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s_sableo
04-26-2009, 06:54 PM
assalam-o-alikum frnds
ok frnds here what we have to do is k hum sey koi b member yahan per
koi picture insert karey jo k kisi kisam ki feelings show kar rahi hogi n baqi
members ko uskey hisaab sey koi shair likhna hoga apna usko dekh ker
uskey mahol k hisaab sey jis tarah sey b ap koi shair theek lagey apna banana
hai but ok n then we will choose k kis member ney sab sey aca shair likha hai ok
n aik picture for week rahegi after one week we can add new picture ok
so let's start am inserting first picture let see
WINNER OF FIRST IMAGE POETRY MUQABLA IS
1ST : S_SABLEO
2ND: K@IN@@T
NEXT IMAGE # 3
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/669/eyszz.gif (http://img707.imageshack.us/i/eyszz.gif/)
K@IN@@T
04-26-2009, 07:22 PM
woh kuch sonta to mai kehta k mujhay kuch kehna tha
woh pal bhar jo rok jata mujhay kuch aur kehna hai
galat fehmi nay batato ko barha diya warna kia kuch tha woh kuch samjha mujhay kuch aur kehna hai
K@IN@@T
04-26-2009, 07:23 PM
nice thread
~wish munda~
04-27-2009, 12:32 AM
wow excelent broo v nice thread
~wish munda~
04-27-2009, 12:35 AM
phool ki khushboo chand ki roshni barish k ahsaas bun ker
wo merey paas aya tha ek khusshgawaar jhoonka bun ker
us k janay pay dil aisa rota hai baar baar
jisay shamma ki chahat main jelta hai hamehsa perwana baan ker
~wish~
s_sableo
04-27-2009, 12:49 AM
thanku thanku princess and wish
v nice poetry vvv nice bohat khoob let c other users now and u can make more if u can
but not many more few like 3 or 4 times ok thanx again maib try karunga but abhi karta hu
agar ban gaya then likh dunga ni to then baad mei waise abhi moud hai thora kartey hain try dekho
s_sableo
04-27-2009, 12:53 AM
kaisi mayoosi dey gaya wo shaks
hur taraf udaasi dey gaya wo shaks
maine mangi b zara see zindagi jeeney k liye
or zindagi zara see dey gaya wo shaks
lolzz hahaha kaisa arey yeh to acha ban gaya hai na thank thanku hahaahahaha
(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯)
04-27-2009, 07:41 AM
nice thread leo
CHEEMO
04-27-2009, 09:14 AM
nice
K@IN@@T
04-27-2009, 07:04 PM
umeed ban k log zindagi mai aatay hai
khowab ban k ankho mai sama jatay hai
pehlay yaqeen dilatay hai woh hamaray hai
phir najanay kyu tanha chor jatay hai
~wish munda~
04-27-2009, 11:09 PM
jhakaaas poetry leo keep it up bro
ShArArTi MuNdA
04-28-2009, 08:48 AM
Kisi Din, Chaahtey Hain...
Chupke se hum us ke Zeeney Par
Koi Jalta Diya,
Kuch Phool
Rakh Aayein
ke Apney Bachpaney mein wo andhero'n se bhi Darta Tha
Ussey Phooloo'n ki Khushboo se bhi Raghbat Thi
Bohat Mumkin Hai, Ab Bhi...
Shab ki Taareeki Se Uss ko Khauf Aata ho
Mehaktey Phool Shayed Baais-e-Taskeen Ab Bhi Ho'n
So Iss Imkaan par
Ek Shaam Uss ke Naam Kartey Hain
Chalo Yeh Kaam Kartey Hain !
aryan
04-28-2009, 04:08 PM
Eik tera naam kia lekha sahil ke ret per ,,
Per Omar bhar hawawon se dushmani rahi
s_sableo
04-29-2009, 09:24 PM
v nice princes v nice
s_sableo
04-29-2009, 09:26 PM
Kisi Din, Chaahtey Hain...
Chupke se hum us ke Zeeney Par
Koi Jalta Diya,
Kuch Phool
Rakh Aayein
ke Apney Bachpaney mein wo andhero'n se bhi Darta Tha
Ussey Phooloo'n ki Khushboo se bhi Raghbat Thi
Bohat Mumkin Hai, Ab Bhi...
