi ahm ahm tu hum zaror karey gey :D
dekh lena kabhi na kabhi suit karny lag jaey ga wid da pessage of tym :D
believ me :D

[chinamanx]

hahahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... .......................

ahem ahem lagta hay asar ker gaya lol wesay kuch bhi kahooooooooooooooooooooo magar lagta hay yay tumhara peecha nahi choraay ga anyways its nice talkin 2 u as usualll Gol matool kahin kiii

[momal ali]

same here :D
nyc talikin 2 u daduzianzzzzzz
but dekhty jana kis ka asar zada perfect or longlastic ho ga aham aham :laugh:
Allah hafiz n take care :D

[chinamanx]

bay asar jab say har ik dua hogayee

zindagaani meri ek saza hogaye...

meri azmaatoo ki jitni bhi nishaaniyaaa thi ..

meray dekhtay hi dekhtaay FANAAAH hogaye.................

allah hafiz lolllllllllllll

[momal ali]

wow nyc 1 man
:wavey:

[chinamanx]

anyways now stop replyinnnnnnnnnnnnnn

[momal ali]

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahaha
ye meri post hey m authorised 2 keep replyiing :D
haan jana ho ga tu aap ko jana ho ga yaha sey :D
dosri baar har rahy ho pehly choro par or abh stop replying :D
kaha tha na aap k apnay he ilfaz mey uljhana aata hey hamy :D
ok iwont :D

[chinamanx]

hahaha lollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

ab hawaaayaain keray gi faisala - diyaay ke bhujnaay ka
jismay jitni jaan hogii---- utna jalaay gaaaaa.....................

:P

[momal ali]

chaina mey bhi load sheding rehti hey keya :OOPs:
deyon par rehty ho waha bhi hahahahahahahahaha
pakistan aa jao keya rakha hey gara waha bhi deyon per guzara hey ..
mey harny wali nahi :shoaby:
but em sure mode of forum can b locked dat thread :dont20tell:

[chinamanx]

wesay tumnay to yay thread ko chatting r oom bana liyaa hay kasam sayyyyyyyyy lollll


ab kya kahun tumhay larkiii ../...... puri ki puriiii adrak lasan hoooo

[momal ali]

adarak or lassan :OOPs:
or forum par aap khubsurat hey khushfehmi chai hey :D
daddu r always ugly :D
hop hop :D
tar tar :D
bey surey as well :D

[chinamanx]

awaaaz sunnii nahi aur baysuraa..... anyways this daddu is waiting for the right princess to ahem ahem him and i w ill turn in 2 a prince hahaha :P chalo ab bus bhi kero anyways maynay haar nahi maani its 3:00 am down here and i have sum important meetings .... 2moro morning u take care lekkerding..................

[momal ali]

ye tumhary teesri haar hey abh chat par aa kar mujhy bhao na dikha aainda
abh yaha sey niklny ka fisal bhi tum ney keya hey infatc third tym haringz :D
orite ALLAH HAFIZ :peace:

[chinamanx]

chalo tum khush ho na mujhay hara key ;)................................ lol challooo aaj ki raani tum kya yaad kerooo gii....

chweet nitemares................. wesay tumharay u are chaand ki roshini mahum aakhri naam hay lollllllllllllllllllllllll

teesri baar haaar lollllllllll.....

Apni shaksiyat hi kuchh eisi hai..ae Dil
Ke aksar zamaaney ko berukhi ka sa gumaan hota hai...
Shikaayat ye ke Mai milta-julta nahi logon se.....
Kyon ki mai nikalta hi tab hoon..jab ye jahaan sota hai...................

[momal ali]

keya bat hey subha k 3 bajey shairi ka bhoot sawar ho gaya :D
very nyc :D

wesay tum ja rahy they u have sum meetingz n sum oder works na remember ? :rolleyes:

[chinamanx]

hahah may nahi haara tum haaar gayee lol m ay to yahin huuuu

[chinamanx]

ILAAHI aabru rakhna bara naazuk zamaaaana hay
dil may kufer rakhtaay hay bazaaaahir dostaana hay lollllllllllllllllll

tum haar hi gayee lolziannn

[(¯*♥¤»ƙɧՄՏɧՅԾԾ«¤♥*¯)]

nice mahum sis

[momal ali]

har dhoka dey kar jeet jana us ki fitrat hey
har rasaty pay chalty chor jana us ki fitart hey
hahahah dhokey baaz :d
AREY YE Oper jo mey ney irshad key woh tu sher bun gaya hey :OOPs:
wah wah mahum keya bat hey aap ki
u CHEATER
hum jung may bhi asolon ko malhoz e khatir rakhny waly log hey :D
dhoka dena k qail nahi :D
peth peechy war kerna apni fitrat nahi :D

[chinamanx]

waqt logo ki fitrat badal dayta hay :p ...

Dokha mila jab pyar main, zindagi mein udasi chhah gayi
socha tha chhod denge is rah ko - kambakht mohale mein dusri aa gayi....

wesay bhi

ab to kuch aur bhi andhera hay yay teri raat ka sawera hay lol wesay tumhay aur kuch nahi ataa larai ke siwaah -------------------- and ur a cheater cant change dat can u :P ................ mis copy cat .. kabhi ahem ahem kabhi baba....

ab to may apnay dialogues bhi nahi maarta coz u copy them .... tum aur asoool ki baat kerti ho.... acha yay to bataoo asoool ki definition kya hay ..... asool banayaay hi jataaay hay tornay ke liyaay kabhi dadu wali wardi pehnaaay walo say poochoooo lolzian lekkering :P

[chinamanx]

itni choti se baat pay kick lol may to samajhtaa thaa pata nahi kitna bara hoslaa hogaa lol.... tumhara hosla a nahi ghonslaaa he

[momal ali]

han bat tu choti thi :D
but i know my kik hurt u alot :D
i know k tum isey direct dil par ley jaty ho :D
beta baron sey panga nahi :D
adab ko mlhoze khatir rkha jaey :D

[chinamanx]

wesay dil pay to cheez wohi lee jaati hay jo dil ke qareeb ho .... :p

aisii chootii chootii cheezain to chotaay chotaay log dil pe laaytaay hay :p

Aksar log hotay nahi jo dikhtaay hay.... and then again in chat rooms they a re way different ... sahi kahaana..

adab kerna to k oi tumsay seekhay

ek mazaakh bardaasht nahi hota.... pata nahi khud ko kaisay bardaasht kerti hogi ;)

ahem ahem
untruly urs

[chinamanx]

so some1 is viewing t he thread :p

[momal ali]

:laugh:
:laugh:
very intresting hmmm
so wot shuuld i say
dere is a damn huge difference b/W kiddin n miss behaving
esay her kisi ko bardsaht karti rahon tu laf sir par charh jaty hey :D
i beleive 2 maintain a certain distance
so dat ppl know dier limites :D
HOPE u got it han
aham aham :fish:

[chinamanx]

i got every word u said,.,,,,,

ur highness lolllllllllllll hahahahah

anything else u w ant me 2 knoww

[chinamanx]

i hope i m in my limits..... as you are concerned abt the limits you h ave

[momal ali]

bari nazar rakhi hoi hey k sum 1 viewing da thread subh theek na :D
har bar tusi 1 sher phenk k jaingz now ek sher hamari taraf sey
bht sedha or aasan feham :D
zindagi mey hamesha naey log miley gey
kahi zada kahi kam miley gey
aitabar zra soch k karna
mumkin nahi har jaga aap ko hum miley gey.. :D

[momal ali]

i hope i m in my limits..... as you are concerned abt the limits you h ave

m talikn in genaral :D
dint mean 2 point out u
dat was juz ma point of view doesnt mean dat m talikn about u :D
i know shair log n shaiarana miazj rakhny waly log bht sensitive hoty hey :D
dun take it so personlly :D

[chinamanx]

kher nazar say yaad ayaa.....

nazar may tabbusum chupa ke mila
khafa to tha magar muskuraa ke mila
may jisko dhoondta raha dil ke raastay
mila bhi to zaalim nazaraay jhuka kee mila.....

yay sher to tumhari DP pay kuch zayada hi suit kerta hay rahi baat tumharay sher ki

is ka jawaab yay hay .............

Waqt guzra to yay Malaaal hua...
Khatam ek zindagi ka sawaal hua..

Kitni shiddat say koi yaad ayaa...
ab jeena baraa mauhaaal hua...

soch kil jheeel may girah pathar
besab muntashirrr khayaaal huaa....

Log dekhtaay hay magar bohat jaaana....
Koi teri kahaaan misaaaaaal hua....

agar samajh na ayaay to poochlaayna............................

and then again aapka sher waah waaaaaaaaaaah

[momal ali]

bohat khoob janab :D
very nyc
hmmm intresting

[chinamanx]

i can be very interesting .............................. hahahahahah

[momal ali]

so u can b intresting ahaan :D

hmm matured ppl usually sounds intresting buzurgo :D
ahem ahem :D

[chinamanx]

anyways m leaving 2 play tennis catch up wid you laters :p


intizaar mat kerna :p koi post nahi ayaay gee

[momal ali]

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha haha :(rofl):
intezar wot a joke hahahahahahahahahaha
well said hahaa Oh GoD gimmi a break hahaha :(rofl):

well its not like dat i wont u can go n play tennis kiddo n do sum hop hop :D in fresh air cya :peac:
or apny choty sey demgh par zada zor na deya kero m juz enjoing ur intresting conversation :D
Allah hafiz :p

[momal ali]

:peace:

[A L i]

very nice

[chinamanx]

hahaha lol lagta hay kisi nay dil pay layliyaa isliyaay dp bhi badal liii lolziannnnnnnnnnnn :p

anyways jaoo tumhay azzzaaaad kiya :p kiya yaad kerooo gii :p

[momal ali]

hamy azad kar rahy ho ya hum sey azadi maang rahy ho :D
ahem ahem :fish:
kher hum ny bhi azad keya aap ko :D
keya yaad kero gey :D

[chinamanx]

lolllllllllll l agta hay nazar idher hi t hii.... sorry to keep u waiting lolllllllllll bola tha na intizaar mat kernaa lol

[momal ali]

:laugh:
w8ing Oh God :laugh:
m not on chat m jus surfing forum :D
whenever u clikc on new post ull lates post :D
so i did n fund dat u replied so juz cum 2 c da reply :D
intezar karna hum ney seekha nahi abhi tuk ahem ahem :D
tu daddu kafi uchal k aya hey so must b tired take sum rest han c u soon :peace:

[chinamanx]

lol i and tired lollllll..... sher kabhi thaktaa nahi ....

kaali billiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii forums ki jaan chaurdoooooooooooooo larkii

[momal ali]

daddu bhi sher banny ka khuwab dekhta hey strange :rolleyes:
ye mera forum hey ill never :peace:
u may go :peace:

[chinamanx]

Dost Kabhi Doston se Khafa Nahi Hote,
Dil Milake Kabhi Juda Nahi Hote,
Bhula Dena Hamari Kamiyon ko Kyonki
Insaan Kabhi Khuda Nahi Hote…


tumhara forum nahi tumhari thread hay ... lassan kahin kii ...

ahem ahemmmmmmmm

[momal ali]

tu tum quit nahi kero gey :rolleyes:
m w8ing k kubh ye thread locked ho :rolleyes:
werna is terha tu dono mey sey koi jata nazar nahi aata :rolleyes:
anyways mey tu jany wali nahi :peace:
tum apna boreya bistara bandhny ka soch sakty ho :rolleye:
i wish k yaha bhi kied out ki koi option hoti :p
dekhti sensitive shair ka hal tubh :laugh:

[chinamanx]

haar maana maynay seekha nahi lol gulabooooo

tum apni kher manaoo kahin daddy agayaay to l ol

[Adeeb]

nice

[momal ali]

ye aap pany dady sey itna darty he tabhi mery leye esa soch rahy hey :D
sher bohat phenkty ho shair sahab sanbhal k rakho muk jaey gey :D

Deikho to ye umeedoN ka diya jalta hey kahaaN tak
aaNkhoN meiN ye ik khaab naya palta hey kahaN tak

na'jaaney kis gumaan ke behlaawey meiN uljah kar
wo saath to chala aaya hey par chalta hey kahaaN tak

hey naaz bohat zabt pe magar deikhna hey mujh ko
ye haalaat meiN jalta hey to pighalta hey kahaaN tak

log taaq meiN beitthey heiN ke deikho to is ka kirdaar
majbooriyoN ke saaNchey meiN dhalta hey kahaaN tak

merey tajas'sus-bharey gumaaN ko ab ye fikr lagi hey
ke rangoN meiN waqt apney tujhey rangta hey kahaaN tak

imtehaan teri wafaaoN ka abhi aaya hi nahi hey
deikheiN ge tu badalta hey to badalta hey kahaaN tak

[momal ali]

:peace:

[chinamanx]

waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah OH ZALIMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMm

chalo kuch to acha likhaa tab sayy..... ajeeb hi sher maarti ayee h oooooooooooooo


wesay aar paar hogaya ;)


Yunhi hamesha ulajhti rahi hai zulm se khalq,
na unki rasam nayi hai na apni reet nayi....

hamesha khilaye hain hum ne aag mey phool,
na unki haar nayi hai na apni jeet nayi.........................


haarti rahoo gi lagta hay abhi to addat hogaye hay lol tumahy i

[momal ali]

hum ney to bol deya tha k war karty samy aap ko pata nahi chlany dey gey :D
ho gaya na aar paar u admited ur self man :peace:

[chinamanx]

yay waar nahi tha lassan kahin kiii sher thaaaaaaa....................................... :P


kher chalo aaaj ki raani tum :p ..... kya yaad kerogii may to bus tumko khush dekhna chahtaa hu lolhahahahahahahahahahahah

khush honaa ...... itni chooti chootiii khushiyaan tumhariii to raaat zaberdast guzraay gi larakuu.....

wesay tum ek baichaaaain si roooh ho lol

[momal ali]

mey beychain rooh nahi :D
make sum correction in ur sentence :D

may bechain rooh nahi
baychain kar deany wali rooh hun :peace:

soch samjh k aya kero yahan :peace:
mujhy khush karny ka shoq mehnga na par jaey :D


Main Kiyon Na Tark-E-Ta'aluq Ki Ibteda Karta
Wo Dur Dais Ka Baasi Tha Kiya Wafa Karta ?

Wo Mere Zabt Ka Andaza Karne Aaya Tha
Main Has Ke Zakhm Na Khata Tu Aur Kiya Karta ?

Hazar Aiena Khano'N Main Bhi Na Pa Saka
Wo Aiena Jo Mujhe Khud Se Aashna Karta

Dar-E-Qafas Pe Qayamat Ka Habs Tha Warna
Saba Se Zikr Tera Main Bhi Sunn Liya Karta

Meri Zamee'N Too Agar Mujh Ko Raas Aa Jaati !
Main Rifato'N Main Tujhe Aasma'N Sa Karta

Gham-E-Jaha'N Ki Muhabbat Lubha Rahi Thi Mujhe
Main Kiss Tarha Teri Chahat Pe Aasra Karta ?

Agar Zuba'N Na Kat Ti Tu Shehar Main MOHSIN
Main Pathro'N Ko Bhi Ik Rooz HamNawa Karta

:peace:
gud nighto daduzianzzz :D

[chinamanx]

oyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay hoayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

zaaalim waah w aaah lagta haay aaj ki raat aapki shariii may kataay gee lol

Kis ke Jalwey Rangin Takhallukaat mai hai,
Chiraag ban ke koi Zindagi ki Raat mai hai ....

Mehak Mehak utha hargosha-e-Hayat Mera,
Kisi ke Jism ki Khusboo Tasawoorat mai hai ....

Boht buland Fiza mai Teri Patang sahi,
Magar ye soch k abhi Dorr kis ke Hath mai hai...

Idhar ki Baat bhala kis tarah us tak phaunchi,
Zuroor koi Munafik Hamare sath mai hai.........

Mukhalfat Meri mehngi Tujhe paregi bohat ,
Zamane!! Tera Mukaddar to Mere hath mai hai........



by the way gud nite and chweet nitemares

pagal larkii....
Hum apne aap ko Mehfooz kis tarah samjhe ,
Abhi Hayat ka her Lamha Haadshat mai hai !

[momal ali]

Oh tu mossof gaey nahi :D
keya bat hey daddu weekend chalingz :D
very nyc poetry
ye dour sey patang kat tey pata nahi chalta doou he reh jati hey aksar :rolleyes:

kher chalo choro keya bat karni
shairi chal rahi hey tu shari he suno :D

Kabhi kuch baat kehdena or kehna chalo chhoro
Kabhi kuch kehte - kehte keh dena chalo chhoro

Yeh ada'ain tumhari khaas lagti hain na janay kyun
Kabhi socha k keh dalun kabhi socha chalo chhoro

Jatana bhi nahi aata keh yeh tumse kaisa rishta hai
Tumharay sath chalta main, phir socha chalo chhoro

Meri beqarari ka aalam kya hai kise jakar bataun main
Tha ye socha tumko bataunga phir socha chalo chhoro

Kha'hish hai yeh meri tumhain jee bhar kar daikun main
Tumhari tasweer banata main, phir socha chalo chhoro

Jo tum rooth jao gee to ghazal keh kar mana lunga
Aisay jo manaoon to kehti ho achchha chalo chhoro

Rahe gi ummeed jab tak yeh hamaray eik honay ki
Dar hai tum keh na do ummeed ko chalo chhoro......

or mey pagal nahi :D
han pagal bana denay ka fun janti hun :D
u fool :D daduuziznzz :D
kher chalo choro :D

[chinamanx]

hahaaha pakra hi kab tha jo choroooo ................ lolllllllllllllllll

hayaay allah g chalo chorooo lol..... mu may dupatta dabaa ke kaha tha kya lollllllllllllll chalo chorooo lol hahah

wesay shairii ka lutf aaraha hay ..... keep it up .... anyways m all alone lol ... need company ;)

Dard Kya Hota Hai Batayenge Kisi Roz...
Kuch Gazlein tum Ko sunayenge Kisi Roz...

