[shahidalikiyani]

 

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[ShArArTi MuNdA]

nice onezzz kiyani jee

 

[Ali jee]

wow nice bro nice ..............

 

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[shahidalikiyani]

Assalam-o_AlikukM

Bhot shukriya aap sab ka

FeamNAllah

 

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[AYAZ]

zaberdast.

 

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ALLAH FARMATA HAI :
AEY BANDEY JO HUA
WO ACHA HUA .
JO HORAHA HAI ACHA HO RAHA HAI.
JO HOGA WO BHI ACHA HOGA.
TERA KIYA GAIYA JO TU ROTA HAI
TU KIA LAYA JO TU NE KHO DIYA.
JO LIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) SEI LIYA
JO DIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) PE DIYA
JO AAJ TERA HAI PEHLAY KISI AUR KA THA
AUR KAL KISI AUR KA HOGA.
TABDEELI KAINAAT KA MAMOOL HAI
BAS TU WO JAMA KAR JO TU SATH LEI KAR JANEY WALA HAI
YANI NAIK AMAAL.

[humaa]

[chinamanx]

not a big thing but a good job keep it up the 3rd sher is much betta

 

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Hun mein is ada se bhi aashna tujhe itna jis pe gharoor hai
mein jeon ga tere beghair bhi mujhe zindagi ka shaoor hai

Yeh pathron ka shaher hey - yahan to ansoo bhi jum jate hain

[Nida-H]

very nice..keep it up !!!

 

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[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

[ShahTaJ]

buhat khoob

 

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Main bhi kitni pagal hoon na
Sang hawa k urna chahoon
Titli ban kar nagri nagri
Gulshan Gulshan phirna chahoon
Phooloon k sab rang chura kar
Chunri apni rangna chahoon
Main bhi kitni pagal hoon na

[shahidalikiyani]

Assalam-o_AlikukM

Bhot shukriya aap sab ka

FeamNAllah

 

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