Shab ki Taareeki Se Uss ko Khauf Aata ho
Mehaktey Phool Shayed Baais-e-Taskeen Ab Bhi Ho'n
So Iss Imkaan par
Ek Shaam Uss ke Naam Kartey Hain
Chalo Yeh Kaam Kartey Hain !
oye hoye hoye hoye mera bhayii kya nazam likhi bohat bohat bohat khooob
wah wah wah iss pic ka award to aap ley gaye bari mazey ki likhi bohat khoob
s_sableo
04-29-2009, 09:27 PM
Eik tera naam kia lekha sahil ke ret per ,,
Per Omar bhar hawawon se dushmani rahi
aryan bhayi saahil ki rait per naam ni likhna
apni poetry likhni hai lolzzzzz hahahaha
s_sableo
05-02-2009, 10:25 PM
humney to phoolon sey bass mangi thi khushbu
chahi thi khushbu paayi thi khushbu
mera chain chheena merey hosh lootey
jab ban k tu yaadon mei aati thi khushbu
ab to bahara.n bhi deti hai kaantey
kabhi to bahara.n ney banti thi khusbu
Zara_Ansu
05-05-2009, 09:43 PM
nice
SHAYAN
05-05-2009, 09:49 PM
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/1711/730761blnmrh1ss2.gif
~*~Mohabbat Ki Kahani~*~
Ajab Kahani Thi Shayad Meri Hee Zabani Thi ..
Ik Larki Woh Anjani Thi .. Beygani Thi An Chui Si
Woh Chui Mui Si Janey Kahan Kasey Kab Takra Gaii ...
Mujh Ko Bha Gaii .. Phir Kuch Aisa Hua Kai Baatein Huin
Choti Woh Lambi Raatein Huein
Woh Aur Main Aksar Dono Ghanton Ghanton Bethey Yunhi
Baatein Kya Kertey Thaey
Janey Kab Kyun Ahsas Hua ...
Mujh Ko Usi Ka Pass Hua
Woh Us Din Shayad Na Ayi Thi ..
Jaan Meri P'aey Ban Ayi Thii ...
Tarpa Tarsa Behka Main ..
Pershan Hua Saans Lena Mujh Per Muhal Hua
Ahsas Hua Mujh Ko Us Din Tab Ho Gaii Mujh Ko Mohabbat Ab
Dhoonda Main Nai Intazar Kya
Raat Woh Sari Din Bhi Apna Baeykar Kya ..
Baeychan Hua Nadan Hua ..
Phir Sham Hui Woh Wapis Ayi
Phir Main Nai Us Ko Batlaya
Jatlaya Us Ko Behlaya
Kaha Us Ko
Suno Tum Sai Mohabbat ..
Bohat Hai Mujh Ko Bohat Hai
Bas Mujh Ko Tum Sai Mohabbat Hai ...
Ghabrai Thi Woh Sharmai Thi
Kahin Door Ja Ker Simti Thi
Phir Ghabrai Woh ....
Pershan Hui ...
Kuch Daer Ko Woh Chup Ho Ker
Phir Mujh Sai Woh Mukhatib Hui
Na Mil Paon Gi Toh Kya Kero Gai ?
Socha Main Nai Toh Jaan Nikli ....
Baey Inteha Nikli Baarha Nikli ...
Chup Raha Nahi Bola Kuch
Phir Yun Hua Kai Justuju Us Ko Hui
Khamosh Si Woh Bholi Bhali Si
Ik Din Mujh Sai Kehney Lagi
Yun Tum Sai Baatein Kerti Hoon
Baeykar Yeh Raatei Kerti Hoon
Tum Sai Kehti Hoon Main Na Main Yun
Dil Main Rekhti Hoon Haan Main Yun
Kai Mohabbat Tum Sai Kerti Hoon
Par Junoon Tumharey Sai Derti Hoon ...
Yun Laga Mujh Ko Tab
Seerab Hua Yeh Sehra Ab
Main Utha Khushi Sai Naach Gya
Dil Mera Zor Sai Dhadka Tab...
Poocha Phir Yun Shararat Sai Main Nai Jab
Kaho Kyun Leti Ho Imtehan Ab ?
Woh Hasti Muskurati Sharmati Ba'l Khati
Uthi Phir Chal Di Par Jatay Jatay Mujh Ko
Keh Gaii Ik Anjan Baat
Boli ....!!!
Meri Majboori
Kabhi Ho Gi Na Yeh Aas Poori...
