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Jhuki Palkein
03-23-2009, 12:07 AM
Aik Koshish Meri Taraf Se,.

Ya-Rab, Ye Kya Ho Gaya Hai Muslim Ummah Ko,.

Ya-Rab, Ye Kya Ho Gaya Hai Muslim Ummah Ko,
Kyuu’n Main Samajh Nahi Paa Rahi,.

Kya Hum Mein Aur Un Mein Waqai Koyi Farq Nahi Reh Gaya,.
Kyuu’n Main Is Sawal Ka Jawab Nahi De Paa Rahi,.

Jahaa’n Dekho Jhoot Aur Makkari,.
Islam Deen Ki Koyi Izzat Hi Nahi Rahi,.

Par ’Isma, Tum Islam Ki Baat Karti Ho,
Be-Gunaah Iraq, Palaestine Mein Roz Marr Rahe Hain,
Kisi Ko Jaise Kuch Pata Hi Nahi,.

~wish munda~
03-23-2009, 12:28 AM
nyc try

A L i
03-23-2009, 12:44 AM
bahut khoob

~*Gillanii
03-23-2009, 04:23 AM
Good Effort jhuki Palkien .. Poetry Main Wazan Nahi, Magar Aap Ki Thinkin Aur Idea Kay Liye 10/10 .. Koshish Karti Rahain, Inshallah Bohat Acha Likh Sakti Hain Aap!! :)

~Pr!nCe$s UrOoJ~
03-23-2009, 04:25 AM
wah wah zabardast jhuki sis vvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvv nice keep it up
really bohot he achi

Jhuki Palkein
03-23-2009, 04:30 PM
Thanks Wish, Ali, Sooli N Urooj Sis.

Aap Sab Ki Hosla Afzai Ka Shukriyaa!

Diwa
03-23-2009, 04:33 PM
MashAllah sis.. keep it up! zabardast!

AKHROT
03-23-2009, 04:36 PM
achi thee
aur ye sooli lahori ki post na parhna ye pagal shaer hai :current:

Jhuki Palkein
03-23-2009, 05:26 PM
MashAllah sis.. keep it up! zabardast!

Thanks Soo Much Sis!

Jhuki Palkein
03-23-2009, 05:27 PM
achi thee
aur ye sooli lahori ki post na parhna ye pagal shaer hai :current:

Shukriyaa!

Waise, Kaun Pagal Hai Aur Kaun Nahi, Hum Jaante Hain.
Aap Fikar Mat Karein :10:

Dast-e-Tanhai
03-23-2009, 05:30 PM
nice
boht kohb

Jhuki Palkein
03-24-2009, 12:25 PM
Thank You Mohsin.

Nida-H
03-24-2009, 12:58 PM
very nice..keep it up J-P !!!

Jhuki Palkein
03-25-2009, 03:27 PM
Thanks Dear.

Hussain
04-03-2009, 02:41 PM
Nice try

"K.G"
07-22-2009, 05:00 PM
thnx for sharing

Hamzaking
11-06-2009, 07:56 PM
nice...................

life
08-16-2012, 10:12 PM
nice sharing

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