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[Owi]

Originally Posted by SALMAN

Itna kahne ke baad bhi aap ne name sahi nahi likha
His name is
"John Elia"

(jo log sahi jaan kar bhi sahi nahi bante unko kya kahte hain??? U know it)

Thankx For Correction Bhai
Spelling per mujhay bhi kaafi had tak shubha tha mager choonkay main nay ye sab kaheen say copy ker k chaapa nahi balkay aap sab k liye khud likha hai or is ko likhnay mein mujh say ghalti ho gai
Jo k aap nay point-out ki, main abhi is ko sudhaar layta hoon, aap ki tanqeed-e-nazer ka bay-had shukriya
Main aap ka shukriya adaa kerna chaahoon ga k aap nay thread ko ghour say perha or us mein say meri ghalti ko point-out kiya
Main ummeed kerta hoon k aagay bhi aap isi terhan meri ghaltiyon ko chun ker meri rah-numaai karein gay
Shukriya

 

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Last edited by Owi; 07-08-2011 at 07:32 PM..

[Owi]

Thankx Alot Life For Beautiful Poetry
And Thankx you So Much For Contributing In My Thread

 

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Last edited by Owi; 07-08-2011 at 07:27 PM..

[Owi]

-:||:- LibaaS -:||:-

-:||:- Teen Ash'aaR -:||:-

Tujh say nahi raha hai koi nama-o-payaam
Arsa guzer gaya hai k bay-iltimaas hoon

Tujh ko yaqeen aaye na aaye, ye or baat
Main tujh say door reh k bhi teray hi paas hoon

Mumkin kahaan hai tujh say judaai mataa-e-jaan
Tu hai mera libaas, main tera libaas hoon.

 

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Last edited by Owi; 07-08-2011 at 07:28 PM..

[Sami]

Very Nyc Sharing Br0 .. !!
John Elia Ki Ek Poetry J0 Muje Pasand Hai W0 Me Likh Raha H0n .. !!

beqarai si beqarari hai
wasl hai aur firaaq taari hai

jo guzaari na ja saki hum se
hum ne woh zindagi guzari hai

us se kahiyo kay dil ki galioN meiN
raat din teri intezari hai

ik mehak samt-e-jaaN se aai thi
maiN yeh samjha teri sawari hai

haadisoN ka hisab hai apna
warna har aan sab ki baari hai

bin tumhare kabhi nahiN aai
kya meri neend bhi tumhari hai

nigharay kya hue keh logoN par
apna saaya bhi ab to bhari hai

khush rahe tu ke zindagi apni
umr bhar ki ummeed wari hai

aap meiN kaisay aauN mein tujh bin
saaNs jo chal rahi hai aari hai

hijr ho ya wisal ho kuchh ho
hum haiN aur us ki yaadgari hai

 

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!! .. Back To Hunt Again .. !!

[~Pr!nCe$s UrOoJ~]

zabardast aur khubsurat

 

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I Dont Need A Lot Of People Who Are Ready To Cry When !D!e ..
!Need Just One Person Who Is Ready To D!e When i Cry..!!!

[Mf Great Power]

Remember



Remember me when I am gone away,
Gone far away into the silent land;
When you can no more hold me by the hand,
Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.
Remember me when no more day by day
You tell me of our future that you plann'd:
Only remember me; you understand
It will be late to counsel then or pray.
Yet if you should forget me for a while
And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
For if the darkness and corruption leave
A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
Better by far you should forget and smile
Than that you should remember and be sad.

 

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LOve all Trust a few Do wrong to
None

[Owi]

Thankx Sami And Urooj
Zak Saahiba aap ko batlaana chaahoon ga k ye thread john elia ki poetry ki hai
Ager aap nay kuch share hi kerna hai to john k hawaalay say keejiye
Baakhi kuch or share ker thread ko kharaab nahi keejiye please
Ummeed hai k aainda aap aisi ghalti nahi karein gi

 

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[Owi]

-:||:- MazaaQ -:||:-

Thi gar aanay mein maslihat haail
Yaad aana koi zaroori tha

Dekhiye ho gai ghalat fehmi
Muskuraana koi zaroori tha

Leejiye baat hi na yaad rahi
Gungunaana koi zaroori tha

Gungunaa ker meri jawaan ghazlein
Jhoom jaana koi zaroori tha

Mujh ko paa ker kisi khayaal mein gum
Chup k aana koi zaroori tha

Uffhhh wo zulfein, wo naganein wo hansi
Yun daraana koi zaroori tha

Or aisay aham mazaaq k baad
Rooth jaana koi zaroori tha.

 

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