Khatakaar Ki Duwa ..

[~*Gillanii]

Ay Khuda, Rasta Dikha, Bohat Mushkil Hay Aisay Jeenay Main ..
Chingari Badal Day Aag Main, Rakhi Jo Momin Kay Seenay Main ..

Bhatka Jo Rah Say To Talkhiya'n Zamanay Ki, Khai Thokaray Darbadar ..
Tughyani Say Nikaal Maula, Ajeeb Hulchul Hay Mere Safeenay Main ..

Ya Raheem, Main Nay Parha, Tu Sah'ttar Gunnah Barh Kay Aik Maa'n Say ..
Waqt-e-Nuzza'h Chakha Day Tu, Hay Jo Lazzat Jam-e-Shahadat Peenay Main ..

Main Khatakaar Garchay, Tu Bhi Muaf Karnay Wala Hay, Ya Rabb ul Alameen!!
Sirat-e-Mustakeem Par Chala, Izafa Kar Day Imaan Kay Khazeenay Main ..

Meri Khuwahishaat Lamehdood, Magar Dainay Wala Bhi To Shaan Wala Hay ..
Kuch Na Mangay Banda Tera, Bass Bula Lay Apnay Ghar Is Maheenay Main .. Ameen !! :)

[~*Gillanii]

Alhamdulillah, Bohat Khushi Mehsoos Kar Raha Hoon Is Ko Likhnay Kay Baad ..
Umeed Hay Aap Sab Ko Pasand Aye Gi :rose5:

[safa]

bahut khoob.....sufiyana kalam hai....:0017:

[safa]

ji broji bahut pasand aayi.....:rose5:

[~*Gillanii]

Shukriya Behna :rose5:

[Nida-H]

Yeh aap nay kud likhi hai..??? :OOPs: i jus can't believe!!
MashAllah..Beautiful Poetry..buhat achi koshish hai apki..keep it up !!! :)

[~*Gillanii]

Ji Ruby' .. Alhamdulillah Khud Likhi Hay, Pasand Karnay Kay Liye Shukriya :)

[MeOw*]

MashAllah...

wah sooli kia bat hai ap ki...

[~*Gillanii]

Shukriya Hira .. :rose5:

[momal ali]

mery bhaya hein jitni khobsurat un ki thinkg hein
us sey kahi berh ker us ka izahaar hey
bohat khubsurati sey peroya hey sooli bhai aap ney ilfazoon ko
sooli bhai aap ko khud pata hey
k aap waqi hey gr8 hein
bohat khubsurat .....:fRiEnDS:

[~*Gillanii]

Ahhh!! Mahum Bohat Khushi Huwi Tumharay Comments Parh Kay .. :0017:
Magar Meri Itni Tareef :o .. Mere Samnay Mat Karo, Kahi Chup Kay Kar Lo, Kahi Main Gharoor Main Na Ajao'n :laugh:

Bohat Bohat Shukriya Mahum :flowers:

[safa]

:(l0l)::(l0l):

[safa]

baja farmaya aap ne broji....:flower4u:

[zaib khan]

Main Khatakaar Garchay, Tu Bhi Muaf Karnay Wala Hay, Ya Rabb ul Alameen!!
Sirat-e-Mustakeem Par Chala, Izafa Kar Day Imaan Kay Khazeenay Main .. ameen

boht khoob sooli bahi hug

[safa]

thank u zaib........:flower4u:

[~*Gillanii]

bohat khubsurati sey peroya hey sooli bhai aap ney ilfazoon ko

Mahum Ya "Lafz" Hota Hay Ya "ILfaaz" .. ILFAZON Koi Word Nahi :knockout:

[~*Gillanii]

Shukriya Zaib Bhai *HuG* .. Aur Safa Ye Lo :0017:

[ShArArTi MuNdA]

Dushmanooo

sachi kehwan tey merey kol alfaaz nahi twadi tareeef karan layeee....

jst simply awesome n mind blowing... kasmeyyyyyy dil jeeet lita tusi dushmanooooo :bhug:

wish ya all da best bro.....

keep it up

[~*Gillanii]

*HuG* Jigzz Bohat Zyada Hain Tumhari Ye Batain, Meri Honsla Afzai Kay Liye :bhug:
Maaari Motti Duwa Vi Day Daina Sanooo ... Jeenday Rao SoneyO :0017:

[momal ali]

Mahum Ya "Lafz" Hota Hay Ya "ILfaaz" .. ILFAZON Koi Word Nahi :knockout:

:roflrd0:
sherminda ker deya bhai ap ney tu :s11:

[~*Gillanii]

Sharminda Kion Mahum, Insaan Ghaltiyo Say Hi Seekhta Hay :s11:

[safa]

Mahum Ya "Lafz" Hota Hay Ya "ILfaaz" .. ILFAZON Koi Word Nahi :knockout:

ji aap ne sahi kaha....lafz ki jama alfaz hote hain...:)

[safa]

:roflrd0:
sherminda ker deya bhai ap ney tu :s11:

sharminda nahi....ghalti ko theek kya hai....:):flower4u:

[Jhuki Palkein]

MashaAllah,.

