[Abewsha]

 

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Last edited by Abewsha; 09-17-2011 at 02:21 AM..

[AYAZ]

Buhaat acha work hei aur mazeed practice will make you perfect for sure but as far as this is your first try its best .

 

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ALLAH FARMATA HAI :
AEY BANDEY JO HUA
WO ACHA HUA .
JO HORAHA HAI ACHA HO RAHA HAI.
JO HOGA WO BHI ACHA HOGA.
TERA KIYA GAIYA JO TU ROTA HAI
TU KIA LAYA JO TU NE KHO DIYA.
JO LIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) SEI LIYA
JO DIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) PE DIYA
JO AAJ TERA HAI PEHLAY KISI AUR KA THA
AUR KAL KISI AUR KA HOGA.
TABDEELI KAINAAT KA MAMOOL HAI
BAS TU WO JAMA KAR JO TU SATH LEI KAR JANEY WALA HAI
YANI NAIK AMAAL.

[Abewsha]

thnkx ayaz so much ap ka sar kha kha k sekha hai yea..lol

 

[shani]

Oye Moti Elephant .. achi try ha MASHA ALLAH.. main itna janta ho moti teri mehnat rang laye ge meri behna hug gud keep it up (y).

 

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LOVE... is not how you forget ;but How you forgive
Not how you listen; but how you understand
Not what you see; but what you feel
And not how you let go; but how you hold on

[DiE]

bht khobsorat abewsha ... nyc work ... isi tarah practice jari rakhooo

or AYAZ se acha sikhaney wala koi nahi so chorna nahi :P

keep it up

 

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[Abewsha]

die bhai ayaz ne kafi help ki hai meri..
sachi agar koi aur hota toh wo thak jata lol
par himat hai ayaz ki k sab ko sekhate hain..
ab sab kuch sekh k hi dam lo gi..
waisa ayaz ne hi mujhe kaha hai k design poetry start karo..
so mana kaisa karti ayaz ko

 

[Abewsha]

Originally Posted by shani

Oye Moti Elephant .. achi try ha MASHA ALLAH.. main itna janta ho moti teri mehnat rang laye ge meri behna hug gud keep it up (y).

thnkx shani bhai luv yu 2 bhai..!!
ap ki dua chaye bas ..!

 

[MaKhAn]

AYaz bhaii na kaha woi same 2 same .....

 

[Abewsha]

makhan lol apni raye nahi doh gaye kia???

 

[maanee]

buhoot zaberdast...... keep it up