Main Tha Junoon Main Andha Pagal
Majnu Bana Main Ranjha Ghayal
Jawab Deya Usey Hosla Deya
Phir Din Raat Main Nai Mehka Deya
Phir Wasee Hee Hotein Baatein Thaein
Khamosh Si Lambi Raatein Thaein
Ham Dono Thaey Bas Ham Dono
Aur Hamari Mohabbat Ki Baatein Thaein
Phir Yun Hua Kai Us Ka Jana Hua ...
Ik Khiley Phool Ka Murjhana Hua
Meri Zindagi Gaii Meri Qismat Gaii
Mera Junoon Meri Wehshat Gaii
Khali Haath Kashkoal Liye
Main Dar Dar Talash Main Us Ki Bhatka ..
Dhoonda Bohat Par Mili Nahi Woh
Khali Paet Nagey Paon
Tap'ti Raet
Pairon Main Phir Ch'aley Aye ..
Jeena Phir Dushwar Hua
Mujh Ko Us Din Us Ka Deedar Hua
Main Phatey Puraney Halon Main
Paon Main Parey Ch'alon Main
Lambi Dari Maeley Kaprey
Ukhri Saansien Par Chamki Ankhein
Dekha Main Nai Us Ko Jab
Pass Gya Gir Gir Jab ..
Poocha Us Ko Janti Ho ?
Kya Tum Mujh Ko Pehchanti Ho ?
Woh Anjani Si Deewani Si
Bhooli Si Kisi Pari Si Maysoomiat Sai
Mujh Ko Kehti Hai
Aey Jogi Tu Toh Adh Mara Sa
Mujh Ko Kaisey Janta Hai ?
Kasey Tu Pechanta Hai ?
Main Na Janoon Kaun Hai Tu
Tha'tka Main Phir Larkharaya
Haath Main Us Ka Anchal Aya
Gir Para Phir Tarap Kai Main
Ik Nazar Jo Us Ko Dekha Tab ...
Anchal Us Nai Jhatkaya Daman Apna Bachaya ..
Ja Rahee Thi Thamey Kisi Ka Haath
Chor Ker Mera Sang Or Saath
Saans At'ki Dhadakna Band Hua
Palkein Moondhein Jaan Nikli Thi
Lash Ko Meri Phir Uthaya Jab
Na Qafan Na Ghusal Bin Kye Yeh Sab
Dafna Aye Mujh Ko Jogi Char
Shayad Kai They Woh Merey Yaar ...
Qabar Meri Bhi Kachi Thi ...
Meri Mohabbat Bin Qafan Hui
Bin Ghusal Hee Woh Bhi Dafan Hui
Woh Kahani Phir Yun Khatam Hui ..!
s_sableo
05-06-2009, 06:42 PM
lolzzz shayan bhayi yeh apki apni hai poetry
n yahan per pic k hisaab sey taza taza koi kalaam
banana hai apna jo aap bana sako like that
n abhi filhaal to is pic k polling start hogayi hai aap log sab jaker
pollign both mei cote dein jiski poetry apko theek lag hai usko
n agli pic inshallah 2 ya 3 din tak mai lagauga ya koi b member laga then polling ka result
announce honey k baad then yahan per winner ka aanounce kar k hum ner image lageyengey
then uskey hisaab sey poetry karengey ok frndz hope u all gonna take part in it
thank u
Zara_Ansu
05-06-2009, 09:09 PM
nice
SHAYAN
05-06-2009, 10:46 PM
Mje Msn pe Aa kr Smjao Bhai mje Nhi Smj Lag Rhi :( :( :fiker_not:
s_sableo
05-07-2009, 08:16 PM
lolzzz yaar ab msn per kaun aya mai msn wagera kam hee use karta hu
yahin per samj jao na asaan sey bat hai dekho
yahan per apni poetry likhni hai or wo poetry is tarah likhni hai k
mai ya koi user image post karega to us image k hisaab sey apko poetry likhni hai
like this easy abhi aik image post hochuka hai jiskey liye poetry ho chuki hai n uska result abhi pending hai
