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Nida-H
05-17-2009, 11:49 AM
The finger of night
is touching my face;
The cold weather of the back yard
is patting my brownish hair..

I'm still alone;
Despite having lots of friends;
I'm still tired;
Despite resting for a long time.
I'm still exhausted ;
Despite sleeping all the day..

It's not the first time;
My heart asks me about you.
It's not the first time.
I'm looking in the front mirror;
In the hope of seeing you beside me.
It's not the first time.
I'm smelling everywhere;
Just for finding your fragrance..

I hate storm;
It takes every thing
I hate rain
It washes away my memories
When did I get lost?
I can't find my way.
When did I get blind?
Still…need to see you more..

It's time to go…
Someone is calling me.
Can you hear the sad song
that crow is singing?
It's time to go.
It's raining hail.
Where is my umbrella..???

A L i
05-17-2009, 01:10 PM
last lines are excellent

very nice Dear

HarD-RocK
05-17-2009, 01:11 PM
:crying20tissue::crying20tissue::crying20tissue: Nice one Ruby :rose5wd:

K@IN@@T
05-17-2009, 04:06 PM
nice poetry ruby sis

Nida-H
05-17-2009, 05:44 PM
last lines are excellent

very nice Dear

thnx A L i..

Nida-H
05-17-2009, 05:45 PM
:crying20tissue::crying20tissue::crying20tissue: Nice one Ruby :rose5wd:

thnx HR..

Nida-H
05-17-2009, 05:45 PM
nice poetry ruby sis

thnx hafsa..

saadat
05-18-2009, 10:49 PM
very nice an tender lines

loved it
cheers

Nida-H
05-18-2009, 11:05 PM
very nice an tender lines

loved it
cheers

thnx saadat..

Zara_Ansu
05-19-2009, 12:28 PM
very nice ruby sis :)

Nida-H
05-19-2009, 12:32 PM
very nice ruby sis :)

thnx Zara..

FAJAAN
07-27-2009, 04:12 PM
nyce

FAJAAN
07-27-2009, 04:15 PM
nyce

Abewsha
08-26-2011, 11:15 AM
wow nice way 2 luv..

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