Thi Unki Ye Zidd Ki...Mai Jaun Unhe Manaane..
Muj Ko Ye Vahem Tha..Ki Bulayenge Woh Kisi Roz...

Khuda ki Kasam Humne socha Bhi Nahi Tha...
Woh Itna Mere Dil Ko Dukhayenge Kisi Roz...

Har Roz Aaine Se Yahi Puchhata Hun Mai...
Mere Rukh Pe Tabassum Lout Ke Aayenge Kisi Roz...

Udne Do In Parindo Ko Aazaad Aftaab Me...
Tumahre Honge agar To Lout aayenge Kisi Roz...

Apne Sitam Ka Dekh Lena Khudhi Aasra Tum...
Zakhm-e-Jigar Dikhayenge Kisi Roz...

Gar Peetey Rahey Yuhi Maikhaane Me ae Doston ...
"Nassir" Keh Raha Hai .. Jaan Gavayenge Kisi Roz......



Guzray jo mere ghar se to ruk jayeein sitaraay --- is tarah meri raat ko chamkaoo kisi din.... ;)


ab yay mat kehdaynaa flash light lay ker aati hu lolziannnnnnnnnnnnnnn

btw Dhamakaay daar sher tha.... kher chalo chorrooo

[momal ali]

ahaan so u need sum copmpany haan
chat par q nahi aajaty waha subh guppey maringz :D
aap bhi apny qeemti khayalat ka izhar waha kar skty hey
bohat sary listenerz hey wahan :D
by da way m not a gud listener :D
ye raat chamkny wali baat sey mujhy baratan chamakny yaad aa gaey thy :D
lolzianzzz :D

hmmm meri sari collection khatam ho gai lagta hey :laugh:

chalo is ki baar thori halki phulki nazam sahi :rolleyes:

vo tiir choRha huaa to usii kamaan ka thaa
agarche haath, kisii aur meharbaan ka thaa

guzar rahaa thaa vo lamha jo darmiyaan ka thaa
magar ye waqt baRhe saKht imtihaan ka thaa

pataa nahiiN, ki judaa ho ke, kaise ziNda rahe
hamaara uska ta'alluk to jism-o-jaan ka thaa

hawaa to chaltii hii rahtii hai is samaNdar meN
qasoor ko_ii agar thaa to, baadbaan ka thaa

vahii kahaanii kabhii jhooTh thii, kabhii sach thii
zaraa sa farq agar thaa to bas, bayaan ka thaa

qadam-qadam pe naye maNzaroN kii hairat thii
tirii galii ka safar thaa, ki ik jahaan ka thaa

ham apne naam ke hisse ko DhooNDhte bhii kahaaN
zamiiN ke paas jo kuchh thaa, aasmaan ka thaa

kahiiN zameen pe saanii nahiiN milaa uskaa
vo shaKhs jaise kisii aur aasmaan ka thaa

or ye sher pora q nahi lkha chmakany wala :D
ditergent khatam ho gaya tha key
tu gaey soap mangwa lety :peace:

[chinamanx]

waaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah ...... kya zaberdast--tiii nazam hay lolziann

chat pay aoun yaa na aouuu ...samajh nahi aaataaa..... anyways

wesay kya kehti ho.... its raining down here... wana go for a walk !!!!... m a chatter box though u arent a gud listener........ but my stories are worth listenin.... :D

Kuch door humare saath chalo hum dil kee kahaani kah deinge
Samajhe na jise tum aankhon se woh baat zubaani keh deinge

Phoolon kee tarha jab hoontoo pe ek shokh tabasum bikhregaa
Dheeray se tumhaare kaanoo mein ek baat puraani keh deinge

Izhaar-e-wafaa tum kiya jaano iqraar-e-wafaa tum kiya jaano
Hum zikr karenge gairon kaa aur apni kahaani keh deinge

Mausam tu baraa hee zaalim hai toofan uthaata rehta hai
Kuch log magar is hal-chal ko bud-mast javaani keh deinge.....


ahem ahem......

[momal ali]

honestly speaking kuch zada bacha nahi share kany ko :D

or ye dhoti ka kaey majra hey :p
woh bhe sequence zada :laugh:

or han sahab fermaty hey k aap nay ham khush rakha howa hey :D

ye ghalat fehmi kesay paal li :D

kher choro :laogh:
Tu kahin bhi rahe sar pe tere ilzaam to hai,
Tere hathon ki lakiron mein mera naam to hai

Mujko tu apna bana ya na bana teri khushi,
Tu zamane mein mere naam se badnaam to hai

Mere hisse mein koi jaam na aaaye na sahi,
Teri mehfil mein mere naam koi shaam to hai

Dekh kar log mujhe naam tera lete hain,
Isi pe main khush hoon mohabbat ka ye anjaam to hai

Woh sitamghar hi sahi dekh ke usko ,
Shukar is dil-e-bimaar ko aaraam to hai

Tu kahin bhi rahe sar pe teray ilzaam to hai,
Tere hathon ki lakiron mein mera naam to hai.

:abh ye batao haar kon maney ga :peace:

[momal ali]

or so jao buzurgo
ye umar nahi rat bhar jag ker shariri kehny sunany ki :D

:peace:

[chinamanx]

pehlay too waah waah

dusri baat rahi dhotiii ki :p wild guess lol :P

teesri baat khushfehmi unho nay paali hui hay lol ......... maynay nahi lol ab tum hi itna khush unko kabhi nazar nahi ayee to meri galti hay kya

bolo bolo tell tell .... chalo haar to tumnay maan hi liii hay ..................

ab jhuk jaooo sarr kalam kernay ka time agaya hay ;)


NA CHAHAT K JAZBAAT ALAG,
NA KHUSHION K LAMHAAT ALAG

NA PHOOL SI THEE MEHKAAR ALAG,
NA GUZRI KOI BAHAR ALAG...

NA HONTON KI MUSKAAN ALAG,
NA DIL KE AHD-O-PEMAAN ALAG

NA DIN ALAG NA IMAN ALAG,
NA SUR SANGEET ,NAGMAAT ALAG

THEE SARI BAAT LAKEERON KI...........
MERE HAATH ALAG , TERE HAATH ALAG ..!


;)

in haatho ki lakeeero may - uthataa hua samander dekhooo ....
Laaaaaa tera haaath ke may apna muqaddar dekhoo.....

ahem ahem

[momal ali]

NA DIN ALAG NA IMAN ALAG,
NA SUR SANGEET ,NAGMAAT ALAG

THEE SARI BAAT LAKEERON KI...........
MERE HAATH ALAG , TERE HAATH ALAG ..!

wow keya bat hey bohat khoob :D
well dat was wish who said hez my sweet bro
n i was little bit down yestrady night he asked me wot happend n i said nufin
may b dats y he said oder wais u better know
m always like :D cheeezzzz :D



Zameen Pe Chal Na Saka Aasman Say Bhi Gaya
Kata K Par Ko Parinda Uaraan Say Bhi Gaya

Tabah Kar Gai Pakkay Makan Ki Khwahish
Main Apnay Gauon K Kachay Makan Say Bhi Gaya

Parai Aag Main Kood Kar Kiya Mila Tujhko
Usay Bacha Na Saka Apni Jaan Say Bhi Gaya

Bhulana Chaha To Bhulanay Ki Inteha Kardi
Wo Shaks Ab Mere Wehmon Guman Say Bhi Gaya

Kisi K Haath Ka Nikla Howa Wo Teer Hon Main
Hadaf Ko Choo Na Saka Our Kamaan Say Bhi Gaya

[chinamanx]

oye dhoti singh .... suno thanks for the kick ....


Palkon pe aansoun ko sajaya na jaa saka
us ko bhi Dil ka haal bataya na jaa saka

zakhmon se choor choor tha yeh Dil mera
ek zakham bhi us ko dikhaya na jaa saka

jab teri yaad aayi to koshish ke ba wajood
aankhon main aanso'on ko chupaya na jaa saka

kuch log zindagi main aise bhi aaye hain
jin ko kisi bhi lamhe bhulaya na jaa saka

bas is khayaal se kahin us ko dukh na ho
hum se to haal-e-ghum bhi sunaya na jaa saka

woh muskuraha tha mere ru-ba-ru magar
chehre ka rang us se chupaya na jaa saka

tanhaiyon ki aag main hum jal gaye
magar faasla unka mitaya na jaa saka........................

faasla to bohat hay ;)

anyways gud nite --- IK HAAT JOU

[momal ali]

Oey tum soey nahi :OOPs:
keya faida buzurgon ko kik karny ka :laugh:
bohat khoob keya bat hey janab aap ki very nyc ...
ok jaty jaty very special nazam its really very close 2 my heart
hope u like it ahem ahem :rolleyes:

Usko chaha bhi to izhaar na kerna aya
kat gayi umer humain pyar na kerna aya

samney aiya to Aadab-e-nazar bhool gaye
deed ke shouq main deedar na kerna aya

jab bhi dobey teri yadon k bhanwar main doobey
yeh woh derya hai jo humain paar na kerna aya

wafa kertey kertey humain saari umer beet gayi
mager tumhain ab bhi khud per aitebar na kerna aya

tum ney mangi bhi to sirf judaai mangi
aur hum thay ke inkaar na kerna aya.ok gud night Allah hafiz n take gud care of u

or dhoti ka zikar yahan bhi :OOPs:

anyways mey har manti nahi but yahan bat buzurgon ki nend ka hey tu :D

GUd night :peace:

[momal ali]

get up buzurgo zieg cupy sey pochingz k mahum kaha hey :D
i was dere :D
bus yahi burai hey apni :D
kafi moody waqeya howey hey hum :shy:
anyways aap ki shair chapi nahi abhi tuk :rolleyes:
ya haar maan gaey :peace:

[Nida-H]

mahum and Mr.China Town aur kitne muhabbatain aur iziyatain shumaar kerni hain? :laugh:

[chinamanx]

Ruby jee bayshumaari hay lollllllllllllllll----- jab tak saans hay :p ruby :p

oi dadduianz .... tumahri ek burai ho tab naa... wesay hawaa may urahnaa chorooo.. ab zameen pay chalo...

Ek pal bhar mein tamam umer ki sochein badal jati hain
Jin rahon per chaltey hain wohi, rahein badal jati hain

Karney ko kiya nahi kartey log muhabbat mein
sirf hamarey liye hi kyun? rasmein badal jati hain

woh aisa hai ke us ka nam sunney ke tasawwer say hi
hamari tamaam tar raatein badal jati hain

sochta hoon jane kaise? kah paoon gha main us say
milta hoon to dil ki sari batein badal jati hain

chahe "manzil" "dushwar" ho aur "door" bhi
humsafer us jaisa ho to musaftein badal jati hain

yun to "raat" ka alam haseen hota hai, madhosh bhi
magar"chand"dekhoon to meri ratein badal jati hain

mat chaho,ke mujhe aadat nahi itna chahne walon ki
yeh na ho log kahein, jald hi adatein badal jati hain

haar to tumnay maani hay 2-3 dafa :p beta jeee agar kuch aur collection may na ho to phir bata daynaa....

so rahi ho kya lol

[momal ali]

mahum and Mr.China Town aur kitne muhabbatain aur iziyatain shumaar kerni hain? :laugh:

ruby lets c wot cum out hahaha :laugh:
but do visit again 2 watch r azeyeten lol
anyways thnc 4 visiting :10:

[momal ali]

dadauzianaz i drive ma self n ppl according 2 ma mood :D
dil kara tu boley gey nahi tu nahi :D
kuch esa he hum :D
ye mizaaj badlan bht mushkil hey :D
hwa mey rehna sabh ko he acha lagta hey :D
kis tym aa ka chaly bhi gai dauuzianzzzz :p

sochta hoon jane kaise? kah paoon gha main us say
milta hoon to dil ki sari batein badal jati hain

chahe "manzil" "dushwar" ho aur "door" bhi
humsafer us jaisa ho to musaftein badal jati hain

yun to "raat" ka alam haseen hota hai, madhosh bhi
magar"chand"dekhoon to meri ratein badal jati hain

mat chaho,ke mujhe aadat nahi itna chahne walon ki
yeh na ho log kahein, jald hi adatein badal jati hain

wow keya baat hey janab aap ki buzrgo :D very nyc :D



ahem ahem omg

baqqol ruby k or kitni muhbaty or azeytey shumar karna hey :laugh:

ek nazam mohsin ki chaap deti hun
ahem ahem wesay meri collection tumhari collaection sey zada achi hey omg
ahem ahem mamnana pare ga tumhy :D

MohabbatoN pe buhut aitmaad kya kerna
bhula chuke haiN usay phir se yaad kya kerna ??

woh bewafa hii sahii uss pe tuhmateiN kaisi
zara sii baat pe itna fasaad kya kerna

kuch isliye bhii maiN paspa hua hooN maqtal meiN
k behr-e-maal-e-ghaneemat jihaad kya kerna

mukhalifoN se to mumkin hai dostii apni
munafiqoN se magar ittehaad kya kerna

nigaah meiN jo utarta hai dil se kyuN utray
dil-o-nigaah meiN paida tazaad kya kerna

maiN isliye usay ab tak na chu saka Mohsin
woh aaina hai usay sung'zaad kya kerna

[momal ali]

:peace:
dadduzianzz

[chinamanx]

manaanaa aur mujhay chal hat....... zameen pay ajaoo larkii

tumnay apnay aap ko to manaaa liya hay...... jiski collection achi hoti hay usko kehnay ki zaroorat nahi hoti log bataataay hay lol and by the way thanks for lettin me know lolziannnnnn

ek to yay mohsin bhi naa waah waaah

maiN isliye usay ab tak na chu saka Mohsin
woh aaina hai usay sung'zaad kya kerna ................... kya baat hay ....


kuch apni sunao kuch meri sunoo ;)

Aankhon se aansuon ko ubharnay nahi diya
mitti main moti'on ko bikharnay nahi diya

Jis rah per parray thay tere paaun k nishan
us raah se kisi ko guzarnay nahi diya

Chaaha to chaahaton ki hadon se guzar gaye
nasha mohabbaton ka utarnay nahi diya

Har baar hai naya tere milnay ka zaaiqa
aisa samar kisi bhi shajar ne nahi diya

Ye hijr hai to is ka faqat wasl hai ilaaj
hum ne ye zakhm waqt ko bharnay nahi diya

Itnay barray jehan main jaaye ga tu kahan
is ik khayaal ne mujhe marnay nahi diya

Us ne hansi hansi main mohabbat ki baat ki
mein ne Faraaz usko mukarnay nahi diya


wesay to khush hi achi lagti ho lolllll hahahahahhahaa fiker na kero mizaaj bhi badal jataay hay ...

abhi haar maan lo... (",)

jung may aksar haar bhi kabool kerni parti hay ... to kerlo naa.... bechainnn lol

[momal ali]

daddzia jaag gaya :rolleyes:
i heard sum nois of hop hop :D
howz u n gud morning belated :p

subha mood nahi tha bat ka tu nahi boli :D
dats it :D

mizzaj badlany walon mey consider na kaero hamy :D
jesay he esay he rahy gey :D
so no more khushfehmi daduzianzzz :peace:

chaley ek nazam kuch routine sey hut k :D
ta k tumhy qatry or darya ka farqa pata chaly :p
Hijar K Taray Doob Rahay Hain Dhalnay Lagi Hay Rat Wasi
Qatra Qatra Baras Rahe Haya Aankhon Say Barsat Wasi

Teray Bad Ye Dunya Walay Mujhko Pagal Kr Dien Gay
Khushboo K Os Des Main Mujhko Lay Chal Apanya Sath Wasi

Yunhi Chup Ki Moher Laga Kr Kb Tuk Gumsum Betho Gay
Khamoshi Say Dam Ghut-Ta Hay Chhero Koe Bat Wasi

Aaj To Os ka Chehra B Kch Badla Badla Lgta Hay
Mosam Badla Dunya Badli Badal Gaye Halaat Wasi

Meray Ghar Main Khushboo Ka Ye Ruqs B Os K Dam Say Hay
Os K Saath Chali Jayegi Pholon Ki Braat Wasi

Chhor Wasi Ab Oski Yaden Tujhko Pagal Kr Den Gi
Too Qatra Hay Wo Darya Hay Dekh Apni Oqaat Wasi

:peace:

jin ka intekhab acha hota hey woh danky ki chot par bolty hey :peace:

kis samny waly ki tareef ka intezar nahi hota unhey :peace:
m de best :peace:

[momal ali]

ahem ahem omg
buzurgo kaha tha na hum sey muqabal mehnga parey ga
himmat nahi par rahi abh aap ki post karny ki omg
k shari muk gai janab ki :D

i know buzrg thak gaey hey :laugh:
kher phir sahi :p

:peace: m de gr8

[chinamanx]

by the way i posted but i think it never got done coz tht w as freakin chinese enabled system ..... kabhi chinese kabhi english i hope you hop hop to understand lolzian hahahha lol

i dono why am i writing this.... chalooo then again its on of me favs :p har ek ki apni choice hoti hay :p