polling mei to uskey jaise hee result ajayega to hum new image lagayengey then us key hisaab sey poetry karni hogi
hope ab samj agaya hoga
s_sableo
05-07-2009, 08:16 PM
lolzzz yaar ab msn per kaun aya mai msn wagera kam hee use karta hu
yahin per samj jao na asaan sey bat hai dekho
yahan per apni poetry likhni hai or wo poetry is tarah likhni hai k
mai ya koi user image post karega to us image k hisaab sey apko poetry likhni hai
like this easy abhi aik image post hochuka hai jiskey liye poetry ho chuki hai n uska result abhi pending hai
polling mei to uskey jaise hee result ajayega to hum new image lagayengey then us key hisaab sey poetry karni hogi
hope ab samj agaya hoga
SHAYAN
05-07-2009, 09:06 PM
Aho Ab Smj Gya Me..:bailan: :D M Genious Na ... :0011:
s_sableo
05-12-2009, 06:32 PM
lolzz hahahaah thanku thanku samjney k liye jaldi sey wo b hahahah
chalo jee pehley muqabla ka winner ban chuka hai or wo mai hu :PPP hahahah
yaar is mei meri koi galati ni hai sab ney votes diye hain or mujhe de diye maine
kisi ka name show ni kara tha na bas poetry dekh kar vote dey diye jisko jaunsi
pasand ayi usko vote miley n mai winner ab next muqabla shuru hota hai ruko mai image
post karta hu new ok frnd wait
s_sableo
05-12-2009, 06:46 PM
ok frnds 2nd image post kar raha u ab isko dekh kar poetry banani hai ok
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/6325/itssolonelyherebylasaro.jpg
s_sableo
05-12-2009, 06:53 PM
let start frndz 2nd muqabla
~wish munda~
05-13-2009, 01:26 AM
Kuch door humare saath chalo hum dil kee kahaani kah deinge
Samajhe na jise tum aankhon se vo baat zubaani keh deinge
Phoolon kee tarha jab hoontoo pe ek shokh tabasum bikharegaa
Dheeray se tumhaare kaanoo mein ek baat puraani keh deinge!
Izhaar-e-vafaa tum kiya jaano iqraar-e-vafaa tum kiya jaano
Hum zikr karenge gairon kaa aur apni kahaani keh deinge
Mausam tu baraa hee zaalim hai toofan uthaata rehta hai
Kuch log magar is hal-chal ko bud-mast javaani keh deinge
K@IN@@T
05-13-2009, 02:17 PM
ZABARDAST WISH BHAI YEH AAP KI OWN POETRY HAI:star:
K@IN@@T
05-13-2009, 03:44 PM
mai saath ho tumharay to kyu ankh mai nami hai
yeh soch kar hamarijaan pay bani hai
kuch keh sako to kehdo warma ro paray gay hum bhi
kis baat kis bina mai tumhari ankh mai nami hai
mai saath ho tumharay to kyu ankh mai nami hai
hum nay mangi har khushiya tumhari or mangtay rahay gay
tumhari har khushiyo mai jashn banatay rahay gay
mai saath ho tumharay kia ab bhi koi kami hai:rose5::rose5::rose5:
s_sableo
05-13-2009, 06:55 PM
kuch door humare saath chalo hum dil kee kahaani kah deinge
samajhe na jise tum aankhon se vo baat zubaani keh deinge
phoolon kee tarha jab hoontoo pe ek shokh tabasum bikharegaa
dheeray se tumhaare kaanoo mein ek baat puraani keh deinge!
