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ShArArTi MuNdA
03-20-2009, 08:11 AM
Koi Dewar na dar rakhta hun
ghar ka ahsas magar rakhta hun

log rakhte hain charagon pe nazr
main hawaon pe nazar rakta hun

kyon na pathrou karen sab mujh par
sakh der sakh samr rakhta hun

ek nai simt janam leti hai
paon main apne jidhar rakhta hun

ye zamin cheez hai kya main Ali
asmano ki khabr rakhta hun

Jhuki Palkein
03-20-2009, 12:23 PM
Nice One Dear.

~Pr!nCe$s UrOoJ~
03-20-2009, 02:43 PM
v nice munda ji

~*Gillanii
03-20-2009, 06:03 PM
Koi Deevar Na Dar Rakhta Hoon ..
Ghar Ka Ehsaas Magar Rakhta Hoon ..

Excellent Dushmano .. Cha Gaye Aap!!

~*Gillanii
03-20-2009, 06:04 PM
Shair Ka Takhalus ALI Hay .. Kahi Aap Ki Apni Poetry To Nahi :1smile1:

ShArArTi MuNdA
03-20-2009, 07:39 PM
Thanks to all of you

Nida-H
03-20-2009, 09:15 PM
very nice..

ShahTaJ
03-21-2009, 05:11 AM
very nice

ShArArTi MuNdA
03-21-2009, 08:08 AM
Thanks both of you

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