Tujhey Ishq Ho Khuda Karey...
Phir Khuda Tujhey Uss Say Juda Karey

Tu Paa Kar Bhi Ussey Paa Na Sakey
Tu Bichar Kar Bhi Uss Say Juraa Rahey

Tu Uss Say Milnay Ki Dua Karey
Wo Tujh Say Bicharney Pay Itafaq Karey

Tu Keh Kar Bhi Khuch Keh Na Sakey
Teri Choop' Har Pal Aessi Sadaa Karey

Tu Har Dam Zindagi Say Gilla Karey
Teri Mot Tujh Say Khaafaa Rahay

Tu Marney Ki Din Raat Dua Karey
Mera Rabb Teri Umer Daraz Karey

Terey Haath Bhi Khuch Yoon Khaali Rahein
Tera Daaman Khushiyon Say Bhara Rahay

Teri Hasraton Ko Na Kahin Dawam Miley
Tujhay Musaraton Ka Ajnabi Jahan Milay

Terey Dard Ka Sehraa Bay Aab Rahay
Tu Aanso Ki Ik Boond Ko Tarsaa Karey

Na Kisi Ki Wafaa Say Tujhay Gharaz Rahay
Na Kisi Ki Jafaa Ka Hi Tujhey Gilaa Karey

Mera Rabb Teri Khalwat Ko Aabad Karey
Tu Bhari Mehfil Mein Bhi Tanhaa Rahey

Teri Tadbeer Ko Aesii Maat Milay
Tu Ishq Ko Aqal Say Juda Kahey

Tujhay Ishq Mei Aesaa Arooj Milay
Tu Pasti Mein Boolandi Say Baha Karey

Mein Kahoon K Ishq Dhong Hay
Tu Anal Haq Kehtey Mara Karey

Tu Mizaaron Pay Jaa Jaa K Duaa Karay
Tu Kutbon Pay Likhi Tehreer Parha Karay

Merey Humnafas Hay Meri Yay Dua
Raab Hamein Aesaa Dil Aataa Karey

Jiss Mein Faqat Ussi Ka Ho Ziker Jaari
Jiss Mein Hoobbay Mustafa(Saw) Rahay

Mein Rahoon Na Rahoon Tu Rahay Na Rahay
Yay Daastaan Ussi K Naam Say Zinda Rahay





BtW --- Aap apni adavoun pay zara gaur keray -- hum agar marzi keray ge to shikayat hogee ahem ahem ..... i dont give up dat easy ... hosla kerooo itni baysabrii kya hay lollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

[chinamanx]

agayaa koi :p

[chinamanx]

hayaay hayaay yay adavateeinnnnnnnnnnn lolzian

ahem ahem

[momal ali]

lolzianzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :D
aahaa :rolleyes: tu bat baduaon par aa gai hey :laugh:
tujhy iashq ho khuda kary :p

well aap keh rahy they k aap samndar hey or hum daraya omg
phir bhi zada daamm khumm waly hum he hey :D
samndar kitna he bara or gehra q na ho :D

darya ka muqabala nahi kar sakta :D
samndar bey bus hota hey always :D
ruka ruka thehra thehra sa :D
or darya man mouji hoty hey apni mazi karna janty hey :D
jubh dil kary rasta badal lety hey :D
or jaha jana chahey unhey apna ratsa bana aata hey :D
looser again :peace:
i have told u m de best :peace:
daduziaannzzzzz :D

[momal ali]

kher ek nsar type ki nazam he mujhy tu baohat psand hey aap ka pata nahi :D
phir bhi who cares mey apni he pasand share keron gi na :D

kaha tha na!
kay yun sotey howe mat chor kar jana
mujhe beshak jaga dena,bata dena!!
tumhain rasta badalna hai
meri hadd se nikalna hai......
tumhain kis bat ka darr tha
tumhain jane nahi deti
kahin per kaid kar leti....
arrey pagal mohabbat ki tabiyat main zabardasti nahi hoti
jise rasta badalna ho
usey rasta badalne se
jise hadd se nikalna ho
usey hadd se nikalne se
na koi rok paya hai na koi rok paye ga.....
tumhain kis bat ka darr tha
mujhe beshak jaga dete
main tumko dekh hi leti
tumhain koi dua deti
kam as kam yun to na hota
mri jan ye haqiqat hai,,
tumhare bad khoney k liye kuch bhi nahi baki
magar khoney say darti hoon
main abb soney se darti hoon......!!

[chinamanx]

nice nice .... wesay italian say phir laraiii kerli hay kya ..... kehraha hay mahum ko manaooo ;) to maan jao na beta jeee

anyways ;) this 1 is especially

for me lolllllllziannn

Ab kiya likhein hum kagaz per
Ab likhne ko kya baki hai
Ik dil tha su wo toot gaya
Ab lotnay ko kya baki hai

Ik shaks ko hum ne chaha tha
Ik rait pe naqsh banaya tha
In rait ke zarun ko hum ne
Phir apne dil main sajaya tha
Wo rait tu kab ki bikhar gayee
Wo naqsh kahan ab baki hai
Ab kaya likhein hum kagaz per
Ab likne ko kaya baki hai

Hum jin ko apni nazmoon ka
Unwan banaya karte tha
Lafzun ka bana kar taj mehal
Kagaz par sajaya karte tha
Wo hum ko akela choor gaya
Sab rishtoon se mun moar gaya
Ab rishte saray soonay hain
Wo piyar kahan ab baki hai
Ab kaya likhein hum kagaz per
Ab likne ko kaya baki hai ........................ ;)


ahem ahem ....

Samandar ki hawaOn par tumhara naam likh dunga
MaiN saahil per, maiN lehron par, tumhara naam likh dunga

Mehak utthay ga aangan phir mera, aangan kay phoolon se
Main jab aangan K phoolOn par tumhara naam likh dunga

Aisa hoga na mere haath main jab paar kernay ko
MaiN darya k kinaaron par tumhara naam likh dunga

Khala main jaaonga main aik shab Or apnay haathon se
Falak k sab sitaaron par tumhara naam likh dunga

Khushi se ro parengi dekh lena bailay ki kalyaan
Main jab bailoun ki kalyon par tumhara naam likh dunga

Tumhara naam haaton main jo qudrat ne nahi likha
To main khud apnay haathon par tumhara naam likh dunga

Dhanak ubhre gi jab mahum ek gehray se badal par
Dhanak k saaray rangon par tumhara naam likh dunga ................ aur yay tumharay liyaay :p


wesay samandar sahi may baybus hota hay ;)

chalo dhoti pehanke bhaag jaooo :P swarovski stones waali aur satin blue lollllllllllllllzian aur kahin darya jo rasta badaltaa hay kahin tumhari fitrat may shaamil na hojayee lollllll.... ;)

[momal ali]

Ooy italian sey meri dosti he kubh thi :OOPs:
pata nahi kaha sey id hath aa gai :D
2 baty kar k samjhta hey k he is in lub :D
rubbish :D
gara hello hi achi hey tu pochna zroro k meri id kis ney di isey :(
ek bara pata lag gaya tu choron gi nahi usey :(
anyways ek thakar si nazam ho jaey :D
acha stuff khatm hoingz :(

Agar YaQeen Nahi Aata To Aazmaye Mujhe,
Wo Aayina Hai To Phir Aayina Dikhaye Mujhe,

Azab Chirag Hoon Din Raat Jalta Rehta Hoon,
Main Thak Gaya Hoon Hawa Se Kaho Bujhaye Mujhe,

Main Jiski Aankh Ka Aansu Tha Usne Kadar Na Ki,
Bikhar Gaya Hoon To Ab Ret Se Uthaye Mujhe,

Bahut Dino Se Main In Pattharon Mein Patthar Hoon,
Koi To Aaye Zara Der Ko Rulaye Mujhe,

Main Chahta Hoon Ke Tum Hi Mujhe Izzat Do,
Tumhari Tarahse Koi Gale Lagaye Mujhe


very nyc both of dem r Osum daddu pani samndar or daray ka nsam sun k khush hoingz :D

[chinamanx]

italian say tumhari dosti to hay :P i have seen u ppz chattin up... and secondly he tells me abt u on msn what not all anyways dats your personal m not interested in dat wohi kehta hay mahum ko manaoo and blah blah to maynay socha jhagra hua he to mananaay may kya harj he ....he got ur id from sum1 else :p you gave it 2 him.... and i dont care what u say :P itsa virtual world innit :P

wesay very nice kehna paraay gaah afsoos lolllllllllllllllllllllllll kahan samandar kahan daryaaa....

Agar YaQeen Nahi Aata To Aazmaye Mujhe,
Wo Aayina Hai To Phir Aayina Dikhaye Mujhe,

Azab Chirag Hoon Din Raat Jalta Rehta Hoon,
Main Thak Gaya Hoon Hawa Se Kaho Bujhaye Mujhe,

Main Jiski Aankh Ka Aansu Tha Usne Kadar Na Ki,
Bikhar Gaya Hoon To Ab Ret Se Uthaye Mujhe,

Bahut Dino Se Main In Pattharon Mein Patthar Hoon,
Koi To Aaye Zara Der Ko Rulaye Mujhe,

Main Chahta Hoon Ke Tum Hi Mujhe Izzat Do,
Tumhari Tarahse Koi Gale Lagaye Mujhe... waah waah waah :P khush hojaoo bachaa tum dozakhii ho lollllll just kiddin woh to 90% aurtaay hay lol shayad u un 10% may na ho loll lol lol.....


Ta'alluq rog ho jayein, ussko chorna behtar,
Taa'rruf bojh ban jayein, to usska torna acha.

Jiss afsaanay ko takmeel tak lana ho na-mumkin,
Ussay aik khoobsoorat mor day kar chorna acha. ;) .... samjah gayee hoghi lol hahaha i k now its nice ;)



Tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha na sukoon tha na qaraar tha
Yehi umr thee mere hamnasheen ke kisi se mujh ko bhi pyar tha

Mai samajh raha hoon teri kasak, tera mera dard hai mushtarak
Isi gham ka tu bhi aseer hai isi gham ka mai bhi shikaar tha

Faqat aik dhun thee ke raat din usi khaabzaar mai gum rahen
Wo saraapa aisa suroor tha wo khumar aisa khumar tha

Kabhi lamhe bhar ki bhi guftgoo meri us ke saath na ho saki
Mujhe fursaten nahee mil sakin wo hawa ke rath pe sawar tha

Hum ajeeb tarz ke log thay ke hamare aur bhi rog thay
Mai khizan mai uska tha muntazar use intizar-e-bahaar tha

Use padh ke tum na samjh sake ke meri kitaab ke roop mai
Koi qarz tha kai saal ka kai ratjagon ka udhar tha


anyways dont hate me coz u aint me...............

Kisi ne door se dekha koi qareeb aaya
Ameer shehar main jab bi koi ghareeb aaya

Hawa main zehar gola paniyon main aag lagi
Tumhare bad zamana bara ajeeb aaya................................ ;)

[life2]

nyc

[momal ali]

Dhanak ubhre gi jab mahum ek gehray se badal par
Dhanak k saaray rangon par tumhara naam likh dunga :OOPs:

hey i dint notice dat 1 :OOPs:

abh kherya na :D
shikari kahi khud tu shikar hony na ja raha na :D

anywasy very nyc simply beautiiful :D
hamari dillagi ko dil par mat leya jana dadduziannzzzz :p

pata chaly kaho k dil lagaya tha dil lagi k leye
roug ban gaya zindagi k leye :D

is sabh silssaly ko bus azeyoton mey he shumar rakhna :D
werna sabh upset ho jaey ga :D
samjhdar daduzianzzzzz :D

[momal ali]

hey i added him aobviously aap ko thora tajusus hota hey
jubh koi invitation miley
kuch know how milny k baad he block keya jata hey na:D
or han wot do u think k jo us ney kaha sahi kaha :rolleyes:
her bolny waly ki bat ka yaqeen esay he kerty ho keya :rolleyes:
nakam logon ki subh say bari nishani hey ye tu :D
kaan k kachy nahi hona chaheye beta ji :D
kal tum kaho k mujhy mahum ney ye kaha woh kaha blaa blaa :rolleyes:
tu tumhara koi qasoor nahi ho ga :rolleyes:
tum ney tu bat kar di :rolleyes:
but meri nazar mey qasoorwar woh log hey jo tumhari kahi hoi baton ki tasdeeq keye bagher man lein :D
grown up child :peace:
i juz hate 2 give xpalnationz i dun know y m giving u such kinda xplainationz :rolleyes:

meri lyf ka ek asol hey kabhi kisey sey keya keyun kubh jesay sawal nahi karti :D
ibelieve dat such kinda stupid quetions make so many hurdles in relationships :peace:

[momal ali]

kher noshen ji ki ek bohat he beutiful poem share kerti hun is mouqey par :D

wo baat mai itna bedelta jata hai
k jis trah koi lehja bedelta jata hai

ya arzo thi k hum oss k sath chalain
mager wo shakes Rasta bedelta jata hai

Rutain Wisaal ki ab Khwab honay wali hai
k iss ki baat ka lehja bedelta jata hai

Rha jo Dhoop mai sir per mery,wohi Aanchel
Hawa chali hai to kitna bedelta jata hai

wo baat ker jisay Duniya bhi Moutber Samjhay!!
tujhe khaber hai zamana bedelta jata hai

[K@IN@@T]

zabardast mahum sis

[chinamanx]

shikaari khud shikaar hhahaha ur forgettin if u are a player i am the game.... it takes 1 to know 1... ;) haan sub upset hojayegeee lol tumharay chahnaay walaay bohat he beta jee :P magar i need sum1 different lol hahah and ur not even D of the different ahem ahem yeah i know interesting.... lolzian you said such kind of ?S makes too many hurdles in the relationship .... kehti to sahi ho :P phir why kick :s ...... :P kontrol kishan puttar try ignorin.... wesay yay bedeljaata wala scene tumpay bohat suit kerta hay lol .... ek level aata hay shairi enjoy kernay ka jab ek shai-er apnay aap pay sher maarta rehta hay .... ;) kahin us level pay to nahi phonchay allah kher kere ....

anyways kuch meri taraf se khaas nahi he :P shayad suna ho... :P ya shayad kisi nay posy bhi kiya ho

soo doriyoon pay bhi meray dil say juda na thi
to meri zindagi thi meri magar bewafa na thi

dil ne zara say ghaam ko qiyamaat bana diya
warna wo ankh itni zada khafa na thi

yoon dil laraz utha hai kisi ko pukar kar
meri sada bhi jaise meri sada na thi

bar-gay-khezan jo shakh say toota wo khaak tha
is jaan sopurdigee k kaabil to hawa na thi

jugnoon ki roshni say bhi kya kya bharak uthay
is shair ki feeza k chiraagh AAshna na thi

marhoo-nay-sman jo rahai un ko dekh kar
khush hon k meray hotoon pay kohi duwa na thi

har jism dagh dagh tha ''FARAZ'' lakin hum
badnaam hum yoon hoyee k badan pay Qabba na thi........!!!


wesay u have 1 problem i will tell u later when the tyme cumz :P yay meri taraf say wesay agar yay tumhari dillagi hay to tumhay dillagi nahi kerni aatiii and i dont take netpals seriously..... one of my rules yes and there are many .....

Qurb k na wafa k hotey hein
sarey jhagrey ana k hotey hein

wo hamareyhein is tarha se FAIZ
jesey bandey khuda k hotey hein

bat niyat ki sirf hey werna
waqt sarey dua k hotey hein

bhool jatey hein mat bura kehna
log putley khata k hotey hein

wo bazahir jo kuch nahi lagtey
un se rishtey balaa k hotey hein...................... ;)


aakhri do misray samajh ayaay lolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

[momal ali]

Oh tu mera maqad poora howa bat kerny ka :D
duuuziaanzz khoob jala or tapa :D
as hyper as i wanted 2 see him :peace:

wow keya bat hey meri :D

or haan aap kahingz k mery chanay waly bohat hey :smoky:
tu bohat ghalat sochty hey aap :smoky:
or may ney keya aap ko kisi bhi jaga ye fell hony deya k
i wana b ur frnd or sumthing els :rolleyes:
get a lyf man :rolleyes:
we r not even frndz dan howa can u claim sucha nonsence concepts :rolleyes:
negative thinking haan dats da main reason :peace:

n i was talokng about realtionships xist in real lyf
in dis world dere is no damn word :p

anyways u said dat u have a problem with urself do tell me hann :somky:
do tell me may b i can figure out them :D

or haan b positve man .. :peace:

[chinamanx]

itna mat soch khuda bakhshaay - key teri soch ghehrii hojayaaay - aur faisalaay kamzor par jayeee .... :P

[momal ali]

or haan akhri do sher samjh mey aey i have readt dat poem so many tymz :D
very nyc :D

anyways apna shahkar tu share karna hie bhol gai :(

kuch der mey tujh sey kut gai thi
mehwar sey zamen hat gai thi

tujh ko bhi na mil saki mukaml
mey itny dukhon mey but gai thi

shayda k hamy sanwar deti
jo shub aa k palat gai thi

rasta tha wahi pey bin tumhary
may gurd mey kesay utt gai thi

path jhar ki ghari thi or shajar sey
ek beil ajab lipat gai thi...


na samjh aey tu pooch lena its by Parveeen shakir i juz luvt it .. :D

[chinamanx]

hahahah wont tell u now... when the right time comes laddies :P


chalo abhi apni dhoti pehanoooo aur bhagoo yahaan say llolll is thread ko tumhari zaroorat nahi rahiiiii :P


Uss ne sakoot-e-shab mein bhi apna payam rakh diya
hijir ke raat baam per mah-e-tammam rakh dia

Amad-e-dost ke naveed koo.aey wafa mein garam thi
Mein ne bhi aik chirag sa dil sar-e-sham rakh diya

Dekho ye mere khwab thay dekho ye mere zakham hain
Mein ne tu sab hisaab-e-jaan ber sar-e-aam rakh diya