Izhaar-e-vafaa tum kiya jaano iqraar-e-vafaa tum kiya jaano
hum zikr karenge gairon kaa aur apni kahaani keh deinge
mausam tu baraa hee zaalim hai toofan uthaata rehta hai
kuch log magar is hal-chal ko bud-mast javaani keh deinge
wish yaar apni poetry likhni hai yeh aapki ni hai
yeh maine bohaat baar suni hai pehley bhi
taza taza apni banani hai yaar jaisi kaisi b banao
but try karo apni bana kar post karo then
maza ayega muqabley ka ok frnd
s_sableo
05-13-2009, 06:57 PM
mai saath ho tumharay to kyu ankh mai nami hai
yeh soch kar hamarijaan pay bani hai
kuch keh sako to kehdo warma ro paray gay hum bhi
kis baat kis bina mai tumhari ankh mai nami hai
mai saath ho tumharay to kyu ankh mai nami hai
hum nay mangi har khushiya tumhari or mangtay rahay gay
tumhari har khushiyo mai jashn banatay rahay gay
mai saath ho tumharay kia ab bhi koi kami hai:rose5::rose5::rose5:
wah wah wah wah wah superb princes vv nce bohaat hee
mazey ki aik dam achi wali v nice keep it up
is baar u first ho bas samj lo v nce
s_sableo
05-13-2009, 07:07 PM
rotey hain teri yaad mei din raat aisey
hoti rehti hai musalsal barsaat jaisey
K@IN@@T
05-13-2009, 07:43 PM
thanx sableo bhai .......wah wah wah wah wah superb princes vv nce bohaat hee
mazey ki aik dam achi wali v nice keep it up
is baar u first ho bas samj lo v nce
~wish munda~
05-14-2009, 09:12 AM
acha yaar kehta tu try kerta hoon
merey sath chel merey hamsafar tujhay main khushi say nawaz don
merey chahten meri ulfaten mera tan man tujh pay main waar don
tu kisi safar say jo aey ga mujhay apnay khayalon main pay ga
main muhabbaton ki inteha karon teri yaad main raten guzaar don
s_sableo
05-16-2009, 06:13 PM
wah wah wah wah wah wish v nyc tumhari apni hai sahi mei batao
bohaaat khoob hai bohat bohat bohat nice
~wish munda~
05-18-2009, 01:26 AM
sach yaar usi waqt banai thi suchi main
Zara_Ansu
05-18-2009, 08:10 PM
nice
Zara_Ansu
05-19-2009, 12:18 PM
nice keep it up..
chinamanx
05-19-2009, 02:59 PM
Gir Jaaye Zameen Par To Sambhale Nahi Jaatey,
Bazaar Mein Dukh Dard Uchhaley Nahi Jaatey,
Aankhon Se Nikaltey Ho Magar - Deyhaan Mein Rahna,
Tum Aise Kabhi Dil se Nikaaley Nahi Jaatey,
Ab Mujhse In Aankhon Ki Hifazat Nahi Hoti,
Ab Mujhse Tere Khwaab Sambhaley Nahi Jaatey,
Jaatey Nahi Hum Sehrao Mein Ab IshQ - E - Girifta,
Jab Tak Dil - E - Majnoo Ki Dua Ley Nahi Jaatey,
Jungle Ke Ye Paudey Hain - Isey Chhod Do Sameer,
Gam Aap Jawan Hote Hain - Paaley Nahi Jaate…
CHULBUL! $! NANHI PAR!
05-19-2009, 03:21 PM
(heart):good:nice nice aqeel.ab mujhe thnx karna:10:
K@IN@@T
05-30-2009, 12:32 PM
sab participate q nahi kar rahay hai
~ Bikhre Lamhe ~
05-30-2009, 11:56 PM
Eik aas
Eik ehsas
Meri soch
Our
Bus TuM
Eik sawaal
Eik majaal
Tumhara khayaal
Our
Bus TuM
Eik baat
Eik sham
Tumhara sath
Our
Bus TuM
Eik dua
Eik fariyad
Tumhari yaad
Our
Bus TuM
Mera junoon
Mera sakoon
Bus TuM
Our
Bus TuM
K@IN@@T
06-02-2009, 09:55 PM
mai dosri poetrylikh rahi ho
kyu chalo mai sang tumharay
kyu thamoo ueh haath tumhara
kyu kam diyay hai kia aansoo tum nay
ya or dil dokhana hai humara
kyu kiyay woh waaday woh kasmay tum nay
jis ko poora na karnay ka irada tha tumhara
kyu chalo mai sang tumharay
kyu thamo mai haath tumhrara(heart)
MeOw*
06-02-2009, 10:43 PM
hmm nice
SilentEyes
06-15-2009, 08:56 AM
MY OWN
phool khilay ya tara chamkaa
man ka soona aangan mehkaa
jhoom othhi dil ki tanhaai
musam nay phir li angraai
teri yaad ki barish aai
............