Simply Stunning!

Be-Inteha Lutf Aya Padh Kar Sooli Jee ,. Kamal Ka Likha Hai Aapne!

Daad Is Na-Cheez Se Bhi Qabool Kijiye,. :rose5wd:

Maula Se Dua Hai Ke Aap Ki Ye Koshish Qabool Farmayein, Aur Aapko Is Se Aur Acha Likhne Ki Taufeeq Ata Farmayein, Suma Ameen,.

Jaha'n Taq Rahi Baat Gharoor Mein Ane Ki , I Don't Think It's Going To Happen - Not For You,.
Itna To Hum Aapko Jaan Gaye Hain :)

[~*Gillanii]

Pasand Karnay Kay Liye Bohat Bohat Shukriya Jp ..
Aap Mujhay Jitna Bhi Jaan Chukay Hogay Magar Ghuroor Ko Nahi .. Wo Bari Bayqaboo Cheez Hay :wiIInk:
Khush Raho, Hansti Khailti Raho .. Ameen! :peace:

[dur-e-shahwar]

bhot achi hia

[~*Gillanii]

Shukriya Radika ..
:rose5:

[Jhuki Palkein]

Pasand Karnay Kay Liye Bohat Bohat Shukriya Jp ..
Aap Mujhay Jitna Bhi Jaan Chukay Hogay Magar Ghuroor Ko Nahi .. Wo Bari Bayqaboo Cheez Hay :wiIInk:
Khush Raho, Hansti Khailti Raho .. Ameen! :peace:

Ameen,.

Hmm, Ye Bhi Sahi Kaha Aapne Sooli Jee!

[Habib]

good

[~*Gillanii]

Thanks Habib :icon11:

[ShArArTi MuNdA]

*HuG* Jigzz Bohat Zyada Hain Tumhari Ye Batain, Meri Honsla Afzai Kay Liye :bhug:
Maaari Motti Duwa Vi Day Daina Sanooo ... Jeenday Rao SoneyO :0017:


Sooli jeee kuj duwa'an dil toun ditiya jawndian ney tey unhan da lafzan naal izhar kerna zarooari nahi honda sohnyaooooo :0011: per fir v twadi khushi laye kuj likh lendey han :0011:


"Dua ki soorat main uski khatir,
Jo mere honton se lafz nikle,
Jo meri ankhon se ashk nikle,
unhi k badle mein Ae KHUDAYA,
jab bhi uska naseeb likhna
"UROOJ likhna, Kamal likhna,
kabhe na lafz-e- zawal likhna"



Meri duaa hai ke khus rahoo tum
Miley na koi ghum jahan bhi raho tum
Samundar ke terha dil hai gheera tera
Khusyoun say bhara rehey daman tera
Tum joo kahooo woh har kowaish puri ho tumhari
Khuda say bhi bus yahi duaa hai humari
Toofha kai doon tumhey duaaoon ke siwa
Ke khuda humeshah rehey razi tum say sada .


chaloo jeee hun jeeyndey rahooo ,,, khush rahoo tey Allah twadey dil di har murad puri karey (AMEEN) apni duwan vich sanoo v yaad rakh lena :0011:

[~*Gillanii]

Woahhh!! SM Ye Khud Likhi Kyaa?? :msn_disappointed: ..
Thanks Alot Dear "HuG" Meri Duwain Bhi Aap Kay Saath Hain Yaar .. :)

[Jhuki Palkein]

Munda Jee, Hum Nahi Jaante The Ke Aap Ke Andar Bhi Aik Shayar Chupa Hua Hai :10:

Bohat Khoobsurat Likha Hai Aapne! Padh Kar Bohat Khushi Hui,. :cheer:

Keep Writing!

[ZaHa]

Bohat AaaLaa

[~*Gillanii]

Jp SM Kay Ander Baray Baray Fankaar Posheeda Hain ..:Peek a boo!:
ZaHa Pasand Karnay Kay Liye Shukriya, Khush Rakhay Allah Ap Ko :wiIInk:

[Irfa]

nic

["K.G"]

thnx for sharing

[!~*SOoLi]

Thanks Irfa & Kayjee!!

[Hamzaking]

nice...................

[life]

nice sharing