Shiddat-e-tashnagi mein bhi gherat-e-maykashi rahi
us ne jo phair li nazar mein ne bhi jam rakh diya

us ne nazar nazar mein aisay he bhalay sukhan kahay
Mein ne to uss ke paaon mein sara kalam rakh diya

Jo bhi mila ussi ka he dil halka bagosh-e-yaar tha
us ne tu saray shehar ko kar ke ghulam rakh diya

Aur SAMEER chahiyeen kitni muhabbatin tujhay
Maaon ne tere naam per bachon ka naam rakh diya..... waah waaah

[chinamanx]

nahi samajh ayaa bataoooooo

[momal ali]

itna mat soch khuda bakhshaay - key teri soch ghehrii hojayaaay - aur faisalaay kamzor par jayeee .... :P

m having very strong nerves :D
dun worry :D
faisla karny ki taqat
or us par qaim rehny ki istiqmat Alhumdulillah doni hey Allah ney nawazi hey :D

u dun worry or haan sochna achi bat hey us sey mat mana kaero :D
jitna aap sochty ho utna he postive or negative aspects of lyf khul k samny aaty hey :D

m not agreed wid u :peace:

dadduuzianzzzzz :D

[chinamanx]

having dinner wana join me --- get ur own chopsticks... else wait .... tum falsafaaay baray jhaaarti ho jaisa pata nahi school k i teacher hoooo

[momal ali]

naaah in mey sey ek bat bhi falsaf nahi
sabh realities hein lyf ki :D

bonginzzzzzz daduzinazzzzz :D

anyways take ur tym beta ji :D

[chinamanx]

aur batao kya haal hay wesay .... theek ho papa kaisay hay mama kaisi hay lollllllllllllllllllllll lolziannn hahahaha

anyways somrthing special from s um1 special lollllllllllllllziannn

AASMAAN SEY INAAYAETIN NA TUJHEY MILEIN NA MUJHEY MILEIN
mohabbatoN sey raahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

hameiN aashiqi meiN sach mila hameiN zindagi meiN sab mila
magar be'wafaai ki aadateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

udhar tu duwa meiN laga raha idhar meiN duwa meiN laga raha
par mannatoN sey haajateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

thi aarzu kabhi saahiloN pe terey saath saath hum chal sakeiN
par samandaroN sey ijazateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

jis zindagi ki khaahishoN meiN so rat'jagoN meiN sajood keeye
us zindagi ki bashaarateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

hasratoN ke deeyoN ko aag kabhi tu ney di kabhi meiN ney di
magar roshni ki alaamateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

na to terey dard rukey kaheeN na merey zakhm bharey kabhi
sabar-o-shukar ki haalateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

kya khayaaal hay .... a hem a hem

thi aarzu kabhi saahiloN pe terey saath saath hum chal sakeiN
par samandaroN sey ijazateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

kabhi kabhiii muu acha bhi bana ke ayaa kerooo..... kabhi seedhay moo kisi say baat ki hay .......

chalo ajaooo saath chalaay ;) .......

[chinamanx]

Yeh Na Ho Kahein Tujh Ko La'Jawab Kar DooN MaiN
kuch Sawal Rehne Dy , kuch Jawab Rehne Dey ......................


hahahahhahah

[momal ali]

]AASMAAN SEY INAAYAETIN NA TUJHEY MILEIN NA MUJHEY MILEIN
mohabbatoN sey raahateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

hameiN aashiqi meiN sach mila hameiN zindagi meiN sab mila
magar be'wafaai ki aadateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

udhar tu duwa meiN laga raha idhar meiN duwa meiN laga raha
par mannatoN sey haajateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

thi aarzu kabhi saahiloN pe terey saath saath hum chal sakeiN
par samandaroN sey ijazateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

jis zindagi ki khaahishoN meiN so rat'jagoN meiN sajood keeye
us zindagi ki bashaarateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

hasratoN ke deeyoN ko aag kabhi tu ney di kabhi meiN ney di
magar roshni ki alaamateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN

na to terey dard rukey kaheeN na merey zakhm bharey kabhi
sabar-o-shukar ki haalateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey mileiN


hmmm speach less
intresting

[momal ali]

swall jawab k sher sey yaad aya last 2 pages par mey ney kuch swal kary they
u dint reply i wan dier answers

or han kuch sher arz hey aap ki khidmat ey dauuzianz :D

hum aur nagar ka bassi hain,,humain dil k paas na rakhain ap
ap ko toot k chaha karain koi sathi aisa daikhain ap

hum kahan hain chahat ka laiq,,humain pyar ka khat mut likha karain
yadoon ka sulagtay sahra mai barbad na khud ko kia karain
jab wasl ka kuch imkan nahi tu hijr mai uoon na jala karain
hum jo kuch ap sa kahtay hain ussa thanday dil sa soochain ap
hum aur nagar ka baasi hain humain dil k paas na rakhain ap
ap ko toot k chaha karay koi sathi aisa daikhain ap

[chinamanx]

hain kaunsay ?s ..... please let me know what were the ?s i missed as far as i am concerned i didnt miss any ?s :P ahem ahem

wesay yay kis kisam ke sher maarti ho lolllllllllllllll yay italian ko maara kero lol just kiddin

Yahi bahoot hai dil usay dhoond laya hai
kisi k saath sahi woh nazar aaya hai


***

Ye aaine se akele main guftagu kya hai
Jo main nahin to phir ye tere rubaru kya hai

Isi umeed pe kaati hai zindagi main NE
Woh kaash puchte mujh se ke aarzoo kya hai.....

pehlay sawaal bataoo kaunsay

[momal ali]

page no 11 n 12 zra ghor sey perho mery swal likhey nazar aa jaein gey :D
dadduzianzzzz :D


burhy ho gaey ho ab tu zra responsible ho jao :D
mery kahy howey ssawl bhi mey he dhond k dikhaon strange :D
n by de way ur collection is improving day by day dekhaa daddu hamry jesay gr8 logon
k sath rehny ka asar :peace:
beutiful poetry but thak gaya hey daddu kafi short ho gai poetry :D


Wo Bandagi Ki Aisi Misaal Deta Hai !!
Aawargi Ko Shariyat Mein Dhaal Deta Hai !!
Wo Khush Qalam Hai Is Darja Baat Karne Mein !!
Ke Harf Harf Ko Husno Jamal Deta Hai !!
Mein Us Ka Saath Jo Mangon Zindagi Bhar Ko !!
Bare Haseen Tareekay Se Usy Taal Deta Hai !!
Ye Jan Kar Bhi Ke Mera Wo Ho Nahi Sakta !!
Wo Daikhta Hai Yun Shasho Panj Mein Daal Deta Hai !!
Sawal Jese Ke Panaah Mangte Hon Aankhon Se !!
Jawab aankhon Se Aise Kamal Deta Hai

[momal ali]

aaj kal timingz match nahi karingz
i was buzy wid ma assesments :D
now m free try 2 catch u in morning :D
kafi din ho gaey daddu ki class nahi li :D


sochtaa huuN ke mahfuuz kar lien ise apne siine mein lafz-o-bayaan kii tarah
thoRii hii der meN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaan kii tarah

yeh rafaaqat bahut muKhtasar hai mirii hamsafar laa mire haath menN haath de
tuu havaa-e-sar-e-rahguzar kii tarah, maiN kisii nakhat-e-raayegaaN kii tarah

[momal ali]

bari der ki mehraban aaty aaty :D
keya bat hey daddu hum aap ki attendence sheet dekh k khush howey :peace:
weltum n ahem ahem :salam: ahem ahem

[chinamanx]

hahaha tumharay likhay huay sawaal tum hi dhoond ker bataooo lol to aur kahan batayaay gaa --- lolzian

Mein Us Ka Saath Jo Mangon Zindagi Bhar Ko !!
Bare Haseen Tareekay Se Usy Taal Deta Hai !!
Ye Jan Kar Bhi Ke Mera Wo Ho Nahi Sakta !!
Wo Daikhta Hai Yun Shasho Panj Mein Daal Deta Hai !!
Sawal Jese Ke Panaah Mangte Hon Aankhon Se !!
Jawab aankhon Se Aise Kamal Deta Hai

waah waah dekha agar competition takkar ka ho to wesay hi banda jab improve kerta hay to aurooon ko kehta hay ke tum improver ker rahaay ho ahem ahem kher to hay u want 2 catch me in the mornings kyun koi aur jaanwaar nahi mila may to samjha is thread ka THE END agaya hee anyways my timing has also changed lol

waaah waaah yay hui na baaaaaaaaaaaaat kasham seee

sochtaa huuN ke mahfuuz kar lien ise apne siine mein lafz-o-bayaan kii tarah
thoRii hii der meN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaan kii tarah

yeh rafaaqat bahut muKhtasar hai mirii hamsafar laa mire haath menN haath de
tuu havaa-e-sar-e-rahguzar kii tarah, maiN kisii nakhat-e-raayegaaN kii tarah

anyways i didnt find any ?S

Dear User

Thankyou for your post, I would be grateful if you could re-write the questions which you have asked me to answer in your previous post. Secondly I have cross-checked the post and i didnt find any questions which i haven't replied.

Do you have any further queries feel free to contact me.

Waiting for your favorable reply.

With Best Regards



Untruly urs.... ChinamanX ahem a hem kinda officical innit....

runjish hi sahi, dil hi dokhanay ke liye aa
aa phir se mujhe chor ke jaanay ke liye aa

kuch tau meray pindar-e mohabbat ka bharam rukh
tu bhi tau kabhi mujh ko mananay ke liye aa

pehle se marasim na sahi phir bhi kabhi tau
rusm-o rah-e dunya hi nibhanay ke liye aa

kis kis ko bataein gay joda'yee ka sabab hum
tu mujh se khafa hai tau zamanay ke liye aa

ik umr se hoon lazat-e giryaa se bhi mehroom
ai rahat-e jaan mujh ko rulanay ke liye aa

ab tak dil-e khush feham ko tujh se hein umidein
yeh aakhari shumay bhi bujhanay ke liye aa

[chinamanx]

wasalaam :P

[momal ali]

Ik Raat Hui Barsat Bohat
Main Roi Sari Raat Bohat

Her Ghum tha Zamany ka lekin
May Tanha thi Us Raat Bohat

Phir Ankh se ik "SAWAN" Barsa
Jab Seher Hui to Khiyal Aya

Wo Badal Kitna Tanha Tha
Jo Barsa Sari Raat Bohat

[chinamanx]

You baarisho say dosti achi nahi faraaaz

kacha tera makaan hay kuch to khayaal ker....

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Ek pal bhar mein tamam umer ki sochein badal jati hain
Jin rahon per chaltey hain wohi, rahein badal jati hain


Karney ko kiya nahi kartey log muhabbat mein
sirf hamarey liye hi kyun? rasmein badal jati hain


woh aisa hai ke us ka nam sunney ke tasawwer say hi
hamari tamaam tar saatein badal jati hain


sochta hoon jane kaise? kah paoon gha main us say
milta hoon to dil ki sari batein badal jati hain


yun to "raat" ka alam haseen hota hai, madhosh bhi
magar"chand"dekhoon to meri ratein badal jati hain


mat chaho,ke mujhe aadat nahi itna chahne walon ki
yeh na ho log kahein, jald hi adatein badal jati hain

[chinamanx]

You baarisho say dosti achi nahi faraaaz

kacha tera makaan hay kuch to khayaal ker....

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Ek pal bhar mein tamam umer ki sochein badal jati hain
Jin rahon per chaltey hain wohi, rahein badal jati hain


Karney ko kiya nahi kartey log muhabbat mein
sirf hamarey liye hi kyun? rasmein badal jati hain


woh aisa hai ke us ka nam sunney ke tasawwer say hi
hamari tamaam tar saatein badal jati hain


sochta hoon jane kaise? kah paoon gha main us say
milta hoon to dil ki sari batein badal jati hain


yun to "raat" ka alam haseen hota hai, madhosh bhi
magar"chand"dekhoon to meri ratein badal jati hain


mat chaho,ke mujhe aadat nahi itna chahne walon ki
yeh na ho log kahein, jald hi adatein badal jati hain

[momal ali]

daduziannz online again :OOPs:

gaey nahi keya :OOPs:

sabh kheryta na dadduzziannz ye ana jana keya lag rakha hey :rolleyes:

chalo aa gaey tu tu ek nazam sunty jana :D



saliqa-e-ishq..b.mera..bary..kamal..ka..tha
k..iktayar..b..dil..par..ajab..misal..ka..tha
mohabaton..may,main..kaiyal..the..lab..na..khulny. .ke
jawab..warna..mery..pass..har..sawal..ka..tha.....

[chinamanx]

waah waah by the way i a m back :s

Na tha jo sawaal taira,Us ka jawaab hoon main...
Ashkon ki darya,Gam e muhabath ki kitaab hoon main

Dukh diay jitnay haseen baharoon nay,Rangeen nazaroon nay
Ugha jo aik wairaney main sookha hua gullaab hoon main.......

Main rafeeq hoon sehrahoon ki,buland o balla pahadoon ki...
Millay jo dard jin sa Majnoo o Farhad ko wahi azahaab hoon main..
.
Deewanagi main na utahey mujay,Dewanoo ki mehfil say kohi....
peetay hain gham sa jisey dewaney - haan wahi sharhaab ho main.....

Na kabhi usey paney ki arzoo ki,na hi izhaar e muhabat kiya hum nay kahbi....
phir bi beh gae ankhoon sa mari un ansohoon ka sailaab hoon main..
.
Dia jalla kar abb andeeri raatoon main kya dhoondna hay SAHIL...
Kho dia hay jisey khulii ankhoon na wahi khwaab hoon main....

[momal ali]

daduziannzz kesay kehty ho hamy kiddoo :D
khud itni si bat ko decide nahi kery paey :D
dat either u r leavin or not :rolleyes:

kher mey tumhari kafirana statements sun k kafi upset ho gai thi :rolleyes:
ususally mey chat ki baty apny sath ley k nahi ghomti :rolleyes:
but i was very tensed when i came 2 know da theory of ur lyf :rolleyes:

kher Allah haedyat dey aap ko meri duaey janab k sath hey :rolleyes:

or app ki jhoot ki adat or attrection towards materialistc lyf sey kuch sher yaad aey arz hey kerti jaon :D

Ab teri yaad say wehshat naheen hoti mujh ko
Zakham khulney se aziyat naheen hoti mujh ko

Ab koi aaye chala jaye main khush rehta hoon
Ab kisi shakhs ki aadat naheen hoti mujh ko

Aesa badla hoon teray sheher ka paani pi kar
Jhoot boloon to nidaamat naheen hoti mujh ko

Main ne bhi ki hey mohabbat, so kisi ki khatir
Koi marta hai to hairat naheen hoti mujh ko

Itna masroof hoon jeenay ki hawas main yaaro
Saans leney ki bhi fursat naheen hoti mujh ko


u need sum positive changes in ur lyf man :peace:

[momal ali]

Na kabhi usey paney ki arzoo ki,na hi izhaar e muhabat kiya hum nay kahbi....
phir bi beh gae ankhoon sa mari un ansohoon ka sailaab hoon main..
.
Dia jalla kar abb andeeri raatoon main kya dhoondna hay SAHIL...
Kho dia hay jisey khulii ankhoon na wahi khwaab hoon main....

keya bat hey janab aap ki very nyc .. keya khety ho tum keya bola karo :D

han yaad aaya ZALIM hey na :D

[life2]

Kabhi loot aayein to poochna naheen dekhna unhein ghour sey
Jinhein raste mein khabar hoi keh yeh raasta koi aur hai

[momal ali]

tu koi hey yahan :D
ahaan :rolleyes:

hein bhag gaya :OOPs:

[chinamanx]

sab kuch sahi laga... magar the word kaafirana hurted ;)

Tujh say bichar kay hum bhi muqaddar kay ho gaye...
phir jo bhi dar milla ussi dar kay hogaye ....
Phir youn hua kay ghair ko dil say laga liya...
andar woh nafratain thiin kay bahir kay hogaye ..
Kya log thay kay jaan say badh kay aziz thay...
ab dil say mahw-e-naam bhi aksar kay hogaye....
Ab yaad-e-yaar tujh say karain kya shikayatain...
ae dard-e-hijr hum bhi tau patthar kay hogaye..
Samjha rahay thay mujh ko sabhii nasahian-e-shaher...
phir rafta rafta khud ussi kafir kay hogaye ....
Ab kay na intezaar karain chara gar ka hum...
ab kay gaye tau kooy-e-sitam gar kay hogaye
Rotay ho ik jazeera-e-jaan ko faraz tum...
dekho tau kitnain shaher samandar kay hogaye......


next time be careful..... ahem ahem bura laga to kaha

Barra kathin hay raasta jo aa sako to saath do...

Yeh zindagi ka faasla mita sako to saath do...

Barray faraib khaao gay barray sitam uthaao gay...

Yeh umer bhar ka saath hay nibhaa sako to saath do...

Jo tum kaho yeh dil to kya mai'n jaan bhi karoo'n fidaa...

Jo mai'n kahoo'n to ik nazar lutaa sako to saath do...

Hazaar imtehaan aur hazaar aazmaa'ishai'n....

Hazaar dukh, hazaar gham uthaa sako to saath do...

Yeh zidnagi yahaa'n khu'shi ghamo'n k saath saath hay...

Rula sako to saath do, ha'nsa sako to saath do....!!..............