Ali jee
06-29-2009, 02:10 AM
Main Tamam Umer Saath Raha Shumar na karsaka
wo Jatey Jatey Nayii Soch ka Izhaar Dai Gaya
khali thai Haath mere Na umeed na Asra
Wo Ruksat hoa us phool main sara pyar dai gaya
:addab:
s_sableo
08-23-2009, 02:04 PM
sorry frnds yeh 2nd muqabla bohat lae hogaye :P
abhi poll mei daal raha hu sab ki poetry ja ker vote do ok
but pehley mujhe try karney do mai bhol ee gaya k poll kaise banatey hain try karta hu
agar ban gaya pir inform karta hu ok :bigteeth:
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ok frnds mai kayab and the polling has been started 4 the poetry
go n participate n apni poetry ko ni vote kartey rehna jo apko achi lagi hai usko karna balkey try karo
k ao khud naa ee karo ok thnx
Hamzaking
11-06-2009, 10:51 PM
great topi walay
`~`^3^`~`DiL`~`^3^`~`
11-29-2009, 12:32 AM
nice.......
wicked sonya
11-29-2009, 12:38 AM
nyc thread
`~`^3^`~`DiL`~`^3^`~`
11-29-2009, 12:41 AM
hmmm ......
wicked sonya
11-29-2009, 12:42 AM
kya hmmmmmmmmmmmm
piyarpiyarpiyar
12-07-2009, 07:26 AM
is thread me picture kaha he bhai mujhe koi pic nazar nahi arahi jis par aap log shairi kar rahe ho
s_sableo
01-27-2010, 05:06 PM
lolzzz sorry 4 late next picture post kar raha hu u can find that here n up there
first thread of poerty muqabla so here's the next picture on which u have to post ur
own poetry picture ki hisaab sey ok n ur own poetry thnx
s_sableo
01-27-2010, 05:08 PM
here3 is the next image
image # 3
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/669/eyszz.gif (http://img707.imageshack.us/i/eyszz.gif/)
so let's start
DeV!L
01-27-2010, 05:09 PM
Aik naam yaad ata hai kabhi suba kabhi sham yaad ata hai sochta ho ker lo dusriii mohabaaat phir pheli mohabaat ka anjam yaad ata hai :)
K@IN@@T
01-27-2010, 05:10 PM
nice picture aqeeel bhai
or wish karna again mai win karo :0029:
K@IN@@T
01-27-2010, 05:11 PM
nice poetry per yaha own poetry karni hai
s_sableo
01-27-2010, 05:13 PM
aik naam yaad ata hai kabhi suba kabhi sham yaad ata hai sochta ho ker lo dusriii mohabaaat phir pheli mohabaat ka anjam yaad ata hai :)
wah wah wah nyc yeh apki apni hy to bohat nyc
n orr bee karo jitnee kar saktey o poetry lazmii ni aik ee jitnee u can make
but ur own banani hy ok
K@IN@@T
01-27-2010, 05:14 PM
aqeel bhai mainay kainaat nick say win kia tha name change karay plz
s_sableo
01-27-2010, 05:14 PM
nice picture aqeeel bhai
or wish karna again mai win karo :0029:
thnxxx shweety
ok inshallah u gonna win best ov luck ;-)
s_sableo
01-27-2010, 05:14 PM
Lolzzz ok ok forgot
s_sableo
01-27-2010, 05:15 PM
Now done ok let start
Shaam
01-27-2010, 05:59 PM
start what ? again
K@IN@@T
01-28-2010, 10:37 PM
start what ? Again
shaam bhai yaha pictures dekh k own poetry karni hai
K@IN@@T
01-28-2010, 10:40 PM
jab mai apni ankho say teray khowaab dekhti ho
apnay sang bikhray gulaab dekhti ho
kabhi shabnam kabhi bahar dekhti ho
mai os pal rang hazaar dekhti ho
ek raat hamaari ankho mai mehmaan hotay hai
yeh jantay hoyay bhi her baar dekhti ho
mai jab ankho mai khowaab dekhti ho
K@IN@@T
01-28-2010, 10:43 PM
AND MY 2ND ONE POETRY IS
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IN ANKHO MAI KOI DUKH KOI MALAAL NAHI HAI
KISI SAY MIL K BICHARNAY KA KOI NISHAAN NAHI HAI
DEKHO MERAY HER TARAF PHOOL OR BAHAR HAI
AAS PAAS KAHI GHAM YA KHIZA KA NISHAAN NAHI HAI
IN ANKHO MAI AB BHI JUGNOO SITAARAY KHOWAAB HAI
OR IN SAY WABASTA MERI ZAAT HAI
KOI DOSRA INSAAN NAHI HAI:coffeecup:
!~*SOoLi
01-28-2010, 10:43 PM
Good one Kainaat. . . Aap Poetry karna Mat Chorna, you got talent .. :)
K@IN@@T
01-28-2010, 10:44 PM
THANX SOOLI BHAI :i-agree:
s_sableo
02-10-2010, 02:28 PM
oye hoye hoye wah wah wah wah bohaawwwwttt khooob kayinaat bohaawwt khoobb pehlei wali to zabrdast hy
merey khayal sey aap pir leker jaogee is barr inshallah bohat nyc hy tehroo mai banata hu kuch ab ;-)
s_sableo
02-10-2010, 02:40 PM
suna hy jatey waqt ankho ka ishara dey kar
log kho jatey hain bass aik nazara dey kar
pir sey phool nahin khiltey pehley jaisey
ishq ki bahaar jati hy khasara dey kar
bass itnee ee bani abhi to heheh
K@IN@@T
03-22-2010, 04:26 PM
v nice poetry aap nay aqeel bhai :cheer:
is baar aap obviously aap ko jeetna hai :cheer:
stylish_rani
05-25-2010, 01:22 PM
thnx for sharing keep it up
stylish_rani
05-25-2010, 01:23 PM
very nucy poetryyy keep it up
Noor ul huda
07-06-2010, 01:37 AM
V V Niceeeeeee Kainaat
Aqeel really good...
