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s_sableo
05-05-2009, 12:20 AM
ok frnds yeh hai wo poetry jo pic k hisaab sey kuch
frnds ney khud likhi apko vote kar k batana hai k kaunsi poetry best hai
n picture k hisaab sey hai thanku

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1 > woh kuch sonta to mai kehta k mujhay kuch kehna tha
woh pal bhar jo rok jata mujhay kuch aur kehna hai
galat fehmi nay batato ko barha diya warna kia kuch tha woh kuch samjha mujhay kuch aur kehna hai


2>phool ki khushboo chand ki roshni barish k ahsaas bun ker
wo merey paas aya tha ek khusshgawaar jhoonka bun ker
us k janay pay dil aisa rota hai baar baar
jisay shamma ki chahat main jelta hai hamehsa perwana baan ker


3>kaisi mayoosi dey gaya wo shaks
hur taraf udaasi dey gaya wo shaks
maine mangi b zara see zindagi jeeney k liye
or zindagi zara see dey gaya wo shaks


4>umeed ban k log zindagi mai aatay hai
khowab ban k ankho mai sama jatay hai
pehlay yaqeen dilatay hai woh hamaray hai
phir najanay kyu tanha chor jatay hai


5>Kisi Din, Chaahtey Hain...
Chupke se hum us ke Zeeney Par
Koi Jalta Diya,
Kuch Phool
Rakh Aayein
ke Apney Bachpaney mein wo andhero'n se bhi Darta Tha
Ussey Phooloo'n ki Khushboo se bhi Raghbat Thi

Bohat Mumkin Hai, Ab Bhi...
Shab ki Taareeki Se Uss ko Khauf Aata ho
Mehaktey Phool Shayed Baais-e-Taskeen Ab Bhi Ho'n

So Iss Imkaan par
Ek Shaam Uss ke Naam Kartey Hain
Chalo Yeh Kaam Kartey Hain !


6>humney to phoolon sey bass mangi thi khushbu
chahi thi khushbu paayi thi khushbu
mera chain chheena merey hosh lootey
jab ban k tu yaadon mei aati thi khushbu
ab to bahara.n bhi deti hai kaantey
kabhi to bahara.n ney banti thi khusbu

Nida-H
05-05-2009, 02:14 AM
voted for Number 3..

~Pr!nCe$s UrOoJ~
05-05-2009, 02:57 AM
mera vote hai 4 ko

CHEEMO
05-05-2009, 11:24 AM
mera vote no 3

Hussain
05-05-2009, 12:59 PM
3

s_sableo
05-05-2009, 08:18 PM
V nice vvvv v nice acha maine b vote karna tha but mai bhool gaya
mai apney apko to vote ni dunga but jo mujhe acha laga hai
wo 5 no. Hao so voted

s_sableo
05-05-2009, 08:21 PM
V nice v nice acha ja raha hai muqabla is baar only 6 people ney poetry add kari hai
to abbhi is k winner k baad aik or image add karunga to aap
sab b try karna then ziada log hongey ziada poetry hogi n ziada sakht
muqabla hoga n ziada mza ayega but apni khudki poetry bana k submit karni
hai ok guys

s_sableo
05-09-2009, 09:24 PM
oyeee orr b vote karo naaaaaaaaaaaa

s_sableo
05-10-2009, 05:27 PM
Hey aj last day hai or b koi vote kardo naaa
then kal final faisla hojayega

dellawer shah
05-12-2009, 05:20 PM
east na west no 4 is best hmmmm

s_sableo
05-12-2009, 06:37 PM
ok
frndz
winner is
lolzzzz hahahahha mee my self galati sey

s_sableo is da winnerrrrrrrrrrrrrr

congratz sableo lolzzz hahahahahah

and 2nd winner hain princez \hafsa
hafsa came 2nd very nice vv nice poetry by hafsa

and third koi ni aa saka bad kismati sey
ku k ziada users ney vo te he ni kara agar ziada users vote kartey

n hissa letey muqabley mei then or b maza ata n koi na ko third zaroor ata araam se

now congrtaz sableo
nd princezhafsa

momal ali
05-12-2009, 07:00 PM
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sableo ji
sorry mey late ho gai vote karny k leye

s_sableo
05-13-2009, 05:23 AM
lolzzz hahahaha acha it's ok chalo theek hai koi bat ni ab dono first hogaye hum hehehhehehe
acha wahan b aai poetry muqabla mei u b try karo apni likhney k liye abhi ghuncha ko subha bata
dena yaar jo maine u ko kaha usko samj ni ayi meri bat ki yaar

(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)
05-13-2009, 05:26 AM
voted for 3

s_sableo
05-13-2009, 04:46 PM
thanku thanku faryaal jee v thanx ab khatam hogaya polling ended ku k winner announce hogaye hain
ab agley muqabley mei aap sab bhi hissa lein n thenpolling again hogi ok frndz

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