[~ Bikhre Lamhe ~]

sab kuch sahi laga... magar the word kaafirana hurted ;)

Tujh say bichar kay hum bhi muqaddar kay ho gaye...
phir jo bhi dar milla ussi dar kay hogaye ....
Phir youn hua kay ghair ko dil say laga liya...
andar woh nafratain thiin kay bahir kay hogaye ..
Kya log thay kay jaan say badh kay aziz thay...
ab dil say mahw-e-naam bhi aksar kay hogaye....
Ab yaad-e-yaar tujh say karain kya shikayatain...
ae dard-e-hijr hum bhi tau patthar kay hogaye..
Samjha rahay thay mujh ko sabhii nasahian-e-shaher...
phir rafta rafta khud ussi kafir kay hogaye ....
Ab kay na intezaar karain chara gar ka hum...
ab kay gaye tau kooy-e-sitam gar kay hogaye
Rotay ho ik jazeera-e-jaan ko faraz tum...
dekho tau kitnain shaher samandar kay hogaye......


next time be careful..... ahem ahem bura laga to kaha

Barra kathin hay raasta jo aa sako to saath do...

Yeh zindagi ka faasla mita sako to saath do...

Barray faraib khaao gay barray sitam uthaao gay...

Yeh umer bhar ka saath hay nibhaa sako to saath do...

Jo tum kaho yeh dil to kya mai'n jaan bhi karoo'n fidaa...

Jo mai'n kahoo'n to ik nazar lutaa sako to saath do...

Hazaar imtehaan aur hazaar aazmaa'ishai'n....

Hazaar dukh, hazaar gham uthaa sako to saath do...

Yeh zidnagi yahaa'n khu'shi ghamo'n k saath saath hay...

Rula sako to saath do, ha'nsa sako to saath do....!!..............




ChinaMan app janab kab se poetry karne lag pare ?
wyse nice poetry china main toys sell karte karte poetry wow

[momal ali]

sab kuch sahi laga... magar the word kaafirana hurted

Orite i wd b care ful
but shayd tumhy hurt dekh kar kuch satisfied hun
k is hud tak faith nahi gaya tumahara
k tumhy koi kafir bulaey Or tumhy kuch bhi bura na lagy :rolleyes:
tum hurt howey believe me
pahli bar kisi k hurt honey par khushi feel hoi hey
Allah pak ney apny insano k leye hedayat k darwazy kabi band nahi keye
INSHALLAH soon thingz will bcome in gud shape

or han when u said u lost ur faith
tubh is sey kahi zada hurt mey hoi thi jitna tum kafirana word par howey ho
believe me its hurts me more dan u
6 to 8 normally mey so jati hun
but aap ki stataements ney sony nahi deya
sochti he rahi k Allah paak ney jin ko hedayat nahi de un say bara badnsaseeb or koi nahi
but tum ko tu Allah pak ney her ilm sey nawaza n being a muslim tum her bat sey aagah ho
phir ye laparwai q ... jo Allah ko pasand nahi
laparwa tu sirf Allah pak ki zat hey
anyways meri koshish thi k koi taqrer na jharon but na chahty howey i dun know key keya likh gai
or han shuker hey k tum hurt howey is had tak laparwai nahi aai abhi
Thank God..

[momal ali]

hmmm sath do wow beautiful1

itni sari shartein rakh ker he q sath manga jaata hey always :rolleyes:
kher mood theek karo m sorry next tym esa kuch nahi bolon gi :D
zalim dadduzianzz he theek hey aap k leye :D

Hijr k mosam main yeh barish ka barasna kesa,
Aik sehra sey samandar ka guzarna kesa?,

Aey mere dil na pareshan ho, tanha ho kar,
Woh terey sath chala kab tha, bicharna kesa?,

Log kehtey hain gulshan ki tabahi dekho,
Main to veeran sa jangal tha, ujarna kesa?,

Dekhney main to koi dard nahin, dukh bhi nahin,
Phir yeh aankhon main youn ashkon ka ubharna kesa?,

Be-wafa kehney ki jurrat bhi na karna us ko,
Us ney iqrar kiya kab tha, mukarna kesa?

[~*Gillanii]

Muhabbatain Jab Shumar Karna??

Ya

Dushmani Jab Shumar Karna??

[~*Gillanii]

aChi Poetry Hay Mahum & China Bartan!
Keep it up!

[~*Gillanii]

BayWafa Kehnay Ki Jurrat Bhi Na Karna Us Ko ..
Us Nay Iqraar Kia Kab Tha, Mukarna Kaisa!!


Chaaa Gai Behna!

[chinamanx]

there are certain things which are better left unsaid... you wont understand -----------------

well said - but the word which u used was wrong .... i said abt losing faith not believe....

wesay bhi kya khoob kaha hay :::::

Be-wafa kehney ki jurrat bhi na karna us ko,
Us ney iqrar kiya kab tha, mukarna kesa?

-------------------------------------------------------- not badd ahem ahem har sawal ka jawab rakhta hay koi.......

kuch meri bhi suno apni to aap sunaa chukiii...........


Khamoshi Say Bikharna Aa Gia Hay,
hamey Ab Khud Ujarna Aa Gia Hay,

kisi Ko Baywafa Kehtay Nahi Hum,
hamey Bhi Ab Badalna Aa Gia Hay,

kisi Ki Yaad Main Rotay Nahi Hain,
hamey Chupchaap Jalna Aa Gia Hay,

gulaboon Ko Tum Apnay Pass Rakho,
hamey Kaanton Pay chalna Aa gia Hay.

[momal ali]

gulaboon Ko Tum Apnay Pass Rakho,
hamey Kaanton Pay chalna Aa gia Hay.

ahem ahem :D

well said halat sabh sikha dety hey my dear :D
daduzianzzz :D

:salam:

howz u ?

koi bat buri lagi to soRry

there are certain things which are better left unsaid... you wont understand ----------------- ahaan intresting

keh dena chahey her bat werna misunderstandings he rehti hey aksar

kher kafi simple sey kuch shar arz hey :D
dauzianzzz ji :D


tery baary mein jab socha nahi tha
mein tanha tha magar itna nahi tha

teri tasveer se kerta tha baatain
mery kamray mein aayena nahii tha

samandar ne mujha piyasa hi rakha
mein jab sehra mein tha piyasa nahi tha

manane ruthne ke khel mein hum
bich'har jayenge ye socha nahi tha

suna band ker li us ne aankhain
kayi raatoo'n se vo soya nahii tha

[momal ali]

Muhabbatain Jab Shumar Karna??

Ya

Dushmani Jab Shumar Karna??

sooli bhai yaha muhabtein nahi azeyatein shumar karingz hum ... :0039:

[momal ali]

BayWafa Kehnay Ki Jurrat Bhi Na Karna Us Ko ..
Us Nay Iqraar Kia Kab Tha, Mukarna Kaisa!!


Chaaa Gai Behna!

tnetu sooli bhai :ballybally:

[chinamanx]

wesay tumharay chahnaay walaay bohat hay lolziannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn .........................

[momal ali]

ahem ahem :D

kaha gum ho shairi kerty kerty thak gaey keya daddu :rolleyes:

mey ney salam kara ney jawab nahi deya q ?

[chinamanx]

wasalamazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz yay misunderstandings banny rahaay to acha he......

samandar ne mujha piyasa hi rakha
mein jab sehra mein tha piyasa nahi tha.................... dekh liya samandarr kooooooooooooo................

Gali main dard k purze talaash karti thi
Maire khatoot k tukre talaash karti thi

Bhulae koon Azyat Pasandiyaan us ki
Khushi k dhair main sadmey talaash karti thi

Ajab hijar parasti thi uski fitrat main
Shajar k toote patey talaash karti thi

Ghuma phira k judai ki baat karti thi
Hamaisha hijar k harbey talaash karti thi

Duain karti thi ujre howe mazaroon par
Bare ajeeb sahaaray talaash karti thi

Mujhe to aaj bataaya hai badloon ne "Sameer"
Wo laut aane k raaste talaash karti thi



wesay timings kuch jamm n ahi rahiii ..... i think its time 2 end what we started..... ;)

kya kehti hoo..................

mein dil pe jabar karoonga tujhe bhula doonga
maronga khud bhi tujhe bhi kari saza doonga

ye teragi meray hi ghar ka mukadar kyun ho
mein teray shehar k saray diye bhuja doonga

wafa karoonga kisi sogawar chehray se
purani kabar pe katba naya saja doonga

usi kahyal se guzri hai sham e dard aksar
k had se barhay ga tu muskara dunga

barha rahi hain meray dukh nishania teri
mein teray khat teri tasveer tak jala doonga

bohut dinoon se mera dil udas hai mohsin
iss aenay ko aks ab naya doonga.....................................

[momal ali]

Gali main dard k purze talaash karti thi
Maire khatoot k tukre talaash karti thi

Bhulae koon Azyat Pasandiyaan us ki
Khushi k dhair main sadmey talaash karti thi

Ajab hijar parasti thi uski fitrat main
Shajar k toote patey talaash karti thi

Ghuma phira k judai ki baat karti thi
Hamaisha hijar k harbey talaash karti thi

Duain karti thi ujre howe mazaroon par
Bare ajeeb sahaaray talaash karti thi

Mujhe to aaj bataaya hai badloon ne "Sameer"
Wo laut aane k raaste talaash karti thi


wah wah keya kehty ho aap zalim
q sislsaly tourny ki itni jaldi q hey ?
tymingz ke keya hey
jubh tym mily share kar deya kero koi nazam
as u have seen k mey 24 hrs yahi hoti hun
haan daddu bohat hop hop kerta hey :D

haan ukta gaey ho tu ill never force u its quite uo 2 u daduzianzz zada tention mat lo :D

[chinamanx]

ChinaMan app janab kab se poetry karne lag pare ?
wyse nice poetry china main toys sell karte karte poetry wow



thanks mate then again shairiii shuru kerkeey chaurdiiii thi lollllllllll .... to sochloo .....key fanahh say baqaa tak pohanch gaya huu ;) ............................

[chinamanx]

nahi baba uktaa nhai gayaa socha .................................................. ..... chalo chorooo....

btw kaunsay 24/7 tum yahaan hoti ho jab may ataa hu tum nahi hotiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


ahem ahem ...................

[momal ali]

pata nahi konsey hrs tum aaty ho bongey dadduzianz :D
even rat ko jub late night tum aey tub bhi m dere
but dint reply n hop hop kar k bhag gaey :D
SUBHA JUB AEY TU I GOT DC :d
U KNOW YAHAN KA NET OR LIGHT DONO HEY
SUBHANALLAH hey :D

or haan tumhary silsaly torny ki bat sey yaad ayey kuch ashaar :D
es sy pehlay k be,wafa ho jain
kyu na aye dost hum juda ho jain

tu bhi hiray sy baan gaya pather
hum bhi jane kal kia sy kia ho jain

tu k yaqta tha be,shumaar howa
hum bhi totain tou ja-bja ho jain

hum bhi majboriyun ka uzar kerin
phir kahin aur mubtla ho jain

hum ager manzil na baan pain
manziluon ka rasta ho jain

dair sy soch main hain parwanay
raakh ho jain,,hawa ho jain

ishq bhi kheal hai naseebo ka
khaak ho jain,,shama ho jain

chahat hum ny choar di hai FARAZ
kia kerin log jab be-wafa ho jain........

[chinamanx]

OH ZALIMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM kher ..... kaaaaaaaaash ;) nay kuch asar kiyaaa

[chinamanx]

zikr-e-shab-e-firaq se vehshat use bhi thi
meri tarah kisi se muhabat use bhi thi

mujh ko bhi shauq tha naye chehron ki deed ka
rasta badal ke chalane ki aadat use bhi thi

us raat der tak vo raha mahv-e-guftagoo
masroof main bhi kam thaa faragat use bhi thi

sunta tha vo bhi sab se purani kahaniyaan
taza rafaqaton ki zaroorat use bhi thi

mujh se bichar ke shaher main ghul mil gaya vo shaKhs
haalaa ke shahar bhar se raqabat use bhi thi

"KASH"na jan khud ko nakaam kay bad zouq,
woh mana nahi par tujh say mohabbat usay bhi thi,

vo mujh se barh ke zabt ka aadi tha ji gaya
varna har ek saans qayamat use bhi thi

ahem ahem


yay kaash tumhay aaj lay doobay gaa :P

[Fahad]

nice

[chinamanx]

thankoo fahad

[momal ali]

ye kash mera nahi tha likhny waly ka tha :D
n i have edited dat 1 :D

raaz ki baatein likhi aur Khat khulaa rahaney diya
jaaney kyunn rusavaiyoon ka silsila rahaney diya

umr bhar merey saath reh kar wo na samujha dil ki baat
do diloon ke daramiyaan ik faasala rahaney diya

apni fitarat wo badal paya na iske bawajood
Khatam ki ranjish magar gila rahaney diya

main samujhta tha, Khushi degi fareb mujhe
is liyein main ne Gamoon se rabata rahaney diya…

[chinamanx]

waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

umr bhar merey saath reh kar wo na samujha dil ki baat
do diloon ke daramiyaan ik faasala rahaney diya

kya baat hay ... lagta hay aag barabbarr lagi h ui he

[chinamanx]

Aaina Hoon Main Mere Saamne Aakar Dekho
Khud Nazar Aaogye Jo Aankh Mila Ker Dekho

Mere Gham Mai Mari Takdeer Nazar Aati Hai
Dugmagaaoge Mera Dard Utha Ker Dekho

Youn Tu Aasaan Nazar Aata Hai Manzil Ka Safar
Kitna Mushquil Hai Meri Raah Se Jaaker Dekho

Bazam Ka Meri Charagaan Hai Nazar Ka Dhoka
Kin Andheroon Mai Bhatakta Hoon Main Aaker Dekho

Dil Tumhara Hai Main Ye Jaan Bhi Dedoon Tum Per
Bas Mera Saath Zara Dil Se Nibha Ker Dekho

Mout Barhaq Hai Mager Tum Se Waada Hai Mera
Laut Aaounga Tum Ikbaar Bula Ker Dekho .......

ik baar ;) ..... kidher gayib hoing btw ....

[momal ali]

Aaina Hoon Main Mere Saamne Aakar Dekho
Khud Nazar Aaogye Jo Aankh Mila Ker Dekho

Mere Gham Mai Mari Takdeer Nazar Aati Hai
Dugmagaaoge Mera Dard Utha Ker Dekho

Youn Tu Aasaan Nazar Aata Hai Manzil Ka Safar
Kitna Mushquil Hai Meri Raah Se Jaaker Dekho

Bazam Ka Meri Charagaan Hai Nazar Ka Dhoka
Kin Andheroon Mai Bhatakta Hoon Main Aaker Dekho

Dil Tumhara Hai Main Ye Jaan Bhi Dedoon Tum Per
Bas Mera Saath Zara Dil Se Nibha Ker Dekho

Mout Barhaq Hai Mager Tum Se Waada Hai Mera
Laut Aaounga Tum Ikbaar Bula Ker Dekho .......

wow keya bat hey aap ki janab :D
chat dc hoingz :D
cant login again :D
kher choice achi hoti ja rahi he dadduzian ki :p

[chinamanx]

choice meri nahi tumhay samajh ab aaana shuru hoi hee lol i was thinking to go back to the page where we started and read again till the last page lol ........................... wesay kya irada he

[chinamanx]

wesay msn is workin or not !!! agar chal raha hay to its better for u lolziannnnnnnnnnnn

[momal ali]

aap k level k takkar k sher tu nahi but phir bhi post karingz
simple or deshi c hey like me :laugh:

Zindagi jab bhi teri bazm mein laati hai humein
ye zameen chaand se behtar nazar aati hai humein

surkh phooloun se mehak uthti hain dil ki raahein
din dhale yoon teri aawaaz bulati hai humein

yaad teri kabhi dastak kabhi sargoshi se
raat ke pichhle pehar roz jagaati hai humein

har mulaaqat ka anjaam judaai kyun hai
ab to har waqt yahi baat sataati hai hamein.

[chinamanx]

hahaha ab to yahi baat satayaay gee tumhay lol achi baat hay .... chalo tumhay kuch to cheez satayaay gee warna to aaj tak tum hi satataaatii ayee ho :P .. ahem ahem achi thi magar old 1 chalo old is gold :P


sumthin worth readinn.....

Shabnami Raat suhaani hai, laut aao!
Aik ghazal tum ko sunaani hai, laut aao!
Phir nayaa khwaab daikhna hai seher honay tak,
Phir nayee shamaa jalaani hai, laut aao!
Naa main barbaad hui hoon, naa ruswaa tum,
Naa-mukammal ye kahaani hai, laut aao!
Tum se mil kar he main bicchrroon, koi laaz'mi to nahi,
Phir bhi ek rasm nibhaani hai, Laut Aao...! !!

and sumthin what i wanted 2 say :P

ahem ahem socha is kahani ko kyun na ek morrr dein ....

hum tujhse shok-e-mulaqat nahi rakhte magar
mile koi aur tujhse yeh acha nahi lagta..

hum tujhe chahte bhi nahi hain magar
chaahe koi aur tujhe yeh acha nahi lagta..

tere kaafle main chalne ki aarzu nahi magar
chale koi aur saath tere yeh acha nahi lagta..

deedar tera itna pasand nahi humain magar
dekhe koi aur tujhe yeh acha nahi lagta..

nafrat hai mohabbet hai adawat hai maaloom nahi
kisi aur ko bataye yeh acha nahi lagta..

[momal ali]

tere kaafle main chalne ki aarzu nahi magar
chale koi aur saath tere yeh acha nahi lagta..

deedar tera itna pasand nahi humain magar
dekhe koi aur tujhe yeh acha nahi lagta..

nafrat hai mohabbet hai adawat hai maaloom nahi
kisi aur ko bataye yeh acha nahi lagta.


dadduzian is posessive :laugh:
keya bat hey very nyc :laugh:

hmm intresting :p

kher tumhary sawloon sey kuch achi si poetry ka khayala aya

Nazar me ZuLmat badan main thandak
Jamal kitna ajeeb sa tha,
Mian us ki chahat me ghar se nilka tu
Haal kitna ajeeb sa Tha,
Na main ney osay khatoot likhe
na os ney meri panah chahi,
dono ko apni bey khudi pe
malal kitna ajeeb sa tha,
wo apni raton me chand dekhe
main apni raton main os ko souchon,
badalte lamhon me souch ka yeh
visaal kitna ajeeb sa tha,
safar akelay he kaat lo gey
main ne poucha tu ro diya wo,
jawab kitna ajeeb sa tha
sawal kitna ajeeb sa tha......

[chinamanx]

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

safar akelay he kaat lo gey
main ne poucha tu ro diya wo,
jawab kitna ajeeb sa tha
sawal kitna ajeeb sa tha......

chalo kuch acha to sunaa magar kuch bhi kaho this was the best of the day .... :p a hem ahem

bijli janaay ke darr say tum kuch acha likhna shuru hogaye hoo lollziannnnn kahin dhotii to nahi pehni hui ahem ahem

Hum Ne Pyar Mein Paaya To Kya Paaya
Kabhi Khud Ro Diye Kabhi Tum Ko Rulaya

Halat-e-Gham Mein Beh Gaya Jo Jo Aansoo
Wo Zindagi Mein Phir Kabhi Na Behney Paya

Saza Mujhey Mili Aur Jaza Unhein
Aisa Bhi Kya Insaaf Ne Hai Sir Jhukaya

Himat Nahin Thi Uss Mein Saath Dainey Ki
Ab Tak Na Janey Wo Kaisey Chal Paaya

Tukrey Apney Wajood Ke Roz Jorta Hoon Main
Uss Ne Mairey Dil Ko Aisa Bikhraaya

Zulm Per Zulm Kartey Rahey Wo Aur Sameer
Khamoosh Hi Raha, Kabhi Uff Ker Na Paya

[momal ali]

daddu shairi muk gai keya :laugh:

chalo take sum rest han :laugh:
baht hop hop kar leya :laugh:

ek
nazam share kerti jaon :D
i feel sum tym it reflects my self :D
so jaha itny poems shre ki hey waha ek or sahi :D

UDAAS LOGO KI BUSTIYO MAI
WO TITLIYO KO TALASH KARTI
WO AIK LARKI . . .

WO GOL CHEHRA, WO KAALI AANKAIN
JO KARTI REHTI HAZAAR BAATAIN
MIZAAJ SAADA,,, WO DIL KI ACHI
WO AIK LARKI . . .

SAARI BATAIN WO DIL KI MAANAY
WOHI KARAY WO, JO DIL MAI TAANAY
KOYI NA JANAY,, KYA OS KI MARZI
WO AIK LARKI . . .

WO CHAHATO K SARAAB DEKAY
MOHABATOO K WO KHWAB DEKAY
WO KHUD SAMANDAR MAGAR HAI PYASI
WO AIK LARKI . . .

WO DOSTI K NISAAB JANAY
WO JANTI HAI EHD NEBHANAY
WO ACHI DOST WO ACHI SAATHI
WO AIK LARKI . . .

WO JAAM CHAHAT KA PEENA CHAHAY
WO APNE MARZI SE JEENA CHAHAY
MAGAR HAI DARTI,,, MAGAR HAI DARTI
WO AIK LARKI . . .

MOHABBATO KA JO FALSAFA HAI
WO JANTI HAI,,, OSAY PATA HAI
WO PHIR BI REHTI DARI DARI SI
WO AIK LARKI . . .

WO JOOTAY LOGO KO SACHA SAMJAY
WO SARI DUNYA KO ACHA SAMJAY
WOH KITNI SAADI,,, WO KITNI PAGLI
WO AIK LARKI .

[chinamanx]

hahahahah

WO JOOTAY LOGO KO SACHA SAMJAY
WO SARI DUNYA KO ACHA SAMJAY
WOH KITNI SAADI,,, WO KITNI PAGLI
WO AIK LARKI .

this is very right hahahah lolziannn magar abhi ummar hi kya hay to waqt ke saath saath yay pagli larkiii bhi shai hojayee gee yeah it suits u dufferrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr


wesay u nay bataya nahi shaadi ahem ahem kiskii he

[momal ali]

bijli janaay ke darr say tum kuch acha likhna shuru hogaye hoo lollziannnnn kahin dhotii to nahi pehni hui ahem ahem
ye keya batamezi hey dhoti wali :OOPs:
batameez lolzianzzzzz :laugh:

or ye sameer chahcu ki shairi bohat pasand hey aap ko shayad dauuzianzzz :laugh:

[chinamanx]

badtameezi nahi thi baba..... wesay ahem ahem samajh jaaoooo lolziannn

Chahat ki mehfil main bulaya hai kisi ne,
Khud bula ker phir sataya hai kisi ne,
Jab tak jali hai shama jalta raha parwana,
Kiya is tarhan saath nibhaya hai kisi ne

Armaan mere raiza raiza hogaye hain,
Yun kil k aangan say giraya hai kisi ne,
Aag lagi hai dasht main koi kiya bhujaye ga,
Dil is tarah say aaj jalaya hai kisi ne,

Dil rota hai raat bhar yaad kar k kisi ko,
Is tarhan ulfat main zakham khaya hai kisi ne,
Sangdil jo tha aaj woh bhi ro parha
Us ko bhi tarpaya hai kisi ne,

yay sameer ke peechay ek bohat bara raaaz hay.... tumhay jab pata chalaay ga ;) to hanso gi nahi ahem ahem

[momal ali]

shadi ek larky or larki ki hey
ofcourse kisi daddu ki shadi par tu jany say rahi mey
imagin agar daddu ki shadi par jaey tu waha tar tar kerna parey ga :laugh:
hop hop kar k salami deni ho gi :laugh:
n makheyon ka ek dabba lay k jana parey ga :laugh:
ewwwww :laugh:
dadduzianz :laugh:

[chinamanx]

hahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

fiker na keroo chand daddu wali shadiooo may s irf army officers bhi hotay hay .... salami bhi daytay hay makhio ke bajayaay unke haath may bhi dabay hotay hay lol samjh ayaa yaa nahi ................... wesay may soch raha hooo --- chalo janaay do

[momal ali]

Oh tu ye batey raz ki hey :p
chaly razon ko raz he rehna dena chahyey :D
keya khayal hey :p

Nazar Main Zakhm-e-Tabbasum Chupa Chupa k mila
Khafa To Tha Wo Magar Mujhse Muskura k Mila

Wo Humsafar K Mere Tanz Pe Hansta Tha Bohat
Sitam Zareef Muje Aaina Dikha Ke Mila

Mere Mizaj pe Hairan Hai Zindagi Ka Shaoor
Main Apni Moat K(K)o Aksar Gale Laga K Mila

Main Us Se Mangta Kia Khoon Baha Jawani Ka
K Wo Bhi Aaj Muje Apna Ghar Luta k mila

Main jisko Dhoond Raha Tha Nazar Ke Raste Main
Mujhe Mila Bhi Tou Zalim Nazar Jhuka K Mila

Main Zakham-e-Zakham Badan Le K Chal Dia
Wo Jab Bhi Apni chere Per gham Saja K mila...

[chinamanx]

anyways m about to leave dono when will we meet again ............. ahem ahem .....


allah hafiz ...............................

[chinamanx]

well i never thot i never had the complete thingy what i had was

Nazar Main Tabbasum Chupa Chupa k mila
Khafa To Tha Wo Magar Mujhse Muskura k Mila

Main jisko Dhoond Raha Tha Nazar Ke Raste Main
Mujhe Mila Bhi Tou Zalim Nazar Jhuka K Mila


thanks huzooorrrrrrrrrr u made my day anyways m already for my meeting just gettin hold of me tie n m off ;) u take care aight ..... phir agar tumhari baato may asar hua to sochay ge .... ke tum haqdaar ho ke nahi .... i hope u understood ;)

[chinamanx]

Baaton baaton mian bicharney ka ishara karkey
Khud bhi roya woh buhat ham se kinara karkey

Sochta rehta hoon tanhai main anjam-e-khuloos
Phir usi jurm-e-mohabbat ko dobara karkey

Jagmaga di hain terey shehrer ki galiyan main ne
Apney askhon ko palkon pe sitara karkey

Dekh letey hain chalo hosla apne dil ka
Aur kuch roz tere saath guzara karkey

Aik hi sheher main rehna hai magar milna nahi
Dekhtey hain yeh aziyat bhi gawara karkey

[momal ali]

Baaton baaton mian bicharney ka ishara karkey
Khud bhi roya woh buhat ham se kinara karkey

Sochta rehta hoon tanhai main anjam-e-khuloos
Phir usi jurm-e-mohabbat ko dobara karkey

Jagmaga di hain terey shehrer ki galiyan main ne
Apney askhon ko palkon pe sitara karkey

Dekh letey hain chalo hosla apne dil ka
Aur kuch roz tere saath guzara karkey

Aik hi sheher main rehna hai magar milna nahi
Dekhtey hain yeh aziyat bhi gawara karkey


wow very nyc daddui
or sunday ko meetings :D
a ver ver hard working dadddu :D
hum khush howeya esa daddu dekh k jo itna hardworking hey :D


ok Allah haifz n take gud care of urself :D


Apni uljhan ko barhanay ki Zarurat kya hai
Chhorna hai tu bahane ki zarurat kya hai

lag chuki aag tu lazim hai dhuan uthe ga
Dard ko dil may chupanay ki zarurat kya hai

Ajnabi rung chalakta hoo ager aankhon say
Unsay phir aankh milanay ki zarurat kya hai

Bethe rehtay hai teri mehfil may Dost naye
Ab tumhai Yaar purany ki zarurat kya hai

Sath rehtay hoo mager sath nahi hote....
Aysay Rishtay ko nibhanay ki Zarurat kya hai

or han ye baat simple or seedhi keya keroo mujhy samjh nahi aatin :D
so dun hope k mey samjh gai :(

[momal ali]

OoOoey daduu u still here logout hona bhool gaey keya :D

[chinamanx]

waaah waah dhoti singh.... kya baat hay aapkiii

tumhay zaroor meray sawaloo ka jawab dayna hota he.......

.....................................

Ye dard mit gaya to phir?
Ye zakhm sil gaya to phir…?
Bichhar kar sochta hoon main,
Wo phir se mil gaya to phir…?

Main titliyon k shehar mein,
Rahoon to mujh ko fiker hai…
Wo phool jo khila nahi,
Wo phool khil gaya to phir…?

Tujhe bhi kuch nahi mila,
Mujhe bhi kuch nahi mila…
Tamam umer k liye,
Ye dard mil gaya to phir…?

Main is liye to aaj tak,
Sawal bhi na kar saka…
Agar mere sawal ka,
Jawab mil gaya to phir…?




ahem ahemmmmmmmmmm

[chinamanx]

achi baat hay nahi samajhtiii lolllllllllllll aisay hi bunday ki talaash thi mujhay.......................

wesay kya baat hay aapki

ahem ahem

Apni uljhan ko barhanay ki Zarurat kya hai
Chhorna hai tu bahane ki zarurat kya hai

lag chuki aag tu lazim hai dhuan uthe ga
Dard ko dil may chupanay ki zarurat kya hai

Ajnabi rung chalakta hoo ager aankhon say
Unsay phir aankh milanay ki zarurat kya hai

Bethe rehtay hai teri mehfil may Dost naye
Ab tumhai Yaar purany ki zarurat kya hai

Sath rehtay hoo mager sath nahi hote....
Aysay Rishtay ko nibhanay ki Zarurat kya hai............................................... ................. zaroorat hay ;)

[~ Bikhre Lamhe ~]

beautiful last 3 pages

chinamixxxxxxxxx remember me ;)
phir batyon ga koin houn main:P msn id le li ha khabi online bi aajaya karo ke sara din pakore hi sell karne hain CHINATOWN main

Meri Taraf Se Aap Dono Ke Liye Gift MahuM( nice Poetries) ChinaMixx ( you ki bi )







tera sada sa chehra
ye sogwar lehja
purnum si ye aankhin
hain hont thartharate
kuch kehna chahin muj se
lekin hain phir ruk jate
mein janta houn k na kaho gi
ye ghum akele hi saho gi
magar ah meri ajnabi dost
ye kaise tumhin mein samjhayon?
jise nai milna hota
wo khabi nai milta
jo zakham bymarham ho
wo khabi nai silta
maazi k ek laa hasil ka
ab tak kyun ghum karna
chor do ye jehad-e-musalasal
ye kyun rooz rooz ka marna
aayo aj batwara kar late hain
khushyin kuch bhejta houn tum ko
anso tum kuch yahen rawana kar do
khatam karo ye rona dhona
kuch hansne ka behana kar do
ghum k is lawe ko
apni zaat se bahir behne do
thak jayo gi sehte sehte
kuch ghum muje bi sehne do

[chinamanx]

beautiful last 3 pages

chinamixxxxxxxxx remember me ;)
phir batyon ga koin houn main:P msn id le li ha khabi online bi aajaya karo ke sara din pakore hi sell karne hain CHINATOWN main

Meri Taraf Se Aap Dono Ke Liye Gift MahuM( nice Poetries) ChinaMixx ( you ki bi )







tera sada sa chehra
ye sogwar lehja
purnum si ye aankhin
hain hont thartharate
kuch kehna chahin muj se
lekin hain phir ruk jate
mein janta houn k na kaho gi
ye ghum akele hi saho gi
magar ah meri ajnabi dost
ye kaise tumhin mein samjhayon?
jise nai milna hota
wo khabi nai milta
jo zakham bymarham ho
wo khabi nai silta
maazi k ek laa hasil ka
ab tak kyun ghum karna
chor do ye jehad-e-musalasal
ye kyun rooz rooz ka marna
aayo aj batwara kar late hain
khushyin kuch bhejta houn tum ko
anso tum kuch yahen rawana kar do
khatam karo ye rona dhona
kuch hansne ka behana kar do
ghum k is lawe ko
apni zaat se bahir behne do
thak jayo gi sehte sehte
kuch ghum muje bi sehne do




HAINNNNNNNNNNN MERI IDDDDDDDDDDDD u kay paas kahan say agayeeeeeeeeee janabbb


ahem ahem might be wrong agar id hay to bataooo :P

[~ Bikhre Lamhe ~]

Chinaaaaaaaaaaa Mixxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
China Main Lote abhi bi sell karte ho kya

[chinamanx]

huzooooooooor aapki bhi waah waa hay magar jiggers bataoo to sahi may to ek hi naamuraad ko jaanta hu canada say magar uski dp may uski chaddi nazar ayaay yay mumkin nahi sahi sahi bataa ;)

[momal ali]

thank u so much khuwab ji
bus dekhein or kitny din chalat hey ye shairi ka silsila
mey tu jany wali nahi na haar manu gi
jubh bhi gaya ye daddu he jaey ga :D

[chinamanx]

hahaha whateva may haar nahi maanta :P magar mujhay taras aaagaayaa to samajlaayna to jeet gayee wesay yay khwaab ke paas meri ID :s i dont fink so coz m always online ahem ahem

[momal ali]

dadau bus kar ja thak jaey ga itni posting kar k :laugh:
baad mey glucose ki botly charwani parey gi tumhy :laugh:
dadduzianzzz i do :p :laugh:

[~ Bikhre Lamhe ~]

thank u so much khuwab ji
bus dekhein or kitny din chalat hey ye shairi ka silsila
mey tu jany wali nahi na haar manu gi
jubh bhi gaya ye daddu he jaey ga :D

Zahir Ha Mahum na app jane wali na main jaye ga tu sirf ChinaMixx (Lote sell karne wala )

our main wohi houn canada wala u ki id ha mere pass week pehle mili ha

[momal ali]

chalo jaty howey ek choti c nazam
u know na mey thakti nahi :peace:
i lub poetry :peace:

Be'aitbar shakash tha so war ker gaya..
Lakin mery shaoor ko, beedar kr gaya..

kch main nay ishtiaal main shikway gilaay kiay..
kch wo shikaayatain, sar'e'bazaar ker gaya...

pahlay wo meri zaat ki tameer main raha..
phir mujh ko apnay hath say masmaar kaer gaya..

wo aa mila to faslay kat'tay chalay gaiy...
bichra tou rastay mery duswar ker gaya,.

[chinamanx]

hello boss this guy freaked me out saying he got my msn id lolziannnnnnnnnnnnnnn

[~ Bikhre Lamhe ~]

chinamixx don t call me freak nigger

[~ Bikhre Lamhe ~]

chalo jaty howey ek choti c nazam
u know na mey thakti nahi :peace:
i lub poetry :peace:

Be'aitbar shakash tha so war ker gaya..
Lakin mery shaoor ko, beedar kr gaya..

kch main nay ishtiaal main shikway gilaay kiay..
kch wo shikaayatain, sar'e'bazaar ker gaya...

pahlay wo meri zaat ki tameer main raha..
phir mujh ko apnay hath say masmaar kaer gaya..

wo aa mila to faslay kat'tay chalay gaiy...
bichra tou rastay mery duswar ker gaya,.


pahlay wo meri zaat ki tameer main raha..
phir mujh ko apnay hath say masmaar kaer gaya


beautiful mahum nyc poetry

[momal ali]

Zahir Ha Mahum na app jane wali na main jaye ga tu sirf ChinaMixx (Lote sell karne wala )

our main wohi houn canada wala u ki id ha mere pass week pehle mili ha

khuwab ji chinmanx ki waja sey tu ye thread abhi tuk survive karingz :headbreak:
i wish k woh na jaey
plz aap bhi esi wish mat karey :D

[chinamanx]

Be'aitbar shakash tha so war ker gaya..
Lakin mery shaoor ko, beedar kr gaya..

kch main nay ishtiaal main shikway gilaay kiay..
kch wo shikaayatain, sar'e'bazaar ker gaya...

pahlay wo meri zaat ki tameer main raha..
phir mujh ko apnay hath say masmaar kaer gaya..

wo aa mila to faslay kat'tay chalay gaiy...
bichra tou rastay mery duswar ker gaya,.


waaaaaah waaaaaaaaaah bus sahi thaa :P .... jataay jataay chalo aaj ka rajaa main



GhamooN se Iss Qadar Hai Dosti Ab
Khushi kee Bhee Nahin Mujh ko Khushi Ab

Khuda Jaanay Issay Kiya ho Gaya Hai
Bohat hee Bolti Hai Khamshi Ab

Qana'at Seekh Lee Hai Mairay Dil Ne
Kammi Mujh ko Nahin Lagti Kammi Ab

Kabhi Kehtay tu Kitni Eham Hoti
Wohi Ikk Baat Jo Tum ne Kahi Ab

Jissay Tareekiyan Raas Aa Gai HaiN
Ussay Kyun Dhoondti Hai Roshni Ab

Kabhi jiss kee Talab hee Zindagi Thee
Zaroorat hee Nahin Uss ke Rahi Ab

KarooN ga Yaad jo Fursat Milli Tu
Barri Masroof Hai Yeh Zindagi Ab

[~ Bikhre Lamhe ~]

khuwab ji chinmanx ki waja sey tu ye thread abhi tuk survive karingz :headbreak:
i wish k woh na jaey
plz aap bhi esi wish mat karey :D

Mahum Jana tu us ko pade ga na China Se Nikal Ke Ik Din Apni DharamPatni Ke Pass
our is chawal ke liye dua karon khabi bi na

[chinamanx]

hain u niggerrrrrrrrrr hahahahahha okay i came 2 know who is t lolziannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ab khuda ke liyaay is dhoti walii ko meri id mat daydaynaaa

[chinamanx]

dharam patniiiiiiii lolllllll abay koi hindniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ke saath shaadi kerwayaaay gaa begerat mujhay to pehlay hi raqeeebo nay kaaaafiro wal laqab daydiya he lolzian

[~ Bikhre Lamhe ~]

now u know who am i ? chawala

[momal ali]

daddu chawal bhi hey strange :confused:

[momal ali]

dadduzianz bet ji aap raja kesay howy :D

jo akhri post send kery ga woh raja ya rani ho ga na :D

so its me :D
chlo bhago dhto singh :i-hit-u:


Us ki ankhon main muhabbat ka sitara hoga
woh aik din aaye ga, woh shakas humhara hoga

Zindagi! ab k mera naam na shamil karna
ger yeh tay hay k yehi khel dobara hoga

jis k hone se meri saans chala karti thee
kis tarah is k bagair apna guzara hoga

Yeh achanak joh ujala sa hua jata hai
dil ne chupke se tera naam pukara hoga

Ishq karna hay tou din raat ussey sochna hay
aur kuch zehan main aaya tou khasaara hoga

yeh joh paani main chala aaya sunheri sa guroor
us ne darya main kahin paaon utara hoga

kon rota hai yahan raat k sanaton main
mere jaisa hi koi hijer ka mara hoga

joh meri rooh main badal se garajte hain wasii
us ne seene main koi dard utara hoga

kaam mushkil hai mager jeet hi longa us ko
mere Maula ka wasi jonhi ishara hogaa


m da winner :peace:

aaj ki bhi rani mey hoi na :peace:

[Zeenat]

very good

[momal ali]

tentu zeenat

[momal ali]

tu raat k pichly pehar chalaki sey raja banny k khuwab dadduzianz clever haan :p

[chinamanx]

hangaamaa-e-Gam se tang aakar izhaar-e-musarrat kar baiThe
mashahuur thii apanii zindaadilii daanistaa sharaarat kar baiThe


koshish to bahot kii hamane magar paayaa na Gam-e-hastii kaa mafar
viiraanii-e-dil jab had se barii ghabaraa ke mohabbat kar baiThe



nazaron se na karate pursish-e-Gam Khaamosh hii rahanaa bahatar thaa
diivaano ko tumane chher diyaa wallaah qayaamat kar baiThe



har chiiz nahiin ek markaz par ek roz idhar ik roz udhar
nafrat se na dekho dushman ko shaayad ye mohabbat kar baiThe


kuch zayadaa hi umeedain kisi ko :P kher jo tum chahtiii ho uskaay liyaay tum ready nahi ho.... ;)

[chinamanx]

hahahaha lolziannnnnnn CHHAAAPAAAAAAAAAAAA PARGAYAA LOLZIAN

[chinamanx]

MOMAL ALIIIIIIIIII LOLZIANNNNNNN yay kya thaa.... dar ke maaraay naam badal liyaa .... :P

[momal ali]

kuch zayadaa hi umeedain kisi ko :P kher jo tum chahtiii ho uskaay liyaay tum ready nahi ho....

could u xplain it plz i cant get it wot u xactly want 2 say :rolleyes:

[momal ali]

:rolleyes:

[chinamanx]

it means abt adding u :P

[chinamanx]

anyways before u say sumthin :P GUD NITE and chweet nitemares................................

[momal ali]

Gayee ruton mein to shaam-o-sahar na they aise
Ke ham udaas bohat they magar na they aise

Yahan bhi phool se chehre dikhayee dete hain
Ye ab jo hain yehi deewar-o-dar na they aise

Miley to khair na milne pe ranjishein kaisi
Ke us se apne marasim they par na they aise

Hamee they jo tere aane talak jaley warna
Sabhi charagh sar-e-rahguzar na they aise

Dil-e-tabah tujhe or kya tasalli dein
Tere naseeb tere chaaraagar na they aise

Faraz khush ho ke ahsaan us sitamgar ke
Jo tujh pe hain wo kisi or par na they aise

cheating nahi chaly gi :peace:

[chinamanx]

waah waah aakhro meri taraf sayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Hamee they jo tere aane talak jaley warna
Sabhi charagh sar-e-rahguzar na they aise

Dil-e-tabah tujhe or kya tasalli dein
Tere naseeb tere chaaraagar na they aise

Faraz khush ho ke ahsaan us sitamgar ke
Jo tujh pe hain wo kisi or par na they aise

kya baat hay aap kiiiiiiiiiiiii

KahaN khoh gai meri zindagi, …na koi pata na koi khabar
bhala kya mila humeiN Ishq sey,! tu bhi darbadar , mein bhi darbadar

wuh khizaaN ki aamad sey paishtar..,jahan baat kartey they baith kar
ussi amr-bail ki chaaouN meiN.., koi raah takta hey raat bhar

abhi din charha hey zara zara, aey sawaad-e-shab abhi thehar ja
abhi kehna chaha tha haal-e-dil..,tu bhi chal diya mujhey chohr kar

na hi dil meiN heiN teri chahteiN..,na shikayateiN, na adawateiN
tou ye kya ke aankheiN chahlak pareeN,kabhi ho geya jo tera zikar

kahan dhuhndtey ho mera pata?.., meiN wuh phool hoon jo bikhar chuka
mileiN ujrey ujrey sey baam-o-dar.., tou ye sochna ke hey mera ghar

tujhey khoh k aankheiN bahaaeiN khoon..,tujhey pa k bhi na miley sakooN
meri chahteiN bhi ajab raheeN.., merey silsiley bhii ajeeb tar

meiN kahoon kisi sey bhi tou kya kahooN?., huwa mujh pe taari ajab fasooN
k sakoot-e-shab merii zindagi.., ke ghum-o-alam merey humsafar

jahan tum they mujhsey khafa huwey..,jahan apney rastey juda huwey
meiN milooN ga tumko wahin kaheeN..,ussi raah meiN , ussi moR par

tujhey kya kahooN merey humnawa..! ke bura huwa ya bhala huwa..
kabhi zindagii jo mili mujhey… tou rahi na baqi merii umar…..!

[momal ali]

KahaN khoh gai meri zindagi, …na koi pata na koi khabar
bhala kya mila humeiN Ishq sey,! tu bhi darbadar , mein bhi darbadar

wuh khizaaN ki aamad sey paishtar..,jahan baat kartey they baith kar
ussi amr-bail ki chaaouN meiN.., koi raah takta hey raat bhar

abhi din charha hey zara zara, aey sawaad-e-shab abhi thehar ja
abhi kehna chaha tha haal-e-dil..,tu bhi chal diya mujhey chohr kar

na hi dil meiN heiN teri chahteiN..,na shikayateiN, na adawateiN
tou ye kya ke aankheiN chahlak pareeN,kabhi ho geya jo tera zikar

kahan dhuhndtey ho mera pata?.., meiN wuh phool hoon jo bikhar chuka
mileiN ujrey ujrey sey baam-o-dar.., tou ye sochna ke hey mera ghar

tujhey khoh k aankheiN bahaaeiN khoon..,tujhey pa k bhi na miley sakooN
meri chahteiN bhi ajab raheeN.., merey silsiley bhii ajeeb tar

meiN kahoon kisi sey bhi tou kya kahooN?., huwa mujh pe taari ajab fasooN
k sakoot-e-shab merii zindagi.., ke ghum-o-alam merey humsafar

jahan tum they mujhsey khafa huwey..,jahan apney rastey juda huwey
meiN milooN ga tumko wahin kaheeN..,ussi raah meiN , ussi moR par

tujhey kya kahooN merey humnawa..! ke bura huwa ya bhala huwa..
kabhi zindagii jo mili mujhey… tou rahi na baqi merii umar…..

!
keya bat hey ijanab tu rahi na baqi meri umar .
i mean keya baat hey its Ouit standing....
i mean its fabulous

[chinamanx]

thankooo and sojaooooooooooooooooooooo lolziannn beychainnn see rooh ho kasmayyyyyyyyyyy yay lo mera id

[email protected] lolziannn hahahah

[momal ali]

is id per available ho ga daddu i dun think so :laugh:
q k kukra ney thungy maar maar k kahi ka nahi chrnoa daddu ko :laugh:

kher id bari achi hey m really inspired :D

so jao tum ja k mey tu raat ki rani hun
jubh nenu aaey gi tub so jano gi
aap k kehny ki zarorat nahi :D

[momal ali]

:salam:
hows u ?

hmm tu koi hey yaha :D

wasi tumhy pasand nahi but kuch batey woh bari patey ke ker jata hey
n u dint notice :D

kon rota hai yahan raat k sanaton main
mere jaisa hi koi hijer ka mara hoga

joh meri rooh main badal se garajte hain wasii
us ne seene main koi dard utara hoga

kaam mushkil hai mager jeet hi longa us ko
mere Maula ka wasi jonhi ishara hogaa

[chinamanx]

sher hay serious mat laylaynaa .... .lol

Dil may yaad teri zubaan pay naam tera - meri rooh may busnay walaay tujhko salaam mera.......

tumharaay naseeb may meri id nahi ... woh to may daynay wala nahi ... ....

inhi pathero ke raastay chal ker asakoo to aooo ///////
humaray ghar ke raastay koi kehkashaaan nahi.... samajh ayeee.....

[momal ali]

daddu shairi muk gai hey tu yaha aa k tar tar hey kar jao :lugh:
believe me i wont mind it :laugh:

[momal ali]

Dil may yaad teri zubaan pay naam tera - meri rooh may busnay walaay tujhko salaam mera.......

tumharaay naseeb may meri id nahi ... woh to may daynay wala nahi ... .

dadduziannzzz ye bat tu khatam ho gai na its up 2 u beta ji
if u dont want dan who i am 2 force u dear :D

dadduzianzzz i was jus asked doesnt mean k m crazzy about it

u foolish daduzianzzzzz :D

comon man chillphill :peace:

[momal ali]

or ye apny hero bannay wali acting bus kero
or sharafat sey apny daduzianzzzzz k chauppar par aa jao

so many mandkies r missng u
n saying where is r shair daduzianzzzzzz :D

[momal ali]

daddu mey koi zanana rooh hoingz :D

dekho hum id nahi dey gey :0001:

dekho hamy naam sey mat bulao :0001:

dekh esa mat samjho :0001:

dekho wesa mat samjho :0001:

Oh man female dadduzianzz lagingz :laugh:

chalo choro sabh shaia k silsaly ko tu chalao
y awoh bhi hai la abh hum shairi nahi kary gey wala sacen hey :shy:
:laugh:

:laugh:

[chinamanx]

actually the lines you wrote are the 1s which even i wud have written .. but this wasi thing lol is a laughin point for my group of friends. one of me mates this guy is his relative as far as i know aur jab kuch aisaa shero shairi wala kaam shuru hotaa hay to uski tar tarr nahi khatam hotiii lol.....

anyways how u been ..... wesay kuch kaam kerna bhi aataa hay yaa bus computer say college and college say computer.... and which mandakies are missin mua :P chorooooooo jhoot bolnab hi seekh liyaay ............


maar hi Daal mujhe chasm-e-adaa se pahale
apnii manzil ko pohnch jauuN Qazaa se pahale

ik nazar dekh luuN aa jaao qazaa se pahale
tum se milane kii tamannaa hai Khudaa se pahale

hashr ke roz main puuchhuuNgaa Khudaa se pahale
tuu ne rokaa nahiin kyuuN mujhako Khataa se pahale

ai merii maut Thahar unko zaraa aane de
zahar ka jaam na de mujhako davaa se pahale

haath pahuNche bhii na the zulf dotaa tak "faraaz"
hath kaDii Daal dii zaalim ne Khataa se pahale............................

[chinamanx]

jo bhi kehsakti ho kehdo.... tumhari baatein mujhpay asar nahi kernay waaali :P

[momal ali]

ahem ahem ye faraz tu bus na ..

mey ney tuyun khola tha daraz
andar sey kesay nikla ayaz faraz
:laugh:

very very nyc
hmm mujhy bewaqoof bana ata hey :rolleye:
or gappey merini aati hey :rolleyes:

n apni studies sey related subh kam aaty hey :D
m 1 of da gud students
esa meray ilawa meary teachers bhi bolty hey :D

how ur business china ka khatara mal ?

mood acha hey is leye ek achi c munni c nazam share ker deti hun :D


Bara Dushwaar hota hai
Zara sa Faisla karna
ke Jeevan ki Kahani ko Bayaan be-zabaani ko
Kaha se Yaad rkhna hai'Kaha se Bhool jana hai
Usse kitna Batana hai'Usse kitna chupana hai
Kaha Ro Ro kar hansna hai
Kaha hans hans kar Rona hai
Uss Aanchal ke Koney ko'Kitna bhigona hai
Kaha Awaaz deni hai
Kaha Khamosh rehna hai
Kissi Dukh ko Kaha per
Kaun se Shiddat se kehna hai
Kaha Raasta badalna hai
Kaha se Laut ana hai
Zara se Faisla Karna
Bara Dushwaar hota hai....!!

[chinamanx]

maza nahi ayaaa :P larkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii tumhay k ya hogayaaa kuch zayada hi khushi hay tumko acha be readyu might get a mail lolziannnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

kuch tumharaay naam ;)

Dil Ki Cho'khaat Pe Jo Ak Deep Jala Rakha Hai
Tere Loot Anay Ka Emkaan Saja Rakha Hai

Sans Taak Bhi Nahi Laite Tujhai Sochte Hoyee
Hum Ne Is Kaam Ko Bhi Kaal Pe uTha Rakha Hai

Rooth Jate Ho To Kuch Or Haseen Lagte Ho
Hum Ne Ye Soch K Hee Tum Ko Khafa Rakha Hai


Tum Jesi Rootha Howa Choor Gayee Thay Ak Din
Hum Ne Us Shaam Ko Seenay Say Laga Rakha Hai

Chein Laine Nahi Daite Ye Kisi Toor Mujhai
Teri Yadoon Ne Jo Tufaan Utha Rakha Hai

Janay Walay Ne Kaha Tha K Wo Loote Ga Zaror
Ak Isee Aass Pee Darwaza Khula Rakha Hai

Tere Janay Say Jo k Dhol Uthee Thi Ghaam Ki
Hum Ne Us Dhool Ko Ankhon Main Basa Rakha Hai

Mujh Ko Kal Shaam Say Wo Yaad Bohut Ane Lagay
Dil Ne Mud'dat Say Jo Ak Shaks Bhula Rakha Hai

Akhri Bar Jo Ayaa Tha Mere Naam
Main Ne Us Khaat Ko Kaalejay Say Laga Rakha Hai.!

[momal ali]

very nyc ye
anar kali k zamny ki larkeyan kht ko klaejay say lagany wali bhi ajeeb hoti thi :rolleyes:

mujhy tu ye bhi nahi pata k laeja kis taraf hota hey hmm pata nahi kaha hota hey :laugh:


acha nazam tu bohat achi thi tumhy achi q nahi lagi strange :rollleyes:

chalo phir aaj kuch esa karty hey :D


Aaj aysa kertey hain...

Be'sada lafzon mein...

Wajah-e-zindagi keh k ...

Wasl ki zaroorat per.....

Phir se zaur daitey hain.....

Aaj aysa kertey hain...

Zikr wohi kartey hain....

Naam aur daitey hain...

Zabt k kinaron se....

Dard aan lipta hai.....

Toot'tay kinarey ab.....

Dard aur daitey hain.....

Aaj aysa kertey hain....

Dard se uljhtwey hain...

Zabt chor daitey hain....

Taar taar daman ko...

Khaar khaar raahon mein...

Ranjishon bhula k hum....

Aa k joor daitey hain.....

Aaj aysa kertey hain..

Khud nahi palat'tey hain...

Raah maur daitey hain.....

Sabz sabz mausam mein...

Laal laal aankhon k....

Khawab ki ragoon se....

Khoon nichor daitey hain...

Aaj aysa kartey hain....

Yeh bhi kar guzartey hain...

Khawab taur daitey hain...

Aa k ab duaon ko...

Matami ridaon ko....

Phir se kar k alwida....

Mauqa aur daitey hain....

Aaj aysa kartey hain....

Darya mein utartey hain....

or jo anjam ho ga !

Rab pe chor daitey hain.....!

[chinamanx]

nice nice... belly belly nish........

Aaj aysa kertey hain...

Be'sada lafzon mein...

Wajah-e-zindagi keh k ...

Wasl ki zaroorat per.....

Aa k ab duaon ko...

Matami ridaon ko....

Phir se kar k alwida....

Mauqa aur daitey hain....

Aaj aysa kartey hain....

Darya mein utartey hain....

or jo anjam ho ga !

Rab pe chor daitey hain.....!

jis baat ka anjaam pata ho lol usko rab pay n ahi chortaaaaaaay lolziannnn


kuch meri sunooo ahem ahem ...shayad kuch asar ker jayaay

Teray khayaal pay kiya kiya gumaaN nahiN guzray
Ye aur baat ke hokar ayaaN nahiN guzray

Falak hai dil kaa munawwar hazaar daaghoN say
nazar say aaj talak kehkashaaN nahiN guzray

wahee yaqeen kay mausam bayaan kartay haiN
ke jin ki soch say ab tak gumaaN nahiN guzray

rifaaqatoN ko jo jaanaa rafeeq ki maiN nay
meray hareef kay hamlay geraaN nahiN guzray

na jaanay kaun saa rastaa hai jaanib-e-manzil
ye jaannay ke liye hum kahaaN nahiN guzray

sawaal ye hai ke raahoN meN kyooN nahiN miltay
guzartay waqt to hum bay-nishaaN nahiN guzray

makaan jitnay jalaanaa hai tum jalaalenaa
jahaaN say koi bhee bay-aashyaaN nahiN guzray

tumhaari jang andheray say hai saahab
jahaaN pe tum ho,wo hargiz wahaaN nahiN guzray

[momal ali]

Ooey daddu kubh aaey :O

[momal ali]

sawaal ye hai ke raahoN meN kyooN nahiN miltay
guzartay waqt to hum bay-nishaaN nahiN guzray

makaan jitnay jalaanaa hai tum jalaalenaa
jahaaN say koi bhee bay-aashyaaN nahiN guzray

tumhaari jang andheray say hai saahab
jahaaN pe tum ho,wo hargiz wahaaN nahiN guzray

keya baat hey dadduzianzzz cha gaey ho :D very nyc

[momal ali]

chalo jaingz tu hamari bhi kuch sun k he jaingz :D

us ko bhi bachana hai khud ko bhi bachana hai
aik simt hai zaat apni aik simt zamana hai
hum se na koi uljhe hum log hain deewane
andhi se hamen zid hai aik deep jalana hai
hum dono ko banta hai darya ke kinaron ne
is simt bhi rehna hai us simt bhi jana hai
ye ishq to fitrat hai kese ho juda mujh se
ye rog hai matti ka aur sadiyon purana hai
basti hi chupa li phir us shakhs ne hathon mein
itna jo kaha main ne aik shahar basana hai
aik ankh hai sehra to aik ankh samandar hai
kya janye is dil mein kis kis ko samana hai
kehne ko bohat kuch hai, ai saad magar hum ne
aik wada nibhana hai aik dard chupna hai

[chinamanx]

hum dono ko banta hai darya ke kinaron ne
is simt bhi rehna hai us simt bhi jana hai

ye ishq to fitrat hai kese ho juda mujh se
ye rog hai matti ka aur sadiyon purana hai

basti hi chupa li phir us shakhs ne hathon mein
itna jo kaha main ne aik shahar basana hai.......... waaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah....

aik ankh hai sehra to aik ankh samandar hai
kya janye is dil mein kis kis ko samana hai............... fantaaanastikkkk

kehne ko bohat kuch hai, ai saad magar hum ne
aik wada nibhana hai aik dard chupna hai................ waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

chah gayeeeeeeeeeee not bad not bad



Dil k band darwazay par kiun dastak detay rehtay ho
ankhon mai hain khuwab bohut mou say kuch nahi kahtay ho

mana k pathar hon main muhabbat mera kaam nahi...!!
kiun jaan k yeh sab kuch bhi ghum ko sehtay rehtay ho

Na nazer uthaye..na nazer milaee...na tujhko koi khuwab dia
phir bhi meri budnaseebi katil mujhko kahtay hoo

meri zaat ki khala ko kaisay bhar sakogay tum..???
kiun din raat isi sawal main ulajhtay rehtay ho???

yeh dil to hai khander yahan bujh gaye saray diye
maan loo meri baat tum,kiun khud ko tanha kartay ho?

Na thaam sakonga koi hath kabhi meray dil main hosla nahi
kiun mujhko apna sayeban,kiun mujhko apna kahtay hoo...??


;) tum apnay ghum may akelay nahi ho afsurda.... tumharaay chahnaay walaay bhi tumhara sogg kertay hay.....

[momal ali]

mein tumhary aks ki arzo mey aina he bani rahi
kabi tum na samny aa saky muj pey gurd he pari rahi

woh ajeeb sham thi aaj tuk mery dil meu us ka malal hey
meri teha jo teri muntazir tery rasty mey khari rahi

kabh waqfe hijar mey ho gai kabhi khuwab wasl mey kho gai
mey faqer e ishq bani rahi mey aseer yaad hoi rahi

bari khamoshi sey sirak k pahir mery dil k gird lipta gai
woh redaey abar wafeed josir kohsar tani rahi

hoi us sey jubh meri bat bhi the share ke dard woh zaat bhi
tu na jany kon se chez ki meri zaindagi mey kami rahi

daddu khaschwey ki chal chalingz :D
lagta hey aaj kafi thakay howey ho
m w8ing 4 u reply
but yaha koi asar nahi
tu phir apni turn na hoty howey bghi likh rahi hun
kafi mushkil hey na samjh aey tu mahss mahum sey poch lena :peace:

[chinamanx]

that was ur turn kiddo :P wesay kya baat hay aapkiii

Wo kaisa shaks hay k har rooz saza deta hay..
Phir hasaata hay itna k rula deta hay..

Kabhi jo roo dey tu mujh ko bhi bhool jata hay..
Aur phir bhool k khod ko bhi bhula deta hay..

Us sey poocho bata kis sey muhabbat hay tujhay..
Naam sargooshi main mera hi suna deta hay..

Khod hi kehta hay k na dohraaao puraani yaadain..
Main na dohraaaon tu phir khod hi suna deta hay..

Khod hi kehta hay k jazbaat main halchal na karoo..
Aur phir khod hi naai aag laga deta hay..

[momal ali]

very nyc ahem ahem

chalo aaj kuch faraq qisam ki shairi arz kerti hun hope ull like it dadduzianzzz :D

Mehboob meray menoo HATE naa kar
Bund dil day apnay GATE naa kar

Teree kidee sohni SMILE aey
Pur raindee FOR A WHILE aey
Tu case noon COMPLICATE naa kar
Mehboob meray menoo HATE naa kar
Bund dil day apnay GATE naa kar

Ik mein hee tainoo DESERVE kuraan
Tay dil noon teray RESERVE kuraan
Hur wailay tainoo OBSERVE kuraan
Hor hun tu FRUSTATE naa kar
Mehboob meray menoo HATE naa kar
Bund dil day apnay GATE naa kar

menoo akhaan wich to LOCK tay kar
Kadi meray naal tu TALK tay kar
kudee rozee garden wich WALK tay kar
Hun milun ton HESITATE naa kar
Mehboob meray menoo HATE naa kar
Bund dil day apnay GATE naa kar

:laugh:
:laugh:

sanu hate na kero :laugh:

[chinamanx]

hahahah yay kya hay huzoooor .... beechay angraiziiiiiiii --- mere firangii shaiiirrrr lolllllllzainnn

lagta hay tumnay neechay dhotiii !!! pehnke aur upar tie or shirt pehankee shair likha hogaa lolziannnnnnn

Aankhon ke rang, baat ka lehja badal gaya
Woh shakhs aik shaam main kitna badal gaya

Kuch din to mera aks raha aaine pe naqsh
Phir youn huwa ke khud mera chehra badal gaya

Jub apnay apnay haal pay hum tum na reh sakay
To kiya huwa jo hum say zamana badal gaya

Qadmon talay jo rait bichhi thi woh chal parri
Os nay chhuraya haath to sehra badal gaya

Koi bhi cheez apni jageh par nahin rahi
Jaatay hi aik shakhs kay, kiya kiya badal gaya

Aik sarkhushi ki moj nay kaisa kiya kamal
Wo bay-niaaz saara ka saara badal gaya

Oth kar chala gaya koi waqfay kay darmiaan
Parda Otha to saara tamasha badal gaya

Hairat say saaray lafz Osay dekhtay rahay
Baaton main apni baat ko kaisay badal gaya

Kehne ko ik sehan main deewar hi bani
Ghar ki fiza makaan ka naqsha badal gaya

Shayad wafa kay khel se uktaa gaya tha woh
Manzil kay paas aakey jo rasta badal gaya

Qayem kisi bhi haal pay dunya nahin rahi
Taabeer kho gai kabhi sapna badal gaya

Manzar ka rang asal main saaya tha rang ka
Jis nay Osay jidhar say bhi dekha badal gaya

Andar kay mosamon ki khabar us ko ho gayee
Os no-bahaar-e-naaz ka chehra badal gaya

Aankhon mein jitna ashk thay jugnoo say ban gaye
Woh muskuraya or meri dunya badal gaya

Apni gali main apna hi ghar dhoondhtay hain log
Amjad ye kon shehar ka naqsha badal gaya


naqsha to badal gayaa aut logo ka tareeqah bhiii............

[momal ali]

Aankhon ke rang, baat ka lehja badal gaya
Woh shakhs aik shaam main kitna badal gaya

Kuch din to mera aks raha aaine pe naqsh
Phir youn huwa ke khud mera chehra badal gaya

Jub apnay apnay haal pay hum tum na reh sakay
To kiya huwa jo hum say zamana badal gaya

Qadmon talay jo rait bichhi thi woh chal parri
Os nay chhuraya haath to sehra badal gaya

Koi bhi cheez apni jageh par nahin rahi
Jaatay hi aik shakhs kay, kiya kiya badal gaya

Aik sarkhushi ki moj nay kaisa kiya kamal
Wo bay-niaaz saara ka saara badal gaya

Oth kar chala gaya koi waqfay kay darmiaan
Parda Otha to saara tamasha badal gaya

Hairat say saaray lafz Osay dekhtay rahay
Baaton main apni baat ko kaisay badal gaya

Kehne ko ik sehan main deewar hi bani
Ghar ki fiza makaan ka naqsha badal gaya

Shayad wafa kay khel se uktaa gaya tha woh
Manzil kay paas aakey jo rasta badal gaya

Qayem kisi bhi haal pay dunya nahin rahi
Taabeer kho gai kabhi sapna badal gaya

Manzar ka rang asal main saaya tha rang ka
Jis nay Osay jidhar say bhi dekha badal gaya

Andar kay mosamon ki khabar us ko ho gayee
Os no-bahaar-e-naaz ka chehra badal gaya

Aankhon mein jitna ashk thay jugnoo say ban gaye
Woh muskuraya or meri dunya badal gaya

Apni gali main apna hi ghar dhoondhtay hain log
Amjad ye kon shehar ka naqsha badal gaya

Osum Osum n Osum keya baat hey ji abh tuk ki post ki poetry mey best 1 :peace:

[momal ali]

i know aj tusi barey down ho
hop hop nahi karingz :D
baty kuch sedhi or aschi thin :D
tu azeyat he lagti thien :D


Nahi mil raha hey yahaaN kaheiN meri zaat ka hi nishaaN mujhey
sun aey jus'tuju dey jawaab tu ke ley aai hey ye kahaaN mujhey!

wo sabaq meiN parrh ke bhula chuka ke osool banatey heiN zindagi
mujhey mantaqi si daleel dey, ye muhawarey na suna mujhey

tujhey kya khabar meiN dil meiN dard, leeye phi raha hooN ajab ajab
teri mashq puraani hey yaar tu, kya ghaao dey ga naya mujhey

nahi kuch gila ke ye sab hey kya, bhaley kuch ajab hey ye maajra
ke merey aek jurm pe baar baar, koi dey raha hey sazaa mujehy

ye jo chaahatoN ke bazaar heiN yahaaN bik raha hey sabhi magar
yahaaN kon ley ga wafaa ki jins, bhala kya miley ga nafaa mujhey!

merey hum'nawa bhala meiN kahaN, terey waastey mujhey bhool ja
tu ney khuwahishoN ke aoraaq par, kaheeiN likh dia to mitta mujhey

yuN diye na rakh merey haath pe ke katteiN ge nahi phir raastey
kabhi rok leiN gi baarisheiN to kabhi tang karey gi hawaa mujhey

kattaa zindagi ka katthin safar, meiN muflisi meiN maraa magar
meiN gulshanoN ka makeen tha, zara khushbuweiN to laga mujhey

[chinamanx]

waaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaah it is very nice the best part was every1 has their best part w hcih they like i liked this 1 the most ....

merey hum'nawa bhala meiN kahaN, terey waastey mujhey bhool ja
tu ney khuwahishoN ke aoraaq par, kaheeiN likh dia to mitta mujhey



Be-wafayi ki ab to inteha ho gayii...
ke tujhse juda hokar bhi jeeney ki aadat hogayi..

tum laut ke aaogey humsey milney k liye kabhi...
rooz dil ko behlaney ki yeh aadat hogayi...

terey waadey pe kya bharosa kiya humney
keh shab bhar tera intezaar karney ki aadat hogayi...

khushi mein bhi hum kya muskuratey ke
teri be-wafayi mein roonay ki aadat ho gayi....

kaafiley nikal gaye humein chhor ke
ke ab to tanha rehne ki aadat ho gayi...

har morh par mili ghum ki parchhaiyaan
zindagi se samjhota karney ki aadat hogayee

jaantey thay ke nahin hosaktey kabhi tum hamarey
phir bhi khuda se tujhey maangney ki aadat hogayi..

paiman-e-wafaa kya hai humey kya maloom *.......*
ke bewafaaon se dil laganey ki aadat hogayee OH ZAAAAAAAAAAALIMMM ... :P

[momal ali]

har morh par mili ghum ki parchhaiyaan
zindagi se samjhota karney ki aadat hogayee

jaantey thay ke nahin hosaktey kabhi tum hamarey
phir bhi khuda se tujhey maangney ki aadat hogayi..

paiman-e-wafaa kya hai humey kya maloom *.......*
ke bewafaaon se dil laganey ki aadat hogayee


waqi ye tu Zalim ho ho gaya :laugh:
any ways really Osum
or keya keya aadaty ho gain aap ko dadduziann is mey aap ney hop hop ka tazakar nahi keya :rolleyes:
hop hop bhi tu adat hey na daduziannzzz ki :D

[Alone Guy]

Chinamax Aur Momal Lajawab Beautyful Poetry Dost............. Maza aagaya Parh kar....

By d way Momal tumhari Angrezi Urdu Poetry ka Jawab nahi hahahahah.....
Thnx 4 Sharin Frnds Keep d gud work up.........

[momal ali]

I forgot dat its my turn
i was w8ing 4 ur post :laugh:

kher abh notice keya tu pata chala k dat was my turn :D
i have already told u m little bit absent minded so dun mind haan :D


Laghzishhon sey mara tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi

Dono insaan hain khuda tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi ..
.
Tu jafa ki main wafa ki raah par hain gamzan

Peechey moor kar dehkta tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi....

Tu mujhey main tujhey ilzaam dharta hoon


Apne mann main jankta tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi...

Maslihat ne kar diye dono main paida ikhtelaaf

Warna fitrat ka bura tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi....

Badgumani shehar main kisne phelaadi jabke

Aik doosre se khafa tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi....
.
Jurm ki noyitoon main kuch tafawat ho to ho

Darhakeekat parsa tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi....

Jaan-e-Mohsin tu bhi tha ziddi ANA mujh mein bhi thi

Dono khudsar the juka tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi

[chinamanx]

yay hui naaa baaaaaaaaaaaaat

Peechey moor kar dehkta tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi....

and last but n ot the leasttt .....

Jaan-e-Mohsin tu bhi tha ziddi ANA mujh mein bhi thi
Dono khudsar the juka tu bhi nahi main bhi nahi deadly suits us innit :P ANNA :P teri anna ko kerdu fanaah :P



wesayy sochna kam kerooo kisi ke baaray mayyy lolllllllllllllllllll marreeeez kahin kiii lolzian

Ik pasheeman see hasrat say mujhay sochta hay..........
ab wohee shehr-e-mohabbat say mujhay sochta hay

main tu mehdood say lamhoon main mila tha us say...........
phir bhi woh kitne wazahat say mujhay sochta hay

jis nay socha he na tha hijr ka mumkin hona...........
dukh main doobe huee hairat say mujhay sochta hay

main tu marjaoun agar sochnay lag jaoun usay............
aur woh kitne sahoolat say mujhay sochta hay

gurcheh ab tark-e-marasim ko buhut dair huee...........
ab bhi woh maire ijjazat say mujhay sochta hay

kitna khush fehm hay woh shakhs keh hur mausum main.........
Ik nayay rukh nayee soorat say mujhay sochta hay................ahem ahem ............

soch bhi kya kamaal hoti haynaa dhoti paar ke rumaal hoti hay pata hay isline nay sara mazaa kirkiraa kerdiya hahah lol magar it is here and it has a reason maza kirkiraa kernay walaa lol dhoti singh ......