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Mayry zehen may tu mandarja zail shair aya =P :D
sunehri aakhien,daraz palkien,gluaab hont
woh kya hay jo maar daly makhmasy may hoon
kali ka chatakhna hay yah tabassum e jana
ik bahaar ka samy hay aur may us samy may hoon
I know Fazool sa hay :confused:
Noor ul huda
07-06-2010, 01:51 AM
Aik aur :D
Hamary har taraf ab to bari hi zard subhien hain
nigah e yaar ka lykin mosam sunehra hay
kabhi lamhay mita diengy tayra har aks ankhoon say
kisi ki bhi judai say bhala kab waqt teherta hay
This is 1 is not my own =P
ganjaboss007
07-07-2010, 12:37 AM
dil ko cheer baithi hay woh, sabar azma chahta hou
khulla hay guur bewafai ka, sabar azma chahta hou
teray janey key baad teryay janey taak, sabar azma chahta hou
qadmou key nishaan iss dill per hay teri, sabar azma chahta hou
(‘“*JiĢäR*”’)
07-31-2010, 12:42 PM
moqabala khtam ho gaya hai ya abi jari hai........tell me
Tere Intizar mai lagta hai ese
beet gaii hoon sadyan jese
ab tere aney ka kia faida
jab khatam ho gaey mairi jaib mai pese
omg
RoOZ SoOChTa HouN
11-15-2010, 12:46 PM
lout anay ka keh kai ab tak na anay wala
kitna anjaan hai muj sai wo jaanay wala
khowab ankhon mai sajayay rah mai takti rahi
mairay angan mai na aya wo khowab dikhanay wala
K@IN@@T
04-03-2011, 02:06 AM
aqeel bhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiii
ab to polling karao or result announce karo plz kitnay months ho gayaya nop i tnink poora year ho gaya:confuse:
s_sableo
04-09-2011, 03:19 PM
oops lolxx :DD :p ok ok polling gonna start tonight ok
Shezadi Raniya
05-14-2011, 07:48 PM
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kurbat mai jis ki karar buht tha...
jis ka milna dushwaar buht tha..
jo shaks meri hathon ki lakeron mai na tha..
us shaks se mujhy piyaar buht tha....
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...RAJPUT...
pensive
06-23-2011, 01:19 PM
good bro nyc..
koi rooh ka talbgar mily to hum bhi mohabat karin........
warna jism to laakhon bikty hain chand rupiyon ki Khatir....
SAjan
08-17-2011, 04:50 AM
nice good
SAjan
08-17-2011, 04:52 AM
Tamam umer jasai sucha hum ne
wo ak raat main begana hogaiya
mohabbat ki jas ne khye thi qasam
wo q kar kase ka dewana hogaiya
ak nasha tha key dewangi bharne lage
us ko likhtey hum ko zamana hogaiya
chalo as shair main (ali) apne tu hi
aye he marey jane ka bhana hogaya
SAjan
08-25-2011, 04:38 AM
very nice
ample
02-22-2012, 10:06 AM
umdaaaa
Atta ur Rehman
09-26-2012, 07